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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

sometimes the line between best friend and lover are crossed but it is never easy to cross back. bella and jasper spent a lot of time stumbling back and forth over that line and as such their need for eachother and feeling for eachother will forever be blurred. it is sad that such a strong friendship has to wither but it is the only way for these two to move on.

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I understand Bella's pain at seeing her two best friends fall in love and needing to get herself of the picture. Bella and Jasper crossed a threshold in their friendship by becoming casual sex partners and Alice coming in picture really forced them to see those feelings weren't true love, but love still the same. I hope Bella finds her HEA with Edward and Jasper lets that part of her go because they need to be friends.

I don't generally read stories with a Jasper/Bella pairing, but I was intrigued by your summary to see how he ended up with Alice and how Edward was involved. I past it three times before clicking it. I am glad that I did. It was very heartbreakingly real story. Have a good day!

Reviewer: Sandrai86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

i want more out of this... i want to know if she went back or went with Edward.. How did everything go between the two of them there on the porch? Did Jasper propose to Alice? Did he feel any regret? Anyways, i totally loved it!

Reviewer: Emma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your writing is amazing :D I really enjoyed this :D

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