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Reviewer: Rosalice08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

An interesting choice of theme, exceptionally written. I could feel all the emotions of Esme while reading this, the pain of loss she felt. Thank you for sharing this amazing one-shot.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was truly beautiful.

Reviewer: glo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is an excellent story, I really feel Esme's pain and always thought she'd have done more to keep her family together, as well as can totally have seen her doing what she did in the woods directing Sam to Bella.

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

every emotion you wrote for them was great. it brought me to tears. It be nice to see how you have esme during the thought of the bella/edward suicides.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Finally!  An explanation and timeline that makes perfect sense!  Leave it to Esme to be a guardian angel!  Kudos!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I agree I could never see them all leaving her in the book. I could see Esme doing this.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Finally. someone who agree with what I think would have happened had Edward's Pov been told.  I wish they would have stayed in Forks and been their for Bella.  IF Eddiekins wished to be stupid so be it.  Explained what it means to be a mate for a vampire to her and if she felt he was her mate tell her that upon graduattion they would change her and help her reunite with him after.  He would not have turned her down.  Frankly, my New Moon would have been - Edward is gone a few days and they make love and she is on the pill to avoid a time of the month with JAsper around.    Second semester, they do College in HS and go to community college or UW and fade from Forks.  No bonds with Jakers and Laurent finds the Cullens there which means he goes back to Irina.  Victoria got the idea for newborns from the Volturi.  No suicidal Edward, however Victoria runs to Volturi and most of the events of Eclipse and BD sans Jakers imprinting and the Bella/Jake/Edward Triangle.  I would have more Volturi action and maybe Pack meet Aro....

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank God someone finally wrote the PARENTS point of view of New Moon, I always wondered why Edward got away with what he did. Maybe the author should write and post that outtake on her website!

Author's Response:

Exactly!  I did wonder how Esme, of all 'people', could go along with Edward's cracked decision.  I hope you enjoyed it, though it is a bit sad to read.  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

GaH! you totally made me cry... cant wait to see what you come up with. 

Author's Response:

Agh!  I know -- I totally made myself cry too!  I actually had this o/s in my head for months but couldn't get myself to put it on paper because of the emo toll on myself!  Sounds weird, I know.  I just love C&E so much...

Thanks for the review and sorry I couldn't hand you a tissue!

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