Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
gotta love to over protective brothers :)
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
its funny when to coach called out to cullen i just automatically thinking of edward i will have to get my head around that - great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh nice twist i like to role reversal - great :)
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 17 Jan 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 50
Bella needs closure. She doesn't have to be close to them, but she has to tell them what is on her mind. Carlisle needs to respect her and Edward. They respect him and Esme's relationship.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 50
*squeals loud enough for the entire neighborhood dog population starts barking*
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! *does a touchdown dance*
I was so excited to see this update, and I loved the whole thing!
Carlisle needed a good longue lashing... or some type of lashing...
I can't wait to see how this goes with the 'rents!
*waits with baited breath*
*hugs*
Author's Response:
LOL *covers ears* Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2011 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 50
Good chapter......
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 50
Loved Carlisle and Edwards man to man talk, not to mention Edward standing up for Bella, and taunting Carlisle for dating his sister. A very emotional and well written chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Bella confronts her parents, or Emmett and Jasper find out about the empty condom wrapper.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jan 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 50
i hope it goes well! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 49
Another wonderful chapter. I am glad that Bella won her fight, and I can't wait to see how the rest of the competition goes for them, or if they take Phil up on his offer.
I loved the long anticipated lemon, it was well written and sweet, but best of all realistic. I can't wait to see what happens next, and how long they manage to keep the new development in their relationship from the rest of the family. Please don't keep us all waiting to long for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Hopefully, the next chapter will be up and ready soon:)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 49
finally yay they are sooo cute!!!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 48
a couple hard matches....
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 47
lol had me tricked with the wedding thing lol
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 45
are they planning a fake wedding? lol
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 44
omg too damn funny!!! poor car and es!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 42
lmao!!! gotta love es!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 41
awww yay now can they be happy?
Author's Response:
Yep, kind of ;)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
so sad...poor bella!
Author's Response:
So much to deal with:(
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
i love ed and elizabeth
Author's Response:
Me too!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 38
ugh poor bella!!! she just cant catch a break
Author's Response:
No, she can't :(
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 37
im so glad edwards parents get to stay with them!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks again for all the reviews. I really appreciate them :)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 36
wow what a first day back :(
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 35
so is all that mess really over with?
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 34
wow there lives have really been uprooted havent they? I dont feel bad for their parents how could they do that to them? i love ed and elizabeth!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
how is Aro finding them so fast?
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
wow! its getting really good!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
yay mini lemon! loved it!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
awww in all the craziness she has her big brothers and now the masens
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 29
wow craziness!
Author's Response:
I know, right? Totaly craziness!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
Aro? they better tell someone!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
poor bella :( but ed sr. and elizabeth are cool!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
im so glad theyre not making him leave!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
the parents are coming huh that good or bad?
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
what a bit..!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow hope emmett learned his lesson along with the rest of them!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
so she'll have good days too right?
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow the gang is just as scarry as bella...lol!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
hmmm starting ti see that theyre more thhan just friends/
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
interesting...but in a good way!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It's different than my others but I love this story:)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
so sad
Author's Response:
SO much guilt.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
what/ seriously?
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
i love it so far
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
poor bella! is this story super angsty? i dont mind angst as long as we get a happy ending!
Author's Response:
Angsty??? Yes, but I think you will like it. I only have as few more chapters in this one to write so it's almost complete and then I will start a sequel.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh what a bitch lauren is!!!
Author's Response:
That she is.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
hmmmmmm
Author's Response:
Is that a good hmmmm or a bad hmmmmm:) thank you for reading and reviewing:)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
interesting......
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
i like that we hear from edward in your stories this one is different but i like so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It's told mostly from EPOV.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
i like the idea of bella being the bad girl for a change! cant wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 49
Great chapter, they are so cute together. :)
I'm really glad your doing a sequel, I love this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Jan 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 49
First time is always a little akward, right? lol
Good for them!
Can't believe there's going to be a sequel! *squeals* ;)
Author's Response:
lol, you are so cute:)
Date: 03 Jan 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 49
That was a pretty sweet first time. I think they should take the UCLA deal. They get to fight and get a degree at the same time. You can't get a better deal.
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: 03 Jan 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 49
Great Chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 49
well im happy they took the next step! i think it was cute!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 49
*busts out laughing hysterically at those two*
Oh BB!!!!! That was simply PRICELES!!!
loved it dear :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 48
you're mean why must you end it there :(
Author's Response:
I am pretty mean, aren't I?
Date: 21 Dec 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 48
Great chapter. Happy Holidays!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 48
That was a tough match. Bella should have won it though. I hope Edward did well.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 43
Carlisle and Esme are going to get it for trying to make sure Bella and Edward have safe sex lol
Author's Response:
LOL:)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 48
I will await patiently for your wonderful writing BB :)
I was as giddy as Alice on Black Friday when I saw this update!!!!!!!
This was an excellent chapter! I love this story so much. I cant wait to see who won the match.
I hope its Bells!
I am also anxious to see how Eddie is doing! :)
If I dont get to tell you before it gets here, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your family BB!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you, honey:)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 48
Great Chapter......
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Dec 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 48
well i hope they keep it going ! and go to college! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
You're welcome - now hurry up and write the rest!! :-P
Author's Response:
Working on the next chapter right now...
Date: 14 Dec 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 47
Yeah, that would've been downright hilarious!! :-P I was seriously L.O.L when CxEs pretended to get married - ESPECIALLY 'cause I thought they were serious!! :-P
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Needless to say, "Oh-oh spaghetti-o!!" :-@
Author's Response:
I know, right???
Date: 14 Dec 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh man - if I were not in a library I would be ROTFLMAO!! :-P
Author's Response:
lol, can't be loud in the library so you will have to just laugh inside your own head:)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
UGH!! I just knew the FUCKING VOLTIDOUCHEBAGS were gonna come into it somewhere.... :-@
Author's Response:
lol, well said!! ThankS!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 38
and the twists and turns keep coming. I can't wait to see what this one brings up. I can't imagine the parents getting custody. but I am sure it will cause a lot of tension and make for some interestin twists and turns.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 37
Some well deserved anger, but I hope they all manage to work through it and stick together and help each other.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
oh boy, this probably isn't going to go over very well.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
well that was quick, but i get the feeling the wounds will take a long time to heal. I can't wait to see what new things Forks brings up, especially when Edward and Bella go back to school.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 34
I hope James and Victoris are just more lies, or at least smoke and mirros. I really hope who ever is at the door isn't going to cause even more problems for my favourite family who banters in the face of danger.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
oh boy, this should certainly make things even more interesting. But it's gonna cut into the Edward and Bella time, darn it.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 32
Go Edward. I can't wait to see what the Cullens get up to on the beach, I am sure it won't bode well for the people who have been hiding things from them all.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 31
great almost lemon, very well written and tasteful. I am loving the clash of the parents and siblings. I can't wait to see what they do and say next.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 30
oh group hug. I am reall enjoying how close the characters are and how they are standing up for each other and getting things out in the open. I can't wait to see how they team up against the federal guys next time around.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Never saw this twist coming, but I have to say I love it, and I can't wait to see how it all plays out.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 28
shit I never saw that twist coming I can't wait to find out what i up with Charlie and Jacob, not to mention the guys for school, and mum and dad putting in an appearance,great twist. I can't wait to see where it leads.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad Edward and Bella or together on this one, but I sure hope the others get involved before they end up in over their heads. I loved the mother son conversation, poor Edward is just getting more and more embarassed.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
loved paniced Carlisle, and the meet the parents moments. I can't wait to see what they get up to next.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
highly entertaining. I can't wait to see if Edward Jr and Sr let the couch session slip. I loved the family bonding and banter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
I loved the sudden boxing lesson, and Bella opening up to the others. I can't wait to see what this means for them as a group. I also loved the advances in Bella and Edwards lemon relationship, and the arrival of Dad, I can't wait to see what conversation this sparks.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 23
love them all standing up for each other, and I am lad that Esme now knows a bit about what is going on. I especially love that their feelings for each other are now out in the open, and I can't wait to see what happens when Edward and Esme parents show up. I am sure it will be just as entertaining and well written as what I have read in the last few days.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
loved the reactions to the bruising, but I get the feeling there could be some more on the way, Lauren and Jessica just never learn.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad they both won, and the banter continues to entertain. I can't wait to see the reactions to the bruises
Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
still waiting for them to tell each other, but at least they are noe aware of their feelings for each other. I find the characters banter very entertaining and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
good chapter, Glad to see them standing together against the brothers. But I wonder how long it will take the two of them to figure out that they are in love with each other. I wouldn't think much longer.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I can't wait to see Emmett and Jaspers reaction to the latest couple. But I am glad to see that Esme and Bella came to an understanding. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh boy, talking to the sister. I wonder if Bella should be more scared of Esme then the girls she just faced in the ring. it should be an interesting conversation either way.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
i think it just hit the fan. I can't wait to see what happens after this plot twist
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
smokin hot and smooth move there by Edward, but I have to say my favourite part was Carlisle little talk with Edward right at the end of the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, I am so glad I have so many chapters to catch up on, I don't think I would have handled the wait between the last few chapters that well.