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Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:48 AM Title: Time Warps & Slow Motion

I hate cliffys, but at the same time it is such sweet torture.  I am SOOOO happy that there will be a sequel.  I like PS so far, but I LOVE me my V & V.  I am looking forward to the Chris and Ethan hook up.  Chris is my fav and he deserves to be happy.  But then again, so does Shane! 



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:21 AM Title: Time Warps & Slow Motion

I was like YAY 2 chapters!!! Then got smacked in the face with a doozie of a cliffie!

 

Careful of the cliffies, the dark side is a cold one...

 

*snickers*



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Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 10:05 PM Title: Time Warps & Slow Motion

Great chapter.

Please don't leave us with this cliffie for too long



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Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 5:38 AM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

I loved it!!  They are so sweet. I don't think their honeymoon will ever end!



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Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 12:41 AM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

Fantastic chapter! Uh oh.. i think Shane might have a little crush on our bella!! lol cant wait till next chapter... =0)

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 9:01 PM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

I think Bella is getting lonely staying at home. Everyone is busy at work. It will get better once they get in the house and are closer to Rose and Emmett. Once the baby gets her Rose will be off work for awhile. Bella will hopefully meet some nice neighbors. Bella is used to having school work to keep her busy as well as her writing. Now she only has her writing. She is more outgoing and no one to share it with when Edward is working. Maybe Bella can bring her laptop to the set and write in his trailer. She will be there for his breaks and still working on her book. She can see Shane, but not all her time on the set is with him.



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Reviewer: tiina Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 8:40 PM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

Lovely chapter. I'm so in love with Emmett's humor, I wish he were real and my friend.

I guess Shane is gay? It would be nice, so he could be the one for Chris.

Lol - Tiina



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Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:41 AM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

Either Shane really wants a real relationship with Bella, or he is gay?  Since you are saying that there will be drama in the next chapter, I believe that my assumption of Shane liking Bella too much is correct.  I am sure that tablods will make the situation esculate.  

Thank you for the update.  I was really worried that Edward was not working late and was just avoiding Bella because he was jealous of Shane.  Maybe he was ignoring her or maybe he was working as he said.  I guess we will never know.



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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:44 PM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

I WAS HOPING SHANE WAS GAY TO FIX UP WITH CHRIS



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Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:23 AM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

A nice chapter.  I love how they trust each other. 



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Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:21 PM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

First off, the 'biggest dick in the ward'was the funniest yet, I'm stil giggling. Secondly...hahaha...Bella slipping and telling Rose about the sex on the honeymoon, truly priceless. Great chapter and oh I'm looking forward to the drama in the next one.



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Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:56 PM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

I just love this story and how you developed the characters!!



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Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 7:56 PM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

I love this ff!!<3 Please hurry with the next chapter! <3 



Author's Response: Thanks! I finally was able to fix the settings so my author's responses will show!! Glad you liked the chapter. Obviously the story is now complete...and the future take has been posted. As soon as I finish LRM...I'll start the sequel.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:53 PM Title: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

Back to reality for E & B.  Is Shane developing a crush on Bella?  I think Edward might have cause for concern there.

Love your story  :)



Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. more to come soon....future take is posted!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 7:56 AM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

To bad they have to go back to realily.  I love a man that can be a brave and face the red tide lol.



Author's Response: Edward is the perfect man...well he's like Mary Poppins...'practically perfect in every way' lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 12:02 AM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

Kayso- you said this was a "fluffy" chapter, but I thought it to be so much more than just fluff.  I found myself feeling every emotion with Bella- tears and all- and when Edward handed her the envelope for the Renee Swan Foundation...... so endearing!  Of course not all of the chapter was "happy tears", I did laugh out loud when Bella informed everyone at the restaurant about her "not pregnant" status...Ü



Author's Response: Bella is quite a blurter. That will never change. Thanks very much! glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:13 PM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

Fantastic!
I love how Bella is becoming more self confident with herself and Edward. It's a beautiful thing to witness.
Edward is amazingly thoughtful, protective and loving. It's as if he's almost afraid she's been a dream.
I can see the end on the horizon but I'm loving the journey and cannot wait to read more and hopefully, the sequel.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm working on the first chapter of the sequel at the moment, so you should't have to wait too much longer for it. So glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:51 AM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

great chapter.



Author's Response: thanks very much, glad you liked it. The sequel will begin shortly.

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:42 AM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

please update sooon Im suffering from withdrawals



Author's Response: lol thanks so much! the sequel should begin very soon...if not today.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:41 PM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

i dont hav facebook but would love to view the pics! yayay!!! a sequel!



Author's Response: if you go to the Virgins& Villains blog, there is a link to the V&V photo blog....I've posted a bazillion photos on there, listed by chapter. Thanks very much! sequel should start posting this week!

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:57 PM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

Great chapter!  They are so sweet together, are we going to hear a baby announcement from the happy couple in this story?  So sweet that Emmett and Rose are naming the baby after Charlie, since this chapter ending on such a serious and heartfelt note I am fully expecting Emmett to break that up during dinner by doing something completely retarded and hilarious as always.  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thanks very much for reading and reviewing! The sequel should begin posting this week.

Reviewer: Fluent in Sarcasm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:23 PM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

oh my word... lovely chapter and very thoughtful honeymoon. Very strange reading about Barmouth, I have been going on holiday there ALL my life so... yeah strange lol

FinS x



Author's Response: Wales is absolutely beautiful...one of my favorite places even if the first time I was there is was February and I just about froze. I came away with a newfound respect for those ancestors who weathered out those harsh winters on the coast. lol. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: vickisan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:28 PM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

Just wonderful!  LOVED your chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks very much! I appreciate that

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 12:40 PM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

This ff is amazing! <3 I can't wait for more! <3 Please update soon! <3 



Author's Response: thanks very much! I'm behind with review responses...as usual...

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 12:35 PM Title: Fairytale Cottages & Happy Tears

such a great story, shouldn't be long before there is another addition to the family, very pleased to hear about a sequel



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 1:28 AM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

I don't have Facebook.....I don't have Twitter.   Can you believe it?!?!

 

That is just too time consuming!  Between working full time, a husband, 2 year old and a four month old.....and working on my Master's degree, oh and let's not forget the fandom.........I don't have time for that stuff!  So keep me updated via the fandom sites....TWCS, please.

 

I love that you are doing a sequel!  YAY!!!



Author's Response: Hopefully you've gotten to read teh final chapters...and the future take is now posted. As soon as I complete LRM, I'll begin the sequel. Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:22 AM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

No more, more, more, this is a great story. I am thoroughly enjoying this story.



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Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 7:53 PM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

Love these two...



Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad.

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:48 PM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

Love this story!!! <3 more soon please! <3



Author's Response: Thanks very much! working on LRM and then the sequel.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 7:29 AM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

Well, great chapter, very hot!!!!  I love everything about this story and look forward for more updates, plus the sequel!!!!! Great work!!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks very much! your wish, my command. The final chapters are posted and the future take. Now I must complete LRM before beginning the sequel.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:52 AM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

Great chapter.   I know everything must come to an end but you have done amazing things with this story.  I love it and I love these characters.  I can't wait for hte next chapter.  keep up the great work.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I don't think I'll ever be able to let these characters go.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:16 AM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

OH WOW...that was amazing :)



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 12:01 AM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

I have loved this story from the very beginning!  Thinking about it ending almost feels like losing a cherished friend!

Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Catherine

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 10:32 PM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

It was awesome!!!
Damn....the teasing in the club was fantastic! Ive had some, but not all. Hmmm....seems like some research is needed!?
Great job!

Author's Response: I'm always looking for a good excuse to drink. lol. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 10:05 PM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

my my Bella gets quite the wicked tongue on her when she's had some alcohol in her system, she always makes me laugh when she drinks.  Poor Edward getting teased to the brink of his sanity snapping that was very naughty of Bella and I think he is going to show her what happens when she teases him not that she will be complaining I know I certainly would't be!  Can't wait to see what they get into next!



Author's Response: lol..thanks so much! glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 9:41 PM Title: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

love the chapter but I truly hope these two don't get pregnant during the honeymoon before they get to travel together and just be husband and first

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 8:27 PM Title: Workouts & Sex Drinks

Wow!! These two are really getting their groove on...lol..then again it's like the forbidden fruit, one taste and all you want is more....Nice chapter E, they are having a great honeymoon ...thanks for writing..



Author's Response: Thank you! they needs lots and lots of practice..lol. glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 4:02 AM Title: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

I love how they are so open with each other and letting the other now what they want.  I hope they dont lose anything when they come back home. 

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 5:28 PM Title: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

wonderful chapter, looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 2:45 AM Title: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

love it

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 1:02 AM Title: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

Don't read if you don't want lemons.  Really?  I think the only reason I read stories is for the occasional lemons.  Seriously good job.  I love how you have developed these characters and thier love.



Author's Response: thanks very much! well...the lemons are what they are right? they've been waiting so long...i think they deserve a lemon-filled honeymoon. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 8:52 PM Title: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

GAH, that was amazing ;)  I really loved it so much :D



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:23 PM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

i so looove em in this story lol

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:12 AM Title: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

Awesome. Thanks for not making it Brazil. Love the honeymoon!
Did Atlantis sub tour in Aruba. Fantastic!

Author's Response: wasn't it awesome? I'm sure my description didn't do it justice...but just gah! I was afraid I might be claustraphobic...you never really know until you're faced with that sort of situation. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:56 AM Title: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

Seriously...you warned us about lemons?  Have we not been waiting as anxiously as our two newlyweds for some sexy times? ;) I'm so happy for these two...



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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:34 AM Title: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons

We had rain yesterday in North Texas.................HOOOHAHH..

 



Author's Response: lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 7:49 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

EXCELLENT JOB I had goosebumps and tears, the first time was a mild lemon but of course it was their first no doubt these two will get tarter as they do.

 

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 4:54 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

awesome chapter... long awaited!!! :) More please!!!

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 3:59 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

Wonderful chapter, I loved the wedding and the wedding night was great definitely worth the wait. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:53 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

That was perfect the wedding to lemon she will be walking funny lol

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 7:33 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

romantic, sweet, first-time angst and hot sexy loving… sigh-- I'd say you nailed it. pun intended'D)-

loved it<3<3

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:39 AM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

Good times they need some ;)   The way Bella stood up to the creep James I loved it.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 9:39 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

Finally, love it...just balanced so well, sweet tender and not smutty at all. As we all wish our first times were.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 2:45 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

:D)

Lots of happy tears

<3

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 12:23 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

This was a great chapter. I loved the wedding and songs. The wedding night was beautiful. You did a great job.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 12:44 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

This  may be the first time I have ever cried when reading about a weddng.  But you have made me love these characters.  You did everything so well.. the wedding, the vows, the music, and the first time.  Congratulations on this beautiful chapter.

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 11:54 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

Yes, yes, yes!!!!!
**sigh**. You did it well!! Cant wait for EPOV!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 10:45 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

Was away so I needed to wait & savor.
So good!!

Reviewer: GuilChris Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 7:57 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

You did a fabulous job on the wedding AND the wedding night!!!!

Your description of the wedding was just the best!!!  It reminded me of my vows from 26 years ago to my wonderful husband Dale.  I was teary eyed after reading the wedding...so great job.

I'm a sucker for lemons...ha ha ha...pun intended.

Looking forward to more chapters.  Thank you!

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 6:47 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

Finally, after 70+ chapters of UST, we finally get to the sexin', and man was it good.  Never fear your lemon skills, that was hot, and I hope to read more going forward.  For both being virgins, I have to say Edward is the man for lasting that long and getting her off twice - Way to Go!

PS - can't wait to read about this night from his point of view :)

PPS - the wedding and all the speeches were nice too [see, I did read the whole thing, promise]

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 3:43 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

That was so sweet they were both worried about the same thing and now they are going to turn into sex maniacs, it's good to be them!  How dumb is Jessica she will be wasting her time trying to find someone who has slept with Edward since every single person he dated has the same story.  I'm afraid of what is going to happen when you bring the creepy James back in the picture, I can only hope you have Bella kick his ass that would be funny and would make Edward, Emmett, and oh who am I kidding it would make evryone proud!  I can't wait for more, and I wonder if you will introduce a baby Cullen or two to the story before it ends.

Reviewer: dazzledmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 3:27 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

This chapter was so worth the wait!!!!  Very nicely done!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 6:11 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

Finally!! I feel relieved almost.  I hope you continue this to include married life, Bella traveling to movie sets with Edward, them living in the new hous in England, and babies, babies and yes, did I say babies???  All of us have fell in love with this story, hence all the reviews.  We love it!! PLEASE!!  Come on people, lets convince her to write more and more!!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 5:57 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

FINALLY. I am older but I lived to see it. Well good they waited and they are happy.

THANKYOU<



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Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 4:52 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

Omg!!!!! This chap was everything & more!!!!! Update soon!

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 4:24 AM Title: Waxward & Sexward

lovin this story.  for me, this joking and petting is so rob and kris.  i love it- and yes, i would have definately deflowerd that man long before now.  especially a drunk edward-  yeah, i kinda would have taken advantage of that  lol

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 3:20 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

Thank you agian for a wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 3:09 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

It was great and well worth the wait!  You done good! ;)  I loved the music you choose- "Let Their Be Peace On Earth" is one of my favorite songs and I love it when the kids sing it in choir at my school.  Looking forward to LRM.

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 12:26 AM Title: Vcards & Vows

Well worth the wait!!!  Extremely well done!

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 12:25 AM Title: Mercer Island & Minibars

have been waiting for that info.  i knew there was something underneath that made him completely understand her so much better.  i really like your actorward, but am looking forward to her trip to LA.  lol  thanks for a great story



Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. lots more to come and then the sequel of course.

Reviewer: hilndgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 11:41 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

The wedding and reception were both perfect. Especially perfect was Edward's deception about where they would be spending their wedding night. Again I have to say that I love your version of Emmett. What especially brought tears to my eyes was Bella going to the cemetery and leaving her bouquet at her mother's grave; it was a very poinant moment and having Edward give her a moment alone was an awesome touch.

Looking forward to LRM; want to know what Edward was thinking right up to that phone call from Rosalie. #boomboompow

hee hee hee

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 11:11 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

Beautiful and very sweet!  Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 10:14 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

So cute, and sch wonderful lemony goodness. Love this story, keep up the great work

Reviewer: vickisan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 9:55 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

Horndogs are cool!

Reviewer: hilndgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 9:30 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

This chapter definitely made me miss both of my parents. Neither were with me on my wedding day because they had died years before...my dad when I was 2 and my mother the year before I met my husband. Bonds between children and their parents are very special and should be treated as a treasure. You did a great job showing that with Bella and Charlie.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 8:46 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

mmmm I love weddings, and wedding nights. very romantic, very funny, very sweet. No angst for a chapter is a good thing too

Reviewer: angakm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 7:38 PM Title: Vcards & Vows

Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:48 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

 would review you anyways but I am looking forward to tommorrow

Reviewer: Leens Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 5:44 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

Oh mannnn!

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 5:33 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

Love this chapter, especially the dinner cruise.

Reviewer: vickisan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 3:39 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

Nice job- - - loved the chapter!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 3:00 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

the anticipation is killing me lol nice

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 1:09 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

Tomorrow, tomorrow, I love ya tomorrow, your only a day........... Looking forward to the next chap

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 12:43 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

:-)  Wedding time!  Can we skip the vows and get straight to the smexin?  LOL! 

*claps hands wildly* So excited for this one!

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 12:02 PM Title: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters

I look forward to each and every chapter that is posted.  Totally love the story.

Waiting Patiently, Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:45 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

You are quite evil leaving me with a cliffie like that!  When are you going to cut the poor girl a break, everything is going good for the happy couple and you have to throw a whopper of a monkey wrench in their faces with that douche bag reporter and the murder and torturer of Bella and her mother.  Now I will be chewing all my nails off waiting for your next update!  Also thanks for including that hilarious and lovable big oaf Emmett you never fail to draw a laugh out of me when he appears.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 1:26 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

I can't believe it is almost time for the wedding. Yeah! I am so glad that Jasper got Emmett back with the Homor remark. I loved the songs you chose. I was tearing up.

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 1:21 AM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

I adore this story and EPOV. I hope to read the next chapter soon.

Reviewer: hilndgirl Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 3:38 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

I wish I could remember who recommended your story but I can tell you it came from another author who's story I've been reading.

I want to start out by saying thank you. Your's is one of the few stories I've read where Emmett wasn't made to not have "the sense God gave a goose to come in out of the rain." He's funny, witty, loving, charming, and childlike all rolled up into one. But the biggest thing is he's intelligent. Wish I had a brother just like him.

Once I started reading your story, I found myself using every free moment to find out what Bella & Edward were doing. Having Edward's POV in LRM just adds to the enjoyment of the story.

I particularly enjoyed the train ride to Chicago and then the Route 66 excursion. Living in one of the Route 66 states makes me want to take that journey myself.

Having Emmett want to dance with Bella during the mother/son dance was perfect. It really was the perfect moment for Bella to share their mother's final thoughts of him with him.

Bring on Bella's & Edward's wedding. Can't wait to see what Edward has in store for their honeymoon and Bella's reaction to how Esme has decorated the house in England.

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 9:13 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

lmao! Jasper is all tipsy! Haha! Frances! Anywhoo... Can't wait for the next chap!!!!! Really hope u include wedding night! Update soon!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:18 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

OH MY GOSH!  That is so evil :( Not cool ;)  I cannot wait for the next one...and Bella and Edward's wedding :D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 8:34 AM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

You are evil but I love you that was a great chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 3:23 AM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

God I hope I live the week through..or perhaps two. LOL

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 11:26 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

So do you have anymore buses we could use to hit Rose's cousins? Seriously, I would have told them to take a hike, etiquette be dammed.

So disappointing about the interview. Not really surprised to see they found a way though...bastards.

Loved the wedding and the image of the uptight Mrs. Whitlock dancing to Soulja Boy XD

And for the record I would never call you a whore....maybe...possibly.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 4:26 AM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

yes evil  great chapter though.  I hope the hurrican gods miss you.

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 2:52 AM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

I loved it! Absolutely worth the wait! I thought it was so sweet how bella told emmett about what there mother said. The environment queen drink &dancing...hilarious! I can not wait for bella's wedding!! But a lil scared about what that interview will do to her. Thank you sooo much for writing. And ill be patiently waiting for he next chapter... ;0)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 12:19 AM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

such a whore, we want a wedding dammit!!!!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 9:27 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

I really enjoyed Emmett and Rose's wedding, and I really can't wait to see what you do with Bella and Edward's wedding.

Why is/was James so hell bent on interviewing Jeffrey Dryden?  Does he hate Bella that much.  She did not want to have sex with him so go after the person who killed her mother and almost killed her.  I want something really bad to happen to Victor James.  A paps car running him off of the road and into a tree. I know that is so un Christian of me, but I despise him so much. What goes around comes around.  Please let him meet his fate.

Thank you for the update.  I have family that lives around the same area and had to deal with the quake and hurricane as well.  God bless!

 

 

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 7:22 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

So glad your life is getting back to normal. Loved the new chapter can't wait for the next!
MWAH
Shannon

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:44 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

So glad to see things progressing. Cannot wait for the honeymoon!!
Surprised by the Dryden interview. Thought Oprah squashed it. Hmmm.....the Internet can be an evil thing!
Loved the reception bitches!

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