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Date: 06 Sep 2020 2:20 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Five

Fantastic

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Date: 06 Sep 2020 2:02 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Four

Loved it!

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 8:07 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Three

Excellent

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 7:39 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two

Awesome

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 7:25 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One

Amazing!

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 7:25 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One

Amazing!

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 7:09 PM Title: Out Take Three-Edward's POV

Excellent

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 6:37 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

Great

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

Terrific

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 5:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Fantastic

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 5:22 PM Title: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View

Loved it!

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven

Awesome

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

Go Bella!

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:14 PM Title: Out take- Edward' POV

Fantastic

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

Awesome 

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

Fabulous

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

Fantastic

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

Terrific!

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 19

Fantastic! Carlisle is an amazing father!

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Date: 03 Sep 2020 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

Uh-oh! Poor Bella!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

Excellent

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wonderful

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

I don't like Jane!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

Terrific

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

Excellent

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

Fabulous

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

Fantastic

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awesome! Poor Jake!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Bella!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sweet

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Terrific

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

Excellent

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great!

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Date: 02 Sep 2020 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: prettylashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter Forty Three

Hey dear author, 

I read the story n must say u did a really good job. What i most appreciate is that u didn't change the basic nature of characters. U depicted edward a person who was controlled by his past n even after confronted many times didn't change in a second. Loved the slow progress. There is one thing which i couldn't agree with u on the matter of edward and tanya. Rose adviced bella that it is unnecessary to get mad edward for the things he did coz  they broke up during that time. She is ryt but not in this circumstance. If they had a fight n it was finalized that r no lo ger together it could hv been justified. But in this case edward left no opportunity to prove bella he loved still he does things like that coz he witnessed jacob with her, it shows his marurity. Tell me if bella had broken up with him after this lie n then slept with or fooled around with jacob n still kept on lying again again no matter who gives the advice do u think edward would have forgiven her. I dont think so! N who is to say if they face the same circumstances n has stupid notions in his mind.. He wont commit the same mistake. I think the whole ordeal shouldnt hv been left unattended easily.. Bella hs the right to be pissed boty about lying n fooling around. Plz ignore typos. Hope to fet a reply from u soon.

Your reader :) 



Author's Response:

Hi-

I just noticed your note.  I'm sorry for not responding earlier.  I was in an accident and I'm not on line as often as I used to be.  It's hard to type (and it hurts) so I'll ignore your typos if you ignore mine :)

Anyway, thank you for reading the story and responding. I'm glad you liked it.  I enjoy writing it.  I tried not to change the character too much.  I do try to make Bella a little more independent though in all of my stories. I liked flipping characters in this story- making Esme and Carlisle Bella's parents and making Renee and Charlie Edward's. 

Rose might not have given Bella the best advice but it was how she was feeling.  Sometimes our friends don't give us the best advice even though they mean well.

I think in some was Bella was wrong too.  She should have been up front and honest with Jacob too.  She should have been more direct with him from the begining but she wasn't.  The characters like us have flaws. 

Thank you so much for reading this story.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  I don't have another Bella/Edward story planned but I do have a few Bella/Carlisle stories (Carlisle is my favorite character from the Twilight world).  Oh wait- I do have a shorter story written that is Bella/Edward.  I want to revise that story but haven't gotten around to it yet. 

Thank you again for reading!

Lisa :)

 

 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 11:39 PM Title: Epilogue

awesome story ;) i loved how you swapped their family names around ;) but sometimes their names were swapped back in some chapters and the continuity was a bit confusing in some as well but overall a great job well done ;) thanks for sharing this on here with us ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

sorry but this chapter is a copy of chapter 9?

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2013 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Thanks!
:)

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

JACOB IS NOT TELLING THE TRUTH IS HE? HE IS A CHEATER ALSO ISN'T HE. WHAT DOES HE THINK HE CAN GET IN BELLA'S PANTS? WILL I HOPE NOT.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

WOW I LIKE THAT BELLA MET EDWARD AND DIDN'T EVEN KNOW WHO HE WAS. AND THEY BOTH HAD A GOOD TIME. I HOPE HE CALLS BELLA AND THEY GET TOGETHER SOON

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'M GLAD BELLA LEFT MIKE HE'S A ASS I WANT TO SEE WHATS AHEAD IN HER LIFE.

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:30 PM Title: Epilogue

I was wondering if you would finish it . I think you did a great job. Shocked me on the name. I wasn't sure if you would do something after em or not. I think perfect after carlise. Good luck in the future work you do.



Author's Response:

Hi,

 

Thanks for  commenting.  I actually finished this story last year, but accidently updated a chapter from another story to it (and then deleated it when it was brought to my attention...oppps!).  Anyway, I am glad that you got to read the ending and that you enjoed it.  I am writing another story on this site (it's a Bella/Edward story) and then I think I"m going to do another Bella/Carlisle story.  I have a few ideas floating around in my head as we speak! :) ). My current story is called, "Finding What Was Lost" if you would like to take a look at it.

 

Thank you for your kind words.  I'm glad you enjoy my writing.  Take care.

 

:)

Lisa

Reviewer: twilover4444 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am so sad to finally see this one end. Please, please consider doing a couple more epilloge's so we can see further into their future.  i would love to hear about the dynamic of char and carlyle in the future.  Also give us one or two  more....twins maybe.  This was just too good to end here yet, pretty please.......



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  I don't know if I would do another epi.  I was ahapy with how things ended.  It's something I'll consider.  I',m working on another story by myself and I am also co-writing another, so my concnetration is now between those two things.  Thank you fort he kind words! 

-Lisa

Reviewer: vampaddict10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:35 AM Title: Epilogue

awwww!!!!! i cant beleive it is really over.

 

 

i really really did fall in love with this story:)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this story.  I enjoyed writing the characters.  it kind of turned in a different direction than I orginally thought but they got their happy ending!

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

damn esme is a witch!!  i would have walked out on her too.  ed is sooo sweet!!!



Author's Response:

Esme isn't so nice...bare with her, she is miserable.  Edward is a doll!

Thanks for reading and commenting!  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

how sweet they are soo sweet together!!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you are still enjoying it!!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

oh boy i know trouble is ahead!



Author's Response:

There is something a brewing for sure!

Happy reading,

lisa

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

oh boy jake and ed will be rivals again!



Author's Response:

Jake will be around in some form for a while!

Thanks for reading,

Lisa

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 2

cool ed sounds great!  it's funny she didn't know who he was



Author's Response:

Edward is adroable!  I wanted her to be complely in the dark about him being famous and not know who he was...that way her feelings that are developing are for him and not based on whatever is out there.

Hope you are still enjoying what you are reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

bella he is such a dick.. wow  how were you with him that long?  glad you took out the trash!



Author's Response:

Hello and welcome to the story.  Sit back and enjoy what you will be reading!  SO glad to have a new reader, espically since the story is complete!

Thanks again for reading :) Can't wait to hear what you think of the story as it progrsses!

-Lisa

Reviewer: JenBon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Great story so far! Looking forward to chapter 7.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you are enjoying the story! Can't wait to hear what you think of the upcoming chapters.

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 6:12 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved it. I can't believe Bella didn't have a baby right away. She should have thrown the birth control away the day of the wedding. I also can't believe she got so sucked into work. She was so worried about Edward and his career, which he gave up for his family. It is a good thing that she married such a wonderful man to take care of the children. He raised Charlotte most of the time from what it sounded like. I hope Bella slows down with the birth of Carlisle Samual. She needs to realize they don't stay little for long, but work is always there.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read the chapters and to commetn on them.  It really means a lot to me.

I hoped I betrayed Bella later on with the guilt a working mother has.  I am not a mother so I have no idea what that is like, but I have several friends who either work all the time and don't see their kids or they stay at home.  they had to make the choice of what to do.  i didn't want Bella to give up her dreams, but at the same time I wanted her to have some compassion for the things she missed while she was working.  She was more so worried abotu Edward and his career because he flaked on her before Charlotte was born and she didn't know if she could truste him again with their child.  I think after two miscarriages and a healthy birth, she realizes how importaint time is.  She even said it to Edward towards the end of the story. S he told him how lucky they were because they don't have to work and they can afford to spend time with their children.  Most people don't get that.

Anyway, I just wanted  to let you know, I have started a new story called "Back to Boston" adn I will be posting the second chapter tonight (with an awesome banner!). A little self promotion isn't bad, right?

Thank you again fro taking the time from your life to read my little story.  it means a lot to me!

Lisa



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read the chapters and to commetn on them.  It really means a lot to me.

I hoped I betrayed Bella later on with the guilt a working mother has.  I am not a mother so I have no idea what that is like, but I have several friends who either work all the time and don't see their kids or they stay at home.  they had to make the choice of what to do.  i didn't want Bella to give up her dreams, but at the same time I wanted her to have some compassion for the things she missed while she was working.  She was more so worried abotu Edward and his career because he flaked on her before Charlotte was born and she didn't know if she could truste him again with their child.  I think after two miscarriages and a healthy birth, she realizes how importaint time is.  She even said it to Edward towards the end of the story. S he told him how lucky they were because they don't have to work and they can afford to spend time with their children.  Most people don't get that.

Anyway, I just wanted  to let you know, I have started a new story called "Back to Boston" adn I will be posting the second chapter tonight (with an awesome banner!). A little self promotion isn't bad, right?

Thank you again fro taking the time from your life to read my little story.  it means a lot to me!

Lisa

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 12:14 AM Title: Epilogue

so sweet;0



Author's Response:

I'm happy  you enjoyed it!  I loved writing it.

Just to let you know, I have started a new story called "Back to Boston" adn I will be posting the second chapter tonight (with an awesome banner!) (A little self promotion isn't bad, right?).

Take care,

Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:37 PM Title: Epilogue

Wonder ful ending.  You had me scared until the end.  I though B died for a little bit and edward was giving some kind of interview.

Thanks for taking the time to write and share with us all.



Author's Response:

I knew I wanted Edward to have the final say in the story because he grew the most.  I wanted to see things form his eyes.  I wanted the readers to see how he went from being single minded to really going out there and giving up everything he had for this woman and their family.  I didn't want to come out right away and say they had another baby.  i don't think i could ever kill off Bella or Edward!  Sorry to have scared you!

I love writing.  i always have since I was a kid.  i kwo I'm not the greatest writer but I enjoy it.  it soothes me when I'm upset so writing th estory was no problem.  i want to thank you for following it.  I'm glad you found enjoyment out of it.  thank you for taking the time to read it.

Just to let you know, I have started a new story called "Back to Boston" adn I will be posting the second chapter tonight (with an awesome banner!).

Take care!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:46 PM Title: Epilogue

sad to see these 2 go but im exctied that htey got their happy ending! 



Author's Response:

I think thye deserve their happy ending, don't you?  I'm sad to see them go.  I had fun writing them.  their relationship had so many twists and turns, but they are happy. 

Just to let you know, I have started a new story called "Back to Boston" adn I will be posting the second chapter tonight (with an awesome banner!).

Thank you so much for reading every chapter and leavign comments.  They mean a lot!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Nik2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:27 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved this story.  Congrats on finishing and I am happy that you have a new story going.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your nice words.  I am glad you enjoyed this story.  I really enjoyed writing this incarnation of these characters. 

I'm about to post chapter 2 of BtB (plus I all ready have a really awesome banner too!).  Hope you stick around for that story too.

Thank you again so much!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:59 PM Title: Epilogue

Awwww, so sweet and a great way to come to a close. If you ever decide to do an out take or two, i would like to know if they do add anymore and how things change for them say like in 10-20 yrs from now.



Author's Response:

Hi and thank you for your feedback/comments.  I am a little sad to say good bye to this incarnation of these characters.  I liked how they all grew buy the end of the story.  i don't know if I will do an out take..we'll see.  I like to think of them happy with thier children.  Never say never though, right?

Just to let you know, I have started a new story called "Back to Boston" adn I will be posting the second chapter tonight (with an awesome banner!).

Thank you again for all of your kind words adn for reading of course!

-Lisa

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:11 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it sad to see it end.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Hello and thank you for reading.  This story was a work of love.  I loved creating and developing these characters and I am sad to see them go.  I'm glad that you stayed for their journey and you enjoyed it. 

Just to let you know, I have started a new story called "Back to Boston" adn I will be posting the second chapter tonight (with an awesome banner!).

Thank you again for readign adn for all of your very kind reviews!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Four

I loved how they spoke from the heart.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  The epi should be up soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: vampaddict10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Three

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! The epi should be up soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Four

well i happy they are getting their happy ending! excited for the epilogue



Author's Response:

They did indeed get their happy ending.  I hope it came across as simple and sweet, that was my intention.  I'm working on the epi now, so it's only a matter of time before it is posted and the story is over.  Thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 2:02 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Four

loved it.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thank!  i'm working on the epi now so it's jusy a matter of time before it's posted and then it's done! 

Thank you so much for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Four

very sweet chapter.  LOVED her telling Mikey off



Author's Response:

thank you.  the part with Mike wasn't in the orginal version I did, but when I reread what I wrote I thought it kind of made sense.  She deffinitly got closure with him!

I'm working on teh finishing touches of the epi now so that will be posted soon. Thank you so much for ready!

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter Fifty Three

they have made such a journey.



Author's Response:

They have and their journey is about to end!  ijust posted th elast regular chapter of the story.  There will be an epi and it will be up hopefully soon.

Thank you so much for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Three

loved it.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I am so sorry it took me so long to update.  Liek I said, I was sick but I am feeling better now.  I'm hoping to have the next update sooner than later!

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Three

im excited for the wedding and whats to come! 



Author's Response:

The wedding will be next and then just the epi left!  I'm a little sad. I'm hoping the next update will be sooner than later.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment1

-Lisa

Reviewer: KristenDH Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Three

aww i just came back from cape cod and drove past the chatam bars in a dozen times. i love when i see the bourne bridge knowing im there. i just left and wannna go back. i love how happy they are together and how things are working outs



Author's Response:

I was ta the cape yesterday!  I feel the same way about the cape.  i want to go back as soon as I leave.  I'm hopeing the next update will be sooner than later!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Three

Lovely chapter.  Glad Esme is becoming more normal



Author's Response:

Esme is trying to get there.  It's hard for her, but she's trying, so she gets credit for that.  Hopefully the next chapter will be up sooner than later.

Thanks for reading and reviewing and just sticking with the story form the begining!  Hoep you'll stay for the next story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

im so excited for another weekkend for e and b   not a j fan  but he seems pretty nice in this story so i will endure through more jacob in the future chapters as you assure us that is coming  :-)   i feel sure in the end our girlie Ms B will favor our hollywood hunk Edward  at least I am hopeful here  good story



Author's Response:

Hello and I am so glad you found my story and are enjoying it.  I am not a huge Jacob fan either, but I don't enjoy how people write him all nasty and mean, so I promise he will be all right in the story.  Bella and Edward are in for a ride...that''s all I am going to say.  Enjoy!

-Lisa

Reviewer: vampaddict10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter Fifty Two

omg.. they won the case :)!!!!

 

aww.... edward really has changed.... i really dont want this dtory to end 

 

plz update soon



Author's Response:

thanks for the positive comments and thanks for reading! 

Edward did a lot of gorwing up and maturing in the story.  I'm working on the last chapter, I have decided I might do one epi too, I haven't decided yet.  Keep watching for that last chapter, should be posted in a few days!

Thanks again,

Lisa

Reviewer: vampaddict10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter Fifty One

:) plz update soon... im am glad they talked 

Reviewer: mommapurvis Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter Fifty Two

I'm glad Edward finally manned up and set the damn date already.  Bella was waiting patiently for this man.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving your comments.

Edward grew up a lot in the story and Bella wanted to wait for him.  She is getting her happy ending she dremt of as a child.  the next update should be in a few days.  I'm debating about an epi too.  You'll just have to wait and see about that.

Thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Two

Is it the 2nd anniversary of when they met? It can't be the first since the baby is almost one. It sounds like a good date and a pretty time of the year in Boston.



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading and reviewing.

It is the second anniversary of when they met in the bar where Edward was playing.  Charlotte will be about 14 months when they get married (she was born the end of August).  Boston is so lovely during fall!  I miss living there.

The next update should be a in a few days.  I'm debating doing an epi...i am just not ready to let them go yet!

Thanks again fro reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter Fifty Two

excited to see what happens next chatper ! keep the updates comming 



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!  Next update will be soon.  I'm glad you have enjoyed the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Two

awesome I love it.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you are enjoying it!  We are so close to the end know :(  The next update will be in a day or so.

thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Two

Great chapter.   Glad B stood up for herself.  Wonder who the anonymous call was from.   marcus?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  The caller will remain a secret, for just a little while longer.  Bella is one to always stand up for herself.  The next chapter will be in a few days!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter Fifty One

wow   threatening to not have the surgery like that was the most childish and selfish thing I think I've even heard.     

Before anyone slams me, There are times when not having a surgery makes sense.... like really low probablity of success or if a person is terminal and prolonging suffering....but in this case it was just stupidity



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts.

My point of Esme in this chapter was to show how selfish she was.  It was easier for her at that one point in time to just give up on everything because she couldn't control things.  Bella made her come around though adn she is going to have the surgery.

Thanks again for reading :)

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter Fifty Two

It is a grand time!  Married who would have thunk that 20 chapters ago? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing.  They are indeed going to get married!  Yah!  Next chapter will be in a day or so.

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter Fifty One

Sometimes it takes life threatening situations to bring people together. I am glad!



Author's Response:

You are so right.  I have been planing this part for a while, but didn't want to do it too soon.  Will B and E ever have a normal mother/daughter relationship?  Most likely not, but at least they have something to build on.  No relationship is perfect.


Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter Fifty One

Awesome.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I am glad you enjoyed the chapter.  next update will be soon, promise!

-Lisa

Reviewer: mst01_80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is my first review for this story. Bear with me.

I am glad most of the drama is getting out of the way. I am surprised that this story has not received more reviews. I was always hoping edward would have come before the baby was born. Though I AM glad that she did not go back to Jacob. Well, better late than never. I am glad he got another chance for a shot to his HEA after the trouble Tanya put him through. Though I felt like he waited tooo long to propose. Can't wait for court case and the restaurent to open.

Thansk for this wonderful story and the regular updates.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter Fifty One

im glad that her mom realized that she was dumb! im excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Sometimes it takes something horrible to make people realize their perspetive isn't always right. Although B and E will never have a normal mother/daughter relationship they are working on a foundation.

Next update will be soon!  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter Fifty One

Esme needs some therapy. She makes everyone suffer because she is not happy with her life. She needs to understand that she has to choose to be happy. She has all the ingredients for happiness. If her attitude doesn't change she won't  make it through cancer treatment. Being possitive is half of the battle.



Author's Response:

I had this conversation between B and E planned for a while adn needed to wait until this point to put it in.  I think even though she is on her wy to being happier, she and Bella will never have the normal mother/daughter relationship.  This is a start though.  Maybe she will turn over a new leaf.


Thanks for reading and the next update will be soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter Fifty

hmmm I have a bad feeling about Bella's talk with her mother... there is more to this than meets the eye.



Author's Response:

No, it'll be eye openning but no need for worrying!

Thanks for reading,

 

Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter Fifty

Bella is being just as selfish as Esme on this topic. Esme doesn't want anyone there. Bella wants to be there. Who really matter's at this moment. Bella has to realize that they are 2 types of people who love in different ways. Now the remark about the white dress was wrong.



Author's Response:

There will be more insite on Esme's choice in the next chapter.

Thank you for reading.

-Lisa

-PS-the next update should be in a day or so.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter Fifty

well im glad that your back! and im excited to see the comfortation of mother and daughter next chapter ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Things between Bella and Esme will have a turn in the next chapter, which should be posted in a day or so. 

-Lisa

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter Fifty

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks-

the next chapter should be up in a day or so.

-Lisa

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter Fifty

Wow, can't wait to see how the conversation with Esme goes.



Author's Response:

The conversation will be in the next chapter...hang on tight!

The next update should be in a day or so.

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter Fifty

awesome update.



Author's Response:

Thanks you!  The next update should be in a day or so.

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter Fifty

Esme is really bi polar I swear.... cancer or no cancer.



Author's Response:

Esme is stuffy and kind of stuck in her own way.  The next chapter is Bella's confrination with Esme.  It should be posted in about a day or so.  Thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter Fifty

I can see both side of the Esme, Bella problem. Esme starts quoting Catholic guidelines on getting married, Bella rebells. Bella wants this her way, her wedding. Esme is having a procedure in the hospital and she wants to be alone, Bella does not agree. Bella wants this her way. 

 

Sigh, mothers and daughters.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be eye opening in their relationship.  it should be posted within a day or so.

Thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: vampaddict10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter Forty Nine

awwww.. their engaged!!!! plz update soon

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter Forty Nine

I love Trains song. I saw them in an accoustic show and there was a proposal. It was so sweet. Pat brought them on stage. It was pretty intimate since it was a show before the bigger show. There was only about 30 people. It was so sweet. It was almost like how you wrote this seen except we were strangers and not family.



Author's Response:

That sounds very romantic.  I'm sure with a song like that it will be used for engagements for years to come.  It's just simple, which is why I like it (i don't like the pop version, I li ke the accoustic one).  It must have been pretty awesome to see.

 

Thanks for reading.  I'm hoping to have another update by Thursday.  I'm leaving for New York City this weekend, so I won't be back at my computer until Monday night or Tuesday night.  I'm working hard though, I promise!

 

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter Forty Nine

i love this chapter! im glad that he finally did it ! 



Author's Response:

He was just waiting for the perfect opperunity.  I'm glad you liked it.  I'm trying to update and post before I leave for the weekend.
Thanks for reading

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter Forty Nine

Well Edward is redeeming himself. Took a while but finally. That was a great chapter..

Thanks,



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words.  Edward just thought Bella deserved a proposal that was meaningful and thought out.  I'm going to update before I leave for the weekend (my goal is no later than Thursday but we'll see).

Thanks for reading,

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter Forty Nine

great chapter.    Carlisle was laying it on a little thick in the guilt department.



Author's Response:

Carlisle wasn't trying to be harsh, he is stuck in the middle. He didn't mean for it to be guilt, it was a sensitive subject, which we will come back to again.

thanks for reading.  Next update hopefully before I leave for the weekend!

-Lisa

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