[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
Finally Jasper seem interested in his family. I was worried about him there for awhile.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
what a cliffy. i am glad allstair didn't get away with hurting bella. i am hoping jasper shots allstair cause otherwise he will keep being a pain in her side. he needs to be dealt with once and for all. then they need to get out of town with kate to keep her safe from her asshole of a father. can't wait to see what happens next. love it
have a good visit with your sister
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
You are so bad. Cliffie! Yes Let Jasper shoot him dead. Only way to get rid of a rat.Boy Ms Tanya just keeps on giving! She and James should have died together. Best solution to everyone's problems.
have a good visit with your sister.
Great story.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 24
Woooooo!!!!! Go Jasper!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bravo Jasper for standing up for Bella, showing us who you are in this story (moral fortitude), and for calling Bella his sister. Way to come out of the background in the story.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yes! Go Jazz! Gotta love that guy! Thanks for the update! :~)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad Jasper to the rescue. Something else is going on here. Have a nice visit.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
OH SNAP! I really loved this so much! I hope you enjoy your time with your sister :) Take your time updating :)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
i would have been uber pissed with you if you hadn't written Jasper coming in to save the day (hopefully)
Thanks!
Can't wait for more!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well... that was exciting and scary. I'm so glad someone was at home to help her. Excellent chapter... enjoy your visit, update when you can!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the suspense is killing me though.
please update soon.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
Alistair is so awful! Thank goodness for Jasper.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank goodness Jasper saved Bella from being raped!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
i knew his ass wasnt gone for good..grrrrrrrrr
Date: 12 Feb 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh wow, it sounds like life is pretty scary for them right now! It's really creepy that someone's been in Kate's room. And what is Alistair doing in England? What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope you update soon! Good chapter.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
Way to leave us hanging. ha ha Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
UR SO EVIL BUT I REALLY LIKED IT.
KEEP IT UP.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2011 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
utoh.. AListar bad as James..
Date: 11 Feb 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope she kicks his ass then I won't hate you I promise
Date: 11 Feb 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
I did not see that one coming. I like it when Edward called James an asshole.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
the devil has resurfaced. wonder if he is working for james. oh i just want them to be able to get to the boat and get to spain and then head home. bella sure does think of all things, such a smart women. i am also glad they listen to kate and put her in their room before someone took her. love it
Date: 11 Feb 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 23
Alistair is working for James!?
Date: 11 Feb 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
OH NO! I don't hate you, I could never do that :) But, I am now super worried now!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
well, goodness gracious. I hope the man was Edward or Eleazar keeping watch.
SOmeone needed to ver hear that bullshit and James needs to have his head cut off!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
You said it. "creepy!" Poor Kate. I'm really looking forward to what happens next. How can they make James dissapear? :0)
Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think I always suspected James only because he usually is the bad guy. ha ha Well now that mystery is solved. :0) I love hearing that Bella is such a hands on mother. I knew she would be. :0)
Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
Poor little thing, none of this is her fault. It's always the children who suffer.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Is she going to tell Edward. Quess I missed the hints. Bella isn't really one to not voice her opinions, so I'd be surprised if she doesn't say something.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
That creepy James is sneaking into Kates bedroom at night? I agree that is beyond creepy.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope the man in her bedroom was a protector!? This story has a life of it's own... leave it to Jessica to make trouble.
Great chapter!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
poor Kate...she does not deserve the ire of James. I hope the man in Kate's room is a guard assigned by Edward to watch over her. The sooner the better that they get out of London and back to the vineyard. I can't understand how James threw the 'hidding' of Kate in Edwards face so easily, but that just seems par for his course. Thanks for the update - love this story!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
Very Creepy, poor little girl : (
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
Yikes!!! Very creepy.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Kate, I hope James dont hurt her and I hope the man is a bodyguard for her.
on a side wish, I hope Alice does become pregant
Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my. Well, well sounds like time to hire guards.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
I dont understand why Edward does not go to court and tell them what he said???
I feel it is James that needs to disappear I am sure between all of them they can feed him to the fishes or what ever lives in the London river.
Please, please, please make him disappear. You have Emmett and Jasper i am sure that they could come up with something.
I really do hope Edward take the family on a holiday or he can escort Kate to Bella's parents and then return for Bella and Phillip when he is a little older.
Loving the story, cant wait for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
OH SNAP! That scares me so much! I hope they figure out something to do with James, he creeps me out! Cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
I LOVE IT.COULD YOU ADD MORE INTERACTION BETWEEN ISABELLA AND EDWARD!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
i am hoping the man is guarding her and not watching her in a creepy way. edward needs to take them back to france or go to his parents home and get away from james. too bad he can't just off him. he so needs to be 6 feet under. he just threaten not only bella but kate. i would fear for both their safety. i hope they do the right thing. too bad it seems bella might not be able to continue to be friendly with victoriia. seems she needs all the friends she can get. love it
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
i feel sos orry for Victoria. She has always been nice to bella. I feel for her that her husband couldn't keep it in his pants and i hope victoria isn't made a fool of. she doesn't deserve that.
i am glad bella is so imeresed in the kids lives. she is a good mother. i am glad she doesn't take crap from the snobs. i love that edward accepts her and doesn't change her. i hope they have more kids. loving it
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 22
omg.....they have to get her away from him
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh gosh! James! I'm scared now.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward should have bashed his head in a few more times I really don't like James he's so creepy! Loved the chapter though and wow that was a quick update.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward should go to the royal court about James threats and have him punished. As the wronged party he should have a say in how James is dealt with.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
How about hiring security. First of all Bella and Rose were dumb. They should move to france where she has people who love her.
No point in dealing with british soceity who will harm them.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
I would of put money on Jasper being the father ..Glad I didnt bet the farm on that one .lol
I'm glad for once that Victoria is not a bad person. it gets predictable in most stories that she will be the bd guy, so i am glad for your twist on it.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder if Edward will figure out the truth in the next chapter?! I really look forward to it. Victoria might have to stay silent but Bella doesn't need to....
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well, I guess James is about to get busted...but is Edward going to notice?? How could he not...right? I hope Victoria is sane enough to go back and call James on his infidelity. Looking forward to see what you have in store for us - great job and thank you.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
Can not wait to see Edwards reaction to James being Kate's Father.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
WOW! I can't wait to see what Edward's response will be when he realizes that James is Kate's father! So really, it should be James and Victoria raising Kate, not the Cullens. Because they have no blood tie to her at all. I wonder if James will take her? Thanks for the update!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well, if James walked in, I'm betting Edward's right behind him. And Edward is very observant....so I'm betting he's gonna figure it out pretty soon, too. And I have to wonder if HE will stay as silent as the ladies. And if James will realise the gig's up and that Kate's his biological daughter.
In other words, things could get rather dicey reeeeeeal quickly!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Holy crow I did not expect that!! Great here comes drama!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 21
the RAT!!! this was great! oh my word - edward will kill him or will he?
Date: 05 Feb 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
I wondered if it was James... I try not to speculate too much in stories. I'd rather be surprised.
I wonder what Edward will do when he figures it out?
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it - it is sad how difficult life was back then.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
lovely - very well written!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad to have the reveal. I am looking forward to more.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
poor alice - I hope that Jasper is faithfull
Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
really took me by surprise!!!!!!!
i like it a lot!!!!!!!!
please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, did not see that one coming at all.
Thanks for letting us know how it is now, I wonder what Edward will say???
I dont think that is going to go down to well.
Thank you for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh gosh! That's horrible. James cheating on Victoria.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Interesting I thought of Jasper as well. Well you stinker. Okay great story.. Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh go Isabella!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
OH MY GOSH! That was INCREDIBLE! I really loved this chapter so much! I was shocked to find that out (but won't say what it is, just in case someone reads the reviews before reading the chapter, which is something I have done before ;) oops)! I wonder if Isabella will tell Edward about this? I cannot wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
I did not see it coming that James was Kates father. OMG, Edward is going to figure it out now that they are all in the same room.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow! So the truth comes out. I didn't see it coming that James was the father. I guess I didn't think about him since he wasn't mentioned much. I did kind of wonder about Jasper, but I hoped it wasn't him. I thought it must be someone Edward knew. I wonder if James knows that Kate is his daughter.
I can't wait to read more! This is one of my favorite stories!!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
wow didn't pick that one up. Well Victoria may stay silent, but what about Edward......hummmm
Date: 05 Feb 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
I mean wow! Carmen really wanted to bring this to a head and I can only dream of what Edward will think once he gets a look at all three together in the same room.
Just wow and ready for the next update!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter
Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
very bad Edward
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter! I'm so happy baby Philip is here and Bella is ok. Poor Edward I can just picture how nervous he was. :0)
Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
i dont kno why but i think the father of kate will come
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Such a short chapter... it was a tease!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
I have a bad feeling that now that the whole family is attached to Kate her real father will come for her.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
I ADORED THE CHAPTER.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, that was amazing! Isabella is right, every pregnancy is different, so Edward shouldn't worry so much. I cannot wait to see what this baby is ;)
Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow what an awesome story. Normally I'm usually flipping thru a story getting to the good parts but your whole story is the good part. I love how you don't waste time on filler things. And now I'm at chapter 20 and disappointed that i have to wait for the next update. Lol
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Best Part:
He noticed that his office door opened slowly, if not awkwardly, and a small head with blonde curls popped in. Kate smiled and giggled while Edward simply raised his eyebrows. He nodded and Kate hopped inside while leaving the door hang ajar. She placed herself on the floor, holding her rag doll Heidi, and began to play.
This was a common occurrence and Edward realized that he enjoyed the company that his ward provided. She was company but never distracted him from his work. A few moments passed before Carmen's voiced sounded in the hallway.
"Miss Kate!" Kate's eyes grew wide. She then hopped up from where she sat with her doll and bolted to where Edward was. She pushed his legs out of the way and hid underneath his desk. Edward found this action very humorous. He laughed causing Kate to give him an adorably sharp look as she pressed her pointer finger to her lips.
"Shhh." Kate breathed. A moment later, Carmen was standing in the doorway looking hassled.
"Mr. Cullen, have you seen Kate? She needs to practice her piano and she ran from the nursery when my back was turned." Carmen asked. Edward smiled slightly and just shrugged his shoulders.
"No, I haven't seen her." At that, Kate giggled. Edward shot her a look that said to be quiet, which only made her giggle harder. She was all smiles. Carmen cocked her head to the side and gave him a look of disbelief. She had heard Kate giggle.
"Really?"
"Really." Edward gave her the puppy dog eyes that made her narrow her eyes. She then mouthed ten minutes before walking off and into the hallway. He then pushed his chair farther away from his desk, held out his hands and Kate jumped into them and into his lap.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Kate seems very cute. I hope it doesn't make her a "brat" :0) It was fun seeing how she's become a part of the family already.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
I just had to stop my reading of your story to Penn this review. Whoever wrote that terrible review telling you, you were wasting your time writing this story is an idiot. There I said it. I wanted to say something else but I won't. You are a very talented writer and feel blessed to have stumbled upon your story. I love period stories and although it's not wholly accurate, accuracy isn't what really draws me in. The plot and how well it's written does and yours is one hell of a story. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
i am thrilled that kate is happy and bringing happiness to edward and bella. seems she fits in well with them and has made a drastic difference. i am loving it
Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Very sweet chapter. I'm glad Kate has fit right into their family. I can't wait to see how they will be with their own child!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love Edward the father. It becomes him.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awwwwww! Kate is just so adorable!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
awww such a cute moment between those three update soon
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Kate is sweet! I hope she doesn't turn into an evil monster when she grows up.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
I so glad Kate fit in the family so well. Lovely (but short) chapter. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
i love how isabella took control and welcomed kate. i have a feeling bella and kate are going to get along just great. i see them having a great relationship. i am worried as to who her daddy is. i am hoping it is not anyone in edward's family. it seems that esme is a little more accepting of bella by how welcoming she is with kate even thought the little girl is not hers. poor alice i hope things work out for her soon. it seems might be interesting with edwards parents being so close since bella will nto be going to their home. and they want to be around for the birth. i still love how open and no hold bar that bella is. great story. looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thank goodness that Bella did something so Kate wouldnt be scared. She is a child and has no idea what happened or what is going on.