Date: 27 Dec 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it so much. I wonder if Edward will ever tell Bella the truth? What about Tanya's daughter, what is going on with her?
Author's Response:
Next chapter...you will learn more about Kate
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved the moment between Bella and her dad. It was so sweet.
It sounds like Isabella is in some major denial about being pregnant! I wonder what Edward will think of this news?
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wondered about the ages. Thanks
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Tanya had long term effects on many people.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
All for second chances but I think she will go after Edward. Sometimes a leopard never changes his spots. And Alastair will be out for revenge.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
No love it. Don't care if it's historically accurate. It's too much fun the way it is.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Calm before the storm
Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
It would be much easier if they married and she got out of the house.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
However, I think Bella is a little more forward than most, is it the French?
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
But can she hold off. Don't think so.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Did a great job. Him too.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Got my curiosity up.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really hope you update this year, I really want to see the wedding reception and their first night. And I hope she`s with child.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
wedding time. bella knows exactly what she wants and is thrilled. i am glad she is so mindset and i believe edward loves that about her. esme not so much
so it seems they are getting married just in time so they can announce the new arrival. oh i bet esme will just be thrilled.
can't wait for more of the wedding. love the story
Date: 15 Dec 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope Bella is pregnant!!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the update. I look forward to the wedding... I wonder if that is when Bella finds out about Tanya, hmmm before or after the vows?
Happy holidays to you and your family... I hope for more in the new year!
Author's Response:
I should have put this in my A/N but I forgot. I will not be writing the wedding scene. Mainly because I hate writing weddings, its boring and secondly weddings of that time were different and I really don't want to make a mistake. That and it would take more research than I have time for. That and I want to get on with the story line. There are a few chapters that NEED to happen before another "plot line", I guess you could call it, comes into affect.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Please update soon, I really like you story. I can't wait for the next one. :)
Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, that was amazing! I really love it so much :) I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
Date: 15 Dec 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
I still think it's a MAJOR mistake for Edward not to have told Bella about Tanya...and the fact that he was married before! I have a feeling things are going to be less than pleasant when Bella and her parents find out.
Author's Response:
It is a major mistake for Edward to leave out that bit of information.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
That was unexpected... intense and I guess it's now safe to see they are at least courting each other. Much to Monsieur Yorkie's chagrin I am sure.
She is strong willed and so is he. They both like to tease, tempt and play, I guess they have found their matches. However such strong personalities might not always see eye to eye.
What will Charles say? What will happen now?
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward's efforts to seem subtle about his intentions were poor and useless. The Swan's had discussed it and kind of figured it out before he even got the chance to. Not that anyone minded much. Still there are certain "guidelines" that must be followed, as closely as possible, especially if it is with these two.
They will see each other at the dance and she is saving the waltz for him!!!! That will surely leave people open mouthed and in shock. Can't wait for it.
Author's Response:
Um...about those "guidelines" that they should follow.....they kind of don't, but its part of the plot line that they don't
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
i like that you jumped throught the "filler parts"!!!! Thanks!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the chapter! That's so sad about Alice and Jasper. Hopefully they'll be able to fix things between them.
Can't wait to read more! Especially about Edward and Isabella.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
I know that not telling Bella about Tanya is going to bite Edward in the a$$! I hope Alice and Jazz can work it out. Thanks for the update.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter, and I really want to see more of Isabella and the Cullens Ladies. Go Isabella!!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much :) I cannot wait to find out more! That was shocking, but amazing. Only one minor mistake, "Divorce was something the scarcely happened and if it wasn't for Henry the VII,", it should be Henry VIII (Henry the 8th, not Henry the 7th). Anyway, keep up the great work :)
Author's Response:
I knew it was Henry the 8th. That must have been a typo that I didn't catch.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
You are truly doing a great job. I am glad I can read this story with ease. Great story BTW.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hmmm, good chap. Didn't expect Ali to be the barren one. Thought it would be Rose.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
wow alice has alot to deal with. seven years. i am hoping tanya's baby is not jasper's. got to wonder cause we still do not know who daddy is. i wonder why japer and alice are not secure with how they feel for each other. i hope they talk before it is too late for them. seems they started out so strong but not being open or being afraid of what is said is a sad thing and is harming them. too funny about bella saying something about esme hat. but edward should have known. bella is an outspoken one. i sure how he is proud about it and doesn't try to change ehr cause that could be his downfall. seemed when he was talking with carlisle he was second guessing about the people from london liking her. i didn't think he cared about what they thought. but it seems he may since he is the one who could be producing an heir. edward tred lightly and do not lose the best thing that has entered your life. love it
Author's Response:
Yes, I know that you all don't know who the baby daddy is yet but I can assure you that it is not Jasper. I wouldn't do that to Edward or Alice. The reason that Jasper is doubting his marriage is because he truly thought that Tanya and Edward had what Alice and himself did, then learning that Tanya cheated on Edward makes Jasper question everything he and Alice has. Alice is worried because Jasper has a duty not only to his family but to society as well. She is terrified that he would leave her for someone who can produce an heir.
The hat thing was just an idea I had right before I started this chapter and it was something Bella would do.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
hahaha..I love that Maria was the one to do it!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well, they both actually deserved each other, however, he began abusing her~ which is never ok! Maybe Maria can make the most of this last chance and redeem herself?
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
i was proud of Maria and was glad she seem to stick up for her cousin. i think she truly realize alstair is a pig and wanted nothing more to do with him and defentiely bella wanted nothing to do with him. i am hoping she gets a second chance and someone nice to love her. i am hoping she stays out of bella life with edward and has kearned not to go after bella's men. she hopefully learned that message loud and clear. I am glad the men got there also before anything got to out of hand for all of them. alstair needs to be buried in the back yard cause i do not think he will go away otherwise. love it
Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Maria is a bitch, but I suppose everyone is redeemable. Except for Alistair maybe! It's too bad they didn't kill him.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
You are definitely NOT wasting your time and energy. I love this story!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
I totally agree with you, but I can`t wait for the wedding.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hey, I think you should say FUCK YOU for those people who said that you are waisting your time. I really like your story and am gratefull that you take your time to write. So thanks!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
Maria didn't deserve a beating for telling the truth... great chapter. Let see if she becomes a better person for it.
I'll try to not be spoiled with 3 updates so close together. Thanks.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
i think im starting to like Maria now, its about time they got rid of Alistair! i hope Bellas ok. good work and wow you must be working into overdrive with all the updates you've given us this week! ;-)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much :) I know I said I really didn't like Maria, but no one deserves to be treated like that, so good for her! i am so happy for the upcoming wedding :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
I wouldn't leave her alone with Edward. Not that he would do anything but I wouldn't want her mauling him. It is one thing to give someone another chance but different to set yourself up to be hurt again.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ok, after this chapter I don't hate Maria as much. I actually feel bad for her. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
she is a bitch right now, but I think that she is so engulfed by her own guilt over what she did to Bella that she is hurting so badly. Also, the fact that the man that she stole is such a bastard must be devistating to her! She obviously loves or loved him.
Great chapter!!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bella has a temper, and a smart mouth. She doesn't take things, not even from her parents. She is unique and strong, I like her.
Renee, I still don't know, she wants to be a good mother, guide her daughter to be a perfect lady, she hasn't been able to do so. Her daughter seems to be having different ideas...
What could have brought Edward's dinner invitation? Not that I'm complaining...
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Edward wasn't happy with the news he received in the letters from home. No one there expected him to be. They all knew he would be upset and would need time and lots of convincing on their part. Esme's letter was amazing, she knows her son really well, even after time and across the distance.
Rosalie said she always gets what she wants. Does that mean she knows Edward will cave? Give his blessing and go to the wedding? Maybe...
However, that might be placed on hold since someone just stormed into the room and Edward's life.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Lol I'd probably be one of the readers who can't understand the "old timey dialect" ur writing is awesome and this is not a waste of time!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
You are most definately NOT wasting your time... I love this story. I'll be nice and not comment further.
I love how Bella is disappointed that she didn't get a proper proposal... I hope Edward tries to make it up to her. ;-)
Thanks for another update... I'll try not to be too spoiled.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story!!!!!!! You are not wasting your time and energy!!!!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, that was incredible :) I really loved this chapter! I am so happy that Maria isn't going to spill the beans. I cannot wait to see what happens next :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
I LOVE THIS STORY - YOU KNOW THAT! I PIMPED IT ON MY STORY AND I WILL DO SO AGAIN!!! Don't worry about it - I get reviews like that too. I've learned to reply with the words "thank you for your honest review" !
Loved this chapter Renee is priceless!
Author's Response:
Yes, I know I have many people who love my story, more than I ever expected. I plan finishing this story, which at the moment is looking to be around 25 chapters. I thank you for your support and everyone else's support.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
I second that - OH. MY. GOD.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this so far and cant wait for the rest it is great !!!! ♥
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Personally I like the story, although I think I have seen this in a movie. Perhaps something like it.
The story is good and I agree people today would not understand the ENGLISH of that day and time and I do not read or speak French.
SO FORGE ON.
Author's Response:
Just wondering..What movie have you seen this in? I might rent it and watch it.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think if he ej.. prior to pull out, they are making Babies.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
I like your story. If someone does not like it, they should not 'waste their time' reading it. Thanks for the update. :~)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
we really dont mind being spoiled loving the story also
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
You're not wasting anything as far as I'm concerned. I'm quite enjoying the story.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
I believe you have a good story here. I just have one suggestion, which I have given to my two children so please do not take offense. Watch the spelling of your words - a belt is worn around the waist, you do not waste your time. Difiantly is not definitely, which I think is the word you really wanted to you. These misspellings are the only things I feel detract from the story, otherwise it is really good.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well, I for one really like your story and there is always that little x in the corner for those that don't! One tiny little thing: waist (it's just above you hips) waste (no, you're not wasting your time!) Please keep writing.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
I find your story rather amusing!!
I don't think that you are wasting your time but you should really use spell check. It is a helpful tool. There are also online dictionaries that are available when needed. Proper spelling and grammar make the story better and easier to read.
Bella is nothing like Maria. Maria had sex with a man that was in a relationship with her own cousin. She is a dirty trollop. Bella had sex with the man she loved and intended to marry. I hope that Edward can convince her.
Best Parts:
"We're engaged!" Edward shouted and then his eyes grew wide only seconds after the words left his lips.
"We are engaged to be married." Edward again blurted out.
What the hell! Last time I checked, there was no "proposal"! Isabella thought to herself as she pinched Edward's side.
"Ouch!" He exclaimed silently. "I'm just trying to justify-" He stopped speaking the moment he saw the look on her face.
To respond to his arrogant demeanor, she punched him the in gut.
"That was a glimpse of marriage. Dear." She went into the parlor, leaving Edward to rub the place where she punched him.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
I thinks its a fantastic story. Your definitely not wasting your time. Thanks, for another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
hell no you are not wasting your time. i so love the story. i totally think those girls screwed around just as much as the guys. maybe not the words or at tleast we didn't hear them. but i think it all went down and if you didn't see it doesn't mean it wasn't happening.
i really love bella being feisty, it suits her. the family dynamic is great love it. ahh i am hoping maria gets put in her place. i so love it that renee and charlotte are so accepting in a way of what has happened between bella and edward. they do love each other and will be married. not like they are sleeping with someone else's partner. keep writing. i'll keep passing your story along to my firnds. keep on keeping on. love it
Author's Response:
Thanks. I really needed to hear that. And I plan to keep on writing.
Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Uh oh, I have a feeling Maria's going to cause even more trouble now. That girl seriously needs to just go away.
Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG is correct. i wouldn't want her seeing my man in all his gloryness. maria already wants him. bella needs to just lay her out. i wonder if maria will go running to charlie and renee as to what she saw edward and bella doing. man oh man he should have kept it in his pants.
love it and can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
i am so loving bella's character. she is so full of life. i love when she is angry. she has a lot of passion
it would be alot to keep up with bella as her chambermaid. she would keep you on your toes.
love it
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
man renee is a spit fire and bella takes after her. so loving it
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah, they probably should have locked the door...
Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
I guess they didnt' think to lock the door! Oops... I wonder what the fallout will be. Thanks for the quick update.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
uh oh. is she gonna get pregnant now. loved the chapter. and doesn't maria know how to knock?!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Your last line says it all!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
How could they be so stupid?! With Maria and Allister in the house?
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
OH MY GOD! its a cliffy!!! i need more! damn this story is AMAZING! i cant believe Maria caught them! eek! good job! cant wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Ironic, don't you think?
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it so much! What will Maria say? Hehe. I wonder what Emmett's problem is and why Alice is a little distant?
Author's Response:
I dropped a hint at why Alice is distant. Did you catch it?
Author's Response:
I dropped a hint at why Alice is distant. Did you catch it?
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it so much. I know Maria deserved much more than what Bella did, but I agree with Bella, she doesn't need to stoop to her level. Cannot wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hum, picking out fabric without an engagement!!!! Omen you thing?
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope her hateful cousin leaves soon! Great chapter
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Marie & Alistair get what they deserve! I think it will be a difficult visit for them!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is back to being proper! And Bella is a handful! Loving it!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
WOW - didn't expect the sex scene so quickly! Great story!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward's fantasy was HOT! Loving this courtship!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loving it! SO glad hat Edward is staying for dinner!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm anxious about Alastair... I think he will be causing a lot of trouble, Marie too. Thanks for the update.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the first meeting of Edward & Bella --- she seems like a fiesty one!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:00 AM Title: Prologue
Poor Edward - his life sucks right now! Great story!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
ok...so not happy with the fact that the bitch hit bella and nothing happened to her.....I mean...really??????? Words are always great but one two punch to the face is much better if you ask me....I mean seriously....that was bullshit!
The Cullen's will hopefully love her!
I adore the little cousins.....they are great!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter! I'm glad Bella was able to get her digs in to Maria. Can't wait to read more!