Date: 13 Feb 2011 7:52 AM Title: Out Take Four-Edward's POV Part One
Seth defintely got whats coming to him. What a prick. Cant see him that way....Paul would be a different story though. Tanya is not gonig to let go that easy I think.
Author's Response:
Hello and thank you for reading.
I like playing around with the characters, which is why Seth was the one who is acting like a jerk. It's fun to play with characters who are established (I also like to make James a good guy). Tanya is away....for now! the next update will be this evening. it's part two of Edward's point of view.
-Lisa
Date: 13 Feb 2011 5:26 AM Title: Out Take Four-Edward's POV Part One
Sure what seth did sucked but it is his job to keep edward in hte news and getting roles.
Tanya needs to learn basic dignity. I have never ever met a man worth throwing myself at. All women need to know this. I am not saying not love or forgive I am saying don't be desperate. In fact, I thought Bella was too hard on him. There is a difference.
Author's Response:
Hi and thank you for reading :)
You are right, as an agent your job is to keep your name in the spotlight, however, the way that Seth did it was completly wrong. he could have encouraged Edward to volunteer with an organization around Boston adn get PR that way, but he didn't.
Tanya is the type of person who thinks the world owes her. She doens't think she does anything wrong. She acts confident. She wants Edward so she'll do anything to get him. that's way she went along with Seth. She also doesn't know how to treat people. She thinks people are disposable.
Bella is insecure of herself in some ways. She doesn't understand why Edward would choose to be with someone like her in the first place. She also remembers how he was during their break up and how he was distant. it was always int eh back of her mind that Tanya was with him.
The next chapter will be posted this evening. It's part two of Edward's POV.
-Lisa
Date: 11 Feb 2011 9:21 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
Edward slept with Tanya while he and Bella were seperated or what ever they were. The dick wont admit it. Jane hid it.
Tanya is his life partner.............not Bella. Bella deserves better. He is addicted to the slut.
Author's Response:
First thanks for reading!! Second of all, the next chapter (which I am hoping to post either today or tomorrow) is the last few chapters from Edward's point of view (it's another outake). I think you'll have a little more faith in dear Edward after reading it. H eloves Bella and wants to be with her. He likes their family they created.
-Lisa
Date: 11 Feb 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
What am I missing about Edward and Tanya. Is it that they were about to get their freak on when he got the call?
Author's Response:
Way back when when Jane called about Charlie, Edward and Tanya fooled around. Edward realized what he was doing, Tanya still wanted to go farther even when Edward said he couldn't because his father was dying (she's a doll, isn't she?). Edward realized too that what he was doing was wrong. he felt bad about Bella. That's the jists of what happened with them. Some readers think dear Edward and Tanya did more than I wrote. The next chapter is an out take from Edward's point of view and we'll get to see inside his mind a little bit. Tanya is mentioned.
Thank you for reading (and I hope I clarified a few things :) )
-Lisa
PS-I'm hoping to update either tonight or tomorrow.
Date: 10 Feb 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
well they are cozy and i hope that what ever tanya has to say wont break them up ! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I want them to show each other that they love each other ,which is why they are cozy. Tanya will eventually speak her mind, I promise! I'm hoping for an update by the weekend or early next week. It'll be an out take from Edward's POV (which means it will be kind of longish).
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
I really do hope that someone pulls Edwards aside before he fucks up royally and we know it is going to happen, Bella is going to find out about Tanya and World War 3 will break out.
I just hope he tells her before all they did was kiss and then he found out about his dad and she wanted to keep going but he did not... see not hard, why create trouble when it is not needed... I understand that we all need a bit of angst in our stories but really unnessary fighting is not needed...
Anyway that is my opinion... I can see it now, she will kick him out and it will be the whole trust thing come up again... do it to many times and it gets boaring to read, when they fight make up, fight make up and then the pattern keeps repeating. It as ruined so many stories for people... please dont let it happen to yours. They are just getting on their feet again, she is only starting to trust him againa and it is Christmas!!!
I love this chapter and I love the ending so much. Cant wait of the next one, I am wondering what Tanya is up too.
Author's Response:
First of all, thank you for reading. I don't want to give too much away but we'll be meeting Tanya in a few more chapters. Edward is a man, who, in my expirence tend to make a few more mistakes than us woman so I think you can spell that out. Remember, Emmett told him it would be better to not tell Bella about Tanya. He's following the advice of big brother (not his big bro, but still).
I don't want to do the same old song and dance as other stories (as you mentioned). There will be a twist. You'll just have to wait and see how the plot will unfold. I hope you aren't disapointed!
Next chapter, which I am hoping to post this weekend or early next week will be an out take of Edward's POV. I promise you'll get a few answers...perhaps even a Tanya answer? I haven't decided yet.
-Lisa
Date: 09 Feb 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
you scaredme iI thought the appt was skankya for a minute.
Author's Response:
lol-thanks for reading. We will finally meet Tanya a few chapters down the road. I'm hoping the next chapter will be posted this weekend or early next week. It'll be an out take and Edward's POV.
-Lisa
Date: 09 Feb 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thanks...next update is hopefully this weekend. It'll be another outake with Edward's POV.
Thank you for reading.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
Heres a thought.. I just thought of.. What is Tayna is Esme long lost daughter. Esme crazy and so is Tanya. Omg would that be a turn of events. Maybe that is why she wants to talk to edward. I do think she has a bun in oven. Keep up great work hopefully we can get another update asap.
Author's Response:
LOL-that would be a twist now, wouldn't it? Unfortunitly Tanya isn't Esme's daughter she put up for adoption (although that would have been a great twist). I'm hoping to post another outake Edward's POV-this weekend or early next week. It'll be nice to get his view on a few things, wouldn't you say?
Thank you for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 09 Feb 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
cute
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. The next chapter will be Edward's POV and should be posted maybe by this weekend, maybe Monday.
-Lisa
Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand the real Esme is back! Oh boy!
Author's Response:
LOL-Esme is kind of bipolar if you haven't been able to tell! Seriously though she reminds me a bit of my grandmother where she has the settign that her thinking is the correct and to heck with eveyrone else. She means well, even if it comes off the wrong way, She does love her daughter she's just crazy, that's all!
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Feb 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Tanya is PREGNANT... desperation!
He is not telling the whole truth.. He got mad! BINGO
Author's Response:
Maybe she is....maybe she isn't....who knows (oh wait, I know!). Edward clammed up. Plus, as we'll read in an upcoming out take Edward remembers that Emmett said not to tell her. He just wants to forget all about her. Who knews if he is telling the whole truth....you'll find out sooner or later!
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Feb 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Oh jeez...I had actually to go back because I wasn't sure if E had slept with Tanya. Apparently he didn't because if Tanya now ended up pregnant by E as well, that would have been a bit over the top. How many by accident babies can one man have...yeah, don't answser that question ;).
I still have the feeling it will bite him in the ass that he didn't tell her when she explicitly asked. It is one thing to not mention it if they were apart and yadayada. But being directly asked? Not good.
I'm curious. Have fun at the dress fitting!
Author's Response:
In due time we'll find out if Edward tells Bella about Tanya. She may or may not find out. Edward got nervous and remembered that Emmett told him not to tell Bella.
The dress fitting was intersting. We went to a David's Bridal and it was an exprence, a strange one at that but whatever! The dresses are cute.
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Feb 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thanks! Next update within the next few days.
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:15 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
hmmm now what is the she=bitch up to now......
Author's Response:
Do you mean Tanya or Esme? So many choices here! Read and find out! It may be in a few more chapter, not excatly sure when you'll get your answer about Tanya (I'm going out on a limb here).
Thank you fro reading!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
mamma esme is up to no good again! cant wait to see whats instore next for these 2 and hope tanya disapears
Author's Response:
Mama Esma is just old fashion and over protective. Underneth her thick skin she cares and does love her daughter. the problem with her is she thinks whatever she says is true and everyone around of her should listen to her. She kind of reminds me of my grandmother. i loved the woman but she needed to take a step back and realize that she wasn't always right and she couldn't say whatever she wanted to people (although her best intentions were always at hand).
Tanya will be back later on....I promise!
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Feb 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Edward missed his opportunity to come clean. We all know Tayna is not going to stay in the background long. I think the marriage card needs to be explored again with Bella and Edward. I agree with Esme that a committment would be great although alittle premature a this point in their reunion. I think the Hollywood cop out of no marriage and "peter pan" syndrome is pathetic quite honstely.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Edward has Emmett's voice in the back of his head telling him not to tell Bella about Tanya. the talk of marriage might come up again (they haven't had it since before she got pregnanet).. To Edward's defence, he is growing up and distancing himself a little more from the Peter Pan lifestyle.
Thank you for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
I hope he did not sleep with Tanya and knock her up.
IT is onething if she is just trying to restart things with Edward and he is putting distance.
I admit I do not look forward to more tumult between E/B.
IT would be nice to seem them wed.
Esme is a special.
Author's Response:
Esme is very special. She really loves Bella. she also thinks she can say anything to anyone and get away with it.
They might talk about marriage again (they haven;t talked about it since before Charlotte was concieved). Tanya will be back!
Thank you for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Oh yeah, that lie's gonna come back to bite him in the ass. Lol, stupid man. Never gonna learn.
Author's Response:
Maybe it'll bit him in the ass, maybe it'll nip him or maybe no one will know. He is kind of a stupid man, isn't he?
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
I feel you did perfectly well in the sex scene.
Loved the chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback, espically the sex scene. I wanted to be descriptive but not over board. It's not a porn story after all! I'm working on the next chapter so it should be posted soon!
-Lisa
Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
Great chapter. I'm glad Bella is sticking to her decision to stay with Edward. Rose is allowed her opinion, but it's Bella's life and her decision in the end.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback (and reading of course :) ). There will be a little more with the Rose situation soon enough. After everything that they have gone through, Bella just wants to be happy with Edward and she wants nothing to stand in the way of her happiness or her daughters. Rose is just being a Debbie Downer and Bella doesn't want to hear it.
The next update should be soon. I'm working on it as we speak.
-Lisa
Date: 03 Feb 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
I liked the chapter. The sex scene was well-written. I would rather have more left to imagination.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm still practicing writing the sex scenes. they are hard for me, but thanks for the imput I appreciate it.
The next chapter is being worked on as we speak and should be up soon.
-Lisa
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
well im happy they finally are back to where they need to be! cant wait to see whats instore for the next chatper
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting! They have picked up where they left off months ago. The next chapter should be posted soon. I'm working on it as we speak!
-Lisa
Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. The next update will be soon!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
woo hoo glad nothing happpened at the premier.
Author's Response:
I wanted the evening to be perfect for them, which I think i did a good job creating. Thanks for reading and reviewing. the next update will be soon (I'm working on it as we speak!)>
-Lisa
Date: 02 Feb 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
Sex Scene = Good
Also, thanks for not letting Bella fall or embarass herself at the movie.
Author's Response:
thanks for the feedback (espically about the sex scene...i get really nervous about writing them. Never know if it's too much without going into the porn catigory or if it isn't enough). Speaking as a klutz myself, I would not want Bella to fall or make a scene! I thought about maybe an embaressing conversation with Halle Berry since she was so excited to see her, but then decided against it.
Thanks for reading and the next update should be soon!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Ohh I love long chapter, 20 pages is nothing!!!
Cant wait for the update. I am glad that Edward got rid of Seth, that was just down right wrong.
thanks you for the update.
Author's Response:
Hello,
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. the next update will be soon.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
This story is very good I am excited about the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. I am almost done with the next chapter now. It'll be posted in a day or so. Thanks again for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I get that Edward had to work and do interviews and all, but he should have kept in touch with Bella as the night went on, and not have gone to that party. He has a child, it was irresponsible of him to not check in - what if Charlotte got sick, or Bella needed him? Yes Bella was insecure and jealous, but I'm sure she was also just plain worried about him. If Bella went out, stayed later than planned, and ignored his attempts to contact her I'm sure he would be very pissed and upset. Bella needs to call him out for this.
Author's Response:
You're right, he should have but didn't. Bella was worried about Edwward before she got pissed at him. The did have their back and forth banter/arguement the next morning. She is willing to over look this.
Thansk for reading. I'm trying to get th enext chapter posted tonight, but I don't know if it will be. None the less, it will be up soon!
-Lisa
Date: 27 Jan 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Wow she showed signs of real maturity and so did Edward. I know nothing about entertainment - but I woudl not want a firm that lies about my life to represent me. What part of none of their business.
At first she was acting pissy - I understand the career part. I was answering emails for my annoying as hell boss 8 hours after a c=-section. I could not be out of the loop according to him. In the end, I need the income being a "girl geek" as my hubby puts it, so I deal with it. It interferes with my family but I do my best for everyone.
My boss has never lied like Seth did - if he did I would be job hunting.
Author's Response:
Thank you fro reading and leaving a comment.
I think when you have a baby you are forced to mature in various ways, which is why Edward and Bella are acting like adults. Edward knew what Seth did was wrong and Seth wouldn't listen to him (well, at least in my head and in the notes I made for maybe another out take chapter from Edward's point of view). All Seth ever cared about was making money.
I'm trying to post the next update tonight, but I don't know if I will be able to get it up, but deffinitaly this weekend.
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 27 Jan 2011 12:00 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thanks...uupdate soon!
-Lisa
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:09 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
okay She was right about Seth. Edward needed to tell him, after work I am going back to the hotel eat with my family. I have a big party in two days.
You gotta take charge of your own business.
Author's Response:
It seems like people in the industry have had Edward on a tight lesh for a long time, so he wasn't ready to stand up Seth. remember, He also wanted to talk Edward out of staying away from Tanya because "they sell movies." Seth just was not a nice guy. he realizes now he has to stand up for himself.
Thanks for reading. Next update will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 27 Jan 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
well im glad that he finally pulled his head out of his ass and kind of listened to bella! cant wait to see what happens next on the red carpet!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/ Edward is slowly realzing what is going on in his life, espiecally with people he thought he could trust. Thanks for reading, the update will be soon.
-Lisa
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Seee I told you Seth would do something stupid. Rose is being a biatch though
Author's Response:
You were totally right about Seth, but I wasn't going to say anything. Rose is being typical Rose. She thinks she is doing the right thing by telling Bella how she feels about Edward, however, it isn't helping anyone out. Thanks for reading. The update will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
I was iffy abput Seth. I was. But I gave him a chance because of canon.
Can't believe it. Just can't.
Wonder where Edward punched him? Was it photographed?
I don't see what the company has to be mad about. If anything they should be pissed for losing a customer because of one of there employers mistake.
Threatening they're going to sue? How Hollywood of them.
And Rose? I bet if Bella knew how much Rose really disliked Edward she would have never spilled her guts to her.
Though I did think it was a bit out of line for both Bella and Rose to be pissed about Edward's job. Esp. Bella. Rose on the other hand, feels like she is just grabbing at straws here for any reason to not like Edward. His going to work seems to be the only thing she has on him.
Let it go man. let it go.
I am so glad Bella listen to reason.
Author's Response:
Mayeb I'll eventaully do an outake with Edward's point of view and show how things went down with Seth. I have no idea how the agency would react in real life. I knwo nothing about that stuff, thsi is just my spin on it. They are threating to sue since Edward punched Seth.
Bella was irritated about Edward being gone until the wee hours of the morn, espically once she heard that tanya was in town. She was just insecure. Rose on the other hand was just expressing herself about Edward. Way back in the beinging of the story she never liked him because seh thought he was too young fro Bella. This is just added to that.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Next review will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks....next chapter will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 24 Jan 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
good Chapter......
Author's Response:
Thanks...update should be by the end of the week. Thanks for reading.
-Lisa
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
well im happy that they are going back to where it started! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Next update should be by yhe end of the week.
-Lisa
Date: 24 Jan 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
hmmm Wonder what seth is gonig to do to piss them both off in NY cause I see it coming.
Author's Response:
Maybe you're right, maybe not. You'll have to wait and see! thanks fro reading adn reviewing!
-Lisa
PS-I'm goign to try adn get the updat eup soon, however, it might not be up unti lthe end of the week.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
I never got away from work during my maternity leaves. I just had less emails to answer, I was expected to read them. It stinks. Parental leave should be just that - though movies are probably differerent. Though Emmett/Rose babysitting rocks. I would never trust my kids to a teen sitter.
Author's Response:
I'll admit, I'm totally making up the Hollywood aspect. I have no idea how that works, so in my world it works how it is unfolding! Also, another chapter will be dealing with Bella going back to work. I'm a preschool teacher and babysit some of the kids in my room. After hearing nightmare stories of teen babysitters, i would never either. I babysat as a teen, but I feel like a-that was a billion years ago and b-I NEVER acted the way these kids do! I would never ask for a friend to go with me, none the less my boyfriend. It's crazy.
Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting. The next update will be soon, I'm hoping for today or tomorrow, but it might not be until the end of the week.
-Lisa
Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting. Next update soon (by the end of the week!).
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Just keeps getting better and better!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it. The enxt update should be today or in a day or so.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Loved it, I love how they lectured Bella's parents.
I also loved that they did not call every 5 minutes as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I didn't want to be too over the top with the phone calls, lathough I do have friends who have done that. Thenext update will be soon.
-Lisa
Date: 21 Jan 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
I'm glad they're moving forward and away from the past. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed the chapter. They are starting to find the swing of their relationship. Thank you for reading. The next update should be soon.
-Lisa
Date: 21 Jan 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
im happy they are on track and momma is happy for them! cant wait to see whats instore next for these 2
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. They are trying to find their way as a couple. I wonder what will happen next. The next update will be soon.
-Lisa
Date: 21 Jan 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Lovely chapter. Glad they had a nice date and the babysitters behaved themselves. lol
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter and I'l glad Edward kept the babysitters in line!
-Lisa
PS-Thanks for reading. The next update will be soon.
Date: 21 Jan 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
They had a nice time. I like seeing people be happy and healtny
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. They are starting to get things back together. Update soon!
-Lisa
PS-Thank you for reading.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 10:16 PM Title: Out take- Edward' POV
I like this jane. I do not blame most of her actions. Edward has issues - like all Edwards. People often do not say what they wish to say - that is root of this conflict with Bella. He should have told her about his first child. She could have helped him grieve before Charlotte's birth or even before her conception. This Bella give seems the type to have been willing to sit attend the counseling that was needed before his vile actions.
To me that is support to help you help yourself. No one can fix you.
I admit I am not a fan of how Bella handled her pregnancy but Edward frankly was appalling and horrible. I know that many men do stuff like that and they should be made to support their children. Ideally they would do half the work but if not they can pay 1/2 the cost having someone else do it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Jane is fun to write. The next update is tonight.
-Lisa
Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Yay! I was hoping she would let him sleep in there with her. I REALLY hope they wake up snuggling. . . hint, hint. LOL
Author's Response:
There might be some closeness in the next chapter, which will be posted tonight. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
Wow , what the hell got into Esme? LOL
Author's Response:
LOL....if you think that is weird wait until the next chapter! Thanks for reading...it will be updated tonight.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 11:54 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Perfect Suprise
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. The next chapter is going up tonight. Thanks for reading.
-Lisa
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
thanks! Next chapter will be up tonight. Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
awww very sweet chapter. He definitely is trying.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next chapter, the date chapter, is being posted later tonight. Thanks fro reading/commetning!
-Lisa
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
excited that they are getting along well and i hope that their date goes great and they get back on track with eachoter!
Author's Response:
The date is the next chapter, which is going to be posted.....TONIGHT! can't wait to hear what you think of it! As usual, thanks for reading and leaving a little comment!
-LIsa
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter Thirty One
Loved the last chapter and this one. They were both perfect insight into what everyone was thinking. Esme had me realing with laughter... what is that woman putting in her cookies.
Thank you for the update
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Hi Fiorella! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Esme is a trip, isn't she? Once you think you have some figured out they pull a 180 on you! The next update should be by the weekend.
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 19 Jan 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter Thirty One
ok well out of the crazy into the trying to be normal.
Edward & Esme have been on my list of not favorite people. Edward is immature (I think). Esme told us a story that explains why she thinks the way she does. She is correct about the one parent situation, it is hard. If Bella had to do that she would need to hire extra help. After all she has the money.
If Edward & Bella can mend this divide they have a baby that is insentive to do so. She is worth the work and the changes they need to make. Will they ever recover? It is up to you our dear author.
Author's Response:
Edward was very immature, He is trying to grow up. Funny what taking responsiblity for a baby will do for a person.
Esme thinks very old fashioned. She thinks Emmett and Rose would be better parents because they are married. Bella isn't have a difficult time yet because Edward has stepped up to the plate and is taking responsiblity and is there for Charlotte and Bella.
Well the next chapter will be posted by the weekend. You will find out more about their date then.
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter Thirty One
Esme has confused me. I am glad she is being supportive of her daughter? But I am a bit surprised. Though repeatedly suggesting she give her baby to Emmett/Rose is soooo aweful.
As for forgiveness between E/B - if you will carry a torch for someone and always compare every person you meet to that him or her for that matter. At least give it one last try.
This Bella started to turn into a whiney, bitter, unhappy fool like one of my college ex-best friends
I an ex close friend from college who is like that. She compares every man to Dan it was she who broke things up. She did not want to marry a teacher - not lucrative enough. She is 41 now and never married or had children - she lived with a couple guys and always mentioned how much happier Dan made her and one of them would not marry her or have little ones. He has to be close to 50 and had kids with his first wife. She was whiney during the time our friends starting marrying and when we started having babies she would always make snarky remarks about how much further ahead you will be professionally if you do not have children. While that tends to be true - I would never change beiung a mother. My littles ones are awesome. She even had the nerve to mention during one of my miscarriages that it is better to have a miscarriage than to bear a trisomy 18 baby and that it was only 10 weeks along. All she had to do is say I am sorry you are hurting so much and say nothing else.
Author's Response:
Esme has put what she wanted in her life into Bella, that's why she is so hard on her for so long. She is acting as her mother treated her adn doesn't know any better, She alsokind of resents Bella since her grandmother left her an inhartienc ewhen seh died and Esme got nothing. She thinks by suggesting giving the baby to her brother and his wife that is okay because the kid will have two, married parents to support it. Remember Esme is an old fashioned Catholic. I actually have family who I think would suggest the same thing (I know, redulous isn't it?"
Bella's not whiney, she's tired and confused. She's trying to sort things out the best she can, however no one has quite been through her situation so she is muddling through the best she can.
I'm sorry about your friend and about your miscarriage. I myself have not experenced one, however, I have had a close friend who has and it's terrible. My cousin also had to labor a baby that died. I'm guessing there are no words to describe how you feel. The weight it plays with your emotions too must be tough. I'm sorry your friend couldn't have brought you a plate of cookies and said, "i'm sorry" (I'm a baker/cook when it comes down to things. It's the way I show how I'm sorry or happy for something going on in my friends' or family's life. I met that comment with no disrespect).
Date: 18 Jan 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
well its about time her mom started to accept everything! cant wait till their date!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :) Esme is fun to write right now. Just when you thought you knew her! I'm working on the next chapter and it should be posted by this weekend.
-Lisa
Date: 18 Jan 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
where is the real esme. you cant blame b for being confused.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Esme is a fun character to be playing with. Know she knows her daughter thinks she hates her she might be kinder and sweeter, or not. I haven't decided yet. The next update should be by the weekend.
-Lisa
Date: 18 Jan 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
loved it, Esme surprised the heck out of me. can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked the last chapter. Esme is an intersting character. The next update should be by the weekend. Thanks for reading.
-Lisa
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you liked it, thansk for reading. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. It should be posted by the weekend.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 3:33 PM Title: Out Take Three-Edward's POV
The boy is growing up.
Author's Response:
He is, right before our eyes. Thanks for reading. Next update might be later today.
-Lisa
Date: 18 Jan 2011 2:34 PM Title: Out Take Three-Edward's POV
Awesomeness!!! (LOL - is that even a word?)
Author's Response:
Awesomeness can be a word now! Thanks for reading. Next chapter might be posted later today.
-Lisa
Date: 18 Jan 2011 7:22 AM Title: Out Take Three-Edward's POV
Good Chapter......
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Next chapter might be up today or tomorrow.
-Lisa
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:58 AM Title: Out Take Three-Edward's POV
well cant wait till the next chapter ! i hope that they kissy kissy and start working out their relationship again!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I am working on the next chapter as we speak. It might even be posted today at some point (if not tomorrow for sure).
-Lisa
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:47 AM Title: Out Take Three-Edward's POV
--Heidi and Tanya...what skanks
Author's Response:
Tanya will be back at some point. Heidi was just to show Edward isn't intersted in anyone but Bella. Thanks for reading. I'm hope sick adn I am working ont he next chapter now.
-Lisa
Date: 14 Jan 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
hmmm cant wait to see the ed/em talk
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm loading the next chapter as we speak!
-Lisa
Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
ugh. cliffie..
When Edwards wants to talk, you never know what is coming out of his mouth. He needs to go back to Tanya he focuses his whole life on when Tanya did this and that. AT one point or the other you say...BYE to that person. If you don't that means you still have attachment, feelings etc.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the cliffie, I had to make things intersting! I think you'll understnad what comes out of Edwrd's mouth during the conversation with Emmett. Next update should be in a day or so. Thank you for reading an dleaving comments!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Crap you really needed to leave it there.... GRRRRRR
Please update soon, I want to know what the hell happend with Edward and Emmett and I want to know about the talk...
Type you little demon, type... hhehehe
Thank you
Fiorella
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you liked the chapter. I'm working on the next chapter and it should be posted in a day or so (it will of course include the convo between Edward and Emmett). Thanks for reading and commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Yea, thank you for explaining Emmett's absence since the baby's birth. I knew he would not be happy to learn Edward was back in Bella's life, but go figure all men need is a few beers to work out their differences. I guess we will be seeing what was discussed in your next outtake.
I am glad that Edward is trying and I liked the way you ended this chapter with her admitting she still loves him and wants an 'us' eventually. Now that Edward overhears that I can't wait to hear what he wants to discuss with her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting. I am working on the next chapter, which should be posted in a day or so. It's funnt to see the power of a beer or two between two men holds.
-Lisa
Date: 12 Jan 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Good Chapter.......
Author's Response:
Thanks!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
It's about time they talk!
Author's Response:
LOL! Next chapter is Edward's point of view.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Well, considering how calmly Emmett just handled Bella's revelation, I'd say Edward probably said something similar to him!
Author's Response:
Emmett and Edward's conversation will be in the next chapter!
Thanks for reading/commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 12 Jan 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Um Wow - she goes from not wanting him around to allowing him there to now loving him? Wow.
Author's Response:
It's not that she didn't want him around. She wanted him around for the baby. She said to him that if he wasn't going to help with the baby then he should leave. he smartened up and began helping with the baby. She also told him he could move in as long as he was going to help with the baby, which again, he has been doing. She has also loved him, even after he fully rejected her after she visited him in Washington after his father died.On the flip side, Edward of course never really stopped lovign her either, although he was a jerk and he knows he needs to prove that he really does care and really wants to be there for her and the babino.
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
ohh lets get it on in the kitchen. i hope that he isnt going to break her heart again! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
LOL!!! I'm sorry to report there won't be any loving in the kitchen any time soon! They will chat, in a few chapters. Edward's POV is next!
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
Finally, Edward steps up...I still think Bella is awesomely forgiving but I do understand putting your child before your needs now that Edward wants to be involved.
Jake is in a no-win situation. He has been there in Edward's absence, but is not the father as much as he wishes he was, and now that Edward is back he is feeling pushed aside now. But he was wrong to not let Bella handle things and to delete those messages from the phone was pretty uncalled for, so good for Bella there.
Now that the baby is here, we have seen Renee and Edward show up, but where are the Cullens, I am interested to see if Esme has come around yet. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and commenting.
Bella really, really wants to get back with Edward, but knows he has to prove himself to her and the baby. Above all else, she is trying to think of one person, Charlotte. She is her life now and has to take care of her and act responsibly.
Jacob loves Bella, but only as a friend/sister. He acted as he thought was right. He's mad that Bella, who was so hurt before, is so willing to let Edward be there and he feels like she is asking him to not to help her, which isn't what Bella said or thinks at all. She is greatful for everything Jacob as done and he needs to realize that. heknows he is wrong, which is one reason he leaves immeditly when Bella asks him to.
About Dr. and Mrs. Cullen, they have been around. I'm working on the next chapter, which I will post hopefully today some time. The chapter following that I think is going to be another outake form Edward. My notes for that page are really long, so that might be a two parter. i dont' like having the story interrupted with outakes, however his take on things will shed a little light on things adn will include the doctor and his mrs.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 29
Just had to make me cry....
You have a definite way with words...just beautiful.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you thanks you very much, that's very sweet of you to say :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the next chpater as we speak. It should be posted in a day or so. Thank you for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 29
good chapter......
Author's Response:
Thanks! Next chapter will be posted in a day or so.
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
Bella is special allright - how does not protect their VMs for example.
Jakers had all the signs of being in love with her and she is oblivious. Threatening Edward with tossing him as a father - news flash - he can get an attorney and fight her for custody. My hubby's lifelong bff sued his ex for custody, I don't know the specifics. I can't stand his High School buddies.
E/B are starting to grow up - Edward needs to let his first born rest. He is with God now. Take care of the child he has to raise and finish his greieving process. Perhaps Bella can help with that - she could go to counseling with him.
Bella needs to drop all of her whining about the past and think about today and the future.
Author's Response:
Hello and thank you for reading and commenting.
As for the VM, I had an option when I had a phone through Sprint that let me store my password. That part is (or was I don't know if phones still have that option) real.
Jacob isn't in love with her. He really, really cares for her and has gotten close to her family. He does think of her as a sister and doens't want to see her hurt. He didn't want Edward to see her because he thought he'd upset Bella, thus he deleated the voicemails and texts.
Edward is coming from a place where he ignored Connor's death for so long that through help of therapy he is starting to let go. He bever fully mourned and claimed he never wanted children because of this loss. I would imagine loosing a hcild that far into a pregnancy is devistating. Everyone talks about how some times the mother has a hard time coping, but the father is rarely mentioned. Edward is trying to move on and now that he has accepted his death, with time he will be able to move on.
Bella is thinking about the now. Every decision she is making is based on the child she has now. She is trying to make good choices for Charlotte's sake.
I loved your comments and I hope this clearifies a few things.
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
well at least he came clean about the messages.
Author's Response:
He did. He's not gone forever and will be back in future chapters (I can hear all of the disapinted sighs now). Thanks for reading and commenting.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 29
GO BELLA! Yay for her, about time she opened her eyes and saw what Jacob was doing and I am glad she is angry with him.
I knew that Edward would not be able to leave them. I am glad that he came back where his heart and home is even if they are not back together, that is his home, where Charlotte is. Even Bella eventually, I hope.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter as always.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for reading and commenting. Thank you for your kind words too :)
Bella and Jacob have grown to be like brother adn sister. He really does care and lov eher, like her brother. She confided in him and leaned on him for support whne things with Edward got really bad. No romantic love, love like a sibbling.
I'm working on the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be up in a day or so.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
I think that he did, I am sure that Edward sent them. I think Bella was to kind to Jacob personally, he is trying to run her life and he cant do that, and I personally think he still in love with her and just cant admit it.
I would have call Jacob out on the text messages also, but that is just me!
I am actually glad to see the ass end of him for now, he was giving me the shits with his high almight crap. Charlotte is not his daughter and yes he has been there for Bella but if Edwards wants to step up to the plate and be a father than dickwad Jacob need to back the fuck off. Secondly it is not his house to tell Bella who she can or cant have staying.
If he does not like it then piss off like he has... I have to say that is the best part aobut this chapter the ass end of Jacob. Yes I have a lot of haterid against your Jacob, he whinny piss ant that he is. Thinks he knows best and is always right... good riddens to him for now.
Edward might have a chance to prove himself now!
Author's Response:
Joacb is a little possive but as I stated before he loves her and wants what is best for her, or at least his version of what is right. He thought by deleating the messages he was saving her from stress from Edward. he's not in love with her but he loves her a lot. As you know he leaves in the next chapter, but he's going to be back in the future.
Alice wanted to, but she didn't want to add to the tention.
Edward is going to do his hardest in future chapters, but that's all any parent can do right? Try their hardest?
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
YAY!!!!! That's all I can think of to say because I'm so happy!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are happy! Next update in a day or so. Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 29
well its about time it came out! and im glad that he didnt even leave boston! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Edward loves Bella more than anything (except Charlotte). Technically he did leave Boston fro Seattle, but he turned around and got right back on a flight back to Boston. next update is in a day or so. Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 09 Jan 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awwwww. Very sweet chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! ANd thnk you fro reading and leaving your comment. Next update should be in a day or so.
-Lisa
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Jabob has been after Bella from DAY 1. He deleted those messages. She can check if they came in and he was the only one there to delete them. That was so wrong and right with his program.
Edward is flakey. I don't trust him still. She is right if he can put it together his daughter deserves her father. Renee should be there no matter what.
Author's Response:
I was hoping that Jacob would come across more as over protective big brother, but everyone wants to kill himstead! LOL. She'll realize that he deleated them
Edward is trying. That's all he can do, right?
The update should be tonight some time. Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Jacob absolutely had to have erased all Edwards messages, and I thought Bella handled things extremely well- though as hot-headed as Jake is, I don't think he would have folded quite that easily and left without a scene, but that's just me. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Bella will find out baout Jacob adn the messages, don't you worry. Jacob truly cares about Bella and just wants her to be happy and safe, two things he doens't think Edward can be with her. He didn't argue with her because he didn't want to upset her any more than she all ready was. he didn't want to cause her more stress.
The next update should be today some time. I'm actually trying to wrap it up now.
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
I really, really, fucking really hope that Edward does not get discouraged by this phone call. Fuck can anything go right for them in this story...
Please update soon, I really and starting to stress that these two will never end up together, it is really heart breaking, fuck I hate Jacob he is really starting to piss me off to the point his is going to loose his balls soon and I dont just mean kick them I am ready to cut the fuckers off.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
Edward is more active in the next chapter, which will be posted tonight at some point. Before you go and try and make Jacob a woman by removing his balls, I just want to point out htat he does really lov eher and thinks he is doing the right thing. he doesn't want her to get hurt any more, which is why he is such a jerk to Edward. Renee is just guilty by assoication.
I hope you find the next chapter more enjoyable (and it's almost Jacob free!).
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
-Lisa
Date: 08 Jan 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
I think Bella handled it wonderfully. She's drained and hormonal and certainly does not need that extra stress. So glad that Edward showed up, I get where Jake is coming from but he's being a bit controlling about it all.
Author's Response:
Jake is being a little overboard, but he doesn't want Bella to get upset any more than she all ready has. She thinks with edward just being there that the possibly of him hurting her is there.
I hope you like the next chapter, which will be posted in a bit!
Thank you for reading/commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 08 Jan 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
im happy that she finally kinda kicked him out ! i hope that they sit down together and talk and that he finally holds her! thank god for alice to help her now ! keep it comming
Author's Response:
Jacob isn't gone for good, he'll be back sooner than you think. he's just trying to protect Bella.
I really hope you liek the next chapter, which will be posted tonight some time.
Thanks for reading adn commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 08 Jan 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
of course he deletedthemessages.
Author's Response:
We'll hear more about the messages later!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 08 Jan 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Great Chapter......
Date: 08 Jan 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Great chapter! I'm so glad Bella stood up to Jake and put her daughters needs first. Anxious for more. :)
Author's Response:
Jacob will be back. Bella is stronger than any gives her credit for. I hop eyou enjoy the next chapter, which should be posted later tonight!
Thanks for reading and commetning!
-Lis
Date: 07 Jan 2011 8:51 PM Title: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View
Oh thank GOD he didn't listen to Jacob! GO EDWARD! Get that head out of yoru ass and take it to Boston! LOL
Author's Response:
thanks for reading. Jacob continues to be Jacob in the next chapter, but Edward gets to Boston. The update should be in a little bit!
-Lisa
Date: 07 Jan 2011 6:51 AM Title: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View
Im so happy he is being smart now thank u. And I hopy Bella really dont mind Edward stayin there. And I hope Jacob goes back to his own house he doesnt need to b sleepin wit Bella anymore now that she has the baby. Please pretty please thank u
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I hope you like what the next chapter has in store. It should be posted later today.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 6:20 AM Title: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View
Yeah he got his head out of his ass LOL I loved his pov thanks for that and so glad Jacob didn't send him running again I know he can be the man Bella needs and the dad the baby needs .I am so happy Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked the last chapter. I hope you like the next chapter. it hsould be posted later today!
-Lisa
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:54 AM Title: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View
I am glad to see Edward take responsibility for his actions and child. Bella needs to put her child first. Her issues with Edward are for her and Edward to work through. They do not have to marry and have an HEA. They both need to be parents to the child.
Jake needs to be relegated to friend status by Bella - not surrogate father but friend. Woman up Bella.
I admit one of my pet peaves it reading about people who confuse their issues with the other parent as the child's issue. Provided there was no abuse of any sort it is not hte child's problem it is the parents problem. You can have conflict with the other parent - just keep it civil and constructive.
I am a mother and waited till I was in my late 30s because that is when my hubby and I were mature enough to have little ones. Parenting is a hard, exhausting job. But worth it.
Ideally we would all be married or coupled with our perfect soulmate but that is not reality. Instead we have to grow up ourselves.
Edward and Bella need to work through there own issues and their issues with the other at ROCKET spead. Sure healing takes time but find a solution and implement it fast. Little person first. In summary, they need a crash course in maturity and to get an A in it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Bella is going to be a bit stronger emotionally in the next chapter. The enxt update should be later today.
-Lisa
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:38 AM Title: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View
well its about time he gets off his ass! i cant wait till she sees him on her door step! and i have a feeling that jake is going to be the worst when it comes to him! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for reading:) If you thougth Jacob was bad in the past you should see what happens next. I should be updating today some time.
-Lisa
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:32 AM Title: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View
Great outtake!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! And thank you for reading. The next update should be today some time.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:32 AM Title: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View
Atta boy Edward. FINALLY!!! Now for the graveling.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Next chapter later today.
-Lisa