Date: 11 Mar 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 24
It is nice to see the family. All trying to get things fixed up. Still a long way to go though
Date: 11 Mar 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Napping like that makes it hard to hide the hurt she dreams about. Everyone got to see it...
Date: 11 Mar 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
well at least they talked for a bit. and she really talked to them. now to talk to the shrink.....
Date: 11 Mar 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
i am glad that bella is opening up to her family about what she is feeling. now they need to accept it and help her move forward.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
poor girl i just wanna hug her and make her feel better.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
she just needs time.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
it is good that bella got a little bit of a timeout away from the madness of her life right now.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
thank goodness they are all seeing what they've done and decided to start being parents instead of acting like kids fighting over a toy.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
i sure as hell hope all of them got a slap to the face, air horn in the ear wake up call. if not from eddie stinging them up then at least once they see her and really see the damage that has been done. i hope em and jasper cry for being such assholes!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
maybe this will be a wakeup call for everyone to see what she is going through. she really is damned either way she goes....
Date: 11 Mar 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
i think it is time for the moms to talk. maybe the dads too but this is definately the time that both moms who love 1 girl should get together to come up with a plan to make things easiest on their little girl. just saying. the mom in me is mad at esme and renee for not working to find a way to fix this even a little bit for bella.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
eddie is so sweet and he really is being just what bella needs.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
i wonder what eddie is going for bringing her here? and what will bella do about emmie? and what about momma e?
Date: 11 Mar 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow the last two updates were very emotional. This story is so heart wrenching. Love it
Date: 11 Mar 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
wow bella needs to tone it down a bit and realize that everyone is having a hard time with this. unfortunately all of the people involved have to interact on a daily basis.
Date: 10 Mar 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
No one is having an easy time with any of this, except the gossip hounds.
Not sure if anyone has mentioned it but you write 'check' when you are trying to say 'cheak'
Date: 10 Mar 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
The swans need to just allow bella to come to them. She is the bigest victim in all of this, and she has lost the most control
Date: 10 Mar 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
The whole town is gonna be choosing sides in this one. But we still. Need to hear what reslly happened because I don't think they left her in front of that hospital.....
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
So if the cullens got her through random foster child placement why are the cops acting like they are kidnappers? There should be records in cali of what happened. Man this has to suck for all involved!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh my goodness! i can not even imagine how any of them would feel. and poor ang thinking she will be pushed aside. i wonder if the cullens will be woken up with late night visitors or if they will come in the morning?
Date: 10 Mar 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
eddie and bella kissed! twice! and em and jas's reaction is just one of the reasons i am glad to be an only child! i wonder when the swans will come knocking on the door? i was surprised they were not there when bella got home.
Date: 10 Mar 2011 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
we have a date night um sorry movie night coming up that should be fun. still wondering who will figure bella out first?
Date: 10 Mar 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
so she is friends with her brother and sister and her dad is the gym coach. wow when this all goes down it is gonna be epic!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
swan? is garrett and angela bella's siblings? is bella related to anyone in forks or is it all just a co-inky-dink? alice would scare the hell outta me on the first day, wondering where she got speed in a small town. heehee
Date: 10 Mar 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
my momma's heart just breaks for the abandoned kids. that's how i got my 'extra kid' for my birthday my daughter and my extra kid got me a book called, 'a little book for mom' it is filled with special quotes and sayings about moms and being a mom, and my extra kid told me there was even a passage that describes him. 'BECOMING A MOTHER MAKES YOU THE MOTHER OF ALL CHILDREN, FROM NOW ON, EACH WOUNDED, ABANDONED, FRIEGHTENED CHILD IS YOURS.' when i read it i almost cried, even sadder to think my extra kid (which he loves when i call him hat, he says it makes him feel like i really am his 'momma bear' as he calls me) is a 16 year old boy who first came to us when at 15 his mom told me to keep him cause she didn't what him anymore. he tells my reall kids (15 &13) that i have to love him more because i chose him. heehee! ok my rambling is over now off to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ah, the steps toward healing.....
One of those steps should be Angela getting her ass kicked and a huge dose of reality. Like her parents threatening to send her off to boarding school or something.
Mean little witch! *growls*
loved the update BB. I missed it, I am glad I got to read alot of your writing tonight :)
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
I must tell you, this story has really got me. It's so emotional. I really like it. I love the feeling and depth you put into it. Can't wait to read more :)
Thanks
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
At least Bella has Jasper back as a brother and friend. I don't know what to say about Emmett or Angela. I hope Jasper and Garrett can become friends. This will make it easier on Bella.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ang is in so much pain an ass beating would not of done any good it would of just fueled her fire. I am glad that she is talking to Jasper.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
well im glad that jasper finally came around now its time for emmett and angela too! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 27
wow Em and Ang REALLY need couselling.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow what the heck is wrong with these kids life is to short to be choosing to love this one or that one love every one all the time.
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 02 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
well fuck. I am in love with this story, I don't bella is being a bitch I think she is handling the stituation as well as she can they all are.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Feb 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Emmett he thinks that he will lose Bella but if he keeps it up he will push her away I feel sorry for him but he needs to pull his head out of his ass. I feel sorry for Ang also she has lived in Bella's shadow all her life and now she is afraid that she will come and take her family away from her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
WOW! SOOOOO much drama!!! Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
I feel bad for Garret. He remembers Bella from before and wants her for at least a friend. Edward has a great friend in him. Carlisle and Esme need to deal with Emmett. He is out of control. He needs to deal with his anger, because he is making the situation worse. They need to drag him to counciling. Angela is about to explode as well. She feels like the substitue kid. This situaltion is going to take a long time to work out. They may need long term family and individual therapy.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
Good Chapter.....
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
I would probably be lost for fear hurting everyone around me too, but I can´t be upset with Emmet yet lol I think can understand him!!! come back soon and have a great weekend
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh I want to deck that little bitch right in the mouth...
*writes self in story*
~&~
Siobhan walks up to the porch staring at Angela like she grew three heads.
"Your little mouth just got you in the fucking dog house you little bitch!" Siobhan sneers at Angela.
"What are you gonna do about it?" Angela quips as Siobhan takes a step up to face her. Angela has no time to even flinch as Siobhan draws back her fist and connects with Angela's jaw.
"That, smart ass." Siobhan mumbles as she turns on her heels and walks away.
Angela falls to the ground, speechless, while holding her gaping jaw.
~&~
ok, I feel better now :)
Loved this update BB!! Its been so long for this story! I miss all of them so much :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
*gasping for air* Thank you:)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
can we beat angela up please! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
Someone needs to, huh?
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
em and ang really need to grow up
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 25
A little bit of normalcy for our girl.
Author's Response:
A bit:)
Date: 12 Feb 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
"don't let me fall" by BOB is the perfect song for this chapter.
Author's Response: It would be:)
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
I agree needed the fluff. I loved the date how sweet and thought out. I am happy that the men in her family are coming around.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad to see Bella have time to herself with Edward. Looking forward to see how you unfold this story with both families.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hi!! I just found your story yesterday, and I have to say is good!!! hope to have a new chapter soon ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
well shes letting him in even more cant wait to see what the brothers have to say about any of this
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
AMAZING!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 25
Edward is an amazing boyfriend. Bella better get her head together and appreciate that boy.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
such a sweet date. go carlusle and jazz. em has a long way to go though.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh. i can just imagine her clsoing the door softly and the standing with her bac to it wearing a shy smile.
Author's Response:
THank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
GAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! *hugs you in a Emmett Bear hug*
This story brightened my day, I am not even shitting you in the least!
I read it, then slowed myself down and read it again. THANK YOU!
Emmett and Jazz are trying, I think. They really need to talk to someone too, this is hurting them too. I hurts to think you are losing your sister.
Carlisle showed what an amazing man he is by apologizing to Edward, that was a brilliant part of this chapter.
Altogether this chapter rocked. Thanks BB, you are THE BEST!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Oh, I bet I understand!! I have needed the fluff, too!!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
AWW too short, too cute, too romantic, too perfect <3
i definitely loved it
Author's Response:
It was the same length as the other 24 chatpers but thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
Such a great story where so many emotions are in play and the little girl lost finds out she was not rejected ,but still has all the feelings of rejection inside her . how will she cope grat tale.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
at least the boys were trying till the kitchen.
Author's Response:
Baby steps:)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it. Great story
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
<3
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 24
The boys say that they love her and want her back well they need to prove it by going to therapy. They need to work on getting all of this anger out. They need to become friends with Edward.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yes, heavy indeed dear.
But beautiful none the less.
She and the boys really needed to get some things off their chests. Hey, its a start... right?
Love it, BB!!! I was ecstatic to see this story update! I squealed and scared the cat and she fell off my desk at the sudden noise *sheepish grin*
See you next update BB!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sweetie:)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
Good Chapter......
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
The boys are trying I think they will get there poor Bella just feels everything and she feels so much guilt I think. I think everyone is trying to get to the same spot but not knowing how to get there they all want to be happy again.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
Every now and then you need a chapter like this, it is an emotional story.
I really would like to see Bella get the answers she needs to move on.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
i cry at every chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
I've just finished reading your story and I'm speechless..I love it, though I can's stop crying. it's very stirring...I can't ever imagine how Bella must feel...I understand her and her behavior, her anger...but I think she must talk to Emmett, and most of all to Charlie and Renee. It'll calm her..I think...I can understand Emmett, why he behaved this way, but this doesn't change the fact, that he hurt Bella's feeling. I must say that the end of last chapter made me happy:) I hope that evrything will be ok between Bella and Em since this moment:)
Thank You very very much for this story. I can't wait for next chapter:*
Author's Response:
Thank you. THere are a ton of emotions flowing through all of them and they are making baby steps.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ok tears 2 chapters in a row wow how emotionanal. Poor Bella hell poor everybody they are all in pain. I am glad that she let Emmett comfort her they both needed that.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Emotional chapters for all of them, indeed.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
I had tears in my eyes very sad poor girl the only thing that doesnt feel wrong is Edward.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
ABOUT TIME EMMETT!!!
Wow, they will all rebuild and I they can.
Glad to see them all falling into place it will take time but they will get there.
Love the chapter.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Emmett was a bit pigheaded, wasn't he??
Date: 08 Jan 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
Don't apologise - it's not her fault she's a screwed up wreck..... :-P
Author's Response: Hehe, isn't it? I am the one putting her through hell :)
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow the ending brought tears to my eyes. What a touching story you have and I can hardly wait to see how it unfolds.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. The end got to me, too.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope that this breakthrough with Emmett will help Bella. She needs all of her family member's support.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
wow that was intense. So glad Emmett pulled his head out of his ass
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
well i hope for her sake he sits with her !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow....... oh my goodness!
Poor Bells!
Who is this faceless man? He has me scared out of my whits!
Thank you SO MUCH for another update to my #2 favorite story :)
*giggles*
Yeah, I love your stories :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:) He's the man who took Bella, the carjacker:)
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
i dont see bella that way. She is a confused young lady who is being pulled in many diff directions. her brothers arent helping matter much either.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Others have not agreed with you about how she is feeling.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
Aww I love this Edward...so supportive!
Author's Response:
Yes, he is:) Thanks!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Can't imagine what it would be like to be Bella.... hopefully going to talk to a 3rd party will help. Love your story thanks for sharing
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad that Edward is not going with, they are headed to a co-dependant relationship. I am thinking Emmett's fear is manifesting as anger and he has misplaced it onto Edward. That's the only way I can make sense of it!
Author's Response:
You are understanding very well, then:) Yes, Bella and Edward are co-dependant on each other and that is why he didn't go with her.
Author's Response:
You are understanding very well, then:) Yes, Bella and Edward are co-dependant on each other and that is why he didn't go with her.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
well i hope she starts to get the help that she needs and i hope that both of the familys start to go with her!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think my heart literally jumped in my chest when I saw the update notice for this BB. My goodness, I am still having trouble breathing from being so excited to see this! :)
And what a wonderful update it is!!!
You can feel the t3ension, and see so clearly her struggles now. I love this story so much.... but not as much as FFL ;) lol
I also wanted to say that I love TOD, that is going to be a VERY good story :)
Love it, so Love it BB!!!!!
*extra big hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sweeite:)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope Bella really talks to this therapist. She can't hold back or it won't help. I think they also need family therapy. Emmett and Jasper need some one to talk to as well.
Author's Response: They will. One step at a time, you know.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great Chapter......
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
At least Jazz is trying. Em is just being a real dick
Author's Response:
Yep, props to Jas.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
That was a great chapter loved that Bella finally was able to voice her side.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Dec 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love it! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Although very sad , it was great to hear Edward's story.
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love this story so much it made me cry i cant to know wat happen with bella and her family and the swan
please i beg u updated soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. Update will be soon, I hope
Date: 23 Dec 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am so happy she is back home and they have talked. Emmett needs to chill out they are all so hurt. There is a difference in being related or being a family all of my kids have been adopted and we are a family blood does not mater. I am glad that Bella wants to be friends with the Swans and learn about that side of her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
I can see where the boys are coming from but Bella is right she needs to know who she is.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Progress has been made, but the boys especially Emmett need to do some hard thinking. Carlisle might need to do some male bonding with them. It might set them straight.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
<3 loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG! I have been waiting a long time for this chapter but it was well worth the wait! This chapter was so good I felt like I was the one actually dealing with all of these problems and not just reading about them! Please, please, PLEASE, update soon!
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
I really enjoyed this chapter- the emotional interplay between the characters is so intense! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
im glad shes finally taling to her family! keep the chatpers comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Merry Christmas to you as well dear. :)
I was so excited when I saw this update I thought I was going to vibrate right out of my chair!
I think I broke one of the wheels off bouncing so much...
Em needs to understand what he said about killed Bells.
Literally.
Looking forward to more of course as always.
Love it BB!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
Family therapy with both families! Ben is quite the dark soul there, I see why he sticks with Angela now.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's your typical Ben ;)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
the boys need to grow up a bit
Author's Response:
That they do;)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter... Happy Holidays
Author's Response:
Thank you:)