Date: 12 May 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 44
cool chapter. GL with the books.
Date: 12 May 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 44
congrats on the books!
bella doesnt know which way to go, i can only imagine how she must feel
Date: 11 May 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 44
Great to see Bella really making an effort with everyone.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hope all is well with you. Please keep writing, we're waiting!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 39
I know Bella's situation is difficult, but it is time for her to move.
She is hurting a lot to cultivate this pain.
Edward is a cute, little boys support both drama.
Date: 15 Mar 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 43
I am so happy for this family. It is about time that Bella's pity party end. It is time to move forward as one big family.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 28
SWEET,SWEET,SWEET.I love it!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 43
nope this doesnt suck! i have been siding with bella this whole time, and just now got with how she was acting at least she asked for help!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella is in a place so hard, so contradictory feelings, she hates the people she ama.No moment she is a pump, feels so guilty.
Well she had Edward and his family, who are outside the war zone, but I want to see it with Esme and Carlisle are so cute together.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 43
Wonderful chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 43
Poor Bella!! No worries on the delay hon. As for sukcking goose eggs, it's nowhere near that bad. Just one Q. - were you planning all this from day one or did it evolve more gradually?
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 23
phew that was something... bless Emmetts heart
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
well the boys are comming along its just slow
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
i love Edward and she is getting a little stronger
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
i'm kinda wondering if Bella ever got help as a child growing up in California, because some of this does seem rather dramatic...
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
bless her neart she is so tired
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
couldn't you just see the pictures as Bella saw them and the feel of the peace within the Masen Home
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
god almighty I am so glad he read them All the right act!!! the very nerve of all of them to must blame each other... thank goodness he reached her
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
damn it why is it just Edward can see the torment she is suffering...I was full on sobbing at the end...
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
i love the relationship that Bella and Carlilse have its wonderful... Emmet and Jasper crack me up...
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well that was very unexpected and wonderful insight! I love the Masen's
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
this is so hard on alll parties!!! Not just Bellla.... I can see Emmett being fearful of losing his little sister
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh yea I can see how his one was voted as a must read... dang it's gooood
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
No No I get where Bella is coming from and I also see the Swan's side of it.... but they have to really listened to what Seth said to them at the Police Station...did they really think that they could just uproot Bella like that at her age... she is a happy well adjusted Teen all of them are... small towns ... arrrrgggghhhhhh such a conndrum small towns...
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
No they aren't all that bad and I have had compassion for them but they did go about this just a bit wrong
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well thank heaven's they won't force her to go live with them, that right there should make Ghost Sister feel better
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
seriously that is what I hate Hate HATE about the legal system... Good people treating a helpless child abandoned and alone taken in and protected, then 14 yrs later treated like a child abuser... Poor girl
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Geez poor Angela and holy moses for all of them
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
the plot thickens
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really rather perplexed how she ended up there honestly!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
such a cute story so looking forward to reading on
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it... I think it's going to be another heart wrencher though! Maybe I'm wrong.. but I love your writings
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 43
It was just right, sugar ;) I loved it, darlin'
*hugs*
Date: 14 Feb 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 43
Great chapter. There's light at the end of Bella's tunnel at last
Date: 14 Feb 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 43
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Feb 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 43
ok Angela is really getting annoying
Date: 14 Feb 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 43
Great chapter! alot of information was to be shared in this chapter.. looks like she can start healing some now.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 43
It doesn't suck goose eggs
You are doing a great job with a tough subject
short but good
waiting for more
Date: 14 Feb 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 43
loved this chapter
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 42
This was a breakthrough. She finally admitted she needed them in her life. She needed all of them. She wanted all of them. She also admitted she needed their help.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 42
Finally, she has made some progress!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 42
Oh wow I just found this story and I love it great job
Date: 27 Jan 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 42
Great chapter, can't wait for more. :)
Date: 27 Jan 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 42
Good girl!!! Bella is finally asking for help now let the healing begin!
Date: 26 Jan 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 42
Good Chapter.....
Date: 26 Jan 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 42
loved the chapter looking forward to more
Date: 25 Jan 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 42
I honestly feel like she's made a lot of success by askng for help.. i had tears in my eyes while i finished this chap. Can't wait for the next chapter =0)
Date: 25 Jan 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 42
wow can't wait for the turn out of this dinner.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 42
very moving chapter! good job. thanks for writing
Date: 25 Jan 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
Once again, great chapter. Bella makes me sad, but I'm starting to see a faint ray of hope shining through. Now that she has asked for help, I can't wait to see how she starts to heal.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 42
still say they'retoo hard on her. and now she thinks their throwing her away. can't imaginehow.that feels. I onlyfelt a piece if that with my divorce but still hurt like hell.
Author's Response:
Maybe they are, but they don't know how to handle it any better than she does. I think it's frustration more than anything.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 42
That should be a hanky alert, update soon
Author's Response:
lol, I think they all should at this point, thank you!
Date: 25 Jan 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
O M G......I loved this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 41
Bella might just get her wish. She thought she wasn't worthy of being loved. She has been so nasty to everyone. She is pushing everyone away with her attitude. She shouldn't be surprized. I am so glad that Marcus set her straight. Bella is out of control. She needs to stop the pity party and realize that she has so many people who love her. There are lots of children who have no one who loves them. She could have been one of those children lost in the system.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 41
Ok now I am crying and I had hoped to get through my updates without crying today! lol
Date: 30 Dec 2011 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 41
SHE'S SUCH A SELFISH IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 41
For some reason I feel like I can really identify with Bella's feelings. She's drowning and can't seem to find the strength to grab for a lifeline.
I worry that she's becoming suicidal. I know that "tough love" is all the rage, but I'm not sure that it's appropriate in this case. From Marcus, yes. From her family, it could push her over the edge. She's not a drug addict or an alcoholic. She's not chemically dependent. She's emotionally distraught on top of being a teenager!
I have no idea what might be the words, event, etc. that will empower her to find the strength to reach for her support system and hang on. I hope you have a better idea. I've got nothing. I do find it hard to believe that these people who love her would turn away from her at this juncture.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 30 Dec 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 41
Holy cow! That's not good. Bella is so lonely and doesn't know how not to shut everyone out. I think she may have taken what she heard out of context because sometimes parents need to vent, but I really can't wait untiljo you update again. This story is so wonderful. You don't know how excited I was to find that you updated today! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I couldn't leave a review with explorer. Google Chrome seems to work fine now. I do want to let you know that I have loved your story for awhile now. I just had no way to let you know. Great job!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 41
Wow. Granted she is being bitchy but not sure what they expect the teenager to do? Just telling her to let go of the anger and to stop being bitchy isnt really helping either.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 41
Holy shit! Things just went from bad to DefCon OH Fuck!
I want to reach out to her so bad! I've been there! Ugh, lets hug it out girl!
Love it, BB!
*hugs*
Date: 10 Nov 2011 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 40
Bella needs a swift kick to the ass. Wake up and see what you have.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
Edward has the patience of a saint. Bella is wallowing in self pity now. It is getting ridiculous now. She has to decide she wants to be happy. She knows she is loved. It is all up to her.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 40
awww poor confused girl.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 40
She is trying, its hard to let go of that! It took me 30 years and I still havent let go of it all...
Love this chapter BB! I just want to grab her and hug her forever!
*hugs*
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 40
looking forward toseeing what happen next chapter
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoy this story. I really enjoy that the characters are different from the originals and that you gave them a new identity and I love all the suspense! I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ok I understand she has been through alot.. But enough already. She should be happy she has so many people that love her and be happy about what she has now not dwell on what might have been. I feel very sorry for Angela because she bad to grow up in the shadow of a sister. Sorry if you don't agree but I can't stand poor Bella anymore. I hope she figures it out soon.
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 39
I agree with Esme, Bella needs to start trying more and running away and whining less. This has been traumatic for everyone involved and she is playing as the only victim when I think they were all victims in a way. At least she has Edward to keep her steady
Date: 18 Sep 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 39
I think they need to call Bella out more about her being such a bitch
Date: 15 Sep 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 39
I think it is horrible how they are treating Edward. It was an accident. It wasn't his fault. Bella would have been dead if it wasn't for him. He loves her so much. They need to remember that fact.
Date: 15 Sep 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 39
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 39
*wipes away frustration tears*
Love it BB!!! I feel for her... if not with her...
*hugs*
Date: 14 Sep 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 39
Good Chapter.....
Date: 14 Sep 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 39
well excited for the next chapter
Date: 14 Sep 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 39
Bella is acting a little bratty but esme is acting alternately bitchy and overprotectively pushy. Being nasty to ed isnt going to help b fell better, nor is assuming she needs to change her clothes and pushing her.
Date: 11 Sep 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 38
Thank goodness she is going to be ok. Big daddy Carlisle he cant help it it is his little girl that is hurt and Edward is the one that was there when she was hurt so he must be to blame right.
Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 37
I am freaking out here oh shit
Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
Noooooooo holly shit you are evil lol
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMGosh!!! Coach Swan, Garrett and Angela are Bella's family aren't they? Holy shit!! Can't wait to see if I'm right. Might have to cheat and take a peek. ;) Great story!!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 38
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next......Anne-Marie
Date: 22 Aug 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 38
Carlisle went kind of crazy there for a second. He is just so scared of loosing Bella. She does not realize how much stress she has caused her family by not accepted the love they have for her. I hope she is over her selfish ways.
Date: 22 Aug 2011 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 38
These last two chapter were just wow. I loved Esme's and Renee's POV. It's sad how it takes something this horrible to bring everyone together. Poor Edward must feel awful. Thanks for the fast updates.
Date: 22 Aug 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 38
im glad that in the end they are alright
Date: 21 Aug 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 38
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 38
Phew - she survived!! I take back my last nasty review!! :-)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 38
Im glad they are okay, I still cried the whole chapter though.
Love it, BB!!!
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 38
I should have known that the parents would have blamed Edward for the accident. He did not do anything wrong. It was not his fault. It was the 18 wheeler's fault.
I am glad that throught this tragedy that the families have finally come together to become one large confusing family. I am also glad that Bella is alive as well as Edward.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 38
wow I love this story please update soon
Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 38
I am so glad that you updated so soon!!! I really wouldn't have been able to wait. Update soon!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 38
wow glad the kids are mostly ok. woo hoo for everyone (mostly) getting along. Wow Carlisle has a temper.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 37
I wonder what happened to Bella? She was with Edward last chapter and she was upset but otherwise unharmed.
Author's Response:
reread the end of chapter 36, where she and Edward are hit by an eighteen wheeler.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
As always I love your stuff,
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 37
ARGH - Bella's been hospitalised?! I SO wanna yell at you right now!!
Author's Response:
At the end of chapter 36, she and Edward were in a car accident, hence they are in the hospital.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
See See See.... Everyone wants Bella to be on thier side, to pick them. Poor B.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 37
*chokes on a sob*
Oh God...