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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 34

Cute ending.  TY for writing and sharing

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 33

well at least Jake is gone.  Surprise Jake didn't try to use Charlie to get to B.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 32

ugh.   Who the hell screwed up Liz in the head?   Sucks that Jake has all this time on his hands?  Isn't he supposed to be working sometimes?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 31

utter silliness.  I love it

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

B is an idiot to think they'd let her leave alone.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 29

ugh letting them go is gonna be a mistake.  What do you want to bet they run right to the volturi...... or help jake.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 28

I see Irina is going to be a real piece of work.  Probably worse than Tia.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 27

what a wonderfully fun chapter I never would have thought of a water slide like that on the side of the mountain

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great first hunt and all.   Um wait, doesn't Charlie already know about vamps? or am I getting my stories confused?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 25

woo hoo for the claiming.  Go E.     Glad the kids are being so cool

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 24

Hawt Dayum.  Another female for leah to bond with.  Wonder who Claire will imprint with?  hmmm

Go Bad Ass Bella!!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 23

Glad they are all coming together as a big blended family.   Ugh Jake is just trying to get himself and those real werewolves killed.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 22

Kinda had a feeling what you were going to do with the imprints.  Too cute.

Poor B  Hope she's ok and E doesn't go crazy.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

Glad The kids came back.  Don't think B is going to last too much longer.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 20

Poor B.  So much happening so fast.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 19

Poor B.  Good things always seem to happen to good people and kids.   Hope Sam doesnt' give them too much crap about her change.   We already know Snakey will.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

Why do I get the feeling B's got an inoperable brain tumor?  

Yeah I think the kids are gonna change soon.

Ack   Hate that I was right

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad the family helped the kids have a good birthday.  At least Tia is following Flower's advice to say nothing if you can't say something nice.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow  Jake is really delusional.   Glad Sam stepped up and took some charge.  Elizabeth has alot of nerve too and is probaby fueling alot of these issues.

Glad Sam is being reasonable.  I think Jake is going to get himself killed before this is over.  Moron of a man Jake is.  

Leah is old enough to know the truth and to stop living in dream land.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

oooh yummy beginning

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Go Mischa.  What is that moron up to now?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

Nice seeing Edwards POV and how he feels about everything.  Jake needs to be reined in.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

wow  Jake's got a lot of nerve.  Glad Leah told him off.  Oh so Jake is the alpha.  That kinda explains why the guys didnt tell her, but not the girls.

OOOOh I LOVE Mr Danford!!!   Glad Em and Jazz came over.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hope Randall is good to Leah.  Of course, first loves rarely last (in my opinion).  

Leah needs to get over that getting back together thing.  Sad really.   Wonder what she has to say about the chick her dad's been seeing while mom and dad were still actually married.  Considering Jake left her with a clunker of a vehicle, he has no right to say squat about her car.


Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wonder how Snakey is gonna take it when he finds out E spent the night?   Ugh Hate snotty gossiping women.  Poor B.   Take the help girl.  Everyone needs help once in awhile.    

hmmm  dunno if that was the right time to ask her that, E.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

what a nice V day.  Wonder whats up with Leah?   Jake putting ideas in her head?   She should get alimony.  I'm not one for automatic alimony, but in this instance, when she took care of the house, kids, and him while he got to advance his career and then he cheats on her......yeah she deserves alimony.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Guess Tia didn't get the message.  Sigh.  Love Leah giving it back to her in spades.  Seth is one smart kiddo.  

Sucks that Jake made her feel that way.  And that she's on welfare while he has the job with benefits and all.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMG  Can't believe Jake had the nerve to hit her.   He deserves to lose his job.  Glad Seth and Leah have good heads on their shoulders despite having an arse for a dad.  Hope Tia behaves

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow  Tia is sure full of herself.  What a little biatch.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

hmm So Jake has extra "conditions" on the divorce.  How pathetic since its all his fault.   Wow Tia is a real biatch.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ugh poor bella.   Jake would be hard pressed to get custody because she got mugged.   Although he'd figure out the vampire thing too I assume.   Gotta love Carlisle.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonder if Jake will be a dick about custody when he finds out about Edward?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

hmmm so they are vampires.   Interesting twists to the orignal vamp story.   Bet Jake is going to have a cow when he comes to pick up the kids.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

They'd known all along because they had no choice?!?!   I call BS. Its a lame "man code" excuse.

So Jake is a wolf but the Cullen's aren't vamps???

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love how men love to turn shit around when they cheat.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 34

You left them all in a great place, complete with grandchildren! What could be any better? Loved this story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 33

Please tell me that was the last vengeful relative to be disposed of! After all this danger and drama, I think everyone deserves some peace and quiet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 32

Now I'm really glad Esme killed that psycho arsonist bitch! My only wish now is that they find and destroy Jacob! I feel bad they have lost all there things, but luckily still have each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 31

What is wrong with these people? What a bunch of crazies! Kind of wish I could have seen that silliness, especially as the cops showed up!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'm  glad the family out-voted Bella over takiing the kids and leaving, she was a wee bit ridiculous about martyring herself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 29

I don't like what Irina said about Bella and her children, and I'm not very happy with her mate trying to kill Seth, either! All's well that ends well, I guess.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 28

How sick is that, Jake sending a severed head in a box for their anniversary? I wonder if his imprint is urging him to kill Bella and the twins? Something else to worry about! This fight with Laurent and Irina is pretty messed up, too, especially putting them back together and waiting for Edward. I can't say as I blame Bella  a bit for defending her children.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 27

That sounds like the most fun thing to do! The whole bunch, family and friends, all three species, had an absolute ball! I don't blame Edward for loving his life!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 26

I hope Bella will trust that the family will find a way to keep Jake away from the twins and with them. She seems to be an amazing vampire, newborn not withstanding!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 25

I had a strong feeling that Bella would flourish in her new life, and avoid most of the ususal newborn problems. This is going to be quite the family, vampires, hybrids and wolves, all together.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm with Ben, Badass Bella  saved the day! She is the goddess of destruction now, so nobody better piss her off! What a relief that she came through the transformation with battle flags flying!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 23

That has to be frustrating, to hear what's happening and not be able to do anything about it! Bella is most likely going to have some sort of talent, gift or power, whatever you want to call it.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 22

All I can say is it's about time! If they had dilly dallied around any longer, Bella would be beyond help of any kind! There's an awful lot going on right this minute, what with the new wolves and the hybrids imprinting on each other while everyone else trys to save Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 21

Bella is going to have a talk with Seth about that, I'll bet!  It sounds like the twins got back just in time, since their stubborn mother wasn't about to change without their approval.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

Never rains but what it pours it seems, at least in Bella's world! I can't decide whether Emmett is an idiot or a welcome distraction.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

Okay, Bella , what's so funny? Not that I blame her for trying to find something good about the situation she is in. Hope the kids take the news as well as they can, it will mean a lot to their mother.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

Looks as if push is about to come to shove! Bella will either die or change, and I dare those wolves to say no!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wouldn't that be interesting, if Tia and Seth end up together? Looking forward to this meeting, to see what they all come up with to keep everyone safe.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

I sure hope Jake won't really try to kill Bella, that would be insane, as the kids would never forgive him! Good thing Sam is regaining controlof the pack and has a much cooler head on his shoulders.  Bottom line, Edward isn't about to let harm come to his Bella, whatever he has to do to keep her, and he chioldren safe!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 15

I wonder if Jake is ever going to get a clue and grow up? Happy for Bella, now that she and Edward have truly connected again. All she has to worry about now is preventing a big fight in her front yard.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

Too bad about the puppies, but luckily Jasper and Emmett are close and able to watch over Bella. Jake is being a giant pain in the butt over Edward and his family. Since they don't want to get Alan in trouble, I guess a restraining order is out of the question. Can't wait 'til Bella gets a load of the Lear jet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

Damn Jake, anyway, why does he have to be such a bigoted ass? Bless Alan for coming to Bella's rescue, silver bullett and all! Kind of spooky that he knows about wolves and vampires, but he seems to be oky with it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

Despite  Bella's stubborness, she now has a car that won't die on it's way to work, school or the grocery store! I guess she just never wull learn to accept a gift or help, graciously!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

That was a really nice way to end a really crappy day! Wonder what she will answer?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hell of a thing for your final divorce papers to show up on Valentine's Day! I kind of think Edward did a great job of counteracting the sorrow, though! I liked that Bella has given her children middle names associated with the Cullens.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

How could you resist loving him when he's so sweet and caring and considerate and beautiful? It's great that the twins get along with the Cullens, McCartys and Hales so well, except for Tia, of course.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

I see Jacob Black is still his ususal tactful self, with the addition of wife-smacking! I am beyond thrilled that Bella broke her cast smacking him back, and also that her son took his father to task for hitting his mother! With the twins in the house, maybe little Miss Tia will get het attitude adjusted.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

Vampire, human or hybrid, teenagers seem to all be brats at one time or another! I hope Tia gets over her jealousy and gets to know Bella. They might even like each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

Tia may be a problem and irritate her uncle with her unfounded prejudice. It's unusual , especially when Rose and Alice both are friends with Bella, and Carlisle and Esme are thrilled to see her again!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

I see Bella is still a danger magnet, that hasn't changed, either! Those creeps deserve whatever Edward did to them, and I love that Bella punched the hell out of her hand, defending herself! At least medical assistance was close.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hooray for Edward not caring that Bella is overweight, and nearing middleage, he just loves her, in whatever package she's in! Good for her, too , for not fearing what he is. Of course, living with a shape shifter for the better part of tweny years probably helps!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm enjoying the different spin you have put on our favorite characters. It's fun to read how life has been for everyone, still canon couples, for the most part, plus some new characters . I love that Edward is a veterinarian, but am curious as to how the animals tolerate his vampirism. Speaking of which, how and when did he become a vampire?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

What are the odds of them meeting again after all these years? Dare I ask why his eyes are gold, if they were green eighteen years ago? I hope Bella pulls up her socks and tries to be happy after the divorce. Maybe Edward will help her with that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Damn! Bella has had a tough time of it, from the sound of things. Life is hard when there's not enough love and not enough money. So, the ultimate rejection, Jake has imprinted  and Bella is going to be on her own with the twins, Thirty-six is at least young enough to start over and I hope she does well, it will serve Jake right and make her feel better too!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 34

tell us what happens in new england we need more it was fantastic well done

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 34

What a great story... a fun mix of humor, sorrow and drama.  I am only concerned about the way a couple of things were left hanging...Denalis, Charlie, etc.  Totally minor, but still a great way to twist the original cannon.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

lol I always have a nasty habit of leaving just a few things unresolved, like it would be in real life, but thank you so much for reading and leaving a review, I really appreciate it :-)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 34

Aw - fluffiness!! :-P What exactly happened to teh Cullens anyway?! Got changed by the Volturi or something?!

Reviewer: gmteenz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 34

What a great story, lots of humour and drama, loved it all.



Author's Response: thank you so much!

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 34

THAT  WAS A GOOD STORY I LIKED IT AND WAS HAPPY THAT BELLA TOOK IT IN HER HANDS TO STOP JAKE ONCE AND FOR ALL     GLAD THAT EVERYTHING TURNED OUT RIGHT IN THE END AND THAT BELLA AND EDWARD WAS TOGETHER IN THE END

 



Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 34

Definitely different and definitely liked it.



Author's Response: fantastic!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 34

Damn. I hate a journey's end. Especially one that is as beautiful, witty, smexy, and wacky as this one is. Well done, kiddo. Well and truly done.

Hugz,
Pam



Author's Response:

thank you so much for taking the time to read my off the wall tale, I hope I didn't disappoint

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 33

I love the fact that 'The Princess Bride' is woven all throughout your story. Priceless!



Author's Response:

It's in all of my stories at least once lol

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 32

Jake MUST die. If not, I'll find the bastard and kill him MYSELF! lmao



Author's Response:

oh, he gets his in the end

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 31

OMG! I haven't laughed that hard in ages! Great job kiddo!



Author's Response:

lol thanks!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Honey, if you think about it, you've never stopped loving him.



Author's Response:

no she didn't

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

Dayum bb. I really like your writing style!



Author's Response:

thanks hun! :-)

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

That's right fucker, she wants out!



Author's Response:

lmao! 

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

sweet

Author's Response:

thank you so much hun

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

awe so sweet

Author's Response:

thank you so much, I try lol

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

great chapter

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you're enjoying so far!

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow good job

Author's Response:

thank you! :-)

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 34

Enjoyed your story. Jacob was so vengeful...havent read a fan fic with him like that before. Thanks for sharing your talent



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

LOvely story so far. I am ohhhing and ahhhhing



Author's Response:

glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: kolobusamanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Go Bella! I love a strong and independent women who speaks her mind!



Author's Response:

me too! From the first time I read Twilight, that was one of my main issues

Reviewer: twolipps Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 34

I loved every word of it!



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!!!

Reviewer: twolipps Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

Did I miss something. When did they talk about him being a Vampire?



Author's Response:

they didn't, but think about the things Bella learned being married to Jake all those years

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 34

Yay! Everyone is happy and in love and grandparents :)  I love a happy ending.

And you are so right what Bella said...Once you have been a fat chick you never want to draw attention to your body ever again.



Author's Response:

that was close to the ending I always saw for this story even though some people didn't like it. I'm glad you enjoyed though! thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 33

Damn, Bella was awesome.  It was very fititng that it was Bella to take out Jake.  After all the shit he's put her through she needed that closure.

Edward protecting Bella like that against Liz's brother was hawt!  Nice job, Eddie.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked!!! I had people complain that my fight scenes weren't detailed enough and then turn around and tell me that this scene was too graphic! lmao

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 32

OMG, I LOVE ESME!!  That was awesome.  I have a feeling we are about to have one hell of a showdown with Jake.



Author's Response:

I love Esme too lol and yes, it's finally coming

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 31

LOL, it just isn't a Cullen family trip if a bet isn't involved.  I keep cracking up thinking of the guys running around naked to the Benny Hill theme song.



Author's Response:

my hubby helped me with the bet lol that's how they ended up naked, running around with their boxers on their heads!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 30

I'm glad the entire family gave their opinions about Bella and the twins going off alone.  She should realize that number one Edward, Tia, and Ben would never be somewhere the three of them wouldn't.  And the rest of the Cullens are a package deal with Tia and Ben.

It sounds like poor Bella has never really had the loyalty of a true family before.  Even Charlie hasn't been there for her like the Cullens are now.



Author's Response:

You are the first person to get that!!!! Bella really hasn't had anyone like that in her life, but her kids, until now

Reviewer: maryjo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

So far I like the story line, since Jake has imprinted we won't be seeing him wag his ugly jelous head I am hoping?



Author's Response:

I can't say either way lol

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 29

Esme was so fierce that she was quite scary.  I'm curious to know what was said at the wall.  Hopefully the Denali's won't be too pissed and they can stay friends.



Author's Response:

I like a fierce Esme

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow, Jake really is a sick bastard.  I think Bella liked it better when he forgot or ignored their anniversary.

Don't mess with momma bear's cubs.  She will literally rip you apart.



Author's Response:

I agree completely

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 27

Nothing better than good clean vamp/wolf fun.  LOL, I can't help but still giggle picturing Carlisle coming down the water slide in shorts and a Pink Foyd tee.  That was priceless.  At least they got to have some fun before the storm starts.  I just know Jake is looming in the shadows for the final showdown.



Author's Response:

yeah, they deserved to have a little fun

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

Just to get a visual in my head, what size did you picture Bella as when she was human?

Yay Bella for having such awesome control of your shield.  I wonder if the twins want to hurt Emmett for teasing their mom and Edward so openly about sex.  I can see Seth laughing about it, but I can totally see Leah going all "TMI for the kids" and covering her ears with her hands.



Author's Response:

Bella is about 5 ft 4 inches tall and about 240 lbs pre-vamp in my mind, she is about 5 ft 7 inches tall and 145 lbs post vamp

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