Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

Reviews For Taking Chances
You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 45

That was cool Brody talking with Edward now they both have the blessings of the ones they loved. gave me goose bumps

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 45

Ms. Betty - is comedy your new genre?  Yes...YES...YEEESSSS I cried during Edwards talk with both Emmett and Rose and then when he was dreaming and talked with Brody....What a good chapter and the sensitivity you bring to your writing where blended families are concerned... Divorce is one thing with re-marriage; however, the death of someone that you love and then learning and accepting LOVE again is totally different, you show great depth with your writing... Truly enjoyed this story, so very happy to hear a Sequel is on the way.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 45

Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 45

wonderful chapter.  sweet dream

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 44

Whoa...what an ending. Dayum!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 44

Well I am thinking that is just the beginning for Isabella Swan the author!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 43

That is so sweet and it is wonderful that Esme is taking pictures again.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 44

another great chapter,cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

See, I am such a sap for that kind of gesture.  I LOVE it!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 44

I am so happy that Bella's book was well received. I love the banter between Bella and her dad. The boys rules were also funny.

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

i am so glad there will be a sequel

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

I find it really ironic that Edward said he didn't want Anthony getting attached to a woman at the moment and there he is, getting attached to Bella.  Of course, I am trusting in your HEA so it is probably no big deal but still ;)

 

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

I like how you have had both B&E have dreams about their lost mates...

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yay!  I was wondering when the tension would disappear!

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

My heart hurt for everyone about Sarah and Brody...

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

I KNEW it was Emmett!  Nice little sneak attack there :)

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am loving this more and more!  I like the pace of the story.  I like getting to know the characters this way!

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love it so far!  I like how you didn't right away start talking about why Bella and Edward might be single parents.  I like the character building you did first :)

I also like the homages you are paying to the canon characters (Angel Xheney, Alice Whitlock, etc.)  I think it's pretty neat :)

I like this and can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved the chapter.  So glad she's getting the recognition she deserves.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 44

Wow this was a wonderful chapter and so happy to read about the sequel!  Will definitily check out the recommends.  TTFN  Kathy xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 44

Bella is a winner all the way best book best man good things needed to happen to her.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 44

im excited taht shes getting published! and i hope that the wedding goes with out a hitch! 

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 44

o la la la la .  great update !!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 44

ROFL   Loved the part where she told Demetri to Get the fuck out. 

Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 43

Wonderful chapter addition... emotional and strong.  Cannot wait to read more.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 43

This was such a beautiful chapter. I am such a sap when it comes to Christmas. I always get teary eyed.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 43

Very beautiful...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 43

this is such an amazing story

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 43

well im glad that they are gettnig their family they wanted! 

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 43

I'm not offended that you don't reply to reviews because I'd selfishly rather have updates :)  Love this story.  I shed a few tears of my own over this chapter.  Great job!

Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 43

oh i just adore this story :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 43

Good chapter. and yes i shed a few tears...... :)

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 43

This was a wonderful chapter!!!! I cannot wait for the wedding-and a mini Bella:)

 

Jo

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 43

Great chapter...thanks for sharing. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 43

What a great first christmas together.

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 43

Love this chapter, I loved all your stories

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 43

I just love your story and do hope they have a little girl someday.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 43

Love this chapter BB!!!!!!  It was so touching, I cried immediately!

Dont fret about it dear, we all love you and your writing and as I always say, your devoted followers will be so patient so no need to apologize :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 43

such a great update with many happy tears !!!!! Funny thou reading this i liv ein Fl obviously and today it was in the ninties, not esactly christmas weather. lol !!!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 43

Another great chapter, cant wai to read more.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 43

Love it!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 43

Wonderful christmas chapter

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 43

Such a lovely chapter

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 42

Such a tear jerker, but in a good way.

Wouldn't surprise me if she was already pregnant, what with her mood swings. ;) And if Edward's going to be adopting Alex, why wouldn't Bella adopt Anthony? And the way Bella was asking for Charlie to be extra careful when he was leaving...I hope it wasn't a hint for a tragedy to strike.

<3 Thanks for sharing such a great story, it's def one of my faves that you've written, BB. <3

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 42

Love this story.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 42

wow, great story !!!!!!   love you characters and plot !!!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 42

:-)

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 42

so cool!  they will adopt each other's kids.  great chapter

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 42

Woo Woo Woo Woo!!! Yes.

E/k

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 42

i hope that she does! 

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 42

Thats so cool that E wants to adopt Alex!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 42

such a sweet christmas w charlie.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 42

That is the perfect gift!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 42

What a sweet Christmas eve Charlie is priceless.  The adoption will be so cool but she needs to adopt Anthony to.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 42

Great as usual! It was super sweet and Charlie was funny!  Can´t wait to see how many sisters Santa brings.  It was sweet that Edward was nervous about wanting to adopt Alex.  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 42

Once again I have tears streaming down my cheeks.

I love it BB, that was a great Christmas Eve.  I love Charlie... even though he is being bad :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 42

awwwwwwwwww :) Edward is too sweet 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 42

Another great chapter,can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 42

That whole chapter was so sweet.  I loved it.  :)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 41

love the boys getting ready their parents ready for sis

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 41

Outstanding...I know it's a story, but I hate to move so much.  i can imagine combining two households would be a bitch!  Great job.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 41

Yeah to the sequel. I love this family. Those little boys are so charming.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 41

Wow, Bella just kind of lost it there, a little, eh?

Poor girl!

Aro was very straight forward, I would have been in the same state of mind too.

Thank goodness for the love of a family to help you get through the hard times.

Love it BB!!

*hugs*

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 41

Another great chapter,cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 41

I am cracking up at Edward's reaction to the boys whole making a room for their sister!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 41

It was a crappy thing for ARO to say. He could have just said this book is 10 times better than the others in my opinion. The others were good but this is GRRRRRRRREAT.

 

Men. :0(

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 41

You are such a great writer. Love this family and look Forward to more

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 41

What a lovely chapter, it is nice to see these two so in love.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 41

they are so cute together ! cant wait to see what happens enxt 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 41

glad they got all moved in

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 41

What a home coming Poor Edward no clue on why she broke down.  Aro should of been more careful with his words.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 41

:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 41

I loved the sweetness of this chapter. :)

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 41

You are like superwoman!! I don't see how you are able to have so many different stories going at one time and all of them being sooooooo good... Until your next update keep up the good work..

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 40

She cant beleive every thing is going so great.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 40

Talk about an emotional day for Bella. From the move to her book and last was the mural. With Edward by her side she can do anything. Loved it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 40

Bella has had a very emotional day. She has some big decisions to make. It is a good thing she is not alone. Edward will be by her side. This time she can go on a book tour. She has back up for her boys. They could even meet up with her on a few cities over the summer and see some of the country. There is a whole world of posiblities.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 40

The day was just full of surprises for Bella wasn't it???? It is good that Aro wants to publish her book.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 40

Yayy.  That so great for Bella and the family. 

E/k

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 40

:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 40

omg, from Brody's letter to what Didyme did, my tears have soaked my shirt through.

Beautiful, BB.

*hugs*

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 40

wow... what a day

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 40

wonderful chapter.  Brody was something special.

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 40

Beautiful! Bella really is a spitfire huh! Noone messes with her family!

 

Jo

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 40

Loved this chapter...adn the ending.  So sweet.  Can't wait for another update!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 40

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 40

im excited to see them get their lives on track in their new home

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 40

Aww... you should have put a Kleenex warning for this one!  Loved it as always!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 40

Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

nothing like getting rid of the kids for the night! it is so much fun when you don't have to worry about being too loud, or if the kids will interupt.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 38

these two are just so sweet. glad to see they are getting a night alone.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 37

awww that was so sweet! and charlie was too funny. looks like he kinda likes sue. heehee loved him shoving his foot in his mouth. looks like we have a wedding to plan. will they try to get married before the big move?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 36

holy shit!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 35

they found a house! just need the ok of the boys.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 34

heehee love the name of your group!

time for some house hunting!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 33

so sweet my teeth hurt! heehee lauren is a tough one she has a right to be upst but bella didn't really have to tell her. plus she just came backinto their lives, maybe bella forgot.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 32

the pillowcase story was great. they are home and looking for a new place to start their lives together.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 39

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 38

:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 31

time for the next big step. but first to find a new house.

You must login (register a new account) to review.