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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh my God!  What happened to Seth was beyond disgusting.  He must have been so scared when he thought he was going to be saved by his cousin and then he just joins in.  What his Mum did is beyond words, how can she disown her son like that?  At least now he has Garrett and he'll have a big extended family with Edward, Jasper and everyone else.

I can't believe either that Kate did what she did.  She laid down the law to Garrett and then didn't tell him anything about the person she'd been seeing.  What makes it worse is that she married Garrett knowing that she was also seeing someone else and didn't really love him, she's such a hypocrite.  She should have told Garrett everything when he came home.  I wonder what would have happened then......hmm.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hopefully this dinner with Garrett won't be as awkward as it sounds.

Lol, Peter didn't waste any time getting to know Charlotte did he.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

Ah, it was Tanya on the phone.  I'm glad that Jasper went to find Edward and they've talked, it will take work and patience to build up that trust again.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

So Garrett disappeared with a new man called Seth, isn't he the fast worker, lol.  I'm glad that he's found his soul mate but it's sad that it came at the expense of his marriage and Kate's happiness.

At least now it's clear to Edward that Jasper and Garrett aren't going to be together and Jasper's beaten him to it and turned up to see him.  Who was it that called him, one of Edward's family?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well that was unexpected as well.  For Jasper to have known right from the beginning who Edward was and not say anything, but then if his intention was to just hurt him then he wouldn't need to tell him.  He should have told him though as soon as he knew their relationship was going to go further.  It makes more sense now why he pulled away from Edward, but as he learned you can wait too long to say what you need to say.

Is this Garrett on the phone now?  I hope it is.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  I didn't see that one coming at all I just thought Jasper was being a complete git but I did wonder what had happened to make him treat Edward that way.  I'm with Edward, it never would have crossed my mind that Jasper was scared of Edward rejecting him or leaving him because of his relationship with Garrett, especially after he heard Jasper tell Garrett he loved him, I would have thought the worst.

I'm looking forward to getting Garrett's view on all this, see what his explanation is.  Did Edward really hear Jasper's voice around his apartment building or was it his imagination?  No doubt I'll find out.

Jane x

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:57 AM Title: Story Update

I'm bummed that you aren't going to continue this, but thanks for the very abrieviated epilouge.  At least we knew that got their HEA.

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

i really love this story. i can't wait to finish reading it

Reviewer: MouseKitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:31 PM Title: Story Update

Thanks so much for outlining the future of the story, even if you aren't going to flesh out the details.

Reviewer: Vampirelestat12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter.  love how they are settling into their own place.  Phooey is too phunny!  My favorite line was Edward yelling  "Jasper, I lo....Aaaaahhhhhh!" Had such a  visual of the cat clawing his back!

Great job!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Seth.  At least he has people around him who love him.

All I have to say about the punishment sex...fucking hot!!!  I love when Edward tops Jasper.  I get all excited just thinking about it.

Reviewer: SarahAH30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, loved it honey, you are making it hard for me though, don't know who I love more the boys or Phooesy :)

God I love your humps, I love to see Jasper on the receiving end ;)

Hope you have a fab day honey :)

Reviewer: OCDJen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love it babe!

Hahah the cat and Turkey leg? classic. Seriously hot hump, but bad Maura for the nasty little hanger on the end. CVan't wait to see the next chapter babe

love ya

 

 

Reviewer: Fliberty Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

That cat is so funny! I loved all the cat speak and conversations. I loved Emmett acting the uncle and treating him so well too.

Those boys are hot. It's so nice to see them establised in their home and so happy together.

Reviewer: Fliberty Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm impressed with Jasper for being so open and taking responsibility for what happened with Edward. The dinner was really nice until Alice turned up and started spewing venom. I loved how Jasper stood up for Seth and how gentle he was with him when he was so upset.

I'm glad Esme and Carlisle have accepted him and I loved how Carlisle talked to him before they left.

Reviewer: Fliberty Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

Exciting stuff for these two. I'm glad they are sorting this out and giving each other some space.

Reviewer: SarahAH30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Chapter 10 was amazing as always Maura.

So happy you found the boys a new home.

I think I love these boys even more now after seeing their interaction with Phooey, that is going to be on spoiled kitty lol

Sarah



Author's Response:

Hey Sarah! Thanks for following the boys. I'm very happy you liked the chapter.

And yes, Phooey is going to be a very spoiled cat. Ch 11 has him visiting his grandma and grandpa Cullen for Thanksgiving. He's good practice for all of them until someone in the family has a baby.

 

Thanks again!

Maura

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

That was very sad.  i know that Jasper feels full disclosure was necessary, but did he really have to tell him that?  It wasn't like anyone else knew his plans and if we convicted everyone on their thoughts, their wouldn't be a free person walking the streets today.  I hope Edward is able to forgive him.

Oh and by the way...the scene in the beginning...FUCK HOT!!!!!  Edward definatly needs to forgive him cause we need a whole lot more of that kinky fuckery (I love that term). ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the great reviews! I'm so glad you're enjoying the boys story (and the smut). I hope you continue to enjoy the story as they work on making a life together.

Maura

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

Mmmm, this has promise. ;)

That is so sad what Seth went through.  I am guessing that Bella and Jacob are the bad guys in that particular story, right?  No matter what, it is sad that he went through all that and basically lost his entire family over it.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

Make up sex is the best sex!!!  I'm glad to see them back together but I worry where things will go from here.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

That was so hard to read through their pain but so beautiful at the same time.  I love what Jasper said to Edward at the end.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hmmm, I wonder how this conversation is going to play out.  At least it is a good sign that Jasper made the effort to track Edward down.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ahhh, reading Jasper's POV was more painful than Edward's.  It is so sad to think that this could ahve been avoided if they had just talked.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was a very emotional first chapter.  I felt so bad for him when he left Jasper; leaving the key and picture.  It seemed so final and heart breaking.  I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

such emotion!  You do a wonderful job of showing emotions, heartache and love. It all seems so real-a wonderful writer!



Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks for the great review. You've made me blush. lol

Maura

Reviewer: OCDJen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

WOOHOO! So happy to see you have moved it to this site babe.

Loved chapter ten! Yes the spinning on the chair like kids, classic! Being cock blocked by the cat? hahahaha

 

love it!

 



Author's Response:

Best pre-reader ever! Thanks babe! Glad you found me and got yourself logged in. lol

 

Come on, no comments about the acorns??? :)

 

Thanks for your help, and your support.

 

Love ya!

M

Reviewer: dbhing300 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

So glad you were able to find a place for your stories. 

 

Love that Jasper is such a good man and can admit his mistake.  Now if Edward can grow a bigger pair and forgive him (you can tell who I favor!!) that would be even better.  Great story and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad I found a new home here as well.

 

I'm glad you're enjoying the boys story.

Maura

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

Jasper & Edward have such mixed signals & interpretted each other wrong! I am so happy to see Japer at the shop - hope things get better!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the great reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Maura

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

I guess Jasper isn't the cold bastard that Edward imagined he was! Loved reading his POV!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful story! My heart breaks for Edward - hope he straightens this mess out!

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