Date: 13 May 2017 12:20 PM Title: Mile High Club
Loved it!
Date: 14 Jan 2017 7:52 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 8:28 PM Title: A Good Lawyer
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 5:15 PM Title: Weeping Willow part 2
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 4:10 PM Title: Weeping Willow
Loved it
Date: 12 Jan 2017 3:25 PM Title: Detective Hale
Poor Edward!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 2:51 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Dramatic chapter!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 2:17 PM Title: Not in my world
Is Bella alright!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 2:01 PM Title: Get the fucking bitch out of my house
Fantastic chapter!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 12:48 PM Title: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 10:40 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Excellent chapter!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 10:07 AM Title: Save your pennies
Uh-oh!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 9:52 AM Title: Edwardian Period
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 9:33 AM Title: Sinners Part 2
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 6:48 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
Loved it!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 8:29 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Fantastic chapter!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 5:56 PM Title: Pom Pom's
Awesome chapter!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 4:09 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Loved it!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 3:20 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Loved it!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 1:41 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Loved it!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 1:02 PM Title: Time To Think
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 12:43 PM Title: Fuck My Life
Loved it!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 12:10 PM Title: Laurent
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 11:31 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
Loved it!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 10:10 AM Title: Spartan Lover
Loved it!
Date: 08 Mar 2016 3:15 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
Previously you say Amy and Carlie never got marry now Fay gives Bella something's she used at her wedding?
Date: 16 May 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
great story
Date: 01 Jan 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 35
awesome and hillarious 'inner' dialogue especially edward ;) i really hope you can come back to write o/t and f/t ;D
Date: 11 May 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great Story
Date: 09 Jul 2013 12:11 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Lalalalalalala!!! I'm not listening just like Edward. I knew she was going to do that. One weekend of loving attention does not a husband make. I would normally say fight for your marriage but both Bella and Edward have been miserable for so long I don't think there's any point. I hope what Edward's planning to do doesn't back fire on him and it is pretty shitty that he's giving Angela false hope that he's working on their marriage but then I think, well she has cheated on him and then I don't think what he's doing is that shitty but then again it is and he should just be a grown up and file for divorce. Argh! I'm just going around in circles, lol.
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 12:09 AM Title: Time To Think
Us girls are resourceful when we have to be. I'm dying to know what's in the not but if it's along the lines of 'I can't do this, we can't see each other anymore' then I'm sticking my fingers in my ears and not listening, lalalalalalala!!!!!
Erm, has Bella forgotten that Angela's been cheating on Edward for ages with her trainer, Ben? I have to agree with what Emmett said when he said that Angela didn't deserve to be cheated on, well neither does Edward, it doesn't just go one way. Angela's apologies for all she's ever done and said against Edward just won't cut it when he finds out and the penny drops, spouses and partners always find out in the end.
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 12:06 AM Title: Fuck My Life
That was some dream. Angela seems to have done a complete turn around where Edward's concerned. I suppose nearly losing him in an attack would make you realise what you actually had but I'm not convinced that that's what it is for Ang. What did she mean"I learned to love you through everything you gave me." Does she mean monetary, emotionally or possessions? I was worried that Angela was going to steal Edward's sperm so she could get pregnant, especially after what she said in the hospital, in the hopes that he would stay with her but if they did divorce she would get more and also have a permanent link to Edward.
Woohoo!! Edward and Bella found each other but now Ang's there. I don't think this is going to go well. Will Bella get so pissed off that she lets it slip that Ang has been cheating on Edward?
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 12:04 AM Title: Laurent
Oh my God! Thank God Edward was able to save Bella. What will Bella do now that she knows her Bronze God and Spartan are the same person? What will happen when she finds out he's called Edward and makes the connection to Angela? Oh you two are just evil, evil I say, lol. I have so many questions going around my head. Who the fuck was Laurent talking to on the phone? Was this planned well in advance? Has he been watching Bella? Argh!! I'm driving myself daft. *throws hands up in the air*
Jane x
Date: 09 Jul 2013 12:01 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
WHAAAAAAT!!! What the hell? Is Laurent that desperate to get Bella he has to attack Edward to do it? Of course Bella's going to be blindfolded and if Laurent does knock Edward out, she's not going to realise until it's maybe too late. What was Bella arguing with Eric about? Will he find Ang again and be a bit braver? I'm so glad I don't have to wait for the update, lol.
Jane x
Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:55 PM Title: Spartan Lover
Lol, I can't believe Edward's going round sniffing all the women, hahaha!! Emmett's obviously not caught him doing that one yet or else he's be using his non existent inside voice to tell him off. I love Bella and her snarkiness, rub and tug, lol, I nearly died laughing. Oh my God! Angela got Eric and felt drawn to him, well each to their own. I wonder if Ang would have said something had she heard that Bella was with her Spartan husband. Would she have been jealous? How are the going to make sure they are together at the party, are the going to break all the rules? Hehehe!!
Jane x
Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nooooooo!!! I know they don't know it but they just found each other and I had them skipping off towards the sunset together. Was that Eric on the effin phone, whining that he wasn't going to get any and he wanted to go home? Edward recognised Kitty on some level, I wonder how long it will be before the penny drops. Will they both go back again? Edward just needs to suck it up and get a divorce, it would be kinder to all concerned, especially Emmett, he won't have to keep babysitting Edward when he's near Bella, lol. Yeah, it's going to cost him but thank God there are no kids involved. Is he really aware that Ang is cheating on him or does it concern him so little that he hasn't made the connection? Bella needs to get a divorce as well, life's too short to stay in a loveless marriage.
Bella got two 'O's' and Edward didn't blow his load in the first ten seconds like a fifteen year old, hahahaha! I'd say that was a win, win for both parties. Now I have to pout because the sunset has faded to black and they didn't skip off into it.
Jane x
Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my word!! Where do I find a party like this? Lol. Is Angela, Edward's wife? I know you're not going to tell me, but I thought I'd ask anyway. I'm surprised Eric said yes. Did he go just to please Bella or are they just not sexually compatible? Maybe Eric's always needed a bit......more but was afraid to ask, I mean look how he reacted to Bella's costume. It's usually the man moaning he never gets any, not the woman. A life without the 'O' is no life at all, I hope Bella gets all she wants and then some, hahaha!! Oh, and I hope they're all using condoms. *grins*
I'm really intrigued with your story. I only just found it and I'm looking forward to the rest.
Jane x
Date: 15 Jan 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 35
I loved it! I love the story, especially the fact that there was no pregnancy drama! I also liked that Jessica and Mike are good guys in this one! Great Lemons <3
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
Enjoyed reading your story... :-)
Date: 11 Jun 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well. Great story. Loved drunk Edward in france reminded me of Em who is a big lovable oaf.
Date: 28 Mar 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
all right, let me tell u something: I read the story, and it's fricking hot. You managed to attract my atention from the first chapter, and that is something that not everyone succed.
and if you alow me to give you a pice of an advice: write another story(aricullen1134, DLIR), because you are talented, ok?
and hurry! :D :-*
Date: 09 Jan 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 35
Where did she get tortillas, hot sauce and salsa in the Loire Valley? They barely know what Mexican food is in Paris. Unless she had them in her purse she wouldn't have found them for sale. We've tried to eat Mexican or Tex/Mex in lots of different countries, France was the worst Kenya was the best.
Date: 31 Dec 2011 2:51 AM Title: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2
Fan, it's the dead of winter now (12/11) and I have to turn the air-con on. My hubbs thinks I'm nuts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2011 4:12 AM Title: Sinners
Ab-so-freaking-lutley the funniest Emmett. Damn, I had to cross my legs to keep from peeing. And, usually I have cross my legs for another, umm, reason.
Excellant chapter.
Date: 28 Dec 2011 4:29 AM Title: Laurent
Odd that I always go for coral colored roses, hummmm...
So who was laurent talking to, and what was going to happen to Edward????
Thank you both for writing.
Date: 27 Dec 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, just wow. Have to sleep now, but can't wait to read more tomorrow. Oops Anglea's husband is Edward. Good plot twist. Not too mention fuck hot sex.
Thank you both for wirting.
Date: 29 Nov 2011 10:21 PM Title: Save your pennies
Loving this story. Just not used to Angela being the crazy wife.
Date: 30 Sep 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 35
That is some honeymoon! Had to laugh at all of Edward's internal musings about playing tourist. And when he got snookered? That was funny!!!
You ladies do such a great job with this story!!!
Keye
Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 35
thanks for the story i loved it. they are sweet and hot glad they are happy!!!
Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:11 PM Title: Mile High Club
ed and bella make a porno! hahaha
Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:02 PM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
so sweet i am glad they finally get a HEA!!
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 35
Hi
I say your chapter was awesome... But I can't say I 'm happy with Bella.. and Edward is pussy whipped.. It was hot.. but maybe you guys but me in the mind set with edward and found the outting boring.. and really she could not tell Edward was not into it.. MMMMM.. I know he had to love some.. its their honeymoon.. But she was sweet when he got drunk.. I was pissed that she left like she did.. My ex husband did that to me.. like I said he is a ex husband..
I love kink stuff.. but to fuck in a public bathroom for get it.. I should know I had to clean them. grouse.. it kind of took the kink out of it..
But like I said I love your guys story... <3 Leona :)
Sorry for not liking Bella to much in this chapter..
Date: 19 Sep 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 35
I just love your story and really hope that it doesn't end any time soon.
Date: 18 Sep 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 35
Oh no this is the end, well at least you finished with a bang, cos this chapter was so damn hot i'm going to have to send out some sex waves of my own.
Date: 18 Sep 2011 4:56 AM Title: Home
I loved the tage so much, the closure was needed and at last Ang had grown up. Yay. xoxoxoxo
Date: 18 Sep 2011 4:36 AM Title: Weeping Willow part 2
This made me cry. I mean like I'm bawling like a baby. I read and re read Roses chapter and I have to be honest I cried hard than too, I knew Esme was out I expected her to be taken out but Carlisle well he was different, he was just ripped away and for me my father was taken in a brutal ripped away just like this so I shut down. Reading this takes me back to my fathers funeral and the eulogy I gave at that time, I love you guys so much, so much talent, you have taken me on a huge emotional roller coaster. I have to say that reading the two chapters of weeping willow made me see Edward in a different way. Does the man know how to shut down or what?!!! I saw my soon to be ex husband in him so much that again even though I reread these chapter several times it took me a moment to pull my own emotions out of it and just enjoyed it. Moving forward thru the rest but Yeah I'm now resorting to my fav ice cream death by choclate. you took me there its your fault the whole thing gone.....
Date: 16 Sep 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
Ending the story in France, especially in Paris is a wonderful ending. Edward might not agree entirely since his honeymoon didn't exactly go as he planned and wanted it. Although he was an amazing husband going along and agreeing with Bella, that's very romantic and will get him lots and lots of thank you s... When they get back home.
Edward never expected Bella to be so much into culture and touristy activities. He won't be planning another trip where thos can happen again.
I wonder what book sis Bella get in St. Paul, the store owner siad they both woyld enjoy it.
It's been an incredible story, thank you both for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
THANK U for always reviewing...xoxoxoxoxoxo I have one more for this story but havent completed it yet....it starts off a year later...xoxo
Date: 16 Sep 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 35
loved the chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much...i have one more for this story but I havent had time to complete it...but keep ur eyes open for it and new stories coming my way
Date: 15 Sep 2011 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
fab chapter.that was one hot honeymoon.bet them womans faces were a pic.update soon
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH....i have one more chapter for this story to come out...
Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
excellent
Author's Response:
Thank you soooooooooooo much......I have it completed but there is one more chapter........I just have to finish it........i guess a epilogue u can say.xoxoxooxox
Date: 15 Sep 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 35
OH WOW, that was amazing! There won't be an epilogue?! :( I really loved this story so much :)
Author's Response:
Thank you soooooooooooo much......and I completed here but there is one more chapter to add. I just didnt want anyone to wait......xoxoxox love u thank you for being so supportive
Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:48 AM Title: Mile High Club
Wow, it was good cathcing up with these guys again. Wonderfl chapters!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 6:47 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
There I said it; those three hussies took her phone so I couldn't talk to her. Then they turned theirs off so they are all on my dislike list now. --- Stephen Colbert would say Edward put them on the notice board. LOL!
That was a beautiful wedding and a fabulous honeymoon. I am looking forward to hearing more about both of them.
I was reminded of Bella & Edward in their wedding in the trailer for Breaking Dawn.
Great job!
Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:50 AM Title: Mile High Club
Wow.. that was Hotter then helll.... Loved the chapter. The heat waves were coming off the page... My god you guys must of had orgasm writing this Honeymoon scene.. mmmmmmmmmm..
Date: 17 Aug 2011 11:15 PM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
Wow......... I 'm speechless...... I don't want you guys are been doing but the story is unbelievable fantastic... I could not stop the emotions I was feeling.. The words were speaking volums....... they were leaping off the page.. wonderful.. I can not wait to read the next chapter..
<3 Leona :)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 6:06 AM Title: Mile High Club
god they are totally hot together
Date: 16 Aug 2011 5:07 AM Title: Mile High Club
Sexy honeymoon... or was that the 'pre-honeymoon' ? LOL ... Muah ~ Will promise to wait patiently for the next update...
XoXo ~ Fangs
Date: 16 Aug 2011 3:43 AM Title: Mile High Club
Omg!!!!! Soooooo hot!!! I wanna join the mile high club!! *looks @ boyfriend intensly* babe!!!! Let's get on a plane now!!!! *boyfriend gulps loudly & shudders*
Author's Response:
bahjhahahahahah....do it.... :)
Thank u for reviewing ,.,,hope u like whats up next....french spartan cumming right up
Date: 16 Aug 2011 12:27 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
LMAO. I actually had tears.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:37 PM Title: Mile High Club
can't wait
Author's Response:
As soon as it comes back its up xoxoxoxo
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:37 PM Title: Mile High Club
Great chapter. Funny that Kitten was trying to use sex to get the honeymoon desination out of him! ROTF!! Serves him right that she had a billion pieces of luggage when they boarded the plane.
The exchange with Alice when she came over to pack was funny as well as Emmett calling Edward up at 600am just because he was bored! *dies laughing* Rosalie didn't sound too happy with Emmett now did she?
I can't wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
hahahah were glad u enjoyed it ....lets just say...french spartan will heat up the second part....
Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:22 PM Title: Mile High Club
I would be as excited as Bella was about the plane, who wouldn't? It is the best way for such a long trip, destination still unknown to Bella, btw.
He is an amazing loving guy. All he wants is to see her happy, and be by her side, she is a lucky girl. Even with all the teasing and him not telling her where they are going, yet. How many hours left? How will she figure it out?
Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:11 PM Title: Mile High Club
They are really having a blast. Wish I were there.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:13 AM Title: Mile High Club
Dam! That was smoking hot! :)
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:32 AM Title: Mile High Club
OH MY GOSH! That was amazing :) I really loved it so much! I cannot wait to find out where they went!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:49 AM Title: Mile High Club
Wow! And I see Em just had to get in there with the jokes (on the honeymoon no less) too cute!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Of course Em needed his spotlight...lol....HOT HOT HOT is just the beginning...just the beginning of LEMONS LEMONS LEMONS
Date: 06 Aug 2011 9:32 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
that was wonderful wedding I am so happy she asked Tony to walk her down the isle. the honeymoon sound to good to be true. it is a good thing after all the planing that Alice is still alive lol. Tanya such a skank i would od love for Bella to go to the club and beat the shit out of her.
Author's Response:
The honeymoon should be up soon....just waiting for it to come back from being beta'd ....maybe we can see if that bar fight can be an outtake.....
Date: 22 Jul 2011 9:14 PM Title: Thank you Part 2
Fab story. So hot!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Awwww.thank you very much...........hope u enjoy the rest DLIR and ARI
Date: 17 Jul 2011 12:50 PM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
Brilliant chapter - loved all the wedding preps & not so good ones too :)
The way you describe everything is just fantastic - perfectly written!!!
Loved every word!!!
T2M x
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading and sharing that u still enjoy it. Were almost done the next chap. just in beta stages. xoxxo Till next time DLIR and Ari
Date: 16 Jul 2011 10:52 PM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
No they did NOT:
There I said it; those three hussies took her phone so I couldn't talk to her. Then they turned theirs off so they are all on my dislike list now.
Um....wow! Get engaged then nothing! LOL!!
The meltdown that Bella had over Edward's going to the strip club, not telling er about it then her finding his shirt he wore there? Pricless!
Bella and Alice duking it out over wedding plans was pretty funny too.
Loved that Edward planned the reception just like the night they met.
The glimpse into EPOV about the honeymoon was humorous as well.
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Thank u sooo much for the review. it was great writing it and let me tell ya.....30000 words of honeymoon sexin is coming ur way soon xoxoxoxo DLIR and ARI
Date: 16 Jul 2011 5:21 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
:) I loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank u sooo much ffor the review. hope u love the next one......honeymoon sexin on its way xoxoxo DLIR and ARI
Date: 16 Jul 2011 5:12 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
Perfection!
Author's Response:
Ohhh shucks...........thanks im blushing.,....lets just hope the nezt 30000 words chap of honeymoon sexin is just as perfect
Date: 16 Jul 2011 4:38 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
well its about time that they got their hea! excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
The next chapter should be up tomm the latest.....honeymoon here we come
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:44 AM Title: A Good Lawyer
PERFECT... just perfect!!!
Love Tony & Fay too - wonderful :)
T2M x
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:10 AM Title: Home
Geez, you two are really not nice to me... yet another chapter with tissues!!!
Hopefully no more :)
Loved this chapter though...
T2M x
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:01 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
Wow, that was AMAZING! I really loved it so much! I am so anxious for the next chapter! I love Kitten/Spartan lemons ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for the review and hopefully the next chapter will be up within a day or two
Date: 16 Jul 2011 1:28 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
Beautiful....just beautiful
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much.........they deserved beautiful and now sexy sexy times.............
Date: 16 Jul 2011 1:14 AM Title: Weeping Willow part 2
OMG another bloody chapter with me crying!!!!
Damn you girls!!!!
T2M x
Date: 16 Jul 2011 1:06 AM Title: I was his. Always and Forever.
That was very sweet.
I can't wait for Edward's POV of wedding, their first night in the new log cabin, and the honeymoon.
I did love the strip club stuff, but I wish that you would have let Bella show Tanya a thing or two. Also, did she never notice that the tie she bought him was gone leading to the wedding?
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
hahahah there has been a few requests for the tanya brawl...maybe we will see an out take for that...hahah......now a honeymoon...........rawrrrrrrrrrrrrrr