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Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2018 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

omg this was just perfect but lovebox?? lol i cracked up at that. i want the epi!!! please say its coming. i need to know how this ends!!!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

So will her panties still be wet from Carlise *shakes head* or will she compare Edward to teenage husband Jacob again?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

If Carlisle was 15 when Esme got pregnant and 16 he was born is Emmett really the older brother? I'm a timeline freak sorry. ;-) these two a pretty mess btw.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

I don't think Edward was a jackass at all. She should have told him the truth. This is on her. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

I find Bella confusing and exhausting but I am curious to the end. Also I hope to read what happened to Edward who has been hurt as well. Since Bella over heard that why doesn't she seek to know? She's a little like Renee no?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

So those therapist and psychiatrist in Forks were hacks. Bella truly needs help and it feels beyond your teenage husband leaving you, much more. Perhaps it was the catalyst to something greater. Beyond Edward's kindess and affection he should ask his dad for a referral. Co-dependency is not a good way to find love. Who knew Jake had this kind of power? is this a HEA in the end?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well Bella is judgemental and rude in is chapter. JS

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

How could Edwards parents be married when he was conceived and born when Carlisle was younger than Esme thought? I mean Carlisle wasn't even there when he was born, he was only 16. 

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

Okay, um, now your saying Emmett isn't his brother but his realtor but in the last chapter you had stated that his realtor was someone else and in a previous chapter you stated Emmett was his big brother which also threw me for a flip. 

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm just a little confused with this chapter and something doesn't make sense. How can Emmett be Edwards BIG brother? Carlisle & Esme had Edward when Carlisle was younger, younger than Esme even knew. So how can Edward have a big brother when Carlisle barley told Esme his true age when she found out she was pregnant with Edward? 

Just thought that I might point that out. 

Other than that, I'm enjoying your story. Which is not the only one I have read and commented on.

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

It was good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2015 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bella is so rude. Edward is so kind and she insults him. Yes he has a different lifestyle and isn't a frumpy person like her, but he is kind. She needs to learn to say thank you and not judge.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

wow i was hoping there was more i hope you continue with this asap ;) btw when she 'nailed' him 'hehe' i'm surprised he didn't get an infection ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

OMG!!! i've never read a story or heard of that happening before it sounds really painful ;)

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh lord, she's an idiot....so what does that make him???

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

She's annoying

Reviewer: Gidget922 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

this story was beyong words  thank you

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

Enjoyed the second time. Hope the epilogue happens some day. Meg

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

i enjoyed this story so much. looking forward to the epilogue.

Reviewer: kerricullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

great

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

that sucked, sorry I love the story but that was just mean

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

if sex was what kept me coming back then I would have stopped early on when you implied there might not be any at all

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

communication is really a good thing

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

great start

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

I truly enjoyed this story immensely and love your talent for telling a story.  Writing a story is hard enough but having the talent to put the emotion that you had to for your Bella is even more daunting.  I just am worried tho that this and your other stories have been maybe put on hiatus or something cause when there was no epi to this like you had mentioned I went and looked at your profile and your other stories havent had any updates either since April.  Just curious cause they seem very interresting but Id be sad to start them with no knowledge if they will be completed or not.  Hopefully all is well and you will be able to get back to writing on them soon because you have a great storytelling talent and I enjoyed every minute of it.

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

That was so cute! Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

Fun chapter!  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well Esme is a kick in the ass, isn't she?  :)  But I think she made Bella question her sex life with Edward, like Bella needs to be questioning something else about her relationship with E. 'Not'  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

Yay, they got the house. I think Bella should just ask Edward to marry her, maybe even on his B-day. I think it's logical since he seems convinced that she never wants to get married again, and he's sooo wrong!  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

Are you kidding me? I couldn't help it, I had to laugh a little bit.  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awww, this just gets better and better, and I love getting inside Edward's head...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well I guess now it's Edward's turn to feel scared and vulnerable...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh crap. I had a bad feeling Edward was going to show up and something bad would happen. Now Bella better go straighten him out!  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

I can't wait to see how this goes, and I hope Edward understands why she had to get the closure she needs before taking that leap of faith with him. I just hope he isn't angry with her for not telling him why she really went to Forks. I'm still dying to know what's in Edward's past.  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

I wonder what two things Bella has to do. I have a few ideas, but I'm not sure, so I'll keep them to myself.  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

These two are driving me bat shit crazy! But in a good way.  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ok, I know it's easier said than done when both parties have been deeply hurt in the past, but E/B really need to step up and talk to each other. They need to sit down and have an open and honest conversation and lay both their cards on the table.  They are both old enough to know that sometimes you have to put yourself out there and take a chance, especially if you want to find any happiness. Forgive me but Bella is driving me crazy, jumping to all the conclusions and assumptions she does, she doesn't know what Edward is thinking. I do think though, that each of them has given hints as to their feelings. To answer your question: I think Carlisle just wants to see his son happy, and he really likes Bella and thinks that she would be good for Edward. Oh, and I can't wait to find out what happened in Edward's last relationship.  xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

I just love your Edward, he's so sweet.  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying reading your story. :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, I love your Edward, he's so sweet and wonderful, and too good to be true. I want one. :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh, I love the beginning of your story. I can't wait to read more.  :)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

BRAVO! BRAVO!  i absolutely loved ur story... thanks for sharing... off to check out ur others... :)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 19

suspense is killing me... it could be one of 2 things... im leaning more toward one than the other but u never know... lol

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

WOW!!! i want to buy a 20 million dollar vacation home!!! pls come run me over... lmao i hate that the end is a couple of chapters away... i'm gonna miss these guys...

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

loved esme... gonna catch the last 3 chapters after some shut eye an homework... :)/:( only 3 more to go...sad sad sad, but all good things must come to an end i suppose... i have really enjoyed this story. thx again for sharing

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

that has to suck... :) poor peen

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 14

that backseat slut-bag! James needs to be shot with shit and killed for stinking!!!

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

yay, they found their home!!! :)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

wow, now that's commitment... lol i guess if u know what u want... go get it tiger... :)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

still here... moving onto next chapter...  

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

perfect perfect perfect...  a lot of other stories have Bella being the one to always run first... nice change of pace. this is soooo good, and getting better... :)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm dying to know his past heartache... :)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

<3 it...

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

i passed out reading chap 5, and got up the first time just to continue this story instead of passing back out... that may not seem as much to you, but i love sleep... :) just saying :)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

:( poor Edward... but i know how she feels... its better to just avoid situations that will end up leaving one hurt...

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

AWESOME!!! thats what i think... yeah they're moving fast slowly... but thats what people who know what they want do... right; go for it?...

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

being the pedestrian victim of a vehicular hit an run is starting to look very promising... :) moving onto chap3...

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

ok midnightlove87... i'll message u my address and u can come run me over an maybe i'll find my EC... :) I am moving on to chap 2... cant wait to see what plays out in ur story... :) 

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderfully done story. I would like to request a sequel!!!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

I like the story...but I'd like to know why Edward is so attached to her...what's his back story??

Reviewer: moewerts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

i freaking love that song and and so excited about your story...

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

I loved this story very much and I really hope you decide to do more maybe a couple future takes thanks for sharing this with us and see you next update......

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 20

I just came accross this fic and read it all today. Another SUPERIOR fic!!!!!!

I truley hope you decide to do a sequal to this fic;)

 

xxxxxxxxxx,

 

Jo

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

squeeeeeeeee i loved it!!!! it was so cool she asked him :) awwwwww

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 20

That was Beautiful and very tearing happiness..   The whole story is wonderful..  I ' m sad it coming to a close..   I will go read your others stories.  your a wonderful writer.   :)Leona

 

ps. please if you every do a squeal you have to let me know.. 

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm pretty sure in a previous chapter when Bella and Edward went to the gala where she drank a little too much and they had a fight about sex that Emmett was mentioned in that chapter as Edward's brother. In this chapter he is mentioned as a friend and real estate agent when I thought Gerard was the real estate agent. Am I wrong?

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

Is she going to ask him to marry her?  Because that the only thing she can do to get him to marry her with out saying I want to marry you.   Awesome story..   But why is Bella so set on now marrying Edward? Does she not want to at least wait a bit.  She can say Edward before we have kids. I want to marry you.  So when your ready ask..  Because this is not right..  She should have done it before he did all this for her..  So wrong.  Maybe I not getting it right.  But she becoming a Bitch.  Her way or the high way..  Not right..  So please let me know if I am off track?  I could read this again and have a different view.  it just how you start reading it.  but Like I said your story is wonderful.  full of happiness andlaughter and sad.  This got to be base on part of your life..    Have a great night Leona

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

I understand that Bella has been severely hurt and that it takes time to heal and I hope that eventually she will for herself, not because I want her w/Edward. My problem w/Bella is that she seems to make judgements agaist Edward just b/c he's rich. If she has such a problem w/his wealth then I think that she should save herself and Edward the hardship and just leave him alone. Everytime he turns around she's making some sarcastic comment about him being pretentious or something like that. I mean does he turn around and talk about her from not having money...no. I think she should pay him the same respect.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was Beautiful chapter..  I love Esma..  hehe..  And I do know it like to go to a auction.  If you like it hard not to bid.  hehe.  I spent a lot a money at one..  My family almost did not let me go to another.  hehe. 

Beauitful story..   :)Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

Is this your life..  Because it a beautiful story..   and you have to taken some stuff from life.  I always say a good Auther puts the soul into the story.  Not all it is them but some..  which makes the story AWESOME.. 

And that was mean..  I have a slip and I got hurt..  that not cool..  lol but still funny if it not you.. 

:) Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

There she goes running again..  or maybe.  I will find out in a min.  I only have 4 more to catch up too..  I just want to tell you that this a beautiful story.   :) Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yes I would be the same way.  and so would Bella,  She lied to him, she should have told him..  that was her fault that this turn out the way.  DON'T EVER LIE..  it will DESTROY A RELATIONSHIP faster then you can turn a arond.      :)Leona

 

Oh I frigging love this story..  awesome.. 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

Ha, I love how he is severly injured until he find out she doesn't mind doing it again, then he magically heals to be able to perform...Men!

Loved it!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

oh, I can't believe they finally did it and she sliced his dick open...talk about bad luck, I hope Eddie Jr. recovers soon :)

Also glad she got some of her questions answered, but this highlights how little they still know each other, I can't wait for them to move in and learn more.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

Whoa, probably not the right time to ask her to move in as drunk and mad as she is...can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awww, they finally said "I love you" to each other, got rid of Jake [I hope] and found out a bit more of Edwards past...great chapter!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

Crap, she finally gets closure from Jake then loses Edward to a stupid misunderstanding...please don't break them up over this...

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter...I love that she knows she is his inspiration for new music and that he couldn't stay away from her...how much longer until they move back in together :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

I don't know if Carlisle is helping more or hurting them more, but I thinks its great that he is stepping up to be their matchmaker...usually it's one of the ladies like Alice that does that...

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love how she calls him out for being pretentous, too funny.  And so cute they are still cuddle buddies :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

That's so sweet that he stuck around for weeks while Bella was unconscious and he didn't even know anything about her...Talk about an instant connection, can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

uggh i know how it is and even if you just wanna say forget it you still gotta get unpacked... if i don't get unpacked in under 10 min my crazy pomeranian will find some way to burry himself amongst any clean clothes I have in the suitcase.  wonderful chappy and well james can be locked in a cellar for all i care too bad cam is hot it is hard to hate james 100% .

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 11

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

It's ok I am sure Bella will let Edward have it for being a dumbass after she assures him that she loves him.  that whoe I love you I love you too big kiss followed with a slap to the arm for him being a dumbass thing.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

interesting story thanks :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

loving this story!!! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

good chapter....

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm really enjoying this story. These two have A LOT of issues, but I'm looking forward to reading how they heal each other. Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

good chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

god edward is such an idiot! cant wait to see what happens next 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was a great first chapter - looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

Good Chapter......

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