Date: 06 Aug 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
Emmett is a big teddy bear. Live him. And yes, Edward does need his ass kicked. He asked her the question and he wanted the truth from her. I hope Emmett does let him have it. I am still not convenienced that it is not James. Can't wait to read Edward's POV.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, he told her about Tanya. That meant alot to him to open up to her like that. Even though he did not tell her who the friend was. I am still would series getting what Jasper thought when he opened that email.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is giving me whiplash. One minute she is like mad becauseof what Edward does to her and they are just need to have a platonic relationship then she shows up in a bra and thong with a rob. What does she think is going to happen. Can't wait to see what happens when she finally let's go and just enjoys herself.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMGosh! Whoever is stalking Bella made a very bold statement with the explosion and shooting at them. Glad Edward is going to protect her. Still can't wait to find out more about Jasper and Edward's past and more about Bella's stalker.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
Well, Jasper and Edward have made progress in their messed up friendships. I actually blame Tanya for pitting the two friends against each other as some sort of sick twisted game; where she was the prize. Glad she's gone! Edward lost not only his wife but also the chance at having a family. How very sad. Jasper on the other hand took his rejection to another level of deceit and that's just wrong. And look what revenge did for Edward.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
Glad it was Edward and not her stalker.
Will Jasper appear just as Edward is attempting to explain who it was that took Tanya away from him?
Bella is forgiving but will she feel like a pawn in the game between these two ex best friends?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
Don't do anything stupid Bella. For example, running back to New York to try and figure out what's happening back home.
I'd like to do more than just slap Edward up alongside the head for his stupidity.
I'm a bit uneasy with Emmett's casual approach to taking care of Bella after her first submissive experience. He was a bit too worked up for his own good after observing both Edward and Bella in full Dom/sub action. He did show an amazing amount of restraint. That may have also been out of respect for Edward as a friend.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
As many times as a Emmett and Edward have shared a woman, I believe Edward cannot do that with Bella due to his feelings of love for her. It would remind him of Tanya's betrayal. Possibly making him feel as though he is not enough for the woman he loves.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward, where is your hope?
Is he so broken from what happened with Tanya that he himself can not understand the difficult decision Bella needs to make at this very moment? He is in need of a partner. One that can be everything she needs as well as allow him to be everything he needs to be. His emotions are clouding that judgment. He needs as much time to reevaluate himself as she does.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward must realize that his disappointment comes from his feelings for her. His next line of thinking should be that she is still protecting herself from the abuse she took from James.
Will their next talk break through these issues they are each struggling to understand?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Lust, Love or Revenge.........Edward has found himself in a difficult place. His own thoughts cannot keep up with the desires of his heart, mind and body.
Once Bella allows Edward teach her the intensity of her own desires, will Edward ever share her with Emmett? I think not, but will Bella's desires leave him to think otherwise?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wondering if Bella will be angry about the revenge tactic against Jasper? Then again, when she finds out what Jasper did with Edward's wife Tonya, she may take a swing at her half brother.
There has to be more to the story of Tanya and how easily Jasper went after her.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm a bit surprised that after Bella's revelation about the abuse she experienced at the hand of her ex husband James, Edward proceeded to push her issues of submission so quickly.
Let the heart begin to feel, let the mind begin to heal; for both parties involved.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward has just screwed himself. Somewhere he is himself the impression that he truly was in charge. At what point will he realize that he's actually given his heart over to Miss Isabella and his attempt at revenge against Jasper has been thwarted?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Does Jasper know that Edward was Bella's next job detail? Was he made aware of this fact before he had to leave town?
How does Jacob factor into Isabella safety net?
Are Emmett and Rosalie and item yet?
Edward referenced dropping out of college or university as it were, and failing at his military career; what did he do or is that why Jasper is involved in the events that started this whole grudge match?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
I had a feeling that the stocker would show his colors in front of Mr Cullen.
Edward now finds himself in a different predicament, his original intention was to take down Bella's brother but now he has another directive and that is to protect her from danger.
Will Edward find himself somehow working hand-in-hand with Jasper to keep Isabella safe even though he loathes him?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm so intrigued by all the suspense, speculation and mystery.
We have yet to meet the private investigator that is holding a grudge.
Our heroine is in trouble as she is being stalked.
She has a failed relationship, or is that marriage?
Jasper is her brother but yet he holds a secret job. Their father is a high level politician.
Jacob is her business partner. She has a secret regarding her sexual preferences and desires.
Does Alice reside in New York where Bella used to?
Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thanks for sharing this story. a friend of mine rec'd it to me and I'm glad she did. Wow, that threesome was so hot. I was beginning to think I'd never get to read one in fanfics since mostly the Edwards are too possessive for that. Thanks for your great writing.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just finish to read your story and I loved it. The relationship between your Edward and Bella is beautiful. I like Emmett, he is funny
Just so you know, I knew it was James, instinct I suppose but the false clue about Jacob was a good idea, I almost thought I was wrong