[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
cool little take on nm thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really liked this since it was so much happier than what we read from Ms. Meyers!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
Boy, how much I hope he's right!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
I can understand Charlie's attitude, but he's hurting her "for her own good" just like Edward did!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
What did they expect? Charlie has hated his baby girl's despair at Edward and his family leaving her!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was a semi scary moment, when Tanya thought to get rid of her rival! Good thing Rosalir showed up when she did!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Who in the world has shown up here now? Just when they are ironing out their differences, I might add!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thank heavens, I think they are both on the same page now! If lip gloss was the worst thing his siblings put on him, he's lucky!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad the girls came and talked to Bella, but what is it that Emmett is about to do that's so stupid? Plus, why is Edward back?
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
If this doesn't convince her he's truthful, I don't know what will!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Even after Jasper told her about how much leaving her affected Edward, Bella still won't believe.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe Emmett tossing him around has knocked some sense into him!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Really can't blame the girl for feeling like that, but still, she might have listened for just a minute!
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice plan, Edward! I wonder where Alice sees this turning out well!
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, is he happy or angry ? More to the point, what's he going to do about it?
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
What are the odds that they all would end up at the same place by accident? Are you sure Alice didn't foresee this happeni9ng?
Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
LOVE IT~ Great plot. :DDDD
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am enjoying this story. I liked the girl talk. Rosalie. Who knew she could be caring? I also liked that Bella hit Edward when he kissed her. Her anger is appropriate. He needs to convince her of the truth first and not take things for granted.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm like that will last charlie? whatya gonna do, lock her in a tower.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, what you'd expect from a dad who lived through those horific months with his baby. Nice ending where Edward comes and wraps himself around her.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
Okay short, but it was good and now Charlie's back, you're teasing us and making us wait for the fireworks, evil I tell you, LOL.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Such a bold move for Edward...kidnapping!
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wonder why Alice did not see this coincidence coming....or did she?
Author's Response:
she's too depressed. Plus she's banned from seeing Bella so she wouldn't see her arrival. The only clue she gets is when she has a vision of Bella walking into the library.
thanks for your review!
much hugs
lizzie hopscotch
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story, it's really good.