[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2021 12:40 AM Title: Outtake part five
it was wonderful
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2021 12:40 AM Title: Outtake part five
it was wonderful
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
sad situation but nobody is at fault
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2021 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
saw it coming but still good
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2021 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
saw it coming but still good
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2021 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
where's Edward? Great so far, but I would hate Alice
Date: 26 Apr 2020 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 26 Apr 2020 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 05 Feb 2020 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! Poor Isabella, Emmett, and Jasper!
Date: 02 Oct 2018 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
Bella is being an ass hole to her bio family.
Date: 19 Feb 2018 1:28 AM Title: Outtake part five
je l'aime telmon cette histoir
Date: 22 Aug 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
Fantastic chapter!
Date: 22 Aug 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awe poor Bella!
Date: 04 Aug 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella is an amazing person!
Date: 04 Aug 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is an amazing boyfriend!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter! Poor Bella and Edward!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bella and Jasper!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
That was a cruel thing to do someone!
Date: 27 Jul 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Amazing chapter!
Date: 27 Jul 2016 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awe poor Bella!
Date: 09 Jul 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
BELLAS HIS SISTER.
OMFG.
SHE'S A SAWN.
THEY MUST HAVE LIVED IN LA OR WAS ON A TRIP THERE AND LOST BELLA.
CAME TO FORKS AND NOW BELLA IS IN FORKS AND OMFGGGGG
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2015 11:42 PM Title: Outtake part five
I love this story. I read it on FanFiction a while ago and I forgot what it was called and tried everything to find it. It is one of my favourites and its story is quite significant to me.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Hmmmm!!! I was enjoying this story but it seems to be going in an unrealistic direction, Bella is entitled to her anger and owes the birth parents nothing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A child who is adopted belongs to her adoptive family. She's nearly an adult if her birth parents truly cared they would have allowed her the time she needs to decide whether or not to have a relationship with them.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 10:17 AM Title: Outtake part five
I feel so many different emotions while reading this story: joy, sadness, anguish, happiness, tiredness... It deals with a lot of difficult subjects that I find rare in fanfictions. It's fascinating to see the process of how someone who feels lost and broken struggle to break free and find herself again. Moreover, this Edward is perhaps the sweetest Edward I've ever encountered! Can't help but falling in love with him :)
Thanks for sharing!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have read several of your stories before, and I am glad I have decided to give this one a chance!
I like especially how you've created the possibility that Garrett and Angela could be her siblings, or Charlie's daughter. I like that we can't just assume that she is a Swan :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:18 PM Title: Outtake part five
This was a great chapter. I like that it ended with looking forward to the future and happiness.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
- This is such an amazing story I can't tell you how much i have enjoyed reading it i can't wait to read the other things you have written
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:06 AM Title: Outtake part five
That was an amazing chapter.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 5:01 AM Title: Outtake part five
Wonderful continuation. I for one am happy you didn't just go poof and make everything rainbows and bunnies. Life is hard.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:36 AM Title: Outtake part five
I loved this chapter!
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:42 AM Title: Outtake part five
WOW!!!! what an awesome surprise ;) thanks so much for posting this o/t ;) how many more are they? i'm looking forward to the rest ;D
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
God, what a horrible situation. Those poor kids. That's terrible and it doesn't seem like any of the adults have a handle on how to handle it. REALLY makes me think. Thank you. SK
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
God...the gossip that circulates through society! Great job. Love this story!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think Garrett believes Bella to be his dead sister, but I'm trying to figure out how. Can't wait to see if I'm right. Thank you for writing. Love your work. SK
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm so happy i found this today. Looking forward to reading it. SK
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2014 6:51 PM Title: outtake part four
OMG!!!!!! what an AMAZING story even a second time around ;D
Date: 21 May 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
awesome so far its coming back to me as i read it ;) btw you wrote mr davis then mr taylor as the history teacher ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2014 12:29 PM Title: outtake part four
Is the story finished? A very good story, I cried thru this one
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 33
I am glad Bella is getting better
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:34 PM Title: outtake part four
This story is incredible; in content and in writing.
And while I tend not to be a very outwardly emotional person...I may have blubbered ridiculously through most of it!
Date: 10 Dec 2013 4:33 PM Title: outtake part four
Bella is actually a very lucky girl. She has more love than most. She has a great future ahead of her if she chooses to be happy and just enjoy all the family she has.
Date: 10 Dec 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 58
Bella needs to realize that everybody can't remember much or anything from their first 3 years of life. We don't remember things until about 4.5-5 years old. She is actually normal. The one thing she wants to be.
Date: 05 Dec 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
I was going to wait until I finished reading and comment, but I could not hold on any longer. Quite simply, your story is amazing. The characters are so complex. I honestly feel like I can feel their struggles. It is heartbreaking and wonderful all at the same time. The grief is overwhelming, just as I would think it would be. There are no good guys or bad guys so far,well other than the car jacker. There are just so many layers and so much hurt. I can see all the different sides of what they are all going through, and I feel for all of them. I am sorry I put off reading your story for so long because it is truly amazing. It kills me to stop long enough to review, but I just had to.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I knew when I started this story that it would be a hard one to write. Like you said, there are so many layers to each of them. There were times when I really struggled to allow myself into the mindspace that I needed to be for this one, but overall, I'm really pleased with how it came out. And I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2013 6:28 AM Title: outtake part four
loved these outtakes and this story
Date: 05 Dec 2013 1:22 AM Title: outtake part four
That was a hard chapter to read... Amazing story.
Date: 04 Dec 2013 11:27 PM Title: outtake part four
Wow Hard to read but well worth it. Sounds like they all still have healing to do but glad they are all there for each other.
Date: 04 Dec 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 58
aww that was nice of Aro to let them come.
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:35 PM Title: outtake part two
poor B. Her head must be going bonkers. Glad she is still seeing Marcus
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 58
i just read your last three chapters i like them but feel so bad for bella will she ever remember anything? i'm so glad she has edward he is her rock keeping her safe and strong.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 8:21 AM Title: Outtake part one
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:35 PM Title: Outtake part one
wow She's come pretty far. Ben's mom is being ridiculous with all those adults also going.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
I don't think Bella is being a bitch. She and the Cullens were traumatized. They have a right to their feelings. The Swans didn't exhaust all their options to find Bella, so they aren't completely exonerated.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 55
Thank you for sharing this emotional story.
Date: 12 Mar 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Such a complex and emotional situation. No one is right and no one is wrong.
Date: 31 Dec 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 55
I am in complete and utter awe of what you have managed to write...... I love it, please continue tomshare with us what goes around in your head!!!!!!!