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Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

yeah i think she should take a chill pill!



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Holy shit, dodged a big bullet there!  To misinterpret why E looked away could have been disasterous.  Thank the Gods that he is just as stubborn as she is.

*giggles*

OK, to answer your questions- Yes, I absolutely dispise Aro.He is greedy and greed makes your stupid.

Next, I think that Marcus and Caius did get the raw end of the deal, and damn the guard for letting Aro do it.  They were supposed to protect ALL THREE KINGS, not just the deranged one.  I will miss Marcus a great deal.

And as for the drama queen, HELL YES!  She is causing all of this soap opera worthy shit, and its just not fair to the Cullens, or the Denalis.  Poor Esme, Carmen and Eleazar, they are stuck into this drama, they dont deserve it really.

See ya next update BB!!

*hugs*



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 17

wow  shithead killed both brothers too.  hmmm



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Yep, he's nutter!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 17

i can't wait to find out what happens next this was so good



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh no i can't wait to see what will happen at the fight

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 15

loved it i hope the only ppl she kills are the brothers



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

oh crap busted i loved it



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Yepper:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

oh i can't wait to hear about this prophecy and why they went after bella



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

loved it



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

loved it i love that she kicked the wolves butts lol that was great and edward telling her he loves her was so sweet



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

oh crap i hope edward can help her with the pack but she can do it all on her onw she is the one with the most power



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:) Thanks:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

i loved it can't wait for this fight if and when it happens



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!

 

Ok, I am not going to be able to relax until I know what happened and what they saw.

Omg, you are a literary genius.  I cant tell you that enough BB!

I eagerly will be waiting for the next update!!

*hugs*



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Thank you:) I can tell you that it is interesting:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

wow that was a big shock i never would have guessed that but than again she has a lot of power



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Yes, she does:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 7

oh no i can't wait to find out more love this story iam hooked



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved hearing jaspers story and how bad ass bella is .and now that kiss was hot



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

loved it edward is so jealous of jasper thats too funny love this story



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

oh no not the pack but i guess they need their say as well lol i am gla she and rose are getting on better



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

loved it can't wait to find out what is pulling her i think it's edward but i could be wrong lol



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Iam very happy they are going to be staying with carlisle i can't wait to read more



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved it can't wait to find out how they got split up and what has happened to them both very good start you always blow me away with your stories



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 16

poor bella.  too much for any one person



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Yes, it really is!

Reviewer: Twisted Puppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

i love the frequent updates...thank you



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

I wish that stress wasnt on Bella  :(  Dumb dogs!  *grumbles*

The vet called... Sam is just coming out of the anesthesia. *giggles*

 

I cant wait to see what happens next!!  :)



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*snorts* thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

i can just picture carlsle whining



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I know, right?

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

Haha poor Carisle. They so need to get Edward and Bella their own place.



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I know, right?

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

Aww, poor Emmy! LOL! So cute!

And damn, that was one HOT shower!! ;)



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Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

Lemons!! They are my favorite. Gotta love Carlisle and his big brother act. Lol

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lol, he's funny!!

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

so true we control our own destiny



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

ugh   carlisle needs to go away



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

I really agree, Sam needs to go to the Vet.  *calls vet to schedule neutering*

I did enjoy this chapter.  The dogs dont have very good brain functions, they are a bit slow, so getting the full prophecy out of them is like talking to an infant and harder than pulling teeth.  Dumb dogs.

And as for the end of the chapter... Yowza!!  Hot tomales, yee haw!

Now, as for the clifflie, I wonder if it was Carlisle or Jasper?  Hmmm....

 

Loved it BB, see ya next update!  :)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

well she is the prophecy but we know how future works, never as projected.  and yeah they love each other and are getting some action....hahaha big brother is a bit upset, too bad he will have to get over it as shes a big girl.



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Reviewer: budgie36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

Very intersting, I like that she is so powerful.



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

*continues to chase the puppies with rolled up newspaper*

Sam makes a u-turn and latches onto my leg.  He begins to vigorously vibrate against my shin.

"Argh!  You nasty mutt!  Get off!"  Sam dodges my swats at him.

"I'm trying to get off, so stop swinging at me!"  His vibrations get rougher.

I nearly lose my lunch at that point and take a wide swat at him, knocking him sideways off my leg.

Thanks for the warning BB   ;)

I enjoyed this chapter, the seemingly one-on-one with Esme, that led to Brother-to-sister chat, followed reverently by the oncoming ass-whoopin' by brother dearest on them nasty doggies.  beautiful :)

Now, whats this about a prophecy??  Intriguing!  I love it!

See ya next update BB!!  *hugs*



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I think Sam needs to visit the vet ;)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well now we can learn more about htis prophecy and how thay plan to change pre-planned history.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

Good for you Mr. C.  Make them honor the treaty.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 13

yea seth



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

awww  poor b.   Big Bro gonna gang up on him I guess.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oooooh, man, I am so eager to hear what happened with t he wolves for real.  its was a WTF?! moment, and I want the Africa story :)

*huggles you*  Thank you, BTW, for the Author Resp. on LTTP.  I am deeply honored and you wrote me to a tee.  Thats exactly what I would have been like, then busted out the brass ball-busters :)  *cackles*

See ya next update!  *runs to put on pair of boxing gloves* ;)



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lol, you're welcome:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 12

Awe so they can communicate through her shield...Interesting



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Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

If they know the truth about Bella's I think they have pissed their pants really bad. I think they will not come back for revenge and I do believe they will explain everyone what they know



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

*thinks while tapping chin*

Well.... can I chase the puppies and beat them with a newspaper for being so stupid?  Can I, can I, pllllleeeeeaaaaasssssee?!

*gives you the 'Shrek- puss in boots' face*

If they come back and seek revenge on Bella, they obviously have brain damage.  I mean, WTF, stupid mutts. *grumbles*

 

I am seriously in love with this story BB, seriously.  Even though there is no Peter... yet. *winks*  I love this story, you are writing it into perfection, I am enjoying it emmensely.  I am eager to see what happens next :)

*huggles*



Author's Response:

Thank you, doll. Yes, you can  chase the puppies but watch that they don't go humping your leg now. :)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 11

That is interesting, I am not sure if the mutts were just beign stupid or not but they are definitely going to be more cautious now.  THe interesting thing is Bella may not realize it but she has shown she has more control than she thinks even when rage is present.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella don't know what love is!  That is so sad, but Edward will teach her.  Hopefully before she kill him.  LOL



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 11

hmmm  well the puppies need to learn a little respect.   lol



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lol,yes they do!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

GO BELLA!!

Hee hee, I liked the part where Bella and Edward were getting hot and heavy against a tree!  ;)  I wonder if I gave you that idea? LOL! ;)



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lol, No, but they do say that great minds think alike, you know:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

WOW, Wolfees.  LOL



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yeah, so Eleazar isn't so bad after all...

Uh oh, the puppies! Wonder what's rubbed their fur the wrong way, LOL!



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ok, Elly got a bit of a reprieval, but he's still an ass  -_-

So, wow, thats alot for one girl.... yeah.

I loved it, of course, as usual, I am eagerly awaiting your next update darlin'

 

*hugs*



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Yep, Elly isn't all bad...just a smidge of an ass!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

ugh  wolves sticking their noses in.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

Damn cliffy!! :-)

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Hehe, I love Cliffies in case you can't tell:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ah, and possessiveward rears his messy bronze-haired head!  Bout damn time!  lol ;)

I want to squeeze my hands around Tanya's neck until her head pops off, like an unwanted zit on a pre-pubecent boy's face.  Seriously, could she be more of a nosey ditzy bitch?!  I suppose that is possible, but not without a definite chance to behead her during or right after she opens her Voltswagon mouth.  That thing on her face has more miles on it that a VW bus from flower child days.

HO *cough*

See you next update!!  I am eagerly anticipating the continuation of this discussion!  *gives wide dimpled grin*



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W.O.W!!! Thank you....I am laughing quite hard at the Voltswagon mouth comment ;)

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 9

That a boy Edward!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oooh, possessive much, Edward?! ;) hee hee

So she's like Rogue from the X-Men??

Go Bella!

 

Possessiveward, LOL! ;)



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Yes, kind of like Rogue from X-men. Never thought about it like that!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

wow......  put a collar on her why dontcha eddie



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

Way to go Eddie.  Claim your women!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

Good stuff.

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

Ooooh, Edward just made his opinion known about what is feeling are for Bella.  LOL! 

 

OOOOOH she is powerful and do I see a standoff with Aro in the future???



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Yes, you do:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

The only vampire able to end the world?!  HOLY SHIT!!

How awesome is that??!!  Sweet@  I cant wait to see if Elly can get a read on her, I just know it is going to be amazing  :)

I am a little frightened for Tanya.  Her slutty ways will get her killed, I just know it.  I think her pyre is in her future if she lays one finger on Jazz or E.  Dont you agree?  lol

See ya next time 'round BB!!!!  *hugs*



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Yep, Bella's a bitchy badass:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

Damn!



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Reviewer: budgie36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

intersting.  I like this angle and that bella is powerful.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

hmmm    Me thinks Slutya will be going to rat bella out to the volturi because of eddie.



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Hmm, you think?? Interesting.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

HUmmm(n)....guess Edward is going to have a lot on his hands..



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Oh, yeah he is ;)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

ooh she has mad vampire skills, wonder what might be potentially be going down...hummmm



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Yeah, she a badass ;)

Reviewer: budgie36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

very good keep it coming I love it.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: shercullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story. Is it going to be happily ever after for Bella and Edward? I hope so. Your stories are awesome.

 I wasn't so sure about a vampire fic, but I like it.  keep up the awesome work. :)



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Thank you:) This is my first vamp fic and it makes me nervous:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Holy butt-scratching bear Batman!  A twist!  *le gasp*

What in the sam haitis is Elly doing there?!  This is great!  So suspenseful.

*shivers me timbers*

Well, at least E and B are getting to know each other.  That was what I hoping for.

Oh!!!  Does this mean the Africa flashback is coming?!

If I build it, will they come?  *snickers*

Yes, I have finally fell completely off my rocker, but the voices are telling me I am just fine.

See you next update BB!!  All the little people are counting on it!

 

 



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lol, yes, Africa is coming:) Say hi to the little people for me!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

WOW, way to go Eddie, go after your girl even if she can kill you.  LOL



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He's ballsy:)

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

Well it's about time, give the guy a chance Bella, he'll forgive yo for Afica...whatever happened there. 



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

hmm she know eliazar....wonder if she knows Slutya too (tanya)



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lol, slutya:)

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

About time. Kissy kissy!!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

interesting backstory.  wonder what drew her there?  woohoo Edward has made his move....



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

jealous little eddie.  how cute



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

*falls out of chair laughing*

That has to be, the most fucked-up first kiss between those two that could have ever been imagined XD

PERFECT!!!  lol

I am literally laughing so hard I have tears running down my face and blurred my vision.  Funny stuff right there.

 

I love your twist on Jazz's story, that was a new one to me!!  So.... since Peter is mentioned, we will get to see him and he 'know-it-all ass, right?

Yay!! lol

See ya next time BB!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Peter will be making his appearance but not for awhile:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 6

Way to go Eddie.  LOL



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 6

Bella is one heck of a hardass, huh?  Loosen up Bella, you want a mate, you're losing Jasper and you know it...and Edward?  Well he's Edward, who wouldn't want to tap that!?



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, I am proud of Edward!  Go Edward!  You take charge of Bella.  Thank you for the update.  I am so ready to find out who or what is the "power" that Bella feels is coming to Forks.  Please update soon so we can all find out how Bella takes the kiss from Edward.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

More please!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: leeshaann Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

OMG!!!!!!!!!! More Please...

 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

Not rubbish AT ALL!!!  I love it!

I cant wait to see what happened in Africa.  That is going to be an exciting tale :)

And whats the deal with them staying with the Cullens?  Are the just wanting a reason to start a fight?  Come to think of it... yeah, probably. 

*rolls up newspaper*  Time to whoop me some pups!

*huggles* Looking forward to the next update :)



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Thank ya kindly!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

wow   eddie is a jealous little thing



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Yes, he is!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love the story and where it might be headed.  I just do not understand why Bella is bitchy with Edward?  How long is it going to take Bella to get her head out of her ass?

Again, thank you for chapter.  Patiently waiting for another.



Author's Response:

Because Edward was acting like a Jeaslous fool and Bella's been alone, with the exception of Jasper, for three hundred years:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

ruh roh  wuff



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

*preparesd to let you know what I thought about the chapter*

*clears throat*

Well..... THANK GOD THE ICE QUEEN IS TAMING!!!  lol

Never has the phrase 'taming the shrew' meant so much to me...  *snorts*

Ok, so its not the wolves that are the big thing coming...

*scratches them off list*

Ok, so that takes it down to... *looks at list*

The Denali clan, The band of nomad nimrods aka James, Laurent and Vicki, The Volturi, Maria *growls*, or something that is going to totally blind side me...

*mentally scoffs* Yeah, I am leaning towards the latter as well. *growls*

I am looking forward to your next update :)  I am in love with this story, just so you know.



Author's Response:

Are you saying that I like to blindside people with what I write??? I am...so not shocked because I totally do!! I will tell you that... I thank you for the reviews....muahahaha, I love being a tease!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

lol, I couldn't figure out what it was.  Wolfs, to funny.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

I really like your story so far, I like when Bella is already a vampire.

I have really enjoyed all of your stories, I'm really enjoying Living through the Pain. and also all of your Lustfull stories.  Looking for to the next chapter of The Moment...



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Excellent!



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

SQUEEEEE!!!!!

*shatters the front room windows*

WHAT is this power? This feeling?  Is it like my darling Peter's ability?

*mentally winces at calling it an 'ability'*

Oh My GAWD, something is coming!  What is it?!  I cant wait to find out :)

The progression is coming through perfectly, dont change a thing  *hugs*



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Thank you:) I will explain, my dear. I promise!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

hmmm she is attuned to nature? or sort of like Peter's gift?



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Kind of:)

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

And here I thought the pull was to Edward. Guess I was wrong. Now I wonder exactly what the pull is for Bella. 



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Not wrong, exactly. There is the pull to Edward but more, too.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really like this story.  It is so original.  I like the CH & B sibling part.  I like that the pairing is still or at least it appear to be the same.  However, its a different story line.  Well done.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: leeshaann Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loving It !!!!!!!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hmmm  mating pull to eddie I assume?



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Yes:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

hmmmm  looks interesting



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

Not bad.  Now all it needs is an update.



Author's Response:

I'll have an update tomorrow:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

Um, ok.  I will leave my review here now.

*clears throat*

OH MY GAWD!!!   I LOVE this vamp fic darlin'!!!  You are bringing it to us readers splendidly, and I'm not talking the sugar splendid either! ;)

 

So, do we get a back story next chapter???  I cant wait, I am so excited!!  :)

*bounces uncontrollably*

See you next update BB!!! 

*hugs you till you turn blue the zips off in a flash of brilliant green*



Author's Response:

A few more chapters before we get into the backstory of Bella, Jasper, and what they've done:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am hooked and love how snarky Bella is here.  I cannot wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved the beginning of this story. Its different and after reading all your other stories, this one may take the spot as my favorite :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: rhochradel Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I always love your stories. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

AAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  OMGOMGOMG  I LOVE IT!!!

Don't knock your vampire writing skills, you are DA BOMB with no matter what you write :)

 

Of, course, you know, I love it :)  I cant wait to hear the back story on it!!!

 

*bounces in chair*



Author's Response:

Hehe, you never did answer my question about when you are going to write something.

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