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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:00 PM Title: Sharp

I have this feeling that Bella is gonna get hurt again.  She really needs to be not so focused on one man.  Especially this man, who has many women running after him and he has the misfortune of being hurt (like what happens to us all).

 

Write Bella focus on your craft then have drinks and have fun. Just don't focus on this one man or that other one from. 3 years ago. Really.

 

 

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 4:41 PM Title: Asterisk

That made me hate Rosalie!

Oh no, I hope Bella will believe Edward...

Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter (don't make us wait so long xD)

xLiss

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 2:52 AM Title: Asterisk

ok, so any sympathy i had for Rose just flew out the freakin window!  I just wanna slap her.  ugh, just, so mad.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:03 AM Title: Asterisk

OMG!!! I don't know if I can stand it!!

Reviewer: chelleb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 12:41 AM Title: Asterisk

Love this story - please update quickly!

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:28 PM Title: Asterisk

I hope she gets stuck only doing porn jobs. Cause that's all I see her as. A talentless whore. Good job in the future sweetheart, because no one is going to take a whore like her seriously.

While Edward is going to be moving up in his career she is going to be sucking old dick to gain a little money. That's all she has been doing, right? Instead of actually doing her job and becoming a respectable actor.

She''d rather suck face and be an obediant little slut. That'll get her far *sarcasm*. Just look at Paris Hilton. She gets so many job for the way she acts, right? Or Britney Spears? ..Yeah

..what an idoit!

What's the point of getting famous if you aren't going to do anything worth a damn? You really think your parents are going to be proud foy you to be pratically fucking your way up and exploiting your body? Instead of..I don't know, your talent?

Geez, she's an idoit. I have no pity for spineless whores. The fact that she craves fame that badly is just pathetic and no one is going to take an attention whore seriously in that career.

And when word gets out what she had just done to get herself reconized. No one is going to want to work with her. Espeacily,anyone big.

She just sicked the paps on Edward to get pics of her  with him. Any actor who has been in the business for atleast a year. Wouldn't touch her with a ten foot pool. No way would anyone want to work with someone who could not only compromise there relationship(family or girlfriend) but there personal life in genral.

Say hello to porn sweetheart, because not only would no one want to work with her but no company like Universal,Disney and the likes, would want someone like that representing any of there movies.

Hope it was worth it.

Anyway, I hope Bela gets her head out of her ass soon. I mean seriously? She won't even let Edward talk to her? Even she, herself had stated she is totally fine with him and Rose. Then act like it. Don't go crying over spilt milk.

Man. at this point I think Edward deserves better then any of these chicks. He had a hard reltionship with Tanya. Yet, he still stuck himself out there to be hurt again. To be with Bella. He has been attentive to her from the get go. Makeing sure she knows everything. One mistake(which isn't even a mistake she just walked in and made assumptions. I wonder how she'd like it if Edward had done what she is doing to him, to her?) And she runs away and cuts all ties with him.

He even goes out of his way to give Rose advice again and again. All she does is act like the classic whore Royce paints her out to be.

Tanya is trying to use him for his fame again.

Yea, Edward doesn't deserves what has been thrown at him. He should totally be with someone else. Anyone besides these assholes who only think about themselves. He needs someone who would look out for him and doesn't have any more bagage then himself. Someone who is just as confident as he is. Who isn't always going to be questioning his motives and running away when it gets hard. Espeacily, not before hearing him out.

Bella, Tanya and Rose all deserve eachother. They all put themselves in the positions tey are in. If they are sad or frustrated about it. Then they should do something about it themselves. Running away, whoring youdelf out. None of that is what Edward forced them or told them to do. So, neither of them should be sad or angry at anyone besides themselves.

 

I know, they all should get together and  talk about how screwd up eachothers lives are and how they all hurt Edward in someway or another. Cuz' it sure feels like they are all in on it together anyway....>_>

Reviewer: themrsmittens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:19 AM Title: Apostrophe

Ok can they please get together already? I am going nuts!  Great story BTW!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:03 AM Title: Apostrophe

I feel like these two are just swimming circles around each other! I cannot wait to see if Edward does actually get the number and calls. I just hope he'll be able to talk to Bella. Another good one, keep it up! ;)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:58 PM Title: Tilde

Wow i totally love this story you almost had me crying when Bella walked out on Edward but i get the feeling your a HEA kind of girl so i know something good is coming.

It is excellent by the way to see another aussie in the fanfic universe.

Keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 11:26 AM Title: Tilde

Soooo glad you're back!! Can't stand leaving these two in limbo for so long!! Of course I'm looking forward to the time the special 'teaser' I got for identifying Say Anything makes me salivate for what's to come!!!

Reviewer: edwardsisobel Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:41 PM Title: Tilde

Arrgh...poor Edward, dragged all over town with no time to himself and Bella beleiving everything she sees on the net.....hmmm silly girl...but understandable when your rival just might be Rosalie Hale, movie star.  Hope Edward gets to tak to Bella soon but I wonder if she will think that he is hiding his feelings for Rosalie instead of professing his feelings for her...can't wait to find out.

 

Suzanne

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 1:48 AM Title: Tilde

Another good one. I just hope that they won't keep on missing each other, but it seems like that's going to be the case. I also think this new movie and the shooting location will become important later on! ;)



Author's Response:

mmm, I won't tell you, you'll just have to keep reading lol!! Thank you, Luv BBxx

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 12:46 AM Title: Tilde

I feel like their separation has been dragged out long enough... I think after these few chapters, the set up for a reunion has already been done. I mean, how many more chapters will we have to go through till their reunion? Love the story and am always happen when I see an update. Look forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Poor Bella's self-esteem has been shot to pieces (thanks very much Riley Biers!) I think they both have to deal with some issues before they can be together... They will work it out, I promise! I always warned this would be a slow burn, but it will be worth it...you are not alone, so many people are rather vocal in their frustration at how the miscommunication is playing out. Thank you for reviewing, and I hope you stick with it? Luv BBxx

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:33 PM Title: Hyphen

AAAGH! They just keep missing each other! What strange dreams Bella had. The Cullens are dying for this whole misunderstanding to be cleared up and Bella's absolutely clueless. Poor Edward. What a mess!

Reviewer: Ssinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 2:08 PM Title: Hyphen

The quote is from the movie Say Anything (1989).

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: Hyphen

Excellent job, the conflict and misunderstanding is delightfully frustrating. Can't wait to see how Bella acts when she comes face to face with Edward. ;)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:51 AM Title: Hyphen

Say Anything!!!  Edward needs to drag his happy ass to Forks now!!!!



Author's Response:

Yay, say anything... I'll PM you with a teaser snippet...

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:17 AM Title: Hyphen

poor bella

Reviewer: Edward5953 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:14 AM Title: Hyphen

when are these two going to get together and talk and edward can tell bella the truth about rosalie...ughhhh please update soon and hopefully they will talk soon....

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:18 AM Title: Rest

I'm definitely ready for some action. Poor Bella doesn't even know how Edward feels about her, and Edward will go nuts if he doesn't get to tell Bella about his feelings. But for now, he has to suffer through dinner with the family while trying to put off questions about him and Bella, since there's no relationship to discuss. Poor boy...And poor me until the next chapter comes out.

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:01 AM Title: Hemidemisemiquaver

Killing me softly...All the mixed messages are driving me crazy, but I'm sure this will be great whenever things get straightened out. In the meantime, I'll be happy with this frustration. I like angst anyway.

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:42 PM Title: Rest

You are a tease!!!  Please let Bella receive the call from Edward already...they are suffering enough apart. 

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:00 AM Title: Rest

loving story :) Hope she and edward sort it out and get together soon :D

 

Update soon please!

 

Ta!

 

xx

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:29 AM Title: Brevis

Im really enjoying this story, However I would like to correct something...

 

Pavlova was invented by a Kiwi, though you do eat it in Aus :)...thats all :P

cheers!

:D

 

 

Reviewer: mflow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 11:50 AM Title: Rest

Ugh! Get together already! Lol, good story so far, I love it!!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:42 AM Title: Rest

Excellent job, like I said before, I love the slow burn. Nothing is better than delayed gratification. Keep up the good work. ;)

Reviewer: macca_99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:12 AM Title: Rest

let's be honest I am devastated you haven't fixed this yet and you really need to make them a happy family again by the next chapter or else I may cry :(

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:01 AM Title: Rest

i like the slow burn but at the same time i just want to yell get on with it already lol no i like this path it's good it just makes the getting back together all the hotter and better

Reviewer: xtothey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:15 PM Title: Hemidemisemiquaver

Aww poor Bella. I really feel for her. She really misread that situation and is trying to be so adult about it even though her heart is broken. Is Edward going to go to Forks?

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:00 PM Title: Hemidemisemiquaver

Poor Edward...the boy really needs to get to the point the next time he's in Bella's presence.

Reviewer: macca_99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:40 AM Title: Hemidemisemiquaver

I just wanted you to know that reading the contents of Bella's travel pack i became extremely hungry and now i have an intense craving for tim tams lol xx

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:48 AM Title: Hemidemisemiquaver

Of course this "slow burn" is frustrating, but that's what makes it sooo worth the end results. I love this story and what you're doing with it. Excellent job, keep it up. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you, for continuing to read and review. It makes me smile.... Oh yes, the end results will be so much sweeter (after the angst)! Kisses from Sydney!

 

BBxx

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:06 AM Title: Demisemiquaver

Poor Bella...Rose always has to be the Bitch we all know and love.  I hope that Bella doesn't take to long to go back to the hotel and face Edward.

Reviewer: Edward5953 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:49 AM Title: Demisemiquaver

bella needs to talk to edward. she has everything all wrong. mike should tell edward whats going on...

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 6:35 PM Title: Demisemiquaver

Oh for the love of all that is holy... this shit needs to stop... please can something happen soon.

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:49 AM Title: Demisemiquaver

Oh, you chore!! I can't believe you stopped there. I know good things are coming, but the wait is killing me. You're a great writer.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! The next Chapter is almost ready. I promise not to make you wait too long! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:30 AM Title: Brevis

I've never actually wanted to physically hurt Rosalie before. She has the worst timing!! Edward's gonna have a cow if he doesn't get to share about his feelings soon. And poor Bella won't understand what's going on because by the time he does share, she won't be able to believe him. Ughhh!

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 6:30 AM Title: Quaver

Edward drunk is just a bit too tempting. Bella's a good girl for helping him get to his room and into bed. I think I would have been tempted to take advantage of him. And I love that you used the word "dastardly".

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:41 AM Title: Demisemiquaver

I just knew Bella would react like that but hey, these two are famous for their misunderstandings. I wouldn't have it any other way. Excellent job, I hope you're not to hard on Edward, try not to make him sweat too much! ;)



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks for your review....it's taken me ages to actually update on this site, every time I tired it was offline? Oh well. I promise that Edward will do his damndest to make Bella listen...there will be a little angst, but I need to get them together, it's driving ME insane!! lol 

 

Thanks for always reviewing...

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:21 AM Title: Brevis

I'm so sorry that I'm behind in my reviewing but this site is failing on giving me my alerts that my favs have been updated. Anyways, it figures that something would interfere with them again. I can only imagine that Bella will assume that Edward only wants to be friends and distance herself from him. Can't wait to find out. Another good one. ;)

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 10:59 PM Title: Bracket

Seriously something needs to happen soon... I'm going insane here. LOL

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:17 AM Title: Bracket

I hope his plan works out this time

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:56 AM Title: Bracket

Phew!! I thought she was gonna get totally pissed about the whole 'interview' thing and pull a disappearing act!! Now he just needs to call her tomorrow and set it all up-- it sure wouldn't hurt if there were some mis-hap on the set and he got to come back to the hotel in the early afternoon!! All he's planning won't actually get to happen if he doesn't get back to the hotel till 10!!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:05 AM Title: Bracket

Sounds like little "Eddie" wants to come out and play.  Can't wait to see how everything unfolds in his room tomorrow night.  Damn Cougars!!!

Reviewer: edwardsisobel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 12:44 AM Title: Bracket

Oh poor Edward, thwarted at every turn to declare himself. Really enjoyed the chapter but can't wait for the next one in his room...alone with Bella!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:08 PM Title: Bracket

Wow, he's not wasting any time at all! Good, cause he needs to tell her. I'm so scared that something will come up and disrupt them, of course that will only make it better in the end. Excellent job, can't wait till the next update. ;)

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:08 AM Title: Semibreve

What a fantastic story, I couldn't stop reading it.  I hope these two come clean with each other and finally make the connection.  I can't wait for your next posting.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I love writing it! I hopefully won't keep you waiting for the next Chapter! Luv BBxx

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:50 PM Title: Semibreve

This story is probably my favorite of all the stories I'm keeping up with! (And there are many.) I hope he ends up at the cabin with her!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm having a blast writing it! mmm, the Cabin, you'll just have to wait and see...

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: edwardsisobel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 4:43 AM Title: Quaver

Sigh.  Damn Edwards rule.  I can see Bella distancing herself now she realises that she loves him and he will think she's rejecting him....love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 1:49 AM Title: Quaver

Ahhh, this has been one of my favorite chapters. I just loved Drunkward! The epithany that Bella had was so...Bella. Of course she automatically thinks he would never want her the way she wants him. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job. ;)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 11:55 PM Title: Quaver

I hope nobody saw them.  That would defeat the whole purpose of Bella's day out.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Quaver

Drunk Edward was adorable- just wish he'd been a bit more talkative!! He needed to tell her he was falling for her!!

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 5:44 AM Title: Barline

Ah, Bella's epiphany. I'm so glad this little outing went well. They so needed to get out of the purple bar without running into the paps. I wish everything could happen just a leeeetle bit faster...I'm dying to know what the deal is with Alice.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:37 PM Title: Barline

Oh Bella, Bella, Bella- silly girl!! You don't run away when the man you love kisses you!! lol

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 4:14 PM Title: Barline

He's gonna freak when she's not there when he comes back. 

Reviewer: Edward5953 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 12:38 PM Title: Octave Clef

why cant they be honest with each other and wanting a relationship.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 1:08 AM Title: Sharp

Aww, I wish the two of them would stop thinking so much about how much time they'd like to spend with the other, and start saying it out loud!! Can't wait for her to take him to Laurent's!!!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 3:45 PM Title: Sharp

I just loved this chapter! It was light hearted and fun. Great job, keep up the good work! ;)

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2010 5:29 AM Title: Stave

Hi.

I just wanted to take time to tell you that I'm really enjoying your story. I have a feeling it's going to be a long one, so I'm hoping you'll stick with it until it's finished.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Indeed I will, I need to get this story out, it's ben on my mind forever! BBx

Reviewer: Ellie-BR Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:33 AM Title: Breve

I love this awkwardness between them :)

Chapter 3 and I'm loving it even more ;)

Reviewer: Ellie-BR Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:29 PM Title: Treble-clef

Awww...Chapter 1 and I love this fic already :)

Anxious to read chapter 2 to see Edward's reaction :D

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:51 AM Title: Octave Clef

Another great one. I could feel the anxiety coming off of both of them. Can't wait for them to get the ball rolling and maybe a little Cullen family action. Again, great job. ;)

Reviewer: Edward5953 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:50 PM Title: Alla Breve

why cant these two just tell each other how they feel. edward needs to forget about his rule. this will be different. as edward says:" its very frustrating!!" lol!!!! cant wait for next chapter. how often do u update??

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 5:02 AM Title: Alla Breve

Well, I made it. *Sigh* I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work girlie!



Author's Response:

Thank you for following the story. Just posted Chapter 9. I hope you enjoy *evil grin*. Luv BB.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:57 AM Title: Stave

Hmm, more and more is given yet at the same time there is still so much left unsaid. One more chapter to go. I'm dreading it because then I'll have to wait to get the update. But this story is worth it!



Author's Response:

I hope you stick with it, I promise the next few updates will come quickly!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:34 AM Title: Brace

Riley's a douche. And Edward's in denial. Can't wait till Alice comes into the picture!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Crotchet

Have I told you how much I like this story? lol Seriously this is a story line that has been done before, but not with the detail and strength that yours carries. Edward the actor who wants more than anything to be with the girl of his dreams, but can't. Almost caught up. Again, love it!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:44 AM Title: Minim

This just keeps getting better. Thanks for giving a little info into Bella's past. I think I know what Alice's dream was about and the tidbit of the 'Aussie'. Can't wait to see if it's true. ;)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Breve

Okay, I'm really loving this story. I'm dying to find out what is going on with Alice and what happened between Bella and Riley. I  still have a few more chapters to go, hopefully I'll get some answers. Again great job!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:54 AM Title: Semiquaver

Perfect. I can't understand why this story hasn't gotten any more reviews. I plan on catching up with your chapters tonight. ;)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:28 AM Title: Treble-clef

Interesting, I can't wait to see where this goes. ;)

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 12:38 PM Title: Alla Breve

Enjoying the story, Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 10:45 AM Title: Alla Breve

lol so he's trying to speed things up so they can be more than friends, and she's gonna drag her feet so they can still be friends-- sounds like lots of frustration in the future!!

Reviewer: edwardsisobel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 7:14 AM Title: Alla Breve

Just found your story and enjoying it very much.  It was in the favourites of a reviewer of one of my stories and I was intrigued.  Very cool to see familiar Aussie names and places in a twilight story for the first time, for me anyway.   I write fic as well and my betas (one from US and one from Canada) are always picking me up on my slang - I like to say bloody hell, bloody fantastic etc etc and they keep taking it out as something American's don't say much and I keep forgetting to take the u's out...

Slow burn is good.  Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Suzanne

Reviewer: LadyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:01 PM Title: Minim

BoydBlog, you've thusfar masterfully written a great work of fanfic, and I look forward to following "Episode" to it's completion! Kudos to you, m'dear!

If I may insert a small critique, I know that you're Australian, and I enjoy the twist in making your Bella an Aussie as well. However, since your Edward is American, you should try to keep his speech patterns American as well. We say 'vacation' instead of 'holiday', our mothers are 'mom' instead of 'mum', and our 'mates' are 'friends' (A mate in American lingo is considered to be something more of a sex act between animals, or the tight bond of love between two people, as represented in the Twilight saga, not merely friends.). It's also rare to hear an American complete a statement with 'yeah?'; more often you'll hear 'okay?' when seeking an agreement. So far these are the only distinguishable euphamisms I've come across in your story, and I encourage you to continue crafting this excellent work. Just keep in mind that to create a believable character, you may need to work a bit outside your element.

Cheers! ;-)

 

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:28 PM Title: Stave

Uh oh, Jess and Riley???

Reviewer: Sandrai86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:51 PM Title: Stave

uh oh.. i think our dear Jess is dating Riley... i hope Bella doesnt get to sad, she has Edward and a chance handed to her where she can show how strong she has become.. =) great story!!

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:31 PM Title: Stave

I loved it! :D:D

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 10:48 AM Title: Stave

Enjoying the story. Who wrote the letters? Riley, Edward? Cant wait to find out

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:29 PM Title: Semiquaver

I love it I can feel the music keep the story going.

Meg

Author's Response:

Thanks Meg, I hope you kept reading. Would love your feedback after each chapter...luv BBxx

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:29 PM Title: Brace

Oh I love this!! :D



Author's Response:

I'm so glad!!! I hope you keep reading! Luv BBxx

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:21 PM Title: Brace

Great story, cant wait for more



Author's Response:

I'll try to update soon, luv BBxx

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:20 PM Title: Minim

Really enjoyiing the story so far



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you continued on from Chapter 4? Lub BBxx

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