[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 38 Outtake New York City
I LOVED this. From start to finish I was involved. I even cried when Bella saw Charlie and gave him back his 'mind'. Thank you for the wonderful story. I really enjoyed the difference of her power. Loved it...great job.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 38 Outtake New York City
I am so sad that this story is done!! I got so involved with the characters. I love the power you gave Bella, ot was better than the one in the book
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 38 Outtake New York City
fangtastic story!!! ;) i've read it before but it doesn't lessen with more reading ;D
Date: 12 May 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 47
I'm happy bella got see her dad one more time. Jacob final gets the pointed of real love.
Date: 12 May 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
I don't think saying your sorry would help her any. Sure someday jacob will find happiness,but he won't forget about bella ever.
Date: 12 May 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I always wonder if bella would regret kissing jacob and hurting edward as while?
Date: 01 May 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 38 Outtake New York City
Just plain loved this!
Date: 01 May 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 33 Outtake The Funeral
Carlisle is just too good to be true sometimes. He is torn between happiness at Bella and Edward together, and guilt for Charlie's grief! It was very nice of Billy to offer some comfort the way he did.
Date: 01 May 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outtake The Boat
Alice is so fiercly loyal and loving with her family and Charlie, too! That must have been a heartbreaking chapter to write!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outtake Alice's Phone Call
You just have to love Alice and how much she loves Bella and Charlie! Sure the vampires are good liars but Alice sure hated to do that to Bella's dad!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 27 Outtake Sex Talk
Renee is like no mother I ever knew, but she is kind of fun to read! Bella loves her mom, but her candor about all things sexual just embarasses her very private daughter to no end!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 47
The scene with Charlie always makes me tear up, can't help it! It's so beautiful, so touching and so real. Second reading of this story was as good as the first, and I'll probably read it again , one day.
Date: 30 Apr 2014 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 46
Hallelujah! What a relief to have the peace they all have longed for, now that the family is safe from the Volturi, forever!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 45
That was a great fight and it sure went the right way and the good guys won!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 44
I am now optimistic about the family's chances of getting Esme back and accomplishing their mission with Aro!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 43
Of all of them, to do that to Carlisle shows the depth of Aro's depravity! I hope Bella takes more than memories of the Cullens from Aro. Too bad she can't make his head explode and be done with him!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 42
Aro, what a mealy-mouthed son-of-a-bitch he is! Of all the rotten things to do to his supposed old friend!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 41
Wow, I'm so impressed by how quickly Bella can learn new things about her power! No wonder Jasper is awed by her!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 40
Ever since the haircut, I've been waiting for this! It was just fated that Tanya would get payback, even when she didn't do it deliberately! Now the fat's in the fire!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
Their first Christmas was a beautiful one! Bella's gifts to everyone were perfect, especially Edward's and Carlisle's! Jasper's carvings were lovely and unique. I loved Edward's gift to Bella, too!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 38
Bella is really getting a handle on control of her talent, the psych class was a riot, topped only by NotMike's striptease! She had fun with Emmett also!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 37
Emmett wanted Bella to have a cool power, and sure enough, she does! Eleazar is thrilled and awed, so she must be really special! Of course Edward has always known that! The hair cut Tanya gave herself was pretty funny and a great payback. I was proud of Bella!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 36
Serves the witch right for always hitting on Bella's husband! That was quite the way to discover her power!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
Tit for tat, Bella helped Rose get her thinking adjusted, now Rose has returned the favor!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
Kind of forgot that it took a confrontation between them to begin detente with Rose and Bella.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 33
Still such a heartwrenching moment, much worse than the hateful things Jake said!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
I remember reading this the first time and having a lump in my throat at the pain this caused Bella, and Edward too of course!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
I guess that amazing inner dialogue was what kept Bella from attacking and draining the delivery men. Whatever gets the job done. It sure made them all proud of her, that's for sure!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
Makes me wonder how many years it will take Rosalie to finally act nice around Bella? Surely it will happen, just not very soon. Big moment coming up for newborn Bella tomorrow. Bet she does well.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
Kind of like walking through a mine field is how Aro's visit seemed to me! It could have gone much worse than it did, but happily didn't. Everyone took their measure of everyone else and went home. Guess that is as good as it could be.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
Here we are, half way through the story, when, thinking some things were so familiar, I looked through another site notebook and there it was! I read this on F.F. ! However, its good enough to read again, so I will! Bella's training was very interesting , with both Emmett and Jasper.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 27
Nice birthday, even with Renee treating the family to her free thinking! She has absolutely no filter when it comes to sex, she'll share it all with almost anyone! Bella got a little taste of what it will be like to say goodbye to her parents forever. Hope Rose gets over being such a pain in the ass someday. Also hope that Edward explains about keys and the farmer in the dell, Bella really should know!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
Emmett may not be too pleased, but Bella's first hunt went beautifully! He wanted her to have a bear and she did, it just didn't lead to another, but to loving Edward instead! Jasper kind of enjoyed the feelings, too! Good old Alice, always ready with backup clothes!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm so glad Bella was able to undergo this transformation with so little agony involved! Between that mysterious electrical spark between her and Edward and the calming from Jasper, she came through it much easier than normal!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow! From Rosalie's rant, to Esme's appreciation of Bella calling her mom, to calm and logic while discussing her change, and Jasper's offer, to Edward doing his loving best, Bella's change is simply amazing! You did a superb job of this!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 22 Outtake
Good grief! Talk about sharing the wealth! The whole family should thank Bella, I guess, because they are all enjoying the benefits of her belly-button ring, even Rose!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
That was an amazing last night as a human! Has there ever been a love like their's? I doubt it, but it sure is neat to read about it! Loving your version of Breaking Dawn!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
It always was the neatest thing about Bella's transformation, that she had time to really prepare before becoming unchanging forever! Alice sees Edward really loving Bella's piercings, especially the belly-button ring!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
The Cullens are the most generous family, giving Edward and Bella their own little place, next to the big house. Bella is fortunate to have married into a family, since she will not be able to see her parents again.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was almost kind of mean, to encourage those women to hit on Jasper and Emmett! Their little trick will take some head-scratching to try to figure out how cars could move like that! This was really a fun road trip, and certainly unique!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was a wrench just to read, I can't imagine what it would be like to live it! Onward and upward!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward is just going to have to grit his teeth and tell his wife what is so funny about a key! I suppose he didn't want to embarass her right then, in front of everyone.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
A Paris honeymoon, I'm so jealous! What a wonderful way to document the memories and save them for when she is changed! The journals were an inspired wedding gift!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward may have to, someday, thank Emmett for that small reminder, hi ho the deerio! I think the two beginners did just fine their first time! So did you, by the way!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Despite some rauncy thoughts from a few, Edward managed to get through the whole thing , very nicely, as did Bella! Alice really did a super job of coordinating this whole thing for them!
Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I take it back, Alice is just being Alice, trying to make this wedding perfect for her favorite brother and her best friend/sister! Sharing her first time with Jasper was very nice of her.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
If it were possible, I would think Alice is about to crack under the pressure! She is running around like a woman possessed! Best just to stay out of the line of fire, I guess!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
With the exception of Jessica's sour note, this was kind of a sweet chapter. The gifts Bella and Edward exchanged were the best!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Alice is sure having her revenge, not only on Bella, but Edward as well! Of course, no one could have guessed that Renee would just blurt out that embarassing story . I bet Bell wanted to hide after that one!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Edward, it's so embarassing for him to ask about such things! I was kind of surprised when Emmett got serious for a minute and tried to help. Even a fool can have a moment I guess.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella should have known she wasn't going to escape the wedding planning totally unscathed! It was great that she found the perfect gift for Edward, but it hurt her to be treated that way by Jake!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
The difference in reaction to the announcment, by her parents, is breathtaking! Oh well, at least it's done!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
Even I have to feel a little sorry for poor old Jake! Next up will be Edward, now that he sees the bruises he caused!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
I still wish Bella would just let it go and not try to talk to Jake . It's kind of like beating a dead horse now! Oh well, at least Victoria is gone for good!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
What about Victoria and Riley? Did they participate in the battle and die also? One can but hope!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Now that they have that straightened out, I'm glad Bella will stop blowing hot and cold, so to speak. It will be a very great comfort to both of them to have finally settled the Jacob question!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
Come on, Edward, have a little faith, you know deep down, she's yours!
Date: 28 Apr 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Atta girl! That is exactly the reaction she should have had and didn't! Better late than never, I suppose!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 38 Outtake New York City
yummy NY times
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 33 Outtake The Funeral
Glad Billy was cordial with Carlisle at least. Paul and Sam are reall pieces of work. Too bad Em didn't get at least one punch in but Alas it would have made things worse.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outtake The Boat
Poor Charlie. Glad they were all with him though
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outtake Alice's Phone Call
There are points where I really wanna hate Rose. This had to happen. Sigh
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 27 Outtake Sex Talk
OMG How mortifying for her. But Hilarious for us.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 47
Glad that she got to see Charlie at the end and she was able to help him remember at the end. Alzheimers is a scary thing.
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 46
Excellent job Bella and Edward.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 45
Glad they killed Caius along with Haides. What a jerk. Go bad Ass Rose too.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 44
Good plan to get Esme. Hope Haides isn't an issue for them....or Caius either. Stupid Aro for pushing them to this.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 43
Glad they were able to help Rose. Poor Carlisle. I think Aro needs to die, but I guess wiping his memories would help. But what of all the other people who know about the Cullens? Picture/Drawings/Photos? Ah well I think too much.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 42
Poor Esme. Aro needs to die, Soon. They need to get as many vamps as possible to go with them to show that Aro is using kidnapping and coersion to get what he wants. Guess we know what Haides is for. Jerk.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 41
Jasper is such a master strategist. Glad Billy was willing to talk to her. Wonder how long till Charlie sees the wolves. hmmmmm
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 40
Glad that B and Esme got some time together. Arg. Stupid Skankya.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 39
Aww what a wonderful fist holiday. Sweet gift for Carlisle.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 38
Great first day at school. She's doing so well.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
Great job with the training with Jasper. ooh love slave for the day. yummy.
Still thing Skankya....or maybe Irina... is gonna blab
Date: 11 Feb 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 36
Skankya had it coming. Why do I have the feeling the biatch is going to go running to the Volturi?
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 35
ACK the real key story came out. Go Rose for talking her down. hmmm me thinks her power may be starting to emerge.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
Glad her and Rose finally came to an understanding. Hopefully R won't be as much of a biatch now.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow Jacob is a real arsehole. As if he wouldn't have hurt her when he imprinted on someone like Sam did to Leah.
Glad Rose was nice to charlie, but I have a feeling she's going to go off on B also.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
at least she called to say goodbye in a way. Poor B is gonna be sad Im sure.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 31
Woo Hoo Good Job Bella. Can't wait to see what Alice has planned for Em Jr.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
Great family outing. LOL for the key story. Em is so silly, but gotta love him. Glad Rose isn't as antagonistic as she's been in the past. Uh oh Human huh?
Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 29
Ugh Felix is such a pig. Aro is a coniving arse. Interesting comments from Rose.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 28
Em is such a trip. Why do I get the feeling rose will find out? Aro huh? Uh oh
Date: 11 Feb 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 27
Renee is such a trip.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great first hunt. Em is such a big kid. Gotta love him though
Date: 09 Feb 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 24
Woo Hoo glad she's done changing (ty for not overly dragging it out too). Hmm Is Rose going to be jealous that her change was "easy" compared to the others? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 23
Woo Hoo Finally getting to the change and the first day of forever.
Hopes Rose gets over herself and welcomes B eventually.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 22 Outtake
Wow rose is really getting on my nerves. Wow they are really excited about a belly button ring
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wonderful date and end to the date too
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
Should have went with a full brazilizan. its sooooo nice. Earrings are a cool idea.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
House sounds wonderful. Woo Hoo for shower time.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Road time with those guys would be fun
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sweet letters. LOL for family road trip
Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
ROFL Just knew Em was going to start. Hmmm Is rose ever going to play nice?
Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Surprised they'd go to Europe with the V and all. But wonderful honeymoon memories.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG Renee is really a trip. What a sweet first time. Happy lemon Dance for first time.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
Lovely wedding. Skankya, Jess, and Mike are all pathetic.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
ROFL for the beginning of the Alice Tornado but awwww for Sister Alice at the end.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
lol for Tornado Alice. Poor Em. Hope Skankya behaves.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ugh and why did Alice want her (jess) Involved???? Ah well. Sweet Esme story though. Nice presents too. Her journalling is a smart idea.