Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
Know there is a long road to go but this far seemed a little too easy.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
It was right with Edward, I was surprised with her orgasm though.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
I don't think anything can really pepare her for it. But it needs to be done.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
Far cry from Isle Esme.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but it's what she needs right now. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I've enjoyed them all.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
Real tough love in action.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
someone is always there to make it worse.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
The Hale parents are noticably silent.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
Seems like the Hales aren't going to want their kids around Bella. At least the Cullens are all in her corner.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's a good start but after what she went through this really needs professional help
Date: 18 Feb 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
How did she read if she was in the dark?
Date: 18 Feb 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
I don't understand how after missing 6 years of school she could just pass a test that easily
Date: 17 Feb 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
She's got a good support system but that's really not enough.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very brave of him wanting to help but is it really the best thing?
Date: 17 Feb 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
Emmett really isn't equipped to handle this. He's what 18?
Date: 17 Feb 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
This girl really needs help.
Author's Response:
It's a process and it takes time for her to admit that she needs help:) Thank you for reading.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Not getting help isn't wise.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
Not sure exactly how everything happened, but sure we'll find out. Know it's sick but story is interesting.
Author's Response:
I promise that everything gets explained. It was a difficult stoy and I'm not sure why I felt this need to write it but I did.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:00 PM Title: Epilogue
although it is a very dark story, on so many levels of dark... there is a light at the end of the tunnel... i truly enjoyed the journey. thank you so much for sharing once again a great tale.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It was an exhausting journey but I wanted to make sure that I did it right.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
ok this is def the last chapter i read before i go to bed....i can't believe they are going to take rose and jasper away - like thats what she needs - is carlisle going to try and ship her away somewhere for her own good........dont like the sound of what he is planning - good night :(
Author's Response:
Good night:)
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
those b***h's need to be thrown into a glass door face first. it is nearly 2am here is Australia but i can't stop reading your story i have gone through too many tissues i am just glad the hubby is in bed and can't see me blubbering like a baby :( i can't even imagine what that would have been like for carlisle to do that :(
Author's Response:
I imagine it was the hardest thing he ever had to do. Not only seeing what that monster did to her but having to add to her pain...
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
i was wondering how she was able to ace that test - surely he didn't give her books to read........did he? i love how to school is reallymaking a huge effort to accommodate her needs that is awesome!!
Author's Response:
No, he didn't give her books to read but she's a genius and was already taking classes at tthat level before she was taken.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
ok what is it with those bitchy girls are people really like that towards people after something like that happens - i can understand the staring and people whispering but to be so nasty?????
Author's Response:
It will make a bit more sense later in the story, I promise. But yes, I do think there are people who would be like that to someone in Bella's shoes. It's the fear that pushes them to be like that. As for your previous reveiw with the tissues, I went through several boxes.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
again with the crying - i think i am going to run out of tissues :(
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
i loved the empov
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the amazingly kind reviews. I hope you don't mind me not responding to each of them. This story is quite the emotional roller coaster so I understand about not being able to read more than a bit at a time.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
now i am crying - i am not sure how much i can read of this in one session but i will continue its just really really sad
Date: 07 Jan 2011 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
she has opened herself up a little to them so that is a great start to bella
Date: 07 Jan 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
how hard that must be for charlie and renee not being able to help your own daughter - just glad she has em **wiping tears**
Date: 07 Jan 2011 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
hopefully her group of friends and fam can help get back a little of who she use to be - i am sure she will never ever be the same no matter how much time passes - somethings just scare too deep :(
Date: 07 Jan 2011 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
bloody hell that was intense - not sure how much more intense it could be
Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
W & C need to pull their heads outta their asses... i am willing to bet that J and R will lose their shit when they hear their parents lil plan to play keep away from B...
Author's Response:
Yep, it's going to get ugly.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
how can she divulge as much as she is to the others? does their bond have anything to do with it? is this only in bpov? i know i'm spitting out questions like it's the Spanish Inquisition, these are just randoms that go thru my head as I'm reading thru the chapters... btw, i love all the twins and i especially love it when Em and B are siblings...
Author's Response:
Yes, their bond has a huge part to do with why she feels so comfortable with all of them. Keep the question coming, I really love that in a reader and reviewer:) Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:37 PM Title: Epilogue
AWWWWW i loved this story!!!!! hell i love all of your stories..my favorite charater was Garette!
Author's Response:
Garrett's a favorite of mine in this one, too:) Thank you:)
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
What is the connection to the game on TV?
Author's Response:
I explain it in the next chapter or two :) Thanks again :)
Date: 13 Dec 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
So far a decent read. It feels a little rushed. My biggest beef...how can someone who was going into 6th grade be able to pass a college entrance exam? Unless she was a prodigy that is a little to far streatched to pass IMHO. Not a turn off to the story, just a small smudge. :)
Author's Response:
She was a prodigy:) Thank you:)
Date: 11 Dec 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
thank you for not making us read that horror again. Seeing what the others were thinking dring her story was heartening. Will & Cat have another thing coming if they think they are gonna keep Rose & J away from B....And what is Car thinking..... Cant wait to see.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:57 AM Title: Epilogue
I love all your stories ad i realy love this one.
Keep up the stories and i look ford to reading more.
This story must have been heard to write and i can also apreasate the hared work that must have gorn into it.
P.S I have never given anyone a 10 before
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you:) It was incredibly hard to write, and even as I went through the rewrite, I found myself struggling alot with the mindset I needed to be in.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 42
Cat and will have biger problems than Bella they need help
Author's Response:
Yesm they do
Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:55 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow, just wow, I really don't know what to say apart from OMG, that was so heartfelt and well written. Thankyou.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:41 AM Title: Epilogue
it was a great story
cycle went full circle. they are all giving back
i am glad garrett and kate have a little one
i hope one day bella and edward get that happy blessing
theya te all together and helping others
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:32 PM Title: Epilogue
So Bella has literally come full circle...that was a good way to end it. I like how all the friends found their nitch on the island.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 49
That was such a sweet date and proposal. I was hoping that is what Edward was planning!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 48
I loved the father/daughter day together. It is so nice to see them so normal.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:42 PM Title: Epilogue
This has been an amazing and emotional journey. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:38 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm sad that it's over.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:18 PM Title: Epilogue
lovely story !!! very emotional, very touching, very hard subject, thank you for sharing !!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:44 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 4:22 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow.
*applause*
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 49
that was a perfect date. he knows her so well
i love that he asked her to marry him. he is willing to wait for the girl he loves. hehas already proven that. love it all thanx for writing
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 49
well i hope in the end that they live happly ever after!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 49
oh ♥♥♥ such a cute ch :')
thank u♥
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 49
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*gets gobsmacked in the face*
That was out of left field, and I LOVED IT!!!!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Nov 2010 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 48
What a great day for Charlie and Bella. I am teaching my daughter to drive right now. It is a little scary, but it is such a big moment in her life. I know how Charlie feels. You feel so proud even when you really hate for them to grow up and you are showing them how to get farther away from you. It is the same when they learn to walk. You are proad, but in some ways you want to hold tight.
Author's Response:
That is so true!! Thank you:)
Date: 05 Nov 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 48
What a lovely chapter father daughter days can be so much fun - so pleased Charlie and Isabella got this day.
Great yet painful story.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 48
How sweet ... a father daughter day. I'm so happy it was fluffy and sweet. I admit I usually read the angsty & dark stuff but it's nice to have a lil fluff thrown in.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 48
yeah the fun is begining. she got to enjoy a day with her dad of fishing and driving great day. like it should be. now she is spa with her mom to get ready for a date with her boyfriend. love it and can't wait to see where they go
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 48
im happy shes getting everything she wants in life!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 48
I cant believe we are so close to the end... *sniffles*
This was a great bonding chapter, they really needed that, B and Charlie.
I look forward to the next update and finding out what E has up his sleeve :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 48
I love love lived this chapter. Makes me remember fishing with my dad and him teaching me to drive. Lots of tears both happy and sad.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Nov 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 46
The whole town has been changed by this man.
Author's Response:
Yes, they have.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 47
I feel for Angela. She has no idea why Jessica and Lauren were like that in the first place.
I agree with her.
I still feel like they should become dinner for a couple of nomads.
Im just sayin'... *shrugs*
Loved the update, see ya next one!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
THanks:)
Date: 04 Nov 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 47
Hi well all I can say is Oh My God. I started reading this story last night and stayed up till 5.30 this morning and then started again as soon as my kids were in school. I have cried so much I hated Garret when he took Bella even though I knew it was for her own good. Edward and her family have been great if only all families could be like that the world would be a better place. I can't wait for your next chapter. Thank you for writing such a griping story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 47
she did a beautiful job. she has been thru hell and back and she is the bigger person. she is strong. i sure hope the group learned something from her talk
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Nov 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 47
There just hasn't been enough Edward... I miss Edward. Garrett is nice and all but he's just not as hot. ;)
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 04 Nov 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 46
Bella may have forgiven those two but not me no way. I'm sorry but you go through that kind of torture for 2095 days and then find out that 2 people could have come forward and told the idenity of the person who took you... it might have led the police to find you sooner... nope not me, Bella is a bigger person than me.
Author's Response:
I don't know if I would have either.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 47
She really is stronger than she ever knew.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is:)
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 46
wow, what a powerful story. Thank you for sharing, can't wait for the next update, btw Bella and Edward need more pancakes !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 46
maybe and i am hoping this story might help someone out there. or maybe think about how people treat other people.
wonderfully written chapter thank you
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 45
you go bella. you have such a good heart you are a surviour everyone should be proud of you
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 44
what a chapter
i am glad they got to say there peace. i hope karama comes back to all of those there. it was great for the family to face some of them and let them know what they did.
i am glad jasper and rose have a place and a family thta cares. very sad that their parents left their stuff for them and walked away. wow
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 46
Its a good thing Lauren and Jessica's parents are being proactive. They can get the help they need quickly.
Enjoyed this update alot. I look forward to the next :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 46
With each chapter Bella gets stronger and stronger. The island really is the perfect place for her to work after college.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 46
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 45
Awesome, Kate and Garrett can call Charlie dad, thats totally awesome :)
I love it. I look forward to the continuation of this in the next chapter.
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 45
I think the students are confused. They want to be loyal to Bella, so they thought the;y had to be mean to Jessica and Lauren. They did not realize that Bella wanted all the abuse to stop. They should all take care of each other. Bella needs to explain that to them.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 45
Wow, Angela surprised me a little bit. We all know how she feels about Jessica and Lauren but we all know how she feels about Bella too. I figured she'd back down a little if she knew how strongly Bella felt about the taunting.
Eleazer may want to check into an assembly about the dangers and repercussions of bullying. Lauren and Jessica are not as strong as Bella ... I know she attempted suicide but that was before Brazil. Lauren and Jessica just aren't like Bella they really could snap... suicide... school shootings. Bullied and depressed teens do it all the time.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 45
It amazes me to see how strong Bella has become. She truly is a strong person. I know there's more to come but you rock my socks off with your writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) We have a handful of chapters left.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 45
Saint Bella!!!!!! Thants all I'm sayin.
Author's Response:
I know, right. She's nicer than me.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 44
Amazing story.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 43
Edward is my kind of guy. Perfect!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 42
WOW
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 01 Nov 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 45
Bella is making huge strides to get better.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is:) Makes me so proud of her!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 43
AHH lemony goodness!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 44
I loved the pancake scene. I laughed so hard. We also had pancakes for breakfast, so when my husband asked me if I wanted pancakes I lost it. He thought I was crazy. I told him I would tell him later when there wasn't little ears.
Author's Response:
lol, the pancakes scene is my favorite of the whole story!!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 44
Now that they've had the pancakes, they can perhaps move onto try different variations of pancakes. Get an IHOP menu and go to town. ;)
Author's Response:
LMAO, thank you so much for that!!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 44
i hope in the end everything works out for them !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 44
Ok, the end was hard to read. But the pancakes were fucking hilarious!!!
I feel so bad for Rose and Jasper. Thank God they have everyone else to love and support them since their parents are useless.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 44
*hurriedly hides Wil and Cat voodoo dolls behind the couch*
Well! This was a wonderful and insughtful chapter. *cleares throat*
I felt empowered with the strength shown in afronting the prisoners. Thats touching and I for one felt that it strengthened the familial bond. GO CHARLIE!!! :)
Things are looking up for our family here. Its beautiful.
*hugs* Thanks BB!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Get a couple pokes in for me ;)
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 43
Wow, that was HUGE moment!! But I agree with you, they were very ready for that to happen. Will and Cat dont deserve such a loving family. Karme will come back and bite them in the ass. :)
Beautiful. 'nuff said :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 43
Well, atleast she didn't have a flashback during sex... I think that might have scarred poor Edward for life.
After my review of the previous chapter where I had confidence in Will and Cat, I thought a littl more about it. They are lawyers, right? I know lawyers sometimes come into contact with bad people. Were they some how involved with Bella's kidnapping? I mean, they pointed her out as the trouble maker of the group and stuff during their little tirade. Almost like if it had to be one of them it should be her like they had to choose.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are lawyers, but no, they did not have anything to do with her kidnapping.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 43
well that was a huge step for the two of them. he was gentle and watch her and listen to her to make sure she was okay. he truly loves her and she is aware of how tuned into her that he is. he would never intentionally hurt her. they deserve each other and happiness. this was a great step for them
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 43
That was really beautiful. Edward was perfect with her. You just gotta love him.
It was a nice dose of light before we dive back into the dark.
Author's Response:
Thank you, dear:)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 43
well didnt see that one comming! i wouldnt think that she was ready for that but i guess in her eyes she was! cant wait till the next chatper keep them commign
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 43
What a nice ending to this chapter :). Well damn I sat here and read all this in one go, can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
You know it's bad enough for her to have lost 6 yrs of her life and that she went through all that torture, but did she have to lose the chance to have babies with Edward later... yes I know that she could adopt and stuff but this is sort of means that 'he' is going to punish her further in the future, he will still have a say in her life, he will still control her in a way. It's another decision she couldn't make herself. I don't think they declared themselves early they loved each other for years. the fact that they were not together doesn't mean anything if it's meant to be.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 32
That's some story Lauren and Jessica told. If they knew who took Bella they should have told someone. Its inexcusable
.Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 42
I think Will and Cat can be redeemed. What they did and said was harsh but I believe it came out of fear. The fear that started when Bella was taken. They knew it could have been Jasper or Rose. They denied Rose comfort for her nightmares out of fear. Fear forced them not to acknowledge that they felt real to Rose. Fear of all that Bella went through that their minds couldn't comprehend is what drove them to try and keep their children away from her. I believe they love their children and they also love the other four. I just think they saw what they were doing as protecting Jasper and Rose. Remove Bella from their lives and maybe what happened really didn't. Really, what parent would want their child present in a confrontation with 5 rapists? Things just got way out of control.
.... or maybe they're just bad people. I doubt it though. ;)
Author's Response:
Or perhaps a bit of both.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 42
no i am not surprised. from the begining will and cat where off. something didn't fit. i do not know if it was because they thought it could have been rosie? not sure but i know or i hope we will find out their reasoning. they have lied to their kids and their friends and why. becuase they where afraid of been labeled. because they didn't want people talking about them. hmmm. now they lost their kids and to call them the names they did i would never forgive them. wow what a chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)