Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 38
Loved this chapter update. I hope Edward has changed for good. But you never know if it was planned or not? I wonder if he will get out and go after Bella again? Or will he let her have a happy life with Matt.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 38
Nah, he wasn't sorry- he just knew he could plant that seed in her mind so he could try to get her when he gets out!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 38
I think he realized it. One question though,In an earlier chapters authors note you said you made Edward the bad guy so he would be the main story line with Bella, but most of this story has been about Bella and Matt and their relationship.
Hmmm
Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 38
I think Edward plead guilty and acted as if he were sorry because he thought that would be a way to get to Bella's sympathy which apparently worked and that he thought maybe Bella would come back to him to comfort him. Who knows, only you do.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 37
wow esme is an idiot
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 37
Hello! Its nice to have you back. Good story, thank you.
The trial: Hm. Major details would be fine, I guess. I love this story so I will read whaterever you come up with....
Date: 30 Jan 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 37
Love the chapter I am so likeing Bella and Matt as a couple, Matt is a good guy. I dont really need to read the whole trial just the details but your the writter Im sure it will be great with what ever you deside cant wait for next chapter
Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 37
My writing would not be nearly as good so I won't offer to write but I do work in the court system and I know the process inside and out. I am in court every week so if you have any questions feel free to ask.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 37
well i cant wait to see what happens at the trial! keep the updates comming
Date: 30 Jan 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 37
I missed your writing and am so glad that you are back. Sorry to see Edward get out of jail, and hopefully he will not try and skip out on bail (which I am suspecting he will do) especially if that turns out to be Jessica's bone. Hmmmm
Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 37
I watch Pretty Little Liars as well. I had the same idea at first that it wasn't going to be any good, but I'm hooked. I adore Aria and Ezra as well. As for Edward's trial, I think it would be a good input. I would llike to see how it goes and how he defends himself.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 37
I love their relationship, he is a great guy! Can't wait to see what happens with Edward!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
Huummm... I don't know whether to be suspicious of logan or whether it was all just coincidence. As for the trial, I personally would like to hear about it as I am sure Edward won't be quiet when it comes down to dishing out punishment - but then we would only see that side if you decide to have bella at the actual trial.
I know I've said it before but an Esme or Edward point of view as an out take would be AMAZING!!! Pretty pretty please! :)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, that was amazing! I am so happy Edward stood up for her :)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, that was amazing :) I found one tiny mistake that I think you need to correct. "There was an adult bar and a kitty bar that served cokes and waters in martini glasses." Should be "There was an adult bar and a kiddy bar..."
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, that was amazing :) I cannot wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that was incredible! Poor Bella, but Edward is right, at least the Cullen's got a hold of her instead of some creep.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was amazing :) Poor Bella though, dealing with Phil and Renee. So, let me make sure I got this right, Bella is 14 and Edward is 16?
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
yes!!!!!!!loved it...post soon please
Date: 26 Dec 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 36
Yay! It"s about time! I hope you had a merry christmas.
Date: 25 Dec 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 36
i thought this was gonna be a bella and edward story. i guess not.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 36
Thanks for the update and a Merry Christmas to you, too!
Still love the story but I miss the dark side. Are you going to post something from the trial?
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 36
lol those animals are so cute and funny!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 36
love is in the air! lol this chapter was great we really got to see them kiss for thr forst time and matt just seems like a big ole sweet heart. byw i have a kitten that is the same way like murphy. he attacks me any chance he gets. never my husband!!
Date: 22 Dec 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 36
Love the chapter
Date: 22 Dec 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 36
awww they finally kissed. silly cayt
Date: 22 Dec 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 36
FINALLY!!! I love the way Bella and Mat are together. Murphy sounds just like the kitten we just rescued. Merry Christmas to you also even though I would love to see another update.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 36
Yay they kissed!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 36
Fabulous!
BTW, your 300th review!!!!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 35
Ha okay so totally cool that you named the cat Murphy. That was so fun to read even more so because of your choice.
Anyway my dog is named lucky. And when we picked him out we (four kids) were lucky to get a dog and now-a-days he's lucky to be alive because mom can't stand him, she loves him, but she can't stand him. He whines a lot.
Anyway great chapter. Keep it up. Completely in love with Matt right now.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
I'm glad she's getting some other help. Seems Carmen will be a great service and get her thinking healthy again.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 35
awwwwweeeeee I had a kitty named Pill so named cause at 2 days old she crawled across the room and decided since she was the runt she was going to fail to thrive. So I took her home and force fed her kitten formula until she decided that taco bell rocked and proceeded to attack me Murphy style. She also was a funky cat picture a dark brown and black short hair calico head stuck on a grey and cream tabby's body and that's Pill.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 35
Though I am NOT a cat fan I do have a similar story. I was house sitting for my grandparents alone in their house. I was only 19 at the time. It was a stormy night and I was already trying to not be creeped out all alone in the big house. I got up in the middle of the night for something I can't remember. I walked through the living room with the lights still off when something jumped out from underneath some furniture and grabbed my feet. I screamed bloody murder and ran back to my bed. As I looked at the door I saw the smug look on the face of my grandmothers then cat. A mean thing called AC (short for attack cat) Maybe that is why I never really warmed up to cats. LOL
Love the story. It does feel a little slow right now but I know that is to be expected in every story. I actually do like the fact that I cant predict what is gonna happen next. (like I usually can) It makes it a much more interesting read. TTFN - Merry Christmas - Happy Chanukah -- Happy Holidays --- and have fun celebrating how every you do!!!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
im glad that shes finally getting some help! keep the chapters comming
Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
I'm glad that Bella is finally seeing a counselor. She needs this.
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 35
Love the kitten!
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter. Thanks for updating so soon.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 35
sweet filler chapter. Glad she is going to talk to someone.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter. I can't believe Carlisle is finally dead. Good ridance. Now if only Bella and Matt will get together that would be a great holiday gift. Can't wait for more.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
I like that matt and bella are getting closer...post again soon please
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter. glad to see you posting again. Hmmm Carlisle got off too easy if you ask me
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 34
Nice chapter. Missed you and your updates. So thank you !
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 34
Craziness about Carlisle. Wonderful chapter!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
so glad Carlisle is dead. great chap
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 34
Carlisle better stay dead mister!!
Also your kitten should be named Murphy or George.
Good Chapter, great story, keep it up.
Maybe it's just me but i always thought of Matt as being a big guy. A little smaller than Emmett but that body type. Anyway...
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it!! I can't wait for the next update, like seriously :)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 33
Something is just not siting right with me....I mean edward researching stockholm syndrom and BDSM.. Attacking Bella. Now what Matt is doing would so NOT happen. He keeps saying he doesn't want to pressure or push her but that seems to be exactly what he is doing and Nicks coments.. Those just are not the type of actions one would expect esp with a victim like Bella. Kinda makes me wonder if matt is really a good guy????
Date: 27 Nov 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
I don't know if I'm right or not, I'll have to go back and look, but I thought she already turned 18?? I could be wrong.
Even though I am an Edward fan, of course not this Edward, but I ilke Matt. So I'm looking forward to their relationship going forward. i didn't really want her and Michael to hit it off. Don't know why. Of course, I'm still trying to get past my love for Edward in this story, hoping he has some redemptiona nd they end up together in the end.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wonderful chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
Curious to see how this marriage facade will work!
Date: 26 Nov 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 33
that was so great - I love them can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh, dear. So they share the same bed....and practice. Hope the little bubble they are in right now will last for a while, because it´s nice for them to have a break.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 32
We´ll practice...don´t worry. LOL. That new identity thing is soo convenient......for both of them. Guess you found the sunny side from the situation they are in.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
he is just too cute.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 33
I sound like a broken record, but I really like Matt with Bella and only hope that Edward stays far away. Happy Thanksgiving.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
"But…I don't mind being touched," I told him. "I mean, no one's ever really…held me before. Not to make me feel better, I mean."
I'd really like to see a lot of this. Bella learning casual, affectionate touch.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 32
I am glad that they had to change their identities. It was getting a little awkward when Bella was jealous during that rafting trip. Oh I hope Bella winds up with Matt. I really like him. I guess that means that he had to quit his rafting job.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 32
well at least they are not brother and sister anymore! keep the chatpers comming
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love it, can't wait for things to progress.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
aww he is really sweet to her
Date: 25 Nov 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh it was awesome! You always leave me wanting more! I can't wait. Happy Turkey Day!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 32
I love it....post again soon
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
Good chapter. Still thinking about Edward and the trial. Bella never really said anything. she could make things up just to harm Edward. That would never work for a German court. Sorry..... I know it is "Just" a story. I still think, Edward - with his lawyers will be the lucky one..... unless they find some more witnesses or DNA.......
Love your story anyways - so please update.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 31
Darn she just can't catch a break! So many questions, like who told them where Bella was, a mole in the police? Are Renee and Phil even alive or did the Cullen's do something to them? What happened to Jessica? How do they have control of her money when it was in a trust? Can't wait for an update!!
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
I caught this by chance looking for another story and I must say this is really good. I read this a bulk of the time while i feed my daughter! LOL!! Edward is an sadistic asshole! I wonder what he must be thinking while he is in jail? but i didn't want to just keep reading and not comment on it! Keep it going hun!
Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 31
Just when you have us thinking that everything would be cut and dry you throw this chapter on us. Wow. I have no idea what you are going to do now. I want her happily ever after with Matt. Oh well. Guess that is a long time coming. After this story you just want to hate anyone having a lot of money.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 31
I am curious if it was the Cullens or someone on their payroll who went after them!
Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
A review for the holidays. enjoying the tale. Was wondering when Bella would tell a about being sold. Some questions does Carlile have her inheritance
Where are the other cullens surely they all know what is going on and all are not part of the conspiracy
Have a great holiday
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
Nice chapter! A bit confusing though.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow exciting chapter. Wonder if Henson is involved somehow or if they've just been trailing him
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow...its a good thing shes a swimmer...im hoping somehow ford made it. Post again soon
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 31
well i just hope she makes it out of this !! keep the chapters comming
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
good story. I like the twists and turns of the plot.
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 30
No evidence of DNA from Jessica Stanley. Well....Edward is not guilty unless proven otherwise.... I don´t know about your American system, but in Germany he would probably not even go to jail for what he did to Bella. She hat plenty of opportunity to run and inform the police but she didn´t. They would let him out on probation.
I bet the Cullens will show up with the best lawyers they can get.....So I will wait and learn about your American system.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
well it could be a whole new start for her if she gets it all out ! cant wait till the next chatper
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 30
Way to go Bella, this is the right thing to do. I still like Matt with Bella.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
hmmm so the hair's arent jessicas. interesting.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 29
I began reading this story thinking that Edward was really saving Bella but I don't like Darkward at all... but I LOVE this story!!!!! I shouldn't at all but its sooooooooo good!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Nov 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. Glad bella is having a little fun
Date: 18 Nov 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm such a dork...I just realized that I read LOTA on fan fic and totally loved it. Loving this one too. Hard to picture Edward remaining such a nut and that he had no redeeming qualities. At least he changed in LOTA. I am curious where this one will end up. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Date: 18 Nov 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
Definitely different. I like it that your characters are very unpredictable.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
The thing is PsychWard is convinced that since Daddy C bought and paid for B, he owns her. Funny that they haven't even contacted her parents. Of course they could have given up all rights to her. I think E set the whole thing up from the very start. P didn't have plans to sell her till E wanted her.
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. Curious if Matt has feelings for her!
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 29
Nice chapter. Is she calling Michael or is she able to see him? Do we get some information about the Cullens?? What they are up to? Please...
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
well its abou ttime they found some evidence from edward! keep the chapters comming
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think Matt and Bella make a great couple (I like him better than Mike). Hmmm, that means that Bella may have to testify if Edward goes on trial for murder, but I didn't think they ever found her body.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Holy hell. I don't care about payments, too many people know about this for it to just be hidden now.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Holy hell. He is sooooo fucked up.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
I just don't see how themstaying so close to people that have known them for so long is going to be safe for her. For them to all of a sudden have a sister? That's going to throw some flags up and Edward ro Carlisle will find her.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think E is going to shove her off the cliff. He's so strange.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Me thinks he doth protest too much. It was totally Edward. Creep.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
He's so bipolar. I'm sacred to see what he's hiding.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmm. I was thinking maybe E's parents didn't know what he did w B, but clearly C is in on the lie.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
yeah she is free for the time being. I really hope she is free for good but worried that Carlisle will hire a private investigator to look for her. Which brings me to Carlisle and Esme (especially her). I honestly have always worried what is really their deal and their true thoughts on everything. I know Carlisle gave Bella a worried look before they went on their supposed week long trip but was it out of concern for her or just concern that Edward was going to get into trouble. Have they just been living in denial at what their son was doing and didn't want to face up to it or just can't believe their son would do such a thing? Or did they really know what was going on and could care less? Why are they so intent on cleaning up Edward's messes if they have acted like they never cared about him in the first place. Also now that Matt is in the picture is he going to be just the big brother to her or are they going to fall in love. If they fall in love what about Michael. Will she ever get to talk to or see him again. Just some questions I got going on in my head. Plus really interested in finding out what really happened to Jessica. There has to be some kind of evidence or is it just going to be an unsolved murder because of the lack of evidence. Sorry for my rambling just typing my thoughts.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Nice - but I think we deserve some Carlisle/Esme/Edward time!
Has he spoken to the President of the United States yet? Or Aro? All you need is a goog tracker.... Or someone else who will be able to find Bella. We need more action. I can´´t sleep at night. You are driving me nuts.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 28
awww she gets a dog
Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 28
I really like matt..........post soon
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 28
im glad shes finally getting some rest from edward but i know its not the end of him