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Reviewer: carebearconnor Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:37 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

You evil cliffie whore!  I had to say it again...I am looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:05 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

i hope victor james will receive all the 'best':)

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 4:55 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

Hey Sweety.. The wedding is getting closer...and Mr James just will not leave well enough alone (such a prick) Great chapter and it makes me wonder what else is going to happen with the week leading up to the wedding...On a personal note. I feel for you with mother nature - she can be a tough one when she gets angry...but i'm glad that everything worked out ..we are still sorting through water soaked boxes from the basement, i'm of the mind to just throw everything out and start over ((all except for Christmas Ornaments...those are 30 years of irreplacable memories) ...have a good week...louise

Reviewer: Fluent in Sarcasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 4:46 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

Oh, my gawd!

How could you!

To leave us on such a cliffi!

GASP!

Can not wait for the next chappi

FinS x

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 4:38 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

I'm glad to hear that you seemed to survive the elements- stupid natural disaters.  And I wouldn't call you an evil cliffe whore... that's just mean... but "an evil, omg, no you didn't, meany" works. ;)  I have to wonder if Edward knew about the interview being out there and that is why he has had Bella occupied every day leading up to the wedding?  I guess we'll know for sure in the next LRM update.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 3:55 PM Title: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

*all the air rushes out of my chest in a harsh gasp*

 

Holy shit, that little weasel did the interview anyway...  uh oh.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 1:14 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Very funny, thanks for the outtake/update

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 10:11 PM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed reading the update. 

And thanks for the rec's, that's how I found out about your story I think. I am reading a couple already & they too are great reads.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 9:04 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Thank you! I really needed a good laugh today.  I'm not sure I would want to be the target of Emmett's pranks, but they are a lot of fun to read about :)

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:20 PM Title: Shock Therapy & The Mother Road

I'm so glad you used "clout" correctly! It's a Chicago word, it originated here - if you get a chance, check out some of the books made up of Mike Royko's old newspaper columns. He did a whole spiel about the word "clout" - he was a funny and talented author. Anyway, not sure if that's your thing but I am really enjoying your story, thanks for sharing it!

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:30 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Come on and squeeze me like you do, I'm so in love with you ... lol I totally wish my PreCana class had been so in depth, though it was fun. The nun who taught the class had a vocabulary that would make sailors & truck drivers blush! lol It's true!! My hubby and I laughed through the whole thing. But the content wasn't so in depth, then again, I'm a convert and we'd been married 9 years already, I guess they might've figured we didn't need all that info.

 

Thanks for a fun story.

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 12:36 AM Title: Lap Dances & Abstinence

haha I wondered how you'd handle the whole cohabitation thing! That was brilliant :)

 

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 10:55 PM Title: Outtake: The April Fool

That was HYSTERICAL!!!! Love the story, too.

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 1:09 AM Title: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

I love that you made them practicing Catholics! And that their priest is a friend and has helped her cope :D

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:02 PM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

This chapter was wonderful.  I will have a smile all day!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 6:03 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

I did enjoy it....thanks!

Loved carlisle's thoughts!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 1:27 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Perfect.  Loved that Em was finally a victim and I laughed, but they need to get him good at least once more before you end this little gem.  Get Rosalie in on it.  She is hte one that holds the power.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:48 PM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

This was so funny. I love Carlisle's reaction. I know as much as I love Emmett. I could not imagine having him for a son. I think I would probably kill him or be red faced all the time.

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:33 PM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Lmao!!!! Poor charlie. Haha. Can't wait for the wedding! Update soon!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:23 PM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

OMG I laughed so hard I still have tears running down my cheeks!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 7:12 PM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

cute

Reviewer: felix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 10:13 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

loved this out take. nearly peed myself x

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:10 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

My goodnes you are sure inventive with emmets pranks i was laughing so hard i was crying

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:38 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

That was priceless Emmett to funny.  I loved the fact that Carlisle told Edward what a great son he was lol

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:30 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Even though it hurt like he'll to laugh I truly needed this! Will be so glad when I am completely healed and can feel better! But one week out and already lost 20lbs. I was floored. Keep up the good work!
Love
Shannon

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:27 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Oh my goodness! LMAO!!!

Rock on, Emmett. ;) *sigh* Love him!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:24 AM Title: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Oh...lord...I laughed so hard, my ribs hurt!!!

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:50 AM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Oh my god I loved Bella's inner monologue when she was thinking about colonel Whitlock strangling people it was hilarious!  And you just gotta love that big lug Emmett he cracks me up.  I can't wait for it to be Edward and Bella's turn to get married, I will be anxiously awaiting your next update.

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 6:44 AM Title: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

great job so far. Love Bella's internal monolgue. Favorite part: "Dancing with Edward was almost as good as kissing him. Are you kidding? No, it really wasn't." LOL thanks for writing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:37 PM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Emmett waited until the wedding, that was all Father Pat asked of him. He kept his promise. He didn't say he would wait until the end of the wedding. He said his vows. She said hers. The priest pronounced them man and wife, that was good enough. He still has to go back and sign the paperwork. I hope he remembers to do that before the reception. You have to love Emmett.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:15 AM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

you made me laugh and you made me cry and laugh again.  Great chapter.  Really.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 10:56 PM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I found one tiny error, here " "I know your experience with be vastly different. Bells"  Should be "experience will..." ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:51 AM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

I am not sure who would not be a fan of yours you are great and it is good to know that we read the same stories love them all.  I so love Emmett the boy has been good for way to long ;) 

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:55 AM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

very nice...can't wait to find out about prank...really looking forward to Bella and Edward's wedding and honeymoon ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:33 AM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Loved it! Nice pacing....you give us a little taste of our fav couple!!

Btw -heard our boy packs 9"! Dayum!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 2:30 AM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Fabulous!!

So great!

And, uh, at least Em and Rose went to the limo. LMAO! ;) Priceless!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 2:07 AM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

The moment between Emmett and Bella (in the hallway) right before the wedding was very sweet.  Looking forward to reading the "Clint" outtake.Ü

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 1:34 AM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

great chapter

Reviewer: vickisan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 11:50 PM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Loved it!

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:24 PM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Lmao!!!!! Total emmett move! Update soon! 3 weeks!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:57 PM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

too funny, just to imagine a sign outside of a church on a limo.   too funny

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:15 PM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

OH I laughed so hard throughout this chapter!  :)  Love it!!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:53 PM Title: Ultimatums & Quality Time

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER SO I AM CALLING IN A FAVOR....SURGERY IS SCHEDULED FOR THIS WEDENESDAY AND WILL BE IN THE HOSPITAL TIL FRIDAY AND HOME LAID UP FOR THE WEEKEND....ANYTHING WOULD BE GREAT!!! HAVE A GREAT WEEK SWEETS.

LOVE-

SHANNON

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:20 AM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

I guess everyone has their line of where enormous is....mine would be 3-4000 over that... :)  sitting her in my private office off of the kitchen. love your story.



Author's Response:

Bella has only lived in her father's house and her small apartment...and the houses she lived in with her mother were small as well.  BUT she has been to Edward's L.A. home...judging by the photos of that (on the Facebook) I don't consider it large in comparison to most homes of movie stars...it's actually kind of small.  If i had to guess the square footage...i wouldn't think it was more than 5 or 6000....but it's in an awesome location.  Their new home is small...only 3 bedrooms...but seems perfect for them.  I believe Bella would hate moving into something on the scale of Esme and Carlisle's home. (also on the Facebook).   Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 1:43 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

So freakin romantic those two!!

 

And those blogs... hilarious!  :)  I love it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 11:55 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Loved it sounds like a wonderful place to live.  That is to funny about the condoms I do find that if I can embarrass my kids it is a good day lol.



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Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 12:10 AM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Yay!!!!! Must have wedding!!! Haha! Update soon!

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Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 8:50 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Again, you make me love these characters more with every chapter.  Great job.



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Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 9:50 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

I am glad that you won so many Avant- Garde awards.  It is good to see this story getting the recognition it deserves.  I really enjoyed Bella's encounter with the little girl in the soup kitchen, and all that came from it.  Thank you.



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Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 9:48 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Fabulous chapter!! I love this story and the epov. Excellent.  Looking forward to the next.

 



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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 7:19 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

I am still hoping I will live long enough to reach the wedding and the lemon. LOL

 



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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 6:59 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Love the update!



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 6:57 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Edward and Bella are so generous. I hope they decide to continue to help out the center when they have time after his sentence is over. It will keep them grounded and fulfilled. It means more than just giving money. I am happy that they found their home. It sounds like they have enough land that they can build guest cottages and other out buildings if they need more space for more than the family.



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 6:53 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Wow, yes, there certainly was a lot of ground covered in this chapter, but it was quite necessary. I think it flowed quite well, so great job! :)

Can't wait to see the pics on fb of the dream house. Very happy they found their perfect home.

Not a lot of Emmett and Rosalie in this chapter. I'm sure they're anxious for their wedding. How long 'til theirs? Sorry, I forgot the date of theirs.

And the movie at the cemetary gave me the creeps. Do they really do that? Oh my. I don't mean to sound rude. :)

On that note, I'll just go before I die of embarrassment...

 



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Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 5:16 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

This story has some hilarious moments (got to love Jasper playing strip poker by himself :D). I'm ready to get to the wedding now and of course there wedding night ;)



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Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:41 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

great update !!!!!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 2:55 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Very good! I know it's fiction but I truly believe in the goodness some celebrities have for giving back.
The UST is sky high! Their wedding night is going to explosive in do many ways!

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i can't argue with that!  Thanks very much.....new chapter just posted !

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 2:28 PM Title: Fireworks & Dream Homes

What can I say...GREAT chapter!!!  I loved it all especially the story about the little girl.  I hope we might see a little more of her story and Bella together on a return trip to LA???  Keep the fun coming only a week and a half til my surgery and I will need lots to read:)!!

Have a great weekend.

Love-

Shannon



Author's Response:

we will definitely see more of Kayla.  Thanks!

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:21 PM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

I absolutely love this story I can't wait for Edward and Bella's wedding



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coming soon!  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 8:26 PM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Lol .... Can't wait to see what those naughty boys have been up to. So sweet Edward is coming to Bella!

Author's Response:

yeppers.  and by now you've read the other side of this...so much fun to write...  Thanks!

Reviewer: azrielstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 7:33 PM Title: Outtake: The April Fool

 I have to say that I haven't laughed that hard in a long long time.  That that chappie was freakin' hilarious.  Emmett is one of a kind. :)



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he most certainly is.  Thanks!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:44 PM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

you write suc h amazing thiings - have you experienced all of these bachelor/bachelorette party fun things?  great job.



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hahaha  nope.  I'm embarrassing enough to my family when i drink...they have to keep a leash on me in Vegas.  *snicker*  I've never been to a wild bachelorette party...so a lot of this came right out of my head.  This chapter in LRM is even crazier...all my imagination i'm afraid.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 7:10 AM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

To funny peeny heaven lol.  I hope that Edward arived with Cris and has close on????



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yes...edward and chris are fully clothed....Jasper, not so much. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:24 AM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

you rat!



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Go to the Facebook page....here's the link....:   http://www.facebook.com/pages/Virgins-Villains-fanfic/153713394654002#!/note.php?note_id=177344502329689

This will give you the ENTIRE phone conversation btwn Rose and Charlie... Enjoy!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 9:31 PM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Oh my gosh!  That was amazing :)   I really loved it so much!  Christopher is quickly becoming a character I wish was real ;)  Hehe!  I cannot wait for more!



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you must read the latest LRM chapter.  Christopher is a hoot!  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 9:13 PM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Wild times. 



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yes indeed.  Thanks!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 8:15 PM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Oh, that was soooo much fun...been there done that, hahahahaaha. Can't wait to find out why Chris is there.



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hopefully you've read the latest chapter of LRM which give details of Emmett's party.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 4:23 PM Title: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

Good ridance Camille!



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i agree completely.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 4:08 PM Title: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

love it!



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Thanks! glad to hear it.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:57 PM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

OMG... I can't wait for LRM!!!! 



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hopefully by now you've read the LRM chapter.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:55 PM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

I am so glad that Bella decided to enjoy life!



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me too!  it's her first step.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:37 PM Title: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

Very nice holiday!  The pictures brought a tear to my eye, but Emmett quickly made me laugh!



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Thanks!  He always diffuses an emotional situation. lol. 

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:16 PM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

"the Baghdad Café"....apart from RP's movies, one of the BEST films I've ever seen!  I even bought aq copy.

B & B parties are wild....would LOVE a visual!  Hahaha



Author's Response:

I enjoyed that movie also, and made sure we stopped there on our route 66 trip.  I have photos of the suites on the Facebook page....more of the suite where the men celebrated though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:15 PM Title: Drunk Ironing & Snark

awwww...so sweet!  I loved the faux pas that occurred when bella was talking to Mike!  very funny!



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Glad you like it!  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 2:47 PM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Very, very cute story!  Love all the usual suspects & their personalities!  Bella is adorable!



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Thanks! hope you continue to like it.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 6:43 AM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

OME!!

You've really outdone yourself this chapter, LOL! Amazing! I loved the whole entire chapter!

Gah! I cannot wait for the double LRM!

Oh, and thanks for letting Emmett control the V&V fb page for a while. ;) That was heavenly. =D



Author's Response:

you are very welcome.  Here's the link to the entire phone conversation btwn charlie and Rose...although I have a feeling you've already seen it ;)  Thanks!  http://www.facebook.com/pages/Virgins-Villains-fanfic/153713394654002#!/note.php?note_id=177344502329689

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 5:01 AM Title: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Anxious to learn more.



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here's the link to the ENTIRE phone conversation between Charlie and Rose:  http://www.facebook.com/pages/Virgins-Villains-fanfic/153713394654002#!/note.php?note_id=177344502329689

Enjoy! and thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:01 AM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

I want them to elope in Vegas, I think they can still have their wedding but they should just do it already;D)

Thanks for the update.



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hahaha...you and Edward both.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:59 PM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

I wish I had enough vacation time to make this trip it sounds like a blast. I can't believe how rude that reporter was to Bella. I am so glad she stood up for herself and her mom. I can't believe she waited so long to tell Edward. Bella is getting stronger everyday.



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I agree.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: americamom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 8:18 AM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

awsome



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Thanks very much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 7:16 AM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

I am so happy Bella stood up to the reporter good for her I was releved when she told Edward about it.  Emmett has a twin  lol to funny the world could not handle two of them.  Cant wait to find out what they are talking about.



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Thanks!  this trip has been loads of fun to write.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 5:30 AM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

great chapter.  congrats on the awards!



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Thanks! glad you liked it.

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 11:33 PM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

Hi! Did you see the review of V&V on the news page of TWCS?



Author's Response:

I didn't see that...thank you for letting me know!  I'm still kind of in shock when people write nice things about my story...sometimes I cringe and read them with one eye closed fully expecting it to say:  "If you want to read a load of crap then you shouldn't miss this story by Emmamama....blah blah blah..." lol.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:28 PM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

Fantastic ... I hope Bella's Connie Confrontation doesn't come back to hurt them.
Go Oprah!

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we shall see.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:10 PM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

It's too bad that Edward and Bella couldn't really enjoy the Grand Canyon because of all the people... stupid people.  I was lmao at the Navajo Kid, Ben- especially for the fact that he is recreating "Myth Buster" (do not attempt this at home) projects.  hee heeÜ  I am worried that what Bella said to the reporter is going to bite her in the ass somehow.  While "Connie" seemed remorseful about her freedom of speech comment- she seemed like the type of person who would forget remorse quickly and twist something up.  I also think that while Bella shared with Edward what she said to Connie about Dryden, I doubt she mentioned her "slip" about not being good enough for him... that may make him angry.  I guess I'll have to wait and see what Edward was thinking exactly in LRM.



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I'm actually working on LRM right now.  Thanks for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 8:44 PM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

This is a good story. I am wondering if my hard drive will crash before they get married???

 

You are actually going to make us wait 47 more days.....................grr



Author's Response:

um.  maybe.  So many people are looking forward to the wedding night...I'm getting nervous.  I may come down with a case of 'performance anxiety'  lol.  just kidding.  Once the bachelor parties are over things will move much faster...i think... i hope...  eh i don't know... if it helps I'm already writing the next chap.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 6:54 PM Title: Teepees & Tribal Law

Was really proud of Bella for standing up to the reporter. Connie reminded me of Rita Skeetar.



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hahaha...I forgot about that woman.  There are a lot of crazy characters in Harry Potter.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: cgooden Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 2:14 AM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

I just started reading this story and decided to read the most current chapter first then start at the beginning and I must say I look forward to reading it.  I also think it's cool that you included a city I grew up in (Carthage, MO) on the list for Route 66.  I actually lived on the Street that was Rt 66, it's now Oak Street :)  I'm looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

So glad to hear that your city was included.  Thanks!  as you can tell, I have fun writing a lot of these chapters.

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:28 PM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Well you just traveled past my house in this chapter on your turn froM the Red Barn to Pops. It was hard to get back in the groove after the mention of the memorial. My husband worked at the hospital closed to the Murrah Building and was on call that day.  He made it home way too early. We had funeral processions around here for months afterwards. I'd be sitting by the side of the road for 20 minutes waiting for one to pass by, drive for five minutes and then another one would go by. I think that was the day I finally lost it. Oh well. I'm enjoying your story. Think I need to head to the gym and get the cobwebs out of my head today. Thanks for the read.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Although I didn't want to dwell on it, I think it's important that people don't forget.  If you feel up to it, read the latest chap of Love Rescue Me, it covers the last two chaps of V&V.  There's a mention of the memorial, then a discussion about 9/11....after that, I lighten it up a lot!  Glad you like the story.

Reviewer: sherryjo Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2011 2:13 AM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

i have laughed my ass off, i was laughing out loud and my husband looked at me like i had lost my shit, in other words 2 thumbs up

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  sooo glad to hear that!

Reviewer: orangepeel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 1:03 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Running nasty evil Geri with Emmet's bus? I may have type my first ever mwahahahahaha (& while I hate using the cliched lol, that is indeed what I did!)



Author's Response:

hahahaha..  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 2:45 PM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

This was a good chapter. It is like going on vacation on your vacation.



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks!  glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: orangepeel Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Love your imagination, JRR's work room decorated for romance... just wow. I lived in those books for much of my adolescence & I still would never have come up with this... yet it's perfect for your E x B.



Author's Response:

yep...i get to make my fantasies come true!  fun  Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 6:08 AM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Holy crap what an excellent chapter!  A bit of everything I love it!

 

OH, From the Cup of Duty is an AWESOME fic!!  I am sad to see it finished...

I cried during the entire chapter!  Everyone shoudl read it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  glad you liked it!

Reviewer: orangepeel Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 2:06 AM Title: The Southern Gentleman & Caveward

Robward singing Kiss like Prince... now there's an image I'll never forget. What. A. Treat.  Ox



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 1:02 AM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

I soooo would react like Bella at the beginning of the chapter... I would pout and be pissy too- and all because I was pissed I wasn't getting any and nothing to do with the embarassment, which is why I think Bella was really mad ;) .

I sooooo want to do the Route 66 drive (I mean I always have) but I want to see the truck that inspired Tow Mater... who wouldn't?  However, I would really want to do the trip with Emmett, I'm Just Saying.  I really like how you included the history of Route 66 in the chapter, along with the Oklahoma City Memorial... like 9-11, I will never forget that day and how horrible it was. :(

Also, I haven't read 50shades yet!  It's ready and waiting on my Kindle and I CAN'T WAIT!  Master of the Universe was one of my first FF stories that I read and will always love it and I can't wait to read it now!  I love how these authors are getting to publish their ideas that were once FF stories- most of the stories I read I get so into the plot that "Edward" and "Bella" are just names... even in V&V, you have two really great characters that just happen to be named Edward & Bella.Ü  I also can't wait to read Old Wounds and Little Battles... those were also based from a great FF story- dealing with some really hard issues, but so well written that I can't wait to read the books. Ü



Author's Response:

what were those stories called in fanfic....maybe i read them.  I've got Gabriel's Inferno...which used to be The University of Edward Masen...it's soooo good.  Thanks for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 11:30 PM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Loved it......Emmett is a hoot!

Author's Response:

he is that!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:48 PM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Gettin' closer and closer...hopefully they won't spontaneously combust beforehand! Hahaha

 

Yeah...I can't wait either for the 2nd 50 Shades to come out.  I read it all online, but I love having the hard copy!



Author's Response:

there is a real fear of combustion! :)   Thanks very much! 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:08 PM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Great chapter, felt like i was there.;D)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad everyone's enjoying the trip. :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 11:15 AM Title: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Love the story!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! Glad to hear it!

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