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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 36

awwwwweeeeee squeeee great chappy



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Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 36

AWESOME chapter! Absolutely loved it!



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 36

Not suprised you left it there you are a crul person LOL.  That was a very emotional chapter so full of hope and love.



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 36

im so happy for the both of  them cant wait to see what happens next



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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 36

Woooo Hooooo!  Way to go Edward!  Lol!  Esme kinda choked me up when she was talking in the kitchen.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 36

Oh wow.  Great timing Eddie  Woo hoo



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 36

That was so damn good and so sweet they really are a family in every way .LOVED IT!!!!!



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Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 36

woo very emotional chapter.  Nice addition to the story, cannot wait to read more.



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 36

Um, well...

*wipes eyes furiously to see clearly*

That was effin beautiful BB!!!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

So cute....i loved it!  Can't wait for another update!!



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Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 36

That was too cute.



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Reviewer: tricomi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 36

*standingovations*  such a beautiful chapter.



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 35

Amazing chapter, BB! So glad they have possibly found a home. I'm sure the boys will love it, too.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 35

Awwww... So they found a house and now Edward is going to talk to Charlie! It is so sweet that they are moving right along!

 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 35

That was so good I hope the boys love the house it would a great step for them all to take together .loved it



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Thank you again for all the reviews!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 34

I am glad Tyler told Bella his story very sad and I hope Bella and Lauren can move on and heal foe Alex .Loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 33

I am so happy to see their family so happy and full of love .I loved it!!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 32

That was so sweet of her to do that for her BBC .great chapter loved it

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Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 31

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

I cried my eyes out I was freaking out for themthat was so sweet of Anthony at the end

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 29

loved it that was very sweet and perfect for their first time together.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

loved it a night without the kids what will they ever do lol

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 27

loved it

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

loved it

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 25

I am glad her meeting with Lauren went well .I love the boys they are so cute

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 24

loved it that was hot and so happy that Bella let him explain about Victoria before she left

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh crap I hope Edward can fix this.Yeah Bella she is writing and I just know that Edward and Anthony being in her life now helped her to do that!!!loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 22

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

I think Bella needs to just tell everyone (but Edward) to back off she is trying to move on but with them all treating her like glass it's not doing her any good.I loved it Bella is very stong and she has done a great job with Alex.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

That was so good loved it I can't wait to read and find out how Bella will react to seeing Lauren ....

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 35

That was well worth the wait.  I can´t wait to see how Thanksgiving goes and will Edward asks Charlie´s permission to marry Bella then too.  Hmm... don´t keep us in suspense too long!  Lol! Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

that dinner was much better lol they are so damn cute loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

lol kids are so cute loved it

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG that was so good loved it

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

loved it

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

That was great !!!! loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love Esme she is so good loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 13

Yes he needs to ask her out asap lol They were all so cute together Bella was so sweet with Anthony and Alex really looks up to Edward they make a perfect family!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

That was so cute Anthony really wants what Alex has in Bella I can't wait untill that happens

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love that Sarah and Brody both know it but Edward and Bella don't yet lol so sweet I am loving this

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

I am glad she went out and even if she had to tell them to stop treating her like she was made of glass I think things will get better for her from now on.loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bella needs a girls night out we all do it helps us to relax and be a better mom in the end <3 BBC!!! loved it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 35

woo hoo they found a house.  Sweet story



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 35

They need to take the boys to the house asap. It is time for Edward and Bella to take the next step.

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 35

They found a home thank goodness. 



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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

loved it  I love the slow build up it's really great !!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it lol that was so funny.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved it kids are so sweet and say the most profound things sometimes .

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

I hope Bella understands they don't piy her they were just shocked in finding out she lost her husband .loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

That was so sweet

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

I know I have read this but I guess not on here .I feel so sad for Edward but I can't wait to see how he comes out of his shell and he and Bella get together.Loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved it

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 35

good 1



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 35

*wipes eyes*

"Dad, did you fart?"...

The infamous line that will be keeping me laughing hysterically for DAYS,BB!!  DAYS!!!!!!!!!!

Great stuff, I am the happiest when I see your updates  *blushes*

*hugs*



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lol, I laughed so hard writing that part.

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 35

Can't wait to read about Thanksgiving day...love the story by the way!



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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 35

That was an awesome chapter.   :)



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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 34

Wow I have to agree with Edward in that Lauren handled the situation with Alex badly. I wonder if Bella and Lauren will ever just be able to talk to each other without tere being hurt there.



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Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 34

Hey.. Thanks for the "Aww" moment with Emmett..  I feel mushy for that character. 

E/k



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 34

Beautiful  :)

Aside from Lauren's asshole attack  *snickers*

Love it BB!!!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 34

:)



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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 34

Wooo hooo! Thanks for the new chapter bb! It was great, I was wondering how the situation with Lauren showing up would work out. I have to agree with Bella's first reaction, Lauren hasn't been back in her life for longer than a minute and it will take time. When your child is deathly ill, the few moments you can think rationally, you think of the people that are always there. So, I'm good with Bella's reaction. Also glad they resolved it peacefully, afterall, their relationship is still a work in progress. Great chapter!

 

~Krazi~

xoxo



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 34

Great chapter.  I am not a fan of Lauren.  I think she was the one who over reacted more so than Bella.  Literally, Lauren has been back in their lives for two minutes and should realize that before she freaked out.

i can't wait to read about the search for their perfect house!



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 34

Lauren was so wrong how she attacked Bella. She should have called. She knew Bella was busy with Alex. Lauren will learn that children come first. I hope this blowup will clear the air some between them.



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Thank you:) Sometimes our emotions drive us to behave in ways that we know are wrong.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 34

I am glad that Bella and Lauran worked it out and poor Tyler he knows there pain.  It will be exciting when they find a place to call theres.



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 34

I agree with Edward.  Lauren was out of line the way she did it.



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 34

Totally missed the opportunity for lovin in the shower! :(

I'm ready for some house hunting, lol! Since she's a famous author and all, they should totally be on House Hunters, that show on HGTV where a couple (or whoever) goes househunting and they narrow it down to three by the end of the show. Then at the end, they reveal which one they chose and sometimes include video of how they've renovated it or updated it to make it their own home.

And I totally agree about The Young and the Rec Less, LOL! Nice pimpage!  ;)



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Hehe, gotta pimp it our where I can ;) I thoguht about adding some shower lovin but I just wasn't feeling it :) LOL, about House Hunters, I'll have to consider it.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 34

she didnt have to call her at all ! cant wait to see what happens next 



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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 34

I'm glad Bella stood up to Lauren.  She went about all of that in the wrong way.  Can't wait for more house hunting and for the boys to feel better and more energetic.  :)



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 33

well its not like you are a huge part of the family yet Lauren.   Yea they need to find a new house though



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 33

I feel for Lauran but I dont think she should get so upset I mean she just got into there life and Bella had many other things on her mind.  Edward and Bella need to find a home of there own stat.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh so it looks like there is going to be some more drama from Lauren now. I hope that it isnt going to be something bad.



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Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 33

Ohh what a wonderful chapter, apart from poor Lauren missing out...

 



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 33

well its really none of her business!



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 33

Lauren needs to get over it. She was not in his life for 5 years. Bella was not worried about notifing her. She was taking care of her boys. That is what a mom does. The world does not revolve around Lauren. She is still being selfish.



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Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 33

Inlove their little family I can't wait for more! I'm excited for them to live together!

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 33

:)



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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 33

Welcome back! I´ve really missed these four. Although, this cliffie has got me a bit nervous! I hope it was all just a misunderstanding and Lauren understands that in the midst of everything that Bella just wasn´t thinking clearly and she didn´t mean to leave Lauren out of the loop! Great chapter! Good luck with the awards!

Krazi

xoxo



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Thank you, Sweetie:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 33

*points at self*

I voted!!! *squeals*

I love this chapter!  The family dynamic is so natural for them!  They were meant to be a family.

Now, if Lauren starts shit....

She will find her self on the outside again...

and possibly a Nomad meal also.  *evil grin*

I look forward to the next update, no matter which story you bless us with :)

*hugs*



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lmao, Hungry Nomads ;) Thank you!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 33

Sweet chapter.  I love needy Edward.  sigh....   P.S. Lauren has no right what so ever to be pissed.  She is lucky she is even spoken to.  I guess I still don't like her character, huh?  hehehehehe  Update soon.  :)



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Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 33

Nice chap.  Very loving.

E/k



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 33

I love this story and can't wait to read more.  I hope Lauren doesn't start trouble.  Honestly, it wasn't Bella's responsiblity to alert her about Alex being in the hospital. Lauren is only becoming part of their lives again.



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THank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 32

The hospital here does the same thing with blankets. My son was in the hospital overnight about two months ago and he got a blanket from one of the churches in the area and he loves it. It is good that Alex got out of the hospital and they got to go home. I wonder how soon it will be before they find a house for them to share.



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Isn't that an amazing idea? The blankets sound like a good idea, too.

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 32

awww that was a cute chapter about them bonding even during hard circumstances!!!



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Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 31

so sweet that Brody and Sarah are watching them

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

omg im bawling! what a sad but cute ch if that makes sense!

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 29

awww yay finally!

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 28

Alex is ok right?



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Thank you for all the reviews. I am sorry I didn't respond to each of them but I have read them all.

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 27

awww how sweet was edward!

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 26

wow i have a bad feeling about Lauren.....

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

cute cookie making! i hope lauren dosent end up hurting Alex

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

yay! thx for not letting us hang on the Vic thing!

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Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 23

FUUUUUUUUUUUU..

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 22

yay edward realizes hes in love now its bellas turn!!!!

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

loved it! i wondered if wed see hwe again

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

oh shit!!!

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 19

lol yay the family can be normal

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

omg so sweet! question is Lauren going to come around and cause issues?

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