Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
Cute ending. TY for writing and sharing
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
well at least Jake is gone. Surprise Jake didn't try to use Charlie to get to B.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 32
ugh. Who the hell screwed up Liz in the head? Sucks that Jake has all this time on his hands? Isn't he supposed to be working sometimes?
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 31
utter silliness. I love it
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
B is an idiot to think they'd let her leave alone.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 29
ugh letting them go is gonna be a mistake. What do you want to bet they run right to the volturi...... or help jake.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 28
I see Irina is going to be a real piece of work. Probably worse than Tia.
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
what a wonderfully fun chapter I never would have thought of a water slide like that on the side of the mountain
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great first hunt and all. Um wait, doesn't Charlie already know about vamps? or am I getting my stories confused?
Date: 23 Aug 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
woo hoo for the claiming. Go E. Glad the kids are being so cool
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hawt Dayum. Another female for leah to bond with. Wonder who Claire will imprint with? hmmm
Go Bad Ass Bella!!!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
Glad they are all coming together as a big blended family. Ugh Jake is just trying to get himself and those real werewolves killed.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Kinda had a feeling what you were going to do with the imprints. Too cute.
Poor B Hope she's ok and E doesn't go crazy.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad The kids came back. Don't think B is going to last too much longer.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor B. So much happening so fast.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Poor B. Good things always seem to happen to good people and kids. Hope Sam doesnt' give them too much crap about her change. We already know Snakey will.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Why do I get the feeling B's got an inoperable brain tumor?
Yeah I think the kids are gonna change soon.
Ack Hate that I was right
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad the family helped the kids have a good birthday. At least Tia is following Flower's advice to say nothing if you can't say something nice.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow Jake is really delusional. Glad Sam stepped up and took some charge. Elizabeth has alot of nerve too and is probaby fueling alot of these issues.
Glad Sam is being reasonable. I think Jake is going to get himself killed before this is over. Moron of a man Jake is.
Leah is old enough to know the truth and to stop living in dream land.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
oooh yummy beginning
Go Mischa. What is that moron up to now?
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Nice seeing Edwards POV and how he feels about everything. Jake needs to be reined in.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow Jake's got a lot of nerve. Glad Leah told him off. Oh so Jake is the alpha. That kinda explains why the guys didnt tell her, but not the girls.
OOOOh I LOVE Mr Danford!!! Glad Em and Jazz came over.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hope Randall is good to Leah. Of course, first loves rarely last (in my opinion).
Leah needs to get over that getting back together thing. Sad really. Wonder what she has to say about the chick her dad's been seeing while mom and dad were still actually married. Considering Jake left her with a clunker of a vehicle, he has no right to say squat about her car.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wonder how Snakey is gonna take it when he finds out E spent the night? Ugh Hate snotty gossiping women. Poor B. Take the help girl. Everyone needs help once in awhile.
hmmm dunno if that was the right time to ask her that, E.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
what a nice V day. Wonder whats up with Leah? Jake putting ideas in her head? She should get alimony. I'm not one for automatic alimony, but in this instance, when she took care of the house, kids, and him while he got to advance his career and then he cheats on her......yeah she deserves alimony.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Guess Tia didn't get the message. Sigh. Love Leah giving it back to her in spades. Seth is one smart kiddo.
Sucks that Jake made her feel that way. And that she's on welfare while he has the job with benefits and all.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG Can't believe Jake had the nerve to hit her. He deserves to lose his job. Glad Seth and Leah have good heads on their shoulders despite having an arse for a dad. Hope Tia behaves
Date: 22 Aug 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow Tia is sure full of herself. What a little biatch.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
hmm So Jake has extra "conditions" on the divorce. How pathetic since its all his fault. Wow Tia is a real biatch.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ugh poor bella. Jake would be hard pressed to get custody because she got mugged. Although he'd figure out the vampire thing too I assume. Gotta love Carlisle.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wonder if Jake will be a dick about custody when he finds out about Edward?
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm so they are vampires. Interesting twists to the orignal vamp story. Bet Jake is going to have a cow when he comes to pick up the kids.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
They'd known all along because they had no choice?!?! I call BS. Its a lame "man code" excuse.
So Jake is a wolf but the Cullen's aren't vamps???
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love how men love to turn shit around when they cheat.
Date: 03 May 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
You left them all in a great place, complete with grandchildren! What could be any better? Loved this story!
Date: 03 May 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 33
Please tell me that was the last vengeful relative to be disposed of! After all this danger and drama, I think everyone deserves some peace and quiet!
Date: 03 May 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
Now I'm really glad Esme killed that psycho arsonist bitch! My only wish now is that they find and destroy Jacob! I feel bad they have lost all there things, but luckily still have each other!
Date: 03 May 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 31
What is wrong with these people? What a bunch of crazies! Kind of wish I could have seen that silliness, especially as the cops showed up!
Date: 03 May 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm glad the family out-voted Bella over takiing the kids and leaving, she was a wee bit ridiculous about martyring herself!
Date: 03 May 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 29
I don't like what Irina said about Bella and her children, and I'm not very happy with her mate trying to kill Seth, either! All's well that ends well, I guess.
Date: 03 May 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
How sick is that, Jake sending a severed head in a box for their anniversary? I wonder if his imprint is urging him to kill Bella and the twins? Something else to worry about! This fight with Laurent and Irina is pretty messed up, too, especially putting them back together and waiting for Edward. I can't say as I blame Bella a bit for defending her children.
Date: 03 May 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
That sounds like the most fun thing to do! The whole bunch, family and friends, all three species, had an absolute ball! I don't blame Edward for loving his life!
Date: 03 May 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
I hope Bella will trust that the family will find a way to keep Jake away from the twins and with them. She seems to be an amazing vampire, newborn not withstanding!
Date: 02 May 2014 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
I had a strong feeling that Bella would flourish in her new life, and avoid most of the ususal newborn problems. This is going to be quite the family, vampires, hybrids and wolves, all together.
Date: 02 May 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm with Ben, Badass Bella saved the day! She is the goddess of destruction now, so nobody better piss her off! What a relief that she came through the transformation with battle flags flying!
Date: 02 May 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
That has to be frustrating, to hear what's happening and not be able to do anything about it! Bella is most likely going to have some sort of talent, gift or power, whatever you want to call it.
Date: 02 May 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
All I can say is it's about time! If they had dilly dallied around any longer, Bella would be beyond help of any kind! There's an awful lot going on right this minute, what with the new wolves and the hybrids imprinting on each other while everyone else trys to save Bella.
Date: 02 May 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella is going to have a talk with Seth about that, I'll bet! It sounds like the twins got back just in time, since their stubborn mother wasn't about to change without their approval.
Date: 02 May 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
Never rains but what it pours it seems, at least in Bella's world! I can't decide whether Emmett is an idiot or a welcome distraction.
Date: 02 May 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Okay, Bella , what's so funny? Not that I blame her for trying to find something good about the situation she is in. Hope the kids take the news as well as they can, it will mean a lot to their mother.
Date: 02 May 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looks as if push is about to come to shove! Bella will either die or change, and I dare those wolves to say no!
Date: 02 May 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wouldn't that be interesting, if Tia and Seth end up together? Looking forward to this meeting, to see what they all come up with to keep everyone safe.
Date: 02 May 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
I sure hope Jake won't really try to kill Bella, that would be insane, as the kids would never forgive him! Good thing Sam is regaining controlof the pack and has a much cooler head on his shoulders. Bottom line, Edward isn't about to let harm come to his Bella, whatever he has to do to keep her, and he chioldren safe!
Date: 02 May 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
I wonder if Jake is ever going to get a clue and grow up? Happy for Bella, now that she and Edward have truly connected again. All she has to worry about now is preventing a big fight in her front yard.
Date: 02 May 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Too bad about the puppies, but luckily Jasper and Emmett are close and able to watch over Bella. Jake is being a giant pain in the butt over Edward and his family. Since they don't want to get Alan in trouble, I guess a restraining order is out of the question. Can't wait 'til Bella gets a load of the Lear jet!
Date: 02 May 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
Damn Jake, anyway, why does he have to be such a bigoted ass? Bless Alan for coming to Bella's rescue, silver bullett and all! Kind of spooky that he knows about wolves and vampires, but he seems to be oky with it!
Date: 02 May 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Despite Bella's stubborness, she now has a car that won't die on it's way to work, school or the grocery store! I guess she just never wull learn to accept a gift or help, graciously!
Date: 02 May 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was a really nice way to end a really crappy day! Wonder what she will answer?
Date: 02 May 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hell of a thing for your final divorce papers to show up on Valentine's Day! I kind of think Edward did a great job of counteracting the sorrow, though! I liked that Bella has given her children middle names associated with the Cullens.
Date: 02 May 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
How could you resist loving him when he's so sweet and caring and considerate and beautiful? It's great that the twins get along with the Cullens, McCartys and Hales so well, except for Tia, of course.
Date: 02 May 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
I see Jacob Black is still his ususal tactful self, with the addition of wife-smacking! I am beyond thrilled that Bella broke her cast smacking him back, and also that her son took his father to task for hitting his mother! With the twins in the house, maybe little Miss Tia will get het attitude adjusted.
Date: 02 May 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Vampire, human or hybrid, teenagers seem to all be brats at one time or another! I hope Tia gets over her jealousy and gets to know Bella. They might even like each other!
Date: 01 May 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Tia may be a problem and irritate her uncle with her unfounded prejudice. It's unusual , especially when Rose and Alice both are friends with Bella, and Carlisle and Esme are thrilled to see her again!
Date: 01 May 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
I see Bella is still a danger magnet, that hasn't changed, either! Those creeps deserve whatever Edward did to them, and I love that Bella punched the hell out of her hand, defending herself! At least medical assistance was close.
Date: 01 May 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hooray for Edward not caring that Bella is overweight, and nearing middleage, he just loves her, in whatever package she's in! Good for her, too , for not fearing what he is. Of course, living with a shape shifter for the better part of tweny years probably helps!
Date: 01 May 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm enjoying the different spin you have put on our favorite characters. It's fun to read how life has been for everyone, still canon couples, for the most part, plus some new characters . I love that Edward is a veterinarian, but am curious as to how the animals tolerate his vampirism. Speaking of which, how and when did he become a vampire?
Date: 01 May 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
What are the odds of them meeting again after all these years? Dare I ask why his eyes are gold, if they were green eighteen years ago? I hope Bella pulls up her socks and tries to be happy after the divorce. Maybe Edward will help her with that!
Date: 01 May 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damn! Bella has had a tough time of it, from the sound of things. Life is hard when there's not enough love and not enough money. So, the ultimate rejection, Jake has imprinted and Bella is going to be on her own with the twins, Thirty-six is at least young enough to start over and I hope she does well, it will serve Jake right and make her feel better too!
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 34
tell us what happens in new england we need more it was fantastic well done
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 34
What a great story... a fun mix of humor, sorrow and drama. I am only concerned about the way a couple of things were left hanging...Denalis, Charlie, etc. Totally minor, but still a great way to twist the original cannon. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response:
lol I always have a nasty habit of leaving just a few things unresolved, like it would be in real life, but thank you so much for reading and leaving a review, I really appreciate it :-)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 34
Aw - fluffiness!! :-P What exactly happened to teh Cullens anyway?! Got changed by the Volturi or something?!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 34
What a great story, lots of humour and drama, loved it all.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 16 May 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 34
THAT WAS A GOOD STORY I LIKED IT AND WAS HAPPY THAT BELLA TOOK IT IN HER HANDS TO STOP JAKE ONCE AND FOR ALL GLAD THAT EVERYTHING TURNED OUT RIGHT IN THE END AND THAT BELLA AND EDWARD WAS TOGETHER IN THE END
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked!
Date: 02 May 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 34
Definitely different and definitely liked it.
Author's Response: fantastic!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 34
Damn. I hate a journey's end. Especially one that is as beautiful, witty, smexy, and wacky as this one is. Well done, kiddo. Well and truly done.
Hugz,
Pam
Author's Response:
thank you so much for taking the time to read my off the wall tale, I hope I didn't disappoint
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 33
I love the fact that 'The Princess Bride' is woven all throughout your story. Priceless!
Author's Response:
It's in all of my stories at least once lol
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 32
Jake MUST die. If not, I'll find the bastard and kill him MYSELF! lmao
Author's Response:
oh, he gets his in the end
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG! I haven't laughed that hard in ages! Great job kiddo!
Author's Response:
lol thanks!
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
Honey, if you think about it, you've never stopped loving him.
Author's Response:
no she didn't
Date: 07 Apr 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Dayum bb. I really like your writing style!
Author's Response:
thanks hun! :-)
Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
That's right fucker, she wants out!
Author's Response:
lmao!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
sweet
Author's Response:
thank you so much hun
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
awe so sweet
Author's Response:
thank you so much, I try lol
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you're enjoying so far!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow good job
Author's Response:
thank you! :-)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 34
Enjoyed your story. Jacob was so vengeful...havent read a fan fic with him like that before. Thanks for sharing your talent
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
LOvely story so far. I am ohhhing and ahhhhing
Author's Response:
glad you're enjoying!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Go Bella! I love a strong and independent women who speaks her mind!
Author's Response:
me too! From the first time I read Twilight, that was one of my main issues
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 34
I loved every word of it!
Author's Response:
thank you so much!!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Did I miss something. When did they talk about him being a Vampire?
Author's Response:
they didn't, but think about the things Bella learned being married to Jake all those years
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 34
Yay! Everyone is happy and in love and grandparents :) I love a happy ending.
And you are so right what Bella said...Once you have been a fat chick you never want to draw attention to your body ever again.
Author's Response:
that was close to the ending I always saw for this story even though some people didn't like it. I'm glad you enjoyed though! thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
Damn, Bella was awesome. It was very fititng that it was Bella to take out Jake. After all the shit he's put her through she needed that closure.
Edward protecting Bella like that against Liz's brother was hawt! Nice job, Eddie.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked!!! I had people complain that my fight scenes weren't detailed enough and then turn around and tell me that this scene was too graphic! lmao
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 32
OMG, I LOVE ESME!! That was awesome. I have a feeling we are about to have one hell of a showdown with Jake.
Author's Response:
I love Esme too lol and yes, it's finally coming
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
LOL, it just isn't a Cullen family trip if a bet isn't involved. I keep cracking up thinking of the guys running around naked to the Benny Hill theme song.
Author's Response:
my hubby helped me with the bet lol that's how they ended up naked, running around with their boxers on their heads!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
I'm glad the entire family gave their opinions about Bella and the twins going off alone. She should realize that number one Edward, Tia, and Ben would never be somewhere the three of them wouldn't. And the rest of the Cullens are a package deal with Tia and Ben.
It sounds like poor Bella has never really had the loyalty of a true family before. Even Charlie hasn't been there for her like the Cullens are now.
Author's Response:
You are the first person to get that!!!! Bella really hasn't had anyone like that in her life, but her kids, until now
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
So far I like the story line, since Jake has imprinted we won't be seeing him wag his ugly jelous head I am hoping?
Author's Response:
I can't say either way lol
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 29
Esme was so fierce that she was quite scary. I'm curious to know what was said at the wall. Hopefully the Denali's won't be too pissed and they can stay friends.
Author's Response:
I like a fierce Esme
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow, Jake really is a sick bastard. I think Bella liked it better when he forgot or ignored their anniversary.
Don't mess with momma bear's cubs. She will literally rip you apart.
Author's Response:
I agree completely
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
Nothing better than good clean vamp/wolf fun. LOL, I can't help but still giggle picturing Carlisle coming down the water slide in shorts and a Pink Foyd tee. That was priceless. At least they got to have some fun before the storm starts. I just know Jake is looming in the shadows for the final showdown.
Author's Response:
yeah, they deserved to have a little fun
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
Just to get a visual in my head, what size did you picture Bella as when she was human?
Yay Bella for having such awesome control of your shield. I wonder if the twins want to hurt Emmett for teasing their mom and Edward so openly about sex. I can see Seth laughing about it, but I can totally see Leah going all "TMI for the kids" and covering her ears with her hands.
Author's Response:
Bella is about 5 ft 4 inches tall and about 240 lbs pre-vamp in my mind, she is about 5 ft 7 inches tall and 145 lbs post vamp