[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
oh Jasper you mean ole thing.
Author's Response:
Foot in mouth disease is curable...with the right incentive. ;)
Date: 13 Apr 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yea! We met Jasper! Thank you for the latest installment!
Date: 13 Apr 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
You have made my night by posting a new chapter! I have been unable to get your story out of my mind since I was sucked into the world that you have created with these beloved characters. GAH! I even dreamed about it and I've never done that with a fanfiction before! I just can't get enough!
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me invade your dreams. Hopefully Jasper will inspire good dreams going forward. ;)
Date: 13 Apr 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Apr 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
J/B is the best! Can't wait for more!
Date: 09 Apr 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Interesting making James the good guy in the fic. I like the change.
Charlotte is smart in sending Bella to Texas. In her car and to Jasper. Can't wait to see what all happens with that.
And, why do I get the feeling that James is going to do harm to Emmett? And, why hasn't he already? Seems like he doesn't care for him.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
It's hard to create a good suspenseful story when we all know who the good guys and bad guys are before the story begins. I wanted to shake it up a bit. James has his own agenda which will come out later.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
aww poor bella glad shes got away from emmett.hope jasper looks after her an gives her the life she deserves.fab chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! Jasper will be in the next chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
yay^^
Jasper kick Emmetts ass^^
great chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you like the story!
Date: 19 Mar 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hello! Thank you so much for the latest chapter. Looking forward to meeting Jasper!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
Date: 19 Mar 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
glad its jasper bc she will be protected. yay thank god bella had charlotte and james helped her out. i hope emmett doesn not torture james.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 19 Mar 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
ooooo i had been holding out hope that Edward wasn't really dead but i am a sucker for a Jasper/Bella fic so this is good too.
Author's Response:
Everyone was hoping I'd bring Edward back, unfortunately he's dead & buried in this story. I love J/B pairings almost as much as E/B.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
so jasper is her hea. wow wasn't expecting that
i like that james is helping her. i hope he is on the up and up and not screwing her over. he knew her dad's password so again i am praying he is a good guy and will make em pay and not bella
i sure hope she makes it to texas. she has been through so much
love it
Author's Response:
Next chapter will be in Texas & we meet Jasper.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved the chapter. Can't wait for Bella to meet up w/ Jasper. I never though of having a safeword with my kids....thanks for the great advice.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the chapter. Jasper will be making his grand entrance in the next chapter. You're welcome for the advice. The person who took me as a child still lives in a neighboring city so it was the only way to assure our childrens' safety. We never knew if this person would pursue my children. We've been fortunate.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Sorry reposting my review...couldn't stand my mistakes! Glad you got her away from the a-hole for now...bring on Jas! Thanks for making James good for a change!
Author's Response:
No sweat! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Jasper will make his grand entrance in the next chapter. I think James is hot so I wanted to do something nice with him this time around.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
YIPPEE For Jasper gonna be in it. Wow James is an actual good guy??? Cool. Hope she gets all the money from Em and then a bus runs his arse over.
Author's Response:
Trust me I have plans for how to deal with Emmett. I thought it would be a good twist to not make James the automatic bad guy in this story.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. Hopefully next chapter will come quickly. It's in my head. I just need to get it on the computer now. ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my God! I'm so excited that things are finally turning around :)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
I read so many stories with so much love for Emmett and this one just blows him outta the love zone lol. I had no idea this was going to j/b I thought Edward had lived and was biding his time until he could get back to her, like he was in therapy or something lol, so you got me...love this and can't wait for next chappie!
Author's Response:
Sorry, Edward is dead and won't be coming back. I hated killing him off, but Emmett broke his neck and would have been certain he was dead. I hated doing it, but since this was originally a o/s for Beyond the Pale contest it had to happen.
I love Emmett to pieces, but everyone portrays him as the village idiot. I wanted to show something completely different with his character in hopes it would inspire more love for Emmett with other writers.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yes! Finally a light at the end of Bella's tunnel- and a Jasper- light no less! I'm so glad you updated. Thank you for that! This story just keeps getting richer and richer. I have to say James threw me for a loop here. It was a nice surprise though! And let's hear it for Charlotte!
Author's Response:
I went out on a limb with this story. I killed off Edward, made Emmett the bad guy and gave James some redeeming qualities. It's hard to be misterious if everyone knows the characters from the start.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can certainly understand that. Don't you hate it when RL interfers with your fun? LOL!! Well, whenever you are able to update, I'll read it!
Date: 13 Feb 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
So Bella is starting to figure all this out. Thank goodness! Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. I'm trying to get the next chapter done for sometime next week. New job is keeping me very busy.
Date: 30 Dec 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
i just wanted to tell you i love the new banner for 'obsession'. :D iwasnt able to contact you so i put it here.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 12 Dec 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
glad she has someone to call. Hope whomever it is, is trustworhy. Poor B.
Author's Response:
If you caught the clues in the conversation you can guess who she called. They are trustworthy and will lead to her HEA.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love the chapter. Im glad Bella is finally getting out
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love all your stories! I have bought both your books, and loved them. You are so very talented! I can't wait to see how Bella gets out of this monsters clutches!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for reading my novels as well! I'm working on a new series to come out sometime next year and the sequel for Darkness.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
man it kills me what she goes through
but know it is almost all the pieces there for her to put together. em the monster truly is and went after what wasn't his and now he can care less. omg he wants a baby now. what he wants to kill another child. i sure hope bella finds away to get her shot. he doesn't deserve to father any kids. oh em you need help. i really wish she just killed you and it is blame on a business deal gone bad. too bad bella and rose can't get it togehter and both take you out
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
i can not take emmette what an ass please tell me jasper comes into play soon
Author's Response:
Jasper will play a big part in the next half of the story. ;)
Date: 05 Dec 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
Good go Bella..get away I know your talking to char! Jas will be around soon! I hope you are going to rot in hell Emmett!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked. Bella will be meeting someone in the next chapter. ;)
Date: 05 Dec 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hell I still say wait for him to go to sleep and then shoot him start out with the penis and then knee cap him. Perhaps his wrists next then Tell Royce Rose has been cheating on him.
Yep that should work.
Author's Response:
lol! Sounds good, but wouldn't work with the direction of the story. :)
Date: 05 Dec 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG!!!!!!!!! What in the world is Bella going to do???? I want her to stand up for herself but I am afraid for her. I am afraid that Emmett will hurt her really bed or will kill her. Bella finally knows what really happened to Edward. WOW!!!!
Author's Response:
She still doesn't know everything, but her eyes are certainly wide open now.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG what a chapter. It was heartbreaking.
Author's Response:
At least she sees now that he's more than just an abusive husband.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well, a lot of information that we already had was in this chapter. I guess it's nice that Bella is finally catching on.
Have a happy holiday season!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
loved the chapter except the bad part.... looking forward to seeing what happens enxt chapgter
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I told you 10 minutes ago I was getting a shower, then I started to read another story. LOL.What can I say, I love your writing! (:
Author's Response:
GO TAKE A SHOWER! Read later....it'll still be here. LOL!
I appreciate your dedication. :)
Date: 06 Nov 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow....that is just so sad for Bella. And then Rose on top of all that? Just awful. Love how you turn everything on its head. Emmett is evil and James is good. Way to shake things up!
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Thanks! I like doing the unexpected with the characters so that readers can't just assume they know what will happen next.
Date: 05 Nov 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
:( That was really sad. I hope Emmett gets what is coming to him.
Author's Response:
He will when the time is right...
Date: 02 Nov 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, what a living nightmare.
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
i never thought i could love james in a fic again after the perfect wife but i do now for giving bella hope. oh and i fucking hate rose always have in this on i used to have sympathy but now the bitch deserves to be with emmett ugh. until next time i liked this chapter.
Author's Response:
I felt like I owed it James to give him a break this time around. It was someone else's turn to be the evil spawn.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
i have never been more mad and hateful toward an emmett character since reading fic i didnit know i was possible. wtg btw i wanted to fuck em up seriously when he killed the baby and beat bella it was an all time low. i canit wait for bella to get revenge and kill him plus get her hea with someone else. until next time.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Getting B pregnant to draw her in. It was a great plan to him and can you think of anything that will get her to say yes faster? Fucking prick!
I want Jasper pronto! I'm hoping that Charlotte could be connected to B's freedom.
I don't know, I'm just deseparate to get her out and sometimes want you truly need in right under your nose or in a place where you least expect it.
Loved this!
~Kim
Author's Response:
Charlotte is the only friend Bella has that Emmett doesn't know about.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
Personally, I don't need to know what his perspective is. An abusive man is an abusive man. It doesn't matter if he wasn't breastfed enough or if Edward took one of his toys in preschool or he was beaten within an inch of his life as a defenseless kid. I'd rather keep reading how you will give Bella the strength to be Bella again.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, his pov will be brief in the next chapter - Bella will be the main speaker.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
im confused. i thought james was emmetts lackey. he never showed any interest in anything but rose and look where thats at.
Author's Response:
Emmett offered Rose to James as a reward for killing Charlie. James told him he doesn't like blondes. Yes, he is Emmett's lackey, but maybe there's a little more to him than just another prick...
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
she needs to do a farrah faucet or lorena bobbett on his arse. then figure out how to get back at rose. glad james said something to her.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow just wow. Any chance of someone putting a bullet through Emmett's head?
Author's Response:
Eventually...
Date: 31 Oct 2011 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
So James is some what of a friend. Wow, that is different. Usually, James is evil. HaHa!!! I feel so sorry for Bella and for Rose. Rose is in the same position that Bella is in really. Emmett uses her and abuses her too. Help me, what is the deal with James calling her Bellybean???? I can't remember. I am assuming that it has something to do with Edward. Did Carlisle and Esme send him to help Bella???
Author's Response:
Rose is getting a bad rap right now for what she's doing to Bella. I've hinted before that there's a reason she's acts the way she does. You'll see more of her later in the story. The Bellybean reference will be explained in the next chapter. You haven't heard that nickname mentioned before for a reason.
I love doing the unexpected with characters so you can't always assume their behavior.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
Ok, all I have to say is HOLLY SHIT!!!!! I'm sleeping UNDER my bed tonight....
Author's Response:
lol!
Date: 31 Oct 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Bella you need to run and run fast. Charlotte can help! Can't wait for more. I hope em and rose get what's coming to them.I hope James isn't setting a trap. You don't have to give us em's perspective. I already have it f-ing a-hole. Thanks for the update, cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
I loved doing something unexpected with James' character. Don't worry she's about to ask for help....
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
wow i am shocked james is almost giving her a tip on how to get free. i was almost worried he was going to rape her. i was shocked go figure
well bella seems as if you need to a few things in place without emmett knowing cause you do not have any friends you can count on and if you do not get out he will kill you. you can not live this way
Author's Response:
I love doing the unexpected with characters so you can't assume anything with their behavior.
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well she could always shoot him when he goes to sleep at night. He has to do that eventually. Start with his penis.
Author's Response:
lol!
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
Charolette knows he is in the mob.
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
pg by a murderer. ugh
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well Hell I always liked Emmett, not now.
Date: 31 Oct 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
you are the first person to ever make me wish for Emmett to have a nasty accident and die! I hope some happy comes soon poor Bella.
Author's Response:
I love doing the unexpected with the characters. Then you can never assume you know how it will end. LOL!
Date: 31 Oct 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to the enxt chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you like!
Date: 30 Oct 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
love this chapter update soon please
Author's Response:
The next chapter is with beta now.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh poor Bella she just has no idea does she.
~Jess
Author's Response:
She will soon.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. I hate him! There is seriously something very wrong with him.
~Jess
Author's Response:
yes there is. He's psychotic and a murderer. There's nothing remotely redeemable about Emmett.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
complete bastard!!!! wow!! he killed his own child or did he hide her? oh boy words i cannot put here are going through my head WOWOWWWWW!!!! i hope he didn't take the baby. i have a bad feeling he did. charlotte is going to help her and she is going to fall for jasper? hope so. Em better get his i hope you have that planned too!!! he did all that to get her and then he treats her like crap that makes no sense at all. update soon!!!
Author's Response:
The baby did die from the trauma of Emmett's abuse. Emmett never loved Bella. He saw her as a challenge and a trophy to win.
Trust me I have the rest of the story planned.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
okay here is her out if she needs it you set that up nicely....
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Em you are a bastard. i knew it you killed charlie... how is bells going to get out? he won't let her he will kill her... it is going to be intersting how you make it a HEA. who is bells going to be with? if she finds out he killed Ed she will never forgive him
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
okay he drugged her and tricked her into sex and then got her pregers!!! he is evil evil evil.... i still don't know how this is going to be. i found out she was leaving that is why he was breaking stuff.... oh oh oh.. Bella wake up.. this is dejavu!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
a HEA how? Ed is dead.. okay did Em kill Charlie too? he made sure she got pregers too? he is oneconveying man!!! he is in the mob right?
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh bells is she going to find out? oh man what is she going to do if she does? Em you are a bastard!!! oh boy.....
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! i knew it i knew he killed ed... what a bastard. OH bells you are in for HELL!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh my fuckig god. ur amazing.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
kill him in his sleep.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
It's devastating that she has lost her baby. But one factor is that she is awaken to his true character.
I wish I knew how she can too, especially since I think he'll be comfortable enough to reveal some more of his evil instead of the facade to Bella.
But I look forward to the day she does.
Author's Response:
Her eyes have been opened to Emmett's character.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a chapter. Poor Bella and her baby. I almost hate to say it but perhaps it is better that she is not tied to this man forever due to a child. I know, I know, that is awful to say but you know what I mean.
Hard to envision the normally "sweet" Emmett doing these things, isn't?
Okay so I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
Emmett is actually one of my favorite characters in the books. (Hard to believe since I just made him the evil bad guy) I am so sick of everyone making him out to be some sort of Village Idiot, so I was hoping this would help inspire people to do something more with him. Good or bad, he's still hot!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my Goodness, Emmett is seriously twisted! I didn't think he would even dare touch while she was pregnant and risk the baby, oh my, poor Bella. That dirty bastard, man would I love to kick him in the nuts...
Please hurry with an Update, I don't think I can handle not knowing what's gonna happen, please please please
Date: 04 Aug 2011 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story but it's sad that Edward is dead. I'm sorry about my English. It's not my first language. When I read this story I aways thing is Edward really dead ? xD
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
It was because it wasn't a boy, wasn't it?...That bastard.
I gotta tell ya, every time I read another chapter of this I feel thouroughly depressed. Yet I come back for more! What is wrong with me?!?!?
It was still a great chapter, and I'm glad that she now realizes what a thug he is.
Author's Response:
You keep coming back waiting for her to open her eyes and then to escape and find love. ;)
Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
I was sooooo excited to get your update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As always you are doing a great job with your stories. I can not believe that Emmett is being ugly to Bella after all he did to get her. Let me guess, Emmett was upset because Bella was having a girl. Is he having an affair or does he still have Rose on the side? I know Emmett killed Edward and Bella's dad or had them killled BUT to kill your own baby, that is just evil. Hope to goodness that Bella is careful and watched what she does around Emmett. I hope to goodness that she does NOT trust Rose. That would be awful. Awesome awesome job. You always leave us wanting more and more and more!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
The only thing Emmett has truly cared about was getting what he wanted - Bella. He doesn't love her. He's incapable of love. She's a trophy to be won. Remember previously his comment about fucking for almost a year and she still wasn't pregnant. He didn't mind if she never got pregnant as long as he got her. He referred to children as rugrats. He's selfish and self-centered. There is nothing redeemable about his character AT ALL in this story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow I am shocked he would go that far, that is terrible. I hope she comes up with a good plan!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
well i hope that she can get help
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
wonderful chapter. You have an amazing and unique plot that is as thought provoking as it is enticing. I can't wait to read more, so please update again soon!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I have an evil twisted mind and love to bring it out to play havoc with everyone.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
Run....run....time to call/contact Charlotte.
Thanks for the update.....I'm glad Bella will be getting her HEA. Just angry that it's not with Edward. RIP
Author's Response:
Sorry, can't bring Edward back from the dead. But I promise there is someone out there for her...
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Man I so want rose to work with bella and take these men down. man my heartbroke when she felt her stomach and knew her baby was gone. but i almost would think i would want his moster child and then forever you would have the link to this monster. but then again it was a helpless child and did plan who its parents are. poor bella. well at least you know now your husband is a monster. but you do not know he killed edward and your father and is sleeping around on you honestly. i guess em just wanted something that edward and had and now that he has bella she is no more of a game or prize he doesn't want her anymore. oh my blood is boiling. not used to hating emmett, boy do i. fight bella fight for a life without the monster.
Author's Response:
Bella has been nothing more than a prize to be won to Emmett. He is incapable of love.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well shit, I didn't think he'd kill the baby. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Bella. Gotta tell Esme/Alice somehow. A knife to the heart while he's sleeping works well.
Author's Response:
Bella is going to need all the help/friends she can get.
Take care!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Stellar chapter!!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hello! Thank you for the latest installment of your story. I look forward to reading future chapters!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
So happy to have a new chapter:) I can't wait for the next one!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait for Emmett to get what's comig to him. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Don't worry, Bella will get her happy ending.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was reading this story on FF.net and had to get an account here just to continue reading your story! I am CRAZY about it! I'll admit, it's not what I was exactly looking for, or usually read - but you have an awesome plot, and have developed the characters well! Kudos! :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it so far. I've finished my second novel so now my focus will be back on LOMO and CAM.
Mic
Date: 30 Apr 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love this, I cant wait to see where you go with it, and although Im anxiously waiting for an update, I know you'll make it worth our while :)
Author's Response:
Date: 16 Apr 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
About how many chapters do you expect this story to be? I really like it, but when it comes to serious drama and having to read about Bella being taken advantage of in this fashion (made to look like an idiot), I sometimes lose it and I stop reading the stories. I don't want to do that with this one. I'm just wondering if this is going to be a shorter story or one of those 45-55 chapter stories.
I know you don't have time to update alot, but have you thought of the direction you're going with this, or do you just write as you go?
Great job so far
Author's Response:
Hi and thank you for taking time to read my story. In answer to your question, I honestly don't know how many chapters this story will have but right now I'm thinking no more than 30. This one isn't like TPW. Emmett can't be redeemed. He murdered people to "win" the girl. Bella's blinders will start coming off in the next couple of chapters so not too worry. She isn't going to remain ignorant much longer.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for an update. Looking forward to next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Soon...
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I absolutely loved Charlotte! I'm from Texas too so I love hearing from the southern characters of the Saga.
Of course Emmett will find out about their friendship. How he handles it is another thing. And she's not fat!--she's preggers... But the yoga is a good idea.
Author's Response:
I'm Austin born and bred. You couldn't pay me to live anywhere else but Texas!! Charlotte is going to help me channel my Southern "take no prisoners" attitude. Glad you liked it! :)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Uh huh...........so the mayor's wife knows that Emmett and his family are dirty or something like that? Hopefully, one day, Bella will stop being so darn naive. I know that it is part of her charm but really, I hope that she opens her eyes. But this all makes for a good story. Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Bella's blinders are going to start coming off soon to what kind of person Emmett really is. Her friendship with Charlotte is going to be very important to her.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
OHNO! Charlotte just opened a jar of pissed for Emmett!
Author's Response:
Charlotte is going to be very important to Bella...