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Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:16 PM Title: Beauty Crowds Me

i liked it great one shot!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and the lovely review.  I had a lot of fun writing this and very chuffed at making 3rd place in the contest.

I have just started writing a companion piece to this story from Bella's POV in a seperate one-shot to be called In Sight of Thee.  Most of it will take place after they leave the bar together but there will be some flashbacks from school as well. Stay tuned.

Suz

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 2:27 AM Title: Beauty Crowds Me

aww that was sweet. I loved that story. thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and your lovely review.  I wasn't going too, but this was so much fun writing that I am going to do a companion one-shot from Bella's perspective with a little bit from when they were in school but mostly from seeing Edward at the magazine in his fugly getup and then on to what happens after they leave the bar.  It will be called 'In Sight of Thee'.

Suzanne

Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 4:53 AM Title: Beauty Crowds Me

you gave us a lemon with Jessica and Edward in a short story about Edward and Bella being in love?  i feel jipped!  you need to give us at least one more chapter of E and B going way farther than he did with any of those other skanks! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and the constructive review.  The story was written for a contest with an idea in mind and sadly only a 7,000 word count. At one point I wrote a lemon at the end between E & B but it came out too rushed and seemed too sordid for a HEA, so I felt that the fic ended better as it did within the context for the contest.  

The lemon with Jessica was less about Edward being with Jessica and more about Edwards realisation that he and Bella had never been a couple and that in his mind that was never likely to happen and that he would have to move on.  Of course once he had, he still struggled to get Bella out of his mind and had chosen someone who reminded him of her in looks - he was seeing Bella even though it was Jessica.

Now, my beta is going to kill me, because after writing for 3 contests in a month, I have decided to do a little companion one-shot to this story called 'In Sight of Thee' (from the same Emily Dickinson poem)  It will be BPOV and cover her perspective of Edwards beauty and their relationship in school, what happened with creepy James, how she recognised Edward at the magazine and then of course what happened after they left the restaurant.  And there will be lots of E&B Lemons...

Suzanne

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:44 PM Title: Beauty Crowds Me

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and the smiley review.  This one-shot was a lot of fun writing.

Suz

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