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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 30

well alex getting sick has been good in that it allowed anthony to feel insecure enough to break down the last wall to openly showing his true thoughts on their family. no dening it now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 29

well they had their night cut short but for way better reasons than missing the kids. i wonder who was  calling? charlie? is the kids ok?

yay they finally did the deed!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 28

is alex really ok? will the night be cut short? the dream was awesome and just what bella needed.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 27

hope your little one is feeling better! man i miss trick or treating with the kids and the parties at the school. do  you think they still let the parents into the high school parties? heehee, probably not.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

wonder how long until the i love yous pop out and who will say it first?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 25

awwwwww that was too cute and so sweet!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 24

ok crisis averted, and boy oh boy did they have fun making up!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 23

well that was going well until the door opened, now eddie has to explain and he better not fuck it up!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

aha! eddie has figured it out. and bella and edie are moving forward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

bella is gonna have to let bygones be bygones and allow alex to know his aunt. and i bet the boy will be thrilled at the impormptu sleepover.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

well it seems everybody knows bella and eddie are in love excapt bella and edie! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

well em stuck his foot in his mouth but all in all the night went well.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

eddie is too cute!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

awwwww! alex was too cute and so was eddie! loved anthony's wisper yell.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

aww looks like eddie and bella are not the only ones with a blooming romance going. heehee.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

I'm so sad that the next chapter isn't up yet!!  This story is amazing.  I truly love the love that they share with each other and for their kids!  outstanding.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 37

Geez, I don't think I cried so much when Chandler and Monica got engaged!  Outstanding.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 36

OH. MY. GOD...FIRST TEARS, THEN THIS!   Outstanding!  You Rock!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 31

I have a serious question...how the hell do you expect anyone to be able to read the story through all the tears?  I mean, come on!  It took me half an hour because I kept crying.  I'm a splotchy, snotty mess right now.  I'm bookmarking this chapter so that when I'm PMSing, I can come read it and get my cathartic release!  Well done.



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lol, the same way I wrote it, I guess. Slowly!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 15

he kissed her! yay everyone will be so happy. i wonder if they will keep it a secret? if so for how long?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

heehee she has a date with eddie!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 22

He gets it!  Yippee!!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

That's just too damn cute for words!  Great chapter.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

I'm glad they got the awkwardness out of the way.  My sister-in-law lost her husband of 27 years, and it took a while to be able to talk to her about all the shit her brother (my husband) doesn't do at home.  I can totally relate.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sorry...just found you and got so caught up in the story I hit the "next" instead of the "submit."  Shame on me...Great story.  I actually cried when it was revealed that Edward's wife died with Anthony was a year old.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

well it looks like these two are starting to see what could be.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

aww thje boys are gravitating towards the other perent. i wonder if it is a plan they have or just natural?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

bittersweet how they have both gotten permission to be with eachother.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

hopefully the girls will feel more comfortable around bella now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

i wonder what the boys are planning? and how long till they kiss?

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 39

I need more! Best story ever!! :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 8

oooo momma e is plotting. how long until bella and eddie start seeing it too?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

wow that was an awkward brunch! funny how em keeps getting in trouble.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6

aww anthony's logic is cute and oh so innocent. he needs a mom and alex needsa dad, should work perfectly. maybe it will....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

well now everyone knows about alex's dad. and everyone seems amazed that eddie is letting bella and alex in....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

the boys are so cute.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

i think miss bella just met em! heehee wait till she finds out how they are all related.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

how long ago did she die? and where is alex's dad?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow all the cullens with kids in school together! a potential teacher's nightmare. good thingit's alice we are talking about.

Reviewer: jd2383 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 39

loved it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 39

Nights without children are like heaven on Earth to parents.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 39

OHHH BEAUTIFUL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 39

The fun that can be had when the kids are away and get there freak on a bit LOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 39

yummy adult time.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 39

Well of course when you have kids this stuff has to be scheduled. So worth it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 39

Well I guess that they made good use of the night away from the boys.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 39

That was one lemony update. You did a wonderful job. Love the story and thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 39

they are so cute together 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 39

It's hard to do a chapter that is filled with yummy hotness and sweet romance, but you did it.  :)  Awesome chapter.  :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 39

Another great chapter, it did make up for it, lmao. cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 39

That was so HOTTTTT Loved it !!!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 39

Ah, I see that you have broken through the darkness of 'cliffies' to give us this lovely chapter with such a beautifiul ending!

 

Totally HAWT chapter btw!  ;)  lol

I was clenching my fists on this one!  GAWD Peter needs to come home!

Love it BB!!!

*hugs*

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 39

I love thier friendship.

E/k

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 39

oh 'i do' too!!! love alone e & B time!!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 38

HAHA!!! Well I guess they are going to have the house to themselves tonight!! That was funny how they were ambushed!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 37

It was really sweet that Edward let the boys help him even though he was giving her his grandmothers ring.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 36

Awww.... How sweet is that man! I often hope that I find someone who is that sweet to not only me but my son too!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 38

good story..



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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

a nice building friendship.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

children always make it simple.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

nice building story

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

nice and uneventfull.

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 38

They do need some Bella and Edward time. They are usually in parent mode. I can't wait for the next chapter.



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Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 38

oh elliot...so sweet!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved this first chapter

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 38

Ok..  Its time for a mini Bella out of all this

E/k



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 38

After that they need a night to themselves Esme is the best.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it !!!! that was so sweet can't wait for the next update and see their alone time lol



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 38

I love this chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 38

great chapter cant wait to read more



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 38

cant wait to see their time alone! keep the updates comming



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 38

ohhhh i love this chapter, that was very sassy of bella at the end!



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Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 38

Hehe very wonderful chapter... love the teasing as well as the intensity in the emotions.  :) Nicely done can't wait to read more



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 38

sweet chapter.



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Reviewer: MommyLovesEdward Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 38

YAY!!! B/E ALONE TIME....WOO HOO & SHIT!!



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Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 38

whoa nelly...what is it about Edward and a wall that makes a girl weak in the knees?



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 38

Yay!!!

B and E alone time... I cant WAIT!!!

*giggles*

*hugs*



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 38

Really cute chapter.  But the ending was cruel and unusual punishment.  hehe



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Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 31

I cried when I read this chapter, all of your stories you write are amazing.

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love, love, this story it's sweet and amazing

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 37

oh that was so sweet... but Bella didn't mention the neice and nephew she gained. I just loved our glimpse of Elliot (mini-Em), wish he interacted more in the story. however, i am not the writer--- you are! AND I do love this story!



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 37

:)



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Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

haha! too cute. glad edward knows how to listen to his son

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

oh anthony is too cute. i can see the bond already with bella. and alex ordering what edward did---adorable!!! maybe bella and edward will catch on soon

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

I usually want the stories to hurry and give us B&E love but I like the way this is progressing. They are even cutier as just friends



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 37

Aww that was a really sweet chapter addition :)



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Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 37

Aww. That was beautiful.

E/k



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 37

I loved the back story of how he came up with the perfect proposal for them.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: DeedeeCullan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 37

I have become a great fan of your work,  I love all of your stories :)  Thank you Keep up the great work



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 37

awwwwwweeeeee squeee another awesome chappy :)



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 37

I heart you so hard too BB!!!!!

And E's POV on this was absolutely beautiful.  I am crying tears of joy right now!

*hugs*



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 37

im happy that they are getting married ! thye both deserve happiness



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Broken Roads Updated!!http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6674336/5/Broken_Roads

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 37

awww dang so teary I can't see to type lol 



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Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 37

YEYYYY! TY FOR UPDATING!



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 37

You rock that was so sweet how he asked Charlie and then the boys.  I love that Charlie was flirting with Sue LOL.  So sweet my teeth hurt HA HA LOL



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 37

That was so teary romantic. I loved it. :)

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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 37

awww so sweet.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 37

I loved it that was out of this world good!!! So damn sweet I really do hope you will do a sequel!!! Loved it !!!!



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Thank you:) I've been thinking about it for awhile.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 36

Yeah Edward! What a great proposal.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: saniaast27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 36

Oh dammm s cute!!!!

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Thank you:)

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