Date: 14 Jan 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Hmmmm!!! I was enjoying this story but it seems to be going in an unrealistic direction, Bella is entitled to her anger and owes the birth parents nothing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A child who is adopted belongs to her adoptive family. She's nearly an adult if her birth parents truly cared they would have allowed her the time she needs to decide whether or not to have a relationship with them.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 10:17 AM Title: Outtake part five
I feel so many different emotions while reading this story: joy, sadness, anguish, happiness, tiredness... It deals with a lot of difficult subjects that I find rare in fanfictions. It's fascinating to see the process of how someone who feels lost and broken struggle to break free and find herself again. Moreover, this Edward is perhaps the sweetest Edward I've ever encountered! Can't help but falling in love with him :)
Thanks for sharing!!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have read several of your stories before, and I am glad I have decided to give this one a chance!
I like especially how you've created the possibility that Garrett and Angela could be her siblings, or Charlie's daughter. I like that we can't just assume that she is a Swan :)
Date: 05 Dec 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
I was going to wait until I finished reading and comment, but I could not hold on any longer. Quite simply, your story is amazing. The characters are so complex. I honestly feel like I can feel their struggles. It is heartbreaking and wonderful all at the same time. The grief is overwhelming, just as I would think it would be. There are no good guys or bad guys so far,well other than the car jacker. There are just so many layers and so much hurt. I can see all the different sides of what they are all going through, and I feel for all of them. I am sorry I put off reading your story for so long because it is truly amazing. It kills me to stop long enough to review, but I just had to.
Thank you so much. I knew when I started this story that it would be a hard one to write. Like you said, there are so many layers to each of them. There were times when I really struggled to allow myself into the mindspace that I needed to be for this one, but overall, I'm really pleased with how it came out. And I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story.