Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
The Stevie story was the best.
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Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
well charlie is starting to realize that she hid a lot when she lived with him! cant wait to see what happens next
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Date: 03 Sep 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
So hopefully Bella isn't really mad. lol but who's stevie? :) keep up the great work. can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Lol, I wanna know about Stevie!!!!
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Date: 03 Sep 2010 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
Who is Stevie this sounds like fun poor Charlie all shy.
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Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
well if knowing its from a visit from sf it has to be a drag queen! cant wait till the next chapter
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lol., thanks:)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
That has to be Leah pulling Bella's chain???? I am so glad Edward set Bella straight fast Thank you
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Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
LMAO! I'm gonna assume that's Leah who answered the door. Love this story. You've made Charlie such a funny guy too!
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Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Okay? I think it might just be Leah pulling a prank so I'm going to keep calm. lol but if its not, i say again WHAT? lol thanks again bye
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Thanks ;)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
and that must be leah! cant wait to see what instore for the next chapter
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Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope there friends talked them into opening up to each other.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
WOMAN!!!! lol a cliffhanger again. :D I love the sex dream that both of them had. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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lol, nearly every chappie in this story has a cliffie. ;)
Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yes it was, I wish bella would have been a bit more-Edward is my man, back up while I pee on him-type person but I loved it all the same. lol can't wait till next chapter. thanks again bye
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Ok, I completely laughed out loud, sending water all over my computer over the 'Edward is my man, back up while I pee on him' line. Seriously, that crap is funny!!
Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG this is hilarious!! I was a little leary about the gay James/Laurent thing but you really pulled it together. Im really looking forward to future chapters!
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Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yes Edward has it bad and it is only going to ge worse LOL
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Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Cliffhanger queen! lol I want to see some action. bring on the bar! :) thanks again bye
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I promise the next chapter will be worth it!
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
This story is fantastic....I get so excited when I see updated chapters ....can't wait until bella and edward realize what is right in front of them......
Have you written any other stories?
Brenda
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Thank you:) I have several on this site and many more over on fanfiction.net.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
well that was informative but I thought maybe we would get a chance to see the club but oh well. Next chapter it is then. lol I loved the way James and Bella met. totally would have been great to see that. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Next chapter is EPOV while he and the boys where hanging out but the next one is the club. I promise it is worth it ;)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
I cant wait till Edward finds out that she is doing a shot for playboy with Jacob he is going to flip.
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Date: 28 Aug 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
lol I loved all the insults they gave her. that was too funny. I'm just getting into this story now and I'm all caught up. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work and bring on the club! thanks again bye
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Date: 28 Aug 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved you putting that Bitch Lauren in her place and making her run like she has done to Bella. Thank you. I love James and it is not many times that I can say this he is a blast.
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Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
They have a 'usual place'. I'm such a girl, I cannot stop smiling and giggling over that. Honesty. Gash, Lauren is such a duck! I do not like that silly mindless chick. Not even a little. Poor Edward. She loves James! Hah, he's such an eavesdropper. How appropriate.
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
I hope that edward and bella come to their senses soon and have some fun !
brenda
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Soon, I promise:)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
LMAO that was funny right from the beginning with him walking in on his parents making out to Bella punching him. Cant wait for more
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
They may be clueless but they are so cute. Your not going to have Tanya in the middle of there shit??? Bella punched Edward please let her punch Lauran that would be sweet.
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
LMFAO that is to funny and James thinks he is funny how cool.
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
lovein this story girlie!
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Date: 25 Aug 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
thats hella funny thats what you get for assuming! cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
i totally want james and laurent as my friends..they are hilarious..great chapter!!
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lol, Thanks:)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
It is nice to have a friend that after 10 years you can still be true friends. Why did they not stay in contact and when is Edward going to find out that James is her very gay pa????
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
I hate mean girls someone need to kick Laurans ass. So Edward thinks that Bella is in love with someone else???? I love the flaming James.
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story can't wait to read more.
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wonder what Bella had to say. He was a very sweet teenage boy. I love that he doesn't pretend to have been madly in love with her in high school. Slight inclination (he totes had a crush on her! c:) is more believable and thus more endearing.
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yes I am loving it looking forward to more keep it coming
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Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it!
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
AAAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKK!!! Too short!!!! No fair!!!!!!!!!!
LOL!! ;D
Loved the completely different interactions each one had with Jessica! ROFL! And that they both felt the same way about the decor and nametags! Priceless!
Lovin' it!!
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Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
So they see each other let the fun begin.
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[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
You have a way of drawing me in to your stories! ;)
I'm so intrigued by the two of them. Leaving Forks on the same night ten years ago? What happened between them or what DIDN'T happen between them? They let ten years pass without any kind of message between them, not even their parents seem to engage in communication between each other. Forks is a small town, so WTF??
Can't wait for more!!
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lol, I promise to explain it all!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm all in! LOL! ;)
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[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting. Keep it coming! Looks really good so far.
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG I cant wait till they see each other hurry LOL
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for the reunion! Great story!
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Can't wait for more!
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think it sounds like it will be wonderful.
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for sharing! I love James and Laurent. I always felt bad for Laurent and Victoria in canon (not so much James, he was just a bit too sadistic), because they didn't know about an alternative diet until they were already too far gone. And in Victoria's case, I'd probably want revenge against whoever killed my mate, too! I like the idea of a great "fuck you, bitches, I own you all!" entrance to the reunion. Not literally, but I love the revenge of the successful former nerds!
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Thank you:) I hope you will read the rest of this as I add the rest of it.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
this could be intresting cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the chapter. In the words of my 12 year old......."It totally rocked it!" and left me wanting more.
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[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing but then your stories always are! ;)
Looking forward to reading more!
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Date: 19 Aug 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I cannot wait to read more. I think I have read all of the stories you have posted on here. I love your writing. :)
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