Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 42
Great chapter....
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[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 42
Holy shit! So thats what they really thought? Fuck them!
*pulls Jazz and Ro into a bear hug*
These kids are better off without their negativity. Please tell me karma bited them in the ass for this later... please. *clenches eyes shut and wishes*
Great update, alot came out of this chapter that needed to. I am so very hooked on this story, I look forward to more :)
*huggles*
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Thank you, doll:)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 42
Cat and Will are not the people I expected. I can understand their need to protect their kids, but then to basically disown them...talk about bi-polar parenting.
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Very bi-polar parenting.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 41
Seriously, I know this story is not all fluffy clouds and rainbows, but can't we have a little happiness. I don't know how you write this. I find it emotionally draining just to read it!
Author's Response:
I wrote this like three years ago but even now that I am redoing it, cleaning it up and all, I am finding it quite exhausting. I promise the next chapter or two have some lighter, not complete fluff, but lighter times.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 42
I personally feel that Jasper and Rose are better off. They are horrible parents. Are the kids 18 yet? I know they got into Dartmouth. Did they get scholarships? Even if they didn't I am sure they will figure a way for all 6 of them to go.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are all eighteen. They will be fine:)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 42
not suprised! cant wait to see what ahppens next keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 41
*wipes the trail of tears off cheeks*
This was a very, VERY emotional chapter! Oh my, the feeling of exposure, knowing others not only know, but have seen what Bella went through, it makes me feel dirty. I feel what is portrayed in your writing. Poor Bella. Crap, she needs a damn break!
*clenches fists*
Why cant they just leave her alone!
*clears throat*
Ok, well now, I am really getting into this story. I have told you before, your stories make us readers feel like we are part of them, feeling like its right there happening and we are watching it unfold for real. You are amazing, I can never tell you that enough. *hugglesquishies you*
I make a kick ass Prosecutor, a real ball-buster! *snickers*
Oh Alec is gonna get it, hard, after I get done with him. Wait until men in the clink get news of what he has done. Child abusers, especially rapists, dont live long after being put away. They get what they did done to them. In the clink, cons dont look too kindly on child rapists and abusers and take care of them quickly.Abusing a child in any way is a death warrant in jail. Hasta Luego Alec! *chuckles darkly*
Author's Response:
I put so much of myself in all my stories, but especially in this one. It's one thing for Bella to know that they know what they did to her but for her to know that they've seen it, is...just something completely different. I sobbed like a baby while rereading it yesterday and I've read it all a hundred times. Yes, you make a kick ass prosecutor!! I though of you as I was rereading that part:)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 41
Wow so much emotion from every one. I am so glad that many of the bastards are in jail for what they did i cant wait till the last five are in there also.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 41
wow i cans ee where bella is coming from. it is one thing for people to know what happened but to actually see it being done to you wow now that is hard to grasp. poor bella like the nightmare never ends. man if they have footage of the men i don't see how they can say they are not guilty. man i hope they all get what is coming to them. if i recall correctly inmates do not look kindly on people who do things to children. all 25 need to pay for what they did especially since it seems they see nothing wrong with what they did. just sick
thanx for writing
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Thank you:)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 41
well i hope for bellas sake she makes it out of this again! keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 41
Great chapter....
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Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 40
I always wondered what was wrong with Jasper and Rose's parents. I just thought they were cold natured. They are more than cold they are cruel people. It is a good thing that Jasper and Rose had 2 other sets of parents as they grew up.
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Thanks:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 40
So much going on
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Date: 28 Oct 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 40
Bella handled Tia really well. I can see her fitting in with the staff on the island.
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[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 40
well the bond between all of them is amazing.
well seems b knows what she wants to do after medical school. i am curious how edward fits in. i know they are soul mates but what is it that he wants to do after school.
love it
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Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 40
*hugs*
Huge and very emotional. I cried with them all!
I loved it!
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Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 40
Great chapter....
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 40
Great chapter. Lots of emotions flying around.
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Date: 27 Oct 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 39
Great chapter....
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[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 39
Hope you upload soon!! Love, love, love it!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 39
wow always so much emotion
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[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 39
wow a whole lot going on. again she takes a step forward and two steps back. i hope she finds another happy place. i hope she goes to school. she would do good at anything she sets her mind too. working for garrett could be interesting but would she have to be in brazil? if so how does that affect her and edward? i am glad sje told the girls how she felt. i hope the go back and know they are given a second chance and make good of it
love it
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 39
Wow! Emotional overload for our family here! I love how you wrote this chapter. Organized chaos, simply put. Very well written.
Now, we have psycho Tia? Holy shit, now what?! lol
Bella is gonna be bad ass from now on, this is such an awesome story :)
See ya next update BB *hugs*
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Thanks, doll!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 38
There is alot in there! Tia is gonna be 'Bellafide' and she in gonna lose her attitude r4eal quick *smirk*
Love it! See ya next time! :)
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Thank you:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 39
Sounds like Lauren and Jessica are being set up for a little Karma to bite them in the ass when they get home.
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Thanks:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 39
i think she should help people with their problems! it would help her with hers! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 39
Bella is jumping back faster and stronger She really is doing much better. She forgets that everyone has setbacks. I can't wait until she hancles this Tia girl. This will help her get stronger and more confident.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She's in a much better place now than she was just a few months before. It makes a difference.
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 39
It was a very emo inducing chapter. I like the idea of Bella working at the island, but what about Edward and the rest of the gang? I can't imagine Bella being ok with being away from them all the time.
I hope Bella kicks Tia's ass. She will probably feel a little better to focus on someone else's issues instead of her own.
Author's Response:
I got it all covered.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 39
Good chapter. That's about all I got right now. Keep them coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 38
Tia seems a lot like Bella when she first arrived in Brazil. Hmmm...
Ya know, we all cringe over what Bella's been through ... going through. She's been through hell. I'd like to take a moment and say, poor Edward. What he must be going through. I'm not saying he should stop loving her, being there for her but he must just feel tortured. Learning new information about her tour in hell. Watching her break down. Seeing her scars. Being face to face with one of her rapists. The stress must have him in agony. And let's face it, he's a teenage boy. A mature teenage boy but a teenage boy nonetheless. He must be having a hard time supressing the physical responses he has for Bella.
Sorry for my Edward rant but I felt he wasn't getting enough appreciation or attention from Bella and the others. It's not easy for a man to be in a relationship with someone who has been raped.
Author's Response:
You're right, Edward hasn't gotten nearly enough appreciation for what he has been doing.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 38
will she get to catch more of the bastards that hurt her.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 38
Love the story can't wait for the next chapter
Waiting Patiently Impatiently,
OH MIA MYA
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 37
Garrett and Bella have to heal for each other. They need each other too much.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 38
Good chapter. You can see how far Bella has come wven with a major set back like this.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 38
Geeze woman can we get a break here?? I'm ready for some good but I know it's going to be a while. The last two chapters were hard to read but I'm sticking by you. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you:) THey were hard for me, too!
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 38
Great Chapter.....
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 38
one step forward two steps back
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[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 37
Wow, you got that right, SERIOUSLY intense chapter. Wow.
With all of them together the healing is going to be ten fold, alot of support goes a long way.
Beautiful.
See ya next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 37
well at least shes getting justice for one of these people that did things to her!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 37
I think they sould of just left Jane and Alex in a room with Bella and Garrett for 10 mins let B and G out and then come back to the room latter not knowing what happened to the dead fuckers on the floor they must of killed each other ya I like that. lol.
Author's Response:
lol, good idea:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 37
that is so heavy shit.
the island should be quite the happening place. there are quite a few people on the island that shouldn't be together. this should be interesting
love it
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Thanks:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 37
Oh the drama. I need to go to MY happy place after reading back to back chapters of this. Your story should come with an additional warning, DO NOT READ MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER AT A TIME. But all juking aside, this was a very good chapter. I am wondering if Bella and Garrett will be strong enough to get through this?
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 36
No! How are these two not rotting away some where? And where the hell did They find these other ass hats to help them? Very sad chapter. :(
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Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
Great Chapter.....
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
WOW SHIT FUCK should figure that sick fucken people run in the same crowds.
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 36
WOW, just WOW ! I began to read your fiction this morning, It's 2 AM now. I can't stop reading it all day long ( and night). You makes me almost crying. That story is so, so good. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing imagination with us. I will come every day to see if the next chapter is posted.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 36
OH!!!! Thats perfect!!! Bella will truly be able to have a piece of payback!!!!
That is SO FREAKIN COOL!!!!!!!
OMG, I am so excited to see what happens next! Sweet Twist my dear :)
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Thanks:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 36
omfg! i have no words, but i have to admit i deff didnt see it comming.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 36
WOW, there will have to be a lot of healing.
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 36
Hell this is a fabulous story and nope, didn't see this coming. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
Totallt didnt see that one coming. At first when I read it, it didn't make sense at all, but wow. This is sure getting complicated.
Author's Response:
I know, thanks:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 36
I hope with this new evidence that these people never see the light of day again. I bet Edward was just thrilled to meet one of Bella's rapist. I bet he wanted to kill him as well. Bella, Edward and Garrett need to get to Brazil and do some more healing.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
wow that was an eye opener. man i feel sorry for garrett and laurent. there parents are sick fucken bastards and i hope in jail they are dealt with appropriately for their behavior towards kids. i hope that there is a news article a small one abouth their deaths. vial disgusting pieces of shit. human being is too good to call them they are not human. man oh man i wish garrett or bella killed them but then they would be in trouble, sucks big time. but hopefully with garrett speaking and now bella his parents or pieces of shit will go down big time
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 36
Um wow!
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ThankS:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
How does a judge in Arizona have jurisdiction in Washington State? How can a therapist(?) get a judge in another state to give him custody? Doesn't make sense. Course this is your fiction.
Author's Response:
Federdal judges can do quite alot.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
Garrett put the history teacher in the school to watch them all. Could they be some of the men who were in the dark room with Bella raping and torturing her?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wow, it's just one thing after the other! When will it ever end?
Author's Response:
Eventually:(
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 35
I totally did not see that coming. Interesting twist having Bella be the savior now. I like it.
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Thank you:)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 35
well im happy that they are starting to move on with their lifes! cant wait till garrett gets pissed at bella and she gets pissed right back!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 35
Aww poor Garrett. I hope it all works out.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 35
I understand why Bella would go and take Edward with her. I don't understand why the others are going to Brazil. There are people at the facility in Brazil with Kate. They have a staff and the staff seemed close almost like a family.
Author's Response:
It's just Bella way of taking care of Kate. She knows that Kate will try to shut down.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 35
*stares at the screen frozen in shock and jaw on the floor*
Holy SHITballs! That came out of left field! Poor Garrett!!
*cell phone starts to ring*
I'm... too sexy for my cat,
Too sexy for my cat...
Oh pussy... oh pussy cat...
"Hi Peter. I take it you knew about this?" I ask in an authorative tone.
"By the time my spidey senses were tinglin' they had already found him. I dispatched a group of midwest nomads to meet you in Chicago." Reter answered, sounding forlorned. "If I only could have had the feeling earlier..."
I stop his train of thought right there. "Peter, honey, you cannot dwell on the coulda, woulda, shoulda's. Just be thankful that you can help now and he will survive. You just think of a positive outcome and be there for him." Tears fall relentlessly down my cheeks by the end of my rant.
"You're right sugar. Will you be ok?" Peter asks in a soft tone.
I choke back the sobs threatening to break through. "Yeah, I am just worried and pissed, you know? I'll be fine."
Peter takes a deep breath and I mimic his action.
"Alright then sweet cheeks, I have some other business to attend to. You get some rest and BB will let us know whats going on in the next update. G'nite darlin'."
"I will see you in my dreams Sweet Pete. G'nite."
Great chapter, love the twist! I cannot wait to see what is going to go down in Chicago! I am so excited!! *hugglesquishies you *
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Peter is right, we can't blame ourselves...
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 35
Holly shit I think Bella has figured out what she is to do with her life??? Poor Garrett poor Kate hurry Bella.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 35
full circle, wow. man how can parents do that to their kid. i can't wait for the chapter that explains what happened. looking forward to it
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Thank you:)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 35
Talk about repaying a huge favor. How sad that as strong as Garrett is that he can be broken down so small by the people in this world who are supposed to protect him from all of that.
Author's Response:
Yep, Poor Garrett.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 34
I am so glad that Bella got to kick those slime-balls' asses all by herself. I just wish she had done a little more damage like breaking Mike's wrist for grabbing her (I know I am a vendictive bitch). Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 34
Glad she got to kick Mike's ass that is always good
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 34
Man, I am gonna miss Garrett and Kate...
and... *gets choked up*
...and Peterrr....*breaks into uncontrollable loud sobs*
Ok, ok. Love it, she is getting better, and it is showing. I love the strength she is already showing. :)
I am anxious to see what happens next!! :)
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 34
good chapter, although I kinda wanted Bella to break Mike's arm..
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Thank you:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 34
Bella was great fight back. I hope she can stay just as strong. She should go to college and study psycholgy and help victims of crime. As smart as she is she probably could earn a couple of degrees while she is there with her friends. She would also make a great doctor. Since she already read the books.
Author's Response:
All in the plans:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 34
Okay, so Mike, Tyler and Eric are brain damaged. That's the only way that would explain why they did what they did and how they thought they would get away with it.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 33
well it is great that the girls will get the help they need. i cna't believe they never said anything. man that blows me away. i love that bella once again beat garrett. it is great that the family is learning to get to their happy places. seems they are slowly dealing and piecing themselves back together. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 33
well im glad that they are getting better and better every time !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 33
I loved the end where she was just sitting and reading with Carlisle. She is finally getting some of her old self back.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 33
Letting go is the hardest thing to do.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
that was great iam glad renee and charlie are starting to understand what bella needs and it will make them all stronger .
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Thank you:) Big steps for all of them.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 33
*shrugs shoulders* I am really not much of a writer. So I enjoy reading what others write and watching their stories come to life in my imagination.
I dont know if I will ever write my own story, but if I do, you will be the first to know ;)
It will definitely involve me (Siobhan)...
and Peter, of course... *figets in seat a little*
so , it will be AU and non-canon of course.
Now, about your update. :) I LOVE IT!!
I think it was excellent for all of them to go through the relaxation methods. It also did good for the adults to see Bells spar with Garrett to see she could defend herself now, she was healing.
If they had not witnessed that, I really dont think Renee would have let go as easily as she did.
I cant wait to see what you have planned for the clan next! :)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella is going to need a sparing partner after Garrett leaves. Somebody better learn some Judo. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella is doing great. She is learning to be strong again. Her family is also learning that they can be happy. They will be ready when it is time to go to college.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great Chapter.....
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 32
Damn it, I don't want to have faith! I want to see those bitches get their asses kicked severly!!! It is one thing not to say anything when she was taken. It's a whole other thing not to say a word for six years. Bella could have avoided so much pain and torture. She could still be able to give Edward a child if either of those two soulless whores just spoke up! There is a certain circle of hell for people like that.
Okay, I feel a little better now.
Author's Response:
Glad you got your rant down ;)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella has to forgive or it will eat her up with pain and anger. I am glad they are not going to get off that easy but I dont think they have all the years of living with what they new that had to be hard
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 32
*is stunned speechless*
Umm...
*clears throat* Well now...I...Uh...well, its like...I mean... SHIT!
*grumbles under breath* I still think they should come up missing...
I feel no sympathy for those girls what so freaking ever!
I have faith :) There still gonna get it ;)
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
You're lucky I like you... I would not have been so nice.. but it's your story not mine and I will wait to see what you do with them..
Anywho... great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 32
Okay, it may not exactly be Lauren and Jessica's fault he took her but it sure as hell was their fault that they didn't tell anybody who had her. I can't believe Bella is being so forgiving. She almost has a 'what's done is done' attitude.
Author's Response:
She hasn't forgiven them, not by a long shot. But she also realizes that in the end, he is the only one to blame for what he did. She can't let herself get lost in her anger or all her progress is lost. I promise that we are not done with Lauren and Jessica.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 31
Angela really is like a protective mama bear.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 32
The play ground is a war zone. Communication understanding are often lost. Dark times.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 32
well that was a turn of events with jessica and lauren! cant wait till the next chpater keep them comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 31
You have got to love Angela. She seems to sense the scanks and calls them off. I am so glad that Garrett came clean with Bella. It was a little late, but at least she is healed enough that she could forgive.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh please, oh please let Bella kick those bitches' asses..PLEASE????
Author's Response:
lol, I'll think about it:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
Ah... Thats my que :)
*pushes Pete's speed dial*
"Is there something you need to tell me there darlin'?" He says after only one ring.
"Yes, ButterflyBetty says 'Hey!' She asked me to tell you. Is that what you meant?" I answer.
I can hear the smile in his voice as he relies "Well, thats not quite right, didn't she ask to say 'hey' to 'Sweet Pete'? Context can mean alot there sweet cheeks."
"Oh sorry, didn't know I had to be so literal" I snark. "Anyway Pete, I think the next headline of the Forks Examiner is gonna read 'No Leads On Missing Teen Girls, Authorities Stumped'. What do ya think?"
Peter chuckles "Well sweet cheeks, I think that sounds just about right, I already made the call."
"Thanks Peter, I love that ability of yours." I inwardly chuckle knowing what is coming next.
Peter snorts "Its not a damned ability, its a curse! I just know shit, some of the time. Its a pain in the ass really."
I can't hold it any more and bust out laughing "Oh Petey, I know how to get your gizzard!"
He chuckles darkly "Oh darlin', you are in for it now." Then the line goes dead.
Oh shit....
*takes off on a dead run to hide in the nearest crowd*
Loved it BB, I am glad B got to assert herself in fron tof some of her peers, the all needed that. See you next time!!
Author's Response:
Ok, when in the hell are you going to write your own story because I would love to read it!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
Good chapter. Are Lauren and Jessica demented or something?
Author's Response:
Yes, they are. There is a story there.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 31
OH them girls better watch what they do Bella will wipe the floor with them with out breaking a sweat. I cant wait till she beats them down.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 31
got to love Ang and how she said turn and walk away bitches
pe was my favorite so far. i can't wait for varners class. so far so good
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
I don't blame her for being pissed. Garrett should have at least told her about Peter when they headed back to town.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
I think he should of told her about his contacts.
Author's Response:
Yes, he should have.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
Garrett should have been honest. He should have told her before she entered the school that he had support people at the school for her. He expects honesty and he wasn't honest with her.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 28
I loved that part. Edward needed to see and love all of Bella. She needed to know Edward loved all of her. It was a beautiful scene.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) The more I thought about it, the more I felt it was right.