[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 44: Christmas and New Years
hey darling - great chapter! Merry Christmas TAT. have a great one!
Michele
xoxo
Author's Response:
Ohhh Michele~
Thank you my friend!
I hope that you have the happiest most wonderful chirstmas as well! Thanks for always giving my story love and for reviewing and reading it.
I will post more soon, and I do have all chapters back from beta now I just want to get the epilogue finished and beta'd.
I hope that you and yours find your holiday the way you wish it to be.
HUGS~TAT
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 43: A Damned Obituary
awesome story keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you so much this story is very near and dear to me. It holds some true to life personal things I dealt with. So thank you for your story love it is welcomed and appreciated very much!
Thank you for reading and reviewing so much, it is wonderful truely wonderful!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 40: Hold On, Don’t Let Go
keep up the good work, don't start too many new ones before you finish this
Author's Response:
I wrote the one shot for the contest and was begged to turn it into a story and that is as far as it went until I wrote the final chapter of this book. I am still working ont he epi but the main story is done. I will not start another story until I get A Sub Search done. unless a contest comes up that interests me then I will write one shot for it too. I enjoyed entering the contest a LOT with sub search.
Thank you for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 37: About That Box
this is just a great story and deserves more reviews
Author's Response:
Awwww thank you so much! Really....this is my first story and really my reviews between here and ff.net have not been great or super but I am not doing horrid either. I really wish more people would review I have an average of 129 readers every post here that is regular alert readers and on ff.net I have about double that. I have over 400 reviews on ff net and unsure here after you blew up my inbox today...BUT I have loved every single minute of it and I am truely grateful. Thank you again for the story love! It means everything to me!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 26: The Busy Pixie
great
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 25: Leaving Paradise
I sure hope it is Edwards Baby
Author's Response:
You will find out that answer really soon I PROMISE!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 21:Graduation Day
can't wait for the vacation
Author's Response:
I know right? It is where I would like to go. I did a lot of reaserch on it and I want to go there!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Maelstrom of Crazy
yea Bella
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I love reviews!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 16: Find Me Please
terrible place for a cliffie, thank goodness I am behind and you have already posted next, promised myself I would get back to cleaning after this chapter....you made me break my promise
Author's Response:
It does have a great hook every now and then huh?
Thank you for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 12: Fight and Make Up
wow
Author's Response:
I know right! I loved this chapter a lot...thanks for all the reviewing you are doing it is AWESOME!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 11: Back on Campus
don't think I could sleep with Edward laying next to me
Author's Response:
Yeah me either!!! I would be all over that in a flat second!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 10: Moving Day
I am inclined to think its Eric too since he is only main character not been used yet
Author's Response:
I know a lot of people thought eric was the one! SURPRISE!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Guard Begins
this is a greta story I can't believe it is your first
Author's Response:
It is my first and my second is startign out really great too!
If you like story's based on bdsm check it out A Sub Search...it is gettign really great reviews so far. Bella is the domme... :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: Northwestern Memorial
been stalking her since 2nd grade, my guess is Eric Yorkie
Author's Response:
I wanted the real stalkers identity to be a shock and for most it was. Thank you for reviewing so much it is really AWESOME that you took the time to review not many people do or have and I have a LOT of readers.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 4: 42 Days and Counting
now that is creepy
Author's Response:
Yeah I write a great creepy stalker huh?
I wonder what that says about me??
LOL
Kasi
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
great start
Author's Response:
Thank you for starting and continuing to read my story. I am very very very grateful for all the kind words and story love you have shown me so far by reviewing so many times. THANK YOU!!!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 43: A Damned Obituary
OMG I can't believe you had Alec kill off Edward by newspaper. Ok, yes I can :) I didn't want to giggle over it, but, I did.
Thanks so much for the update!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
Wishful thinking on the part of Alec. :)
Crazy but yet still fun....gotta love it!
Only a few chapters left but I am guessing that you will nto go away disappointed in this story. Thanks for beign one of the loyal readers this story has gained.
Thank you as always for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
Ah, I must have hit the submit button twice on my review and I didn't think it went thru, so glad it made it.
Author's Response:
It is all good I LOVE ALL reviews even the multiple ones! :)
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 43: A Damned Obituary
Hey Kasi! Love this chapter! It kills me that Alec founf a way to get close to her again to watch her! So funny that they printed Ed's obit in all the papers. Can't wait to see the investigation in to this the boys will do. Will Randall get outed sson?
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
I have missed you lately!
There are only 47 regular chapters in this book, and then the epi is going to be based on their lives ten years down the road.
So yes SOON would be a great guess. I love how diabolical Alec is, I love that he is such a off the wall pysco!
I got a personal message the other day and they told me that if one of these story contest gave an award for the best crazy ass nut job, I would win hands down. I laughed my ass off for that! So funny! If I ever won an award for this story it would most likely be for him being such a good nutjob though!
Things will wrap fast from here! I REALLY hope that I do nto disappoint any of my great readers!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! YOU ROCK!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 43: A Damned Obituary
that bastard alex and co needs to DIE!!!!!
Author's Response:
Michele~
I know right???? At least we know I am good at writing a nut case crazy person! LOL
Thank you so much for always reading and reviewing.
Love your reviews.
HUGS!! Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 43: A Damned Obituary
So creapy! Love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Next chapter posts soon!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 43: A Damned Obituary
I know Alec is a sicko and just wrong in the head, but the obituary is brilliant. He not only gets them frantic but also sends a message about his intentions.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
YOU totally got it! You got what I was going for! It is his wishful thinking of sorts!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 42: November
Yeah - I'm so glad Bella has a way to protect herself now :)
Emmett's Thanksgiving prayer is a riot! That really made me giggle.
Thanks so much for the chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
I am really thrilled that you liked Emmetts prayer. It is really near and dear to my heart. You see I was raised by my mom, my parents divorced when I was just 4. I spent a LOT of time with my grandparents. My Granfather had 2 favorite holiday and family get together prayers. One was "In the name of the father, skip the son, third base homerun...the one that gets there first gets the most." and the other was "Amen uncle ben killed the rooster, shot a hen....the one that gets there first gets the most." Can you see a common link?? My grandpa used to always pick up whatever big meat tray was in front of him and pretend to leave the table. So the thanks for the fractured prayer goes to heaven where my pompa is. (He was a great and funny man!)
Thank you as always for the story love and for reading and reviewing.
Next chapter will post really soon!
Kasi~
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 42: November
Great job BB! cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
next chapter will post soon!
:)
TAT~
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 42: November
great chapter as always - I loved Bella's appetite! and Emmett's reaction
Author's Response:
Michele,
I know it right? I had to find a way to lighten the story a little, they needed to have some type of fun and live a little and what would a crazy pregnancy be without some crazy ass cravings....for the record the food she ate GYROS happens to be one of my FAVORITE greek sandwiches and not only that but he french fries dipped in the cucumber garlic sauce for the gyros is also one of my favorites! I did not however crave the sardines in mustard or the peanut butter/cottage cheese on ritz.
Oh I have to share also that the fractured prayer that Emmett shares with everyone was one of two that my Grandfather (God rest his soul) used to say before every family dinner, and he would pick up whatever big main dish in front of him and pretend to leave the table. It just fit Emmett to the tee....don'tcha think??? My grandfathers other prayer was..."Amen Uncle Ben shot a rooster killed a hen, the one that gets there first gets the most" (see a common link??)
Thank you for always reading and reviewing belive me I love it and THANK YOU so much for the WONDERFUL rec. of A Sub Search, I have gotten so many add's for alerts and favorite adds since you did that I am so greatful! Thank you so much! Chapter 2 will be posted sometime very soon waiting to get it back from my BETA. :) YAY!!!
Kasi~
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 42: November
Oooo! This is feeling like the quiet before the storn!
Author's Response:
Hi My fangirl friend~ I have missed you! Hope all is well! Yes it is the quiet before the storm....Gotta show them some fun and love every so often you know??? I have missed you, I hoep that you have a wonderful holiday season, I will post another chapter soon!
Thank you for reading and reviewing as always!
Kasi~
Date: 13 Dec 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 41: October
Yeah, I figured she would get tired of being on lockdown, but at least it keeps her safe. That being said, I don't know if a costume party is the best place to make an appearance with a psycho-killer stalking you. Guess we will wait and see, huh.
Author's Response:
I just wanted them to have some fun she is always so locked up in the homestead you know??? anyway the next chapter will post soon and then you will have all the answers as to if it was a good idea or a bad mistake.
thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 41: October
UGH! Alec just makes my skin crawl - you have him portrayed brilliantly - he is a real psycho!!!!
I'm so sad to see this story getting close to it's end...can't wait to see what you come up with next :)
Thank you for the update!!!!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
Thank you for all your kind words I am grateful that you read my story each time it posts and review each chapter as well. It is truely so excitign to open my email and find that not only do I get a few reviews but to see positive words fan fiction fans, I am huge fan as well of many writers and I am so proud to have anyone like my writing enough to review it! Thank you SO much. I promise that the ending is good. At least I think it is. I will update chapters as I get them!
Kasi~
Date: 11 Dec 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 40: Hold On, Don’t Let Go
I can't believe he shot at them, but I was pretty sure Edward would be okay, but poor Sasha, hope she is okay eventually. Alec is seriously unstable and I can't wait for him to go down. It is obvious how delusional he is and I don't think he really cares for Bella, she is just the prize; otherwise he would know the stress he is putting on her and the babies with all his drama. They need to find their leak and stop him fast!
At this point if I was Bella I would not leave the house for anything until crazy is caught. Not practical, but it would be safer
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing...It means a lot to me believe me!
Part of being unstable is not being able to see clearly between reality and delusion. Alec lives in a serious amount of delusion and I do nto think would know reality if it bit him in the butt. There will a total of 47 chapters of story and a chapter for the epilog. So you do nto have to stress too much it will all come to an end soon. I promise it will be a HEA ending. See ya very soon with an update!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 40: Hold On, Don’t Let Go
Poor Sasha - she needs to be ok!!!!
You really had me fooled thinking it was Bella that was shot :)
Alec is such a sick f*ck isn't he????
Thanks so much for the update!!!
Author's Response:
Hey there Tamara~
I know I am naughty huh????
I tried! I love the cliffy it was good. Alec is a sick wackadoodle!
Thanks for always reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
ps sent you the preview the normal way.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 39: Doctors and Decisions
oh my - you are evil - shame on you for leaving us hanging like that!!!!! loved this chapter btw - now you have to update soon and put us out of our misery!!!
Author's Response:
I just posted chapter 40 so I will not send you the preview and yes I posted fast but if you see the chapter notes of 40 you will see why....thanks for always reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 09 Dec 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 39: Doctors and Decisions
excellent chapter. can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and thanks for reading my story. I sent you the preview of the next chapter to your inbox via the contact me button on your profile.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 39: Doctors and Decisions
OMG!!!!! You really did this? hehehehehe
You have some of the best cliffy's :)
Holding my breath until the next update!!! Hurry - I'm already turning blue :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliments. Thanks for the story love
and thanks for reading and reviewing
preview for next chapter sent to you via contact button!
Kasi~
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 39: Doctors and Decisions
UM...you better be updating this ASAP! Who was shot? What the hell is going on? OMG...i will bne on the edge of my seat waiting.
Author's Response:
I promise that I will update soon! Thank you for reading and reviewing! I am grateful for your continued support.
Kasi~
preview sent via contac button.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 39: Doctors and Decisions
wow, thats not good...
Author's Response:
*Hiding while typing*
Don't be too mad yet. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I think the preview I send you will at least make you feel better a little anyway. Sending via the contact button on your profile.
Kasi
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 38: Birthday Text
awww twins! that's perfect - great chapter
Author's Response:
Well I have to tell you that I was very undecided and I asked people to vote and the majoroity wanted a boy and a girl twins and I went with it since that was what they asked for. My beta was not sure it would work but I have it written and I think I did okay. You'll have to let me know what you think, when the time comes. I have had 7 children and 2 of those were c-sections, and I only made it to one due date so I had experiance on my side. LOL sorta speak! I sent you the teaser, the rest of this book will post fast, as soon as I get it back from abby and it goes to jess and back it will post.
Kasi~
Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 38: Birthday Text
Great job! Twins wow didnt see that one coming. cant wait to see what happenes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the story love and for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me. The twins was a overwhelming vote for one boy and one girl twins and that is what everyone gets so yay!!! there are 2 of them. :)
Kasi~
ps sent you the preview of next chapter via mail
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 38: Birthday Text
Awww twins! Grrr Alec is still pissing me off! Bella needs the gun and shoot his kahonies off :)
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
Your teaser has been sent the normal way. I am glad to see you are still liking the general jist of the story. Yes I would love to shoot Alec in his family jewels...LOL He is quite the creeper! I will update more again soon! I am just about done writing the story it is about finished. Once I have all the chapters back and they have been proof read I will post one a day until they are all out here. I really am excited abotu starting to work more on the new one (A Sub Search). Thanks for always reading and reviewing. See ya soon!
Kasi~
Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 38: Birthday Text
love it
Author's Response:
Hey thank you for reading and reviewing I will send you the preview of the next chapter to you via the contact button on your profile. I am glad to know that you love it....I do too!
Thanks again!
Kasi~
Date: 07 Dec 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 38: Birthday Text
TWINS! Wowsa! I am wondering if one is Edward's and one is Alec's? I kinda hope not but that would be an interesting twist!
Author's Response:
Sarah~ that is too much of a days of our lives scene for me...lol but a funny thought. I really battled in my desision for alec vs edward mainly because pieces of this story reflect real life for me. All thought thigns are different somethings were dead on. I am excited that I almost have th book finished now. I am really excited to get working my next project and to see the reviews for this crazy story's final chapters. Next chapter or 2 will post fast. sending you the preview of 39 same as I normally do. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi
Date: 07 Dec 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 38: Birthday Text
Good chapter, that Alec is sneaky, for sure...I can't believe she is having twins and I am suprised they didn't hear 2 heartbeats as well, but I don't know much about twins. Hope they can keep Bella and the babies safe!
Author's Response: Most times when they find the one they do not search for the other and the second is not always noticable depending on babies placements as well. I actually personally know a woman who when I was like 12 (Almost 30 years ago) had a sonogram because she was so HUGE they thought twins but the sonogram only saw one baby they could not see a second baby and she ended up having twins. They were just one on top of the other and could not be seen. Nowadays it would be harder for such a slip being that we have the 3d ultrasounds and what not. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I have sent you the teaser via the contact button. More sneaky Alec on the side soon! Kasi~
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 37: About That Box
Well I am glad that they are checking up on the police on the force because they really need to find out who Alec knows and what they can do to better make sure that Alec doesn't get to her again becasue he will hurt Bella as soon as she has the baby.
Author's Response:
He is a wacko, I am almost scared of myself since I managed to make him so warped....hmmm, well I have my head on straight I promise!
Thanks for reading and reviewing
Kasi~
Date: 05 Dec 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 36: Orientation Week
What the heck is in that box!! I wonder if they are going to find out soon who the mole in the department is because if they weren't sure before they should be now because not everyone knows that Bella is pregnant.
Author's Response:
I know I teased bad about the box 2 chapters both cliffy'ing on the box...I am mean I know.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing
Date: 05 Dec 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 35: Safety Procedures
It is scary that he has just very easily gotten to Bella without anyone knowing about it. The only plus that I see is that he knows nothing about the tracking devise that she has and I really hope that he never finds out about it because that would be the nail in her coffin with Alec.
Author's Response:
MrsRPatz~
I am so sorry I never replied to this review before now. I jsut got another review on this chapter and yours came up and I FEEL HORRIBLE! I always try to answer EVERY single review I get for this story, I am sorry that your review got over looked somehow. You were always so great to review my chapters when so many others did not. Thanks for giving my story so much love!
Kasi~
Date: 05 Dec 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 34: It Just Escapes Me
It seems that Alec had a really good plan as to getting out of there and to Bella. I hope that they find out that he has an in with the police department and put a stop to that. I wonder how long he is going to lay low before going to get Bella.
Author's Response:
He will not get her as smoothly as he escaped! I promise you that.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 33: Chip It and Travel
It sounds like they are taking all of the precautions that they can right now and just hope for the best!
Author's Response:
You have no idea how much it means to me that you still stop and take the time to review each chapter! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 05 Dec 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 32: Gifts Galore
Wow! I feel like I have been gone forever and have so much to catch up with. I really hope that Renee is wrong because I think that she might be wrong alot but something tells me that she isn't wrong with that one.
Author's Response:
I will send you the preview of chapter 38 to you via contact button on your profile and I know your not that caught up yet but I would rather do it now then forget. So don't read it unless you do not mind a little story spoilage.
Thanks for reading and reviewing as always. Renee is an odd duck, but she is rarely wrong about her feelings.
Kasi~
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 37: About That Box
ohh, that Alec is so creepy, I really hope he goes down soon...the baby blanket gift was beyond creepy. yuck! Please kill him off soon, okay...and bring on some more Bella and Edward lovin --- keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Yes he is creepy and no worries he will get his, I will work ont he edward and bell aloving, even though she is currently feeling a big as a HOUSE. LOL
Thanks for the story love!
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi
Preview sent via contact me button on your profile so go check your email.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 37: About That Box
Oh God Alec makes my blood boil! What a sick SOB!!!!!! I just want to punch him and then take him out! :)
Thank you as always for the wonderful update!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
Thanks for the story love, I am very grateful. I know about the urge to punch him and take him out and I do not mean on a date! LOL It kinda scares me that I am able to write a fictional character into such a sick SOB....what does that say about me????? HMMMMM...LOL
preview of next chapter is sent you you, see you soon with the new chapter!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 37: About That Box
the suspense is killing me!!!! Great chapter and congratulations!!!! I'm going over to read it now!
Author's Response:
Your reviews make me smile! really they do! I was sitting here drowsing off, thinking of what I was doing next in this story and I decided to check my email and saw your review of A Sub Search then this review. I am so blown away by your story love. Thank you so much for reading my stuff and for reviewing it too!
Thank you so much!
Kasi~
your preview is sent via normal way...
:)
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 37: About That Box
Good job! I really hope that Alec gets whats coming to him.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the story love, Alec is a force to be reckoned with for sure! thanks for reading and reviewing and I will send your preview of chapter 38 to you via contact button on your profile!
Kasi~
Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 37: About That Box
I figured it was something for the baby... Alec is beyond fucked up!! God I hope he doesn't get anywhere near Bella! But I have a feeling he will some how!!! I can't wait to find out more about Randall... who is he??? Why is he helping Alec??? I am wondering if he has a grudge against Edward.....hmmmm.... can't wait to find out!!! :)
Author's Response:
He is a nut case I agree! He is a few eggs short of a dozen, for sure! I am sending you the preview of the next chapter to you via contact button on your profile! Thank you for always reading and reviewing! I really am greatful for the story love I get from the few really loyal readers I have. Thank you very much! Randall's identity comes out in chapter 42 or 43 as to how he knows Alec. Randall is just a bad cop, period.
Kasi~
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 36: Orientation Week
I am guessing baby stuff is in the box along with a note... OHHHHH I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Sarahlynn81~
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I will not tell you but since I am posting the chapter either LATE LATE tonight or tomorrow I will post your teaser here instead of mailing it. I will hope to hear from you SOON on what you think of chapter 37!!!
Kasi~
Chapter 37 snippet
EPOV
“Bella, do you remember the box that came for you a week ago?” I asked.
“Oh, shoot. Yeah, I forgot all about it. Go get it sweetie and we can open it,” she said.
“Bella, I noticed the box the other night and I got an uneasy feeling about it. I called Emmett and Jake, they agreed with me. We actually had the bomb squad come and they took the box to check it to be sure it was not some sort of explosive.”
“Edward, was it a bomb?” Bella asked, clearly frightened.
“No it was not a bomb, my love. It was from Alec.”
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 36: Orientation Week
I was almost going to get nasty about the damn box until you said you would fill us in next chapter. :) Yeah!!!!
Still trying to figure out who the mole is since Alec knows Bella is pregnant....hmmmmm... :)
Thanks so much for the update!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
I love your reviews, they make me SMILE! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Postign your teaser here for 37 enjoy!
Kasi~
Chapter 37 snippet
EPOV
“Bella, do you remember the box that came for you a week ago?” I asked.
“Oh, shoot. Yeah, I forgot all about it. Go get it sweetie and we can open it,” she said.
“Bella, I noticed the box the other night and I got an uneasy feeling about it. I called Emmett and Jake, they agreed with me. We actually had the bomb squad come and they took the box to check it to be sure it was not some sort of explosive.”
“Edward, was it a bomb?” Bella asked, clearly frightened.
“No it was not a bomb, my love. It was from Alec.”
Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 36: Orientation Week
GAH...you killin me with the cliffies! cant wait to see what happens.
Author's Response:
Miracle~
Don't shoot yet.....I promise you will know what is in the box SOON! I normally send you the preview but I will post it this time here.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Chapter 37 snippet
EPOV
“Bella, do you remember the box that came for you a week ago?” I asked.
“Oh, shoot. Yeah, I forgot all about it. Go get it sweetie and we can open it,” she said.
“Bella, I noticed the box the other night and I got an uneasy feeling about it. I called Emmett and Jake, they agreed with me. We actually had the bomb squad come and they took the box to check it to be sure it was not some sort of explosive.”
“Edward, was it a bomb?” Bella asked, clearly frightened.
“No it was not a bomb, my love. It was from Alec.”
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 35: Safety Procedures
great job...cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story. I am glad that you are liking it. Your preview of chapter 36 is sent to you via the contact button on your profile, so check your email for it.
Thanks again!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 35: Safety Procedures
Ummmm - really? Your going to make me wait to find out what is in the box? Your evil sweetie!!!!!!!!
Hot, sexy chapter! Thanks so much for updating!!!!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
Thanks for the story love, I am glad to see that you are enjoying the story this much! I know I left everyone hanging with what was in the box and I have the feeling I will hear more about that. Don't get to upset, yet. Sent yopu the preview of the next chapter as always enjoy and thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 34: It Just Escapes Me
love this
Author's Response:
Lil~
thank you so much for the review! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
The pre-view of the next chapter was sent to you via the contact button on your profile.
Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 34: It Just Escapes Me
Really great chapter, can't wait to see what is in store
Author's Response:
Grace~
Thank you for the review, and thank you for reading. I have sent the pre-view to you via the contact me button on your profile and I am hoping to post the next chapter really soon!
Kasi~
Date: 26 Nov 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 34: It Just Escapes Me
Hey Sweets! Well this was an action packed chapter. I love how completely delusional Alec is. It is just so funny. Thank gawd they chipped Bella. I guess if he grabs her again and takes the necklace off the chip will activate. Technology is so cool! So now that we have a name for the mole in the police department I want to know if Emmett and Garret know him, and if so, do they suspect him? Clearly he's dirty. Is he under investigation? My uncle was Chicago PD Internal Affairs for the last 15 years of his carrer. They crawl u your ass and stay there until they get all the facts, good or bad.
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
I may be coming to you for some of my research....LOL
I will send you the pre-view for next chapter same as normal.
In the next chapter Garrett voices that he thinks it is an inside job and yes it will come out that em and gar know him. But I can not tell you when or how or it will ruin the up coming events.
I thank you again and alwyas for reading and reviewing.
Thank you SO much!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 34: It Just Escapes Me
Hey there TAT - This was a great chapter - all the good stuff - fun, fluff, mixed in with that great little angst and the cliffy!!!! Loved it - michele
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you so much, I am really trying to get this finished because I wan tto get working on the story to go with the one shot I wrote for the Dommella contest. I really have my heart set on that story and really want this one finished. Yet I do not want to make this story suffer, because it is worth finishing the right way. I am sending the pre-view to 35 to your inbox via contact button like normal. Thank you so much for the story love, reading and review, again coming from you it means a huge amount to me!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 34: It Just Escapes Me
Oh great chapter! It's getting buttpuckering!!!!!!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
That made me chuckle! Thanks for the story love and for readign and reviewing as always! Your preview of 35 is in the mail.
updating again soon!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 33: Chip It and Travel
This story is awsome, I spent my whole day reading it, to catch up. So excited to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Jill~
Thank you for reading my story and thank you for the story love! I am glad that you read it all so far. I am jsut in love with these characters so much and I am glad to share them with you!
I have sent you the preview to chapter 34 to you via the contact me button on your profile. watch for a email from maakrace on a hot mail account.
Thank you again for reading and taking the time to review. Reviews do mean EVERYTHING me.
Kasi~
Date: 23 Nov 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 33: Chip It and Travel
Wow, isn't technology great...I have heard of chipping pets and knew it existed for humans, but had no idea of some of the alert features and vibrating functions it displays when triggered, so that was very interesting. Thanks
Author's Response:
Manolomel9~
Thanks for reading and reviewing I am greatful for all the reviews I get! I did a lot od reasearch on the chips, and those are actual features you can get I think it is totally cool. they are very cool and when carlisle was talkign abotu the nonotech I got all of that off line by google'ing: gps chipping a human. They are state of the art and way cool IMO
:) Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 33: Chip It and Travel
another great chapter! so glad the girls got chipped :)
thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: Tamara~ thank you so much for being so good to me and giving me all this story love all the time by reviewing! Thank you so much! Reviews mean the world to me! I hope that you enjoy the next chapter it is really good! Sent you the preview like always! Kasi~
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 33: Chip It and Travel
Hey Chicka! So Ihave a totally stupid question, but its bugging me. If taking off the neckace triggers the "panic button" feature on the chip,is there a way to disable it at all by choice? Can the girls take off the chains to shower without it tripping? I know, so random, but my brain is kinda fried right now.
I'm glad to see that for this situation Renee is being taken seriously. Ang go Emmett for taking care of his girl.
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
That is a great question....I am nto sure of the answer too when I researched those I did nto think abotu removing the necklace at all! DUH!!! on me huh!!!
Oh well I will find the answer for you! Just not right this second, I am TIRED too! LOL
I will send next chapters preview to you same as normal!
Thanks for always reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 19 Nov 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 32: Gifts Galore
Great chapter! I think Renee might have a bit more insight then people give her credit for. Looking foward to more!
Author's Response:
YES! I wanted to give Renee a likeable but yet odd characteristic and thus far from the reviews I have gotten here and at ff I have managed to do that....yay! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means more then you know to me. Thank you for the story love!
I am sending you the pre-view of the next chapter by clickingthe contact me button on your profile so it will come to you via email from TWCS website.
Enjoy, and thank you again!
Kasi~
Date: 19 Nov 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 32: Gifts Galore
I'm loving the story... and I'm soooooo glad that Edward's the daddy..... Can't wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the story love it means a lot to me!
Thanks for reading and reviewing that means even more to me!
I am glad too, about Edward being the daddy.
Updating soon, and pre-view sent to you via the contact me button on your profile.
Kasi~
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 32: Gifts Galore
Go figure, Rene will be the one to figure out and predict Alec's escape. Too funny that the ne-age, hippy is the most insightful and actualy guesses this one!
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
me and my pre-reader were talking and we decided that Renee gets the short end of the stick a lot and she is flighty a lot, well my renee was grounded but a better friend then mom. I wanted to keep her odd, but make her loveable and I figured that her "SEEING" danger coming may make people liek her a little more??? maybe??? Anyway i am sending you the pre-view of next chapter to you via contact button, I hope that you enjoy it. Thanks for always reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 32: Gifts Galore
Damn - Edward can rock my world anytime!!!!
Love this chapter and knew that he had to escape - YIKES!
Thank you for the update!
Author's Response:
Well he has not escaped yet, but it is coming. Thank you for reading and reviewing! Always happy to see your reviews! Thank you so much. Teaser sent to you via contact button on profile.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 31: What a Wedding
YEAH - so glad the wedding happened without incident. :)
Thank you for the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the story love and thank you for reading and reviewing! here is the next chapter teaser and normally I send it via email, but since I am posting the chapter later I am sending you this.
Chapter 32 snippet
We got home and pulled into the garage. Esme and Carlisle were waiting there for us. We got out, exchanged hugs and kisses, and Esme asked us to please close our eyes. She and Carlisle led us across the parking ramp to their wedding gifts for us.
“Okay my children open your eyes” said Esme.
I gasped and covered my mouth with my hand when I saw the two cars in front of us. I noticed that Edward did not seem so surprised.
“You knew about this, didn’t you?” I asked him.
Edward was a smart enough man to know not to lie or give too much information. He just nodded his head at me.
I quickly kissed both my new parents on the cheeks and told them how thankful I was to have such giving parents. I then turned on my heel and started walking to the elevator that would take me to my home. Edward and our parents joined me and the ride to the ninth floor was quiet.
Edward leaned down and whispered into my ear, “Baby, don’t be upset please. I only knew because my father wanted me to choose the colors and get both vehicles added to our insurance.”
I kissed his cheek and told him, “I’m not upset about you knowing; I just hate how much money they are spending on us.”
Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 31: What a Wedding
Finally they are married!!! I am happy that they got to this point because it sure was a bumpy ride to get there.
Author's Response:
Hello, and thank you for reviewing again. I am so lucky to have loyal readers such as yourself! Thank you so much! Yes it has been a bumpy ride and it is goign to get bumpy again....don't throw rocks...please! I promise Bella will NOT get taken again, but there will be some agnst coming. I am currently writing chapter 39 and the story only has about 6/7 more chapters at this point, including the epi.
I sent your chapter 32 teaser to you via the contact button on your profile, enjoy.
Kasi~
Date: 16 Nov 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 31: What a Wedding
So I found this story at 530 this morning and have read every chapter. I wanted to review every chapter but I decided it was to good and wanted to read it all the way through. I wish I had had Bellas strength when I went through my ordeal. Sadly it took me years to get over it and still sometimes I find myself jumping at the slightest sound when I am alone. I am lucky in the way I found my Edward, and he is an amazing man who I trust entirely. Thank you for writing such a great story, I will add and review from here on out. Cant wait for the next one becaue Im hooked.
Author's Response:
Miracle~
I sent you the preview of the next chapter to you via the contact button on your profile! As for the story love I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart. This story is fiction, but parts of it are very much based on somethign that happened to me. I knew my attacker and I was actually married to him and had filed for a divorce. I also ended up being pregnant, I had a 12 almost 13 yr old daughter. When I was 5 months pregnant with her I met my edward, but he after almost 13 yrs together turned into my nightmare. Some guys do suffer from mid-life crisis. This story is near and dear to me and I am greatful for you reading it and reviewing it. I love to see the reviews adn I often wonder if the story is really good or not because I have such a low amount of reviews. I have been told that the reviews I have gotten by far mean more then quantity because I have gotten only 3 semi negitive reviews. I have over 300 reviews on FF and over 120 here so not to shabby I guess. Thank you again for reading, and I hope to hear from you soon! Don't forget to check your email and read the preview of chapter 32.
Kasi~
akaTeamAllTwilight
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 31: What a Wedding
Good chapter -they finally said "I do"!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing I am greatful for the reviews! I am glad that you like the story!
I hope that you like the next chapter I sent the preview to you via the contact button on your profile!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 30: The Day Before I Do
Oh the next chapter is the Wedding!!! I am excited that they are finally going to be married!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing and the snipett from the next chapter was sent to you via the contact button on your profile.
Thanks for the story love!
Kasi
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 29: Meal and Deal
I am glad that they all know about the baby now! And Bella didn't complain that much about all of the stock and property that Edward has that was a shock because I expected a fight with that one.
Author's Response:
I was just going through my reviews and found that I had not replied to this one. I am so sorry I did not reply sooner. I am not sure how I missed this review. I was going to have her protest, but she has been very 'submissive' to what Edward wants. I think that when we find our soul mate things such as these things mean nothing compared to safety and comfort you get from that relationship. I wanted Bella to be strong, but not the same as everyone else's Bella. I had a person who was dissapointed by my story for not making Jake or one of the LaPush boys the bad guy and honestly I went in this determined to not make the bad guy Mike, James, Jake or Laurent. I get tired of the same ole same and I wanted to be different. Thank you so much for always reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 15 Nov 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 28: Friday’s Festivities
I thought that maybe Bella would have had a fit about the party and not being told how many people are going to be at her wedding. I thought that she would have but she didn't.
Author's Response:
I did Bella's reactions to be almost like she is submissive, but yet still have some backbone. I did that because it will help show later how strong Edwards love makes her. I love how she teased Alice and Esme though.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 30: The Day Before I Do
thank you for the extra chapter I hope you had a great birthday
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It is always nice to see that people are reading, and makes my day to see reviews! Thanks for the birthday wishes. Sent your teaser to you via the contact button on your profile! Chapter 31 will post soon, really soon! I am working on writing chapter 37/38 right now and things are goign to go fast and post fast from here! Thanks again for reading my story, and takign the time to drop me a line here.
Kasi~
aka...TeamAllTwilight
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 30: The Day Before I Do
Happy Birthday Kasi! I hope you have a fantastic day!
This was a very sweet chapter! Edward is so good to her. I love that they all understand they shoud be afraid of Bella and her reaction to the head count. Hilarious!
Author's Response:
Thank you fangirl~
I have chapters written through 37 right now but I will tell you this there will be some skipping forward and touching down only when it is needed for the story line to progress the correct way to get to the ending I have planned. I love these characters and do not want to see them dragged into the ground. So less then 50 chapters for sure. Thank you for reading and reviewing and for alwyas being one of my best cheerleaders! YOU ROCK!
Kasi~
aka TAT = TeamAllTwilight
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 30: The Day Before I Do
Awww - their matching cuff's sound awesome! I want one!!!!
Thank you~
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR TAT, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I know I loved the cuff idea! I wanted hers to be girlie and his to be manly I hope I described them well enough. Thanks for the birthday wishes! :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing as always and have a great day!
Kasi~
Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 29: Meal and Deal
Leave it to Rose to call Bella on her BS and out her pregnancy. At least it was in private and they got to make the announcement the way they wanted to. Nice fluffy chapter! Downtime is good, especially when Bella shulld be takng it easy.
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
I know it was fluff filled and I am sorry for that but I needed to let the back catch up a little. there are a few more fluffy chapters coming because of the wedding and all but there will be some Alec stuff coming soon too! No worries and the teaser is sent via contact button again!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 29: Meal and Deal
MMMMM - Edward and his magic fingers...*sigh
Thank you for the update!
Author's Response:
I know right????
Thanks for reading and reviewing again!
The snipett for chapter 30 was ent via contact button again!
Enjoy.
Kasi~
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 28: Friday’s Festivities
great chapter honey! xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you! I am really greatful for your kind words to me! You really rock. I sent you the teaser via the contact button on your profile here. Enjoy!
Thank you for reading adn reviewing my story!
Kasi~
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 28: Friday’s Festivities
ooooo who is at the door!?!?! I hope it is Rene... I wonder if it is Alec... I can't help but think that he is going to get her and then think the baby is his...
Author's Response:
Sarahlynn~
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I have sent the teaser to you via the contact me button on your profile here. The door is not a bad thing this time, who is to say next will not be bad though!
Kasi~
Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 28: Friday’s Festivities
Hey Kasi! I have to ask a question. I know you do lot of research into locations for the story, so I gotta know. The Stonegate Banquets...i tht the one in Hoffman Estates? Cos if it is, it is litterally 3/4 of a mile down the street from my house. When I saw that name I squeeked! You slay me Anyway, exceellent story movement this chapter. Can't wait to se how the poll turns out for the baby daddy!
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
I actually found Stonegate by google, so it could be. I read lots of reviews about the place and found jsut a ton of awesome photos of the place all set up. I was awed by it and figured it would work in a pinch! That is cool that it is close to you and it is the only place with that name in the greater chi-town area. So must be close to you!
I can not wait to see the poll results either!
Sending your teaser via the contact button again on your profile!
So glad you are still here reading and reviewing and PLEASE go check out the FUCKHOT one-shots for the dommella dungeon contest on FF. I wrote one I can not tell you what one I wrote but it is totally FUCKHOT! I promise!!!!!!
Kasi~
Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 28: Friday’s Festivities
Edward, Edward, Edward..... please let it be Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing and telling me who you choose!
I am sending your chapter 29 teaser to you via the contact me button on your profile!
Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 28: Friday’s Festivities
I cannot believe you left us hanging right there! Ok, yes I can :)
Very hot and wonderful!
Thank you
Author's Response:
Tamera~
I am really glad to see that you are liking this story so much! I really am enjoying writing it. I love me some B&E happy times and I never wrote a LEMON before startign to write this story, so hear someone call it HOT is so AWESOME to me! Thank you!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and the teaser has been sent to you via the contact button on your profile!
Kasi~
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 27: Appointments and Plans
dun dun dun!! Alec is one crazy fucker!!! I knew he would not be gone for long!!
Author's Response: Thank you reading and reviewing as always! I am greatful for your liking my story enough to follow it and continue to read it! I am sending you the chapter 28 teaser via the contact button on your profile. I sent it out now so check your spam. Thank you so much for reviewing they make me so happy! Kasi~
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 27: Appointments and Plans
great chapter - mad Alex drives me crazy!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing as always. I am really greatful when I get reviews from you and a couple of other authors whom I read to get compliments from someone like you who gets great reviews and has a really great story or two or more out there is to me a HUGE honor. I love all the reviews I get and they all make me happy, but there is a certain thrill about having someoen you think is wonderful tell you they like your stuff. So thank you for reviewing adn for takign the time to read my stuff. teaser is sent to you by the contact me button on your profile.
Thank you again!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 27: Appointments and Plans
OMG - I was just thinking and wondering if you were going to plan an escape for Alec.....ya know he has too :)
Thank you so much for the awesome update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing as always and the snippet from the next chapter I will send to you via the contact me button on your profile page.
Check your email! :)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 27: Appointments and Plans
Hi Doll! First off I want to thank you for trusting me enough to share your story, I am honored. It may seem strange but I do feel like there is a friendly connection between us, from our correspondence here, and as your friend I am so proud of you for facing such a painful situation and turning it into a positive. It's inspirational. Ok, I'll stop gushing now...
I have to tell you, the Alec POV came as a surprise. I was so wrapped up in fluffy vacation time that I forgot all about his crazy ass. Excellent twist! Things are gonna get messy.... Will it happen before or AT the wedding? I know, I have to wait and see.
Really great update TAT!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing as always!!!! I am sending you a PM with the teaser and some other info. I am so glad that you liekd the twister in there! It needed to happen.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 26: The Busy Pixie
Alice barely paused to take a breath there. It seems the best way to manage her is to give her a shitstorm of work and a tight schedule. I love that Em already moved in. So Emmett. Great update, lots of important story progression and just a little bit os anticipation for the grand announcement. Charlis is gonna freak.
I've been thinking about the paternity issue, even tho I am sure you know what you are gonna do. It seems to me that at the time Belll a was raped she was still covered by her scrip. Any antibiotics given at the hospital would not have negated the protection quickly enough for Alec's swimmers to get her egg, so the baby has to be Edward's. Am I right?
Author's Response:
She actually was abducted for more then 24 hours before he raped her so she actually missed 2 doses before the rape. I also have not fully decided who the father will be yet. I am really not sure what way I want that to go. Se parts of this story are based on what happened to me. Only the man who raped me I knew and he was not a stalker but my husband whom I filed for a divorce from because he sexually abuse my daughters. I also ended up pregnant from that rape, I have an almsot 13yr old from that. I met a man when I was 5 months pregnant with her (Even though I was not looking for a man!). I fell for him fast and hard, much like Bella and Edward. I married him and he was a great husband and a great man for about 11 years and then he got that middle aged itch and he is now living with a woman who was the brides helper at our wedding. Needless to say I am divorcing him now too. BUT he still to this day claims my daughter is his child to the point that he WILLING agreed in the divorce filings that he woudl pay child support for her and our 2 mutual children. He says she is his and there is no other parent for her but him and I. So I am undecided I have been thinking about it a lot and I am jsut not sure what way I will roll it yet. But then I did nto decide that Alec was the stalker until about 4 chapters before he was outted. I promise you this, whatever I do it will be doen in a good way, I am a HEA kinda girl.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 26: The Busy Pixie
Well Alice just plugged away at wedding plans didn't she? I hope that Bella doesn't feel bad about leaving them and moving in with Edward but they have the guys now.
Author's Response:
I think that things are more then fine. You will see a bit about that coming up. Gotta love the cannon couples. Seems everyone falls fast when they find their soul mate. I know the love side of this story has came together fast. I also belive that when you feel that connection with someone it is easy to leave doubt at the door.
Thank you for reading and reviewing
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 26: The Busy Pixie
Alice cracks me up! And you have nailed her personality perfectly. Thanks so much for the update and I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much what a great compliment! Thank you for reading and reviewing! It means a lot to me!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 25: Leaving Paradise
I just found this story and I LOVE it! I have sat here and read it from chapter 1 :)
Thanks so much for this fabulous story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! Spread the word I love, the story love! Thank you for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will post soon just waiting for it to come back from my pre-reader!
Kasi~
Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 25: Leaving Paradise
She took the whole not cashing the rent checks better than I thought that she would have. I am glad that she agreed to everything without much of a fight.
Author's Response:
I know I was going to make more of that then I did, but I wanted to touch base on it and not let it be a major freak out thing. They already have enough on their plate, you know? wait til they get into the wedding stuff.... :)
Mamma Cullen is involved! We all know how hard it is to hate Esme and tell her no! lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 28 Oct 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 25: Leaving Paradise
Hey Girl! Damn, I really hope this is not Alec's baby. This poor girl can't catch a break. And I love the threat to Alice and her protest about needing help and more time. She is good in a clutch, and frankly she will have a black card to work with and that will open every door she needs to pull it off. Plus, the real bonus is that there won't be a lot of time for dress shopping torture. Finally a silver lining...
Author's Response:
YAY!!! My Fangirl is back!!!! WOOOWHOOOO
Hey I have missed you, but I get the net break down thing, it does suck! I have to be honest and tell you that I have not yet truely decided if it is Edwards or Alecs baby yet. Yes..picking on Alice was fun and wait til next chapter or so for the downlow on the dress.
Married so fast~Can you believe it?? I can't and I wrote it! LOL
They are crazy in love and that is all that they need!
Mama Cullen is footing the bill for the nuptials! LOL ... wait til Bella finds out!
Glad your back!
Kasi~
Date: 28 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 25: Leaving Paradise
Please, please, please, let that be Edward's baby. That pathetic crackpot that kidnapped and raped Bella doesn't deserve to have his bloodline continued. After all the bad she has endured Bella deserves to have something really good happen for her. Finding out it is really Edwards baby would be a blessing she truly deserves.
Thank you for sharing this incredible story of yours and your time with us. It is greatly appreciated.
hugz
celtic
Author's Response:
Celtic~
This is one of the nicest reviews I have gotten in a long time...Thank you so much! I always thank people when I review for sharing their story because sometimes (much like mine) parts are true to the writers life. Therefore we are really sharing. I did not live through the extreem stalking, but I was raped by my ex husband after I filed for divorce and ended up pregnant. I have not decided one way or the other if this will be Edwards baby or Alec's, but I might leave it to a vote, but that will have to be soon...Because I am writing chapter 35 right now. Thank you so much for reading my story and for reviewing it too. Reviews make us Authors/ff writers all warm and fuzzy inside!
Kasi~
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 24: Emotional Vortex
great chap!!! I am thinking she is prego!! :) I am just hoping that it is not Alec's! that would be horrible!
Loved that Ben and Tia were from Cedar Rapids :) I am in Iowa City! Go Hawks!! :)
Author's Response:
Sarah~
I live in Independence, Ia. :)
GO HAWKS!
Yeah had to bring in a little close to home flare!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 24: Emotional Vortex
thank you so much - I loved this chapter - great lemon!! ;)
Author's Response:
ahhh, thanks coming from you that means a lot to me! Thanks for reading and reviewing.