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Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 9:24 AM Title: Pull

Loved it! 

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 5:51 AM Title: Taken

Loved it!  Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 5:27 AM Title: The set-up

Loved it! 

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 5:08 AM Title: A New Beginning

Loved it! 

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 4:37 AM Title: Hate

Loved it! 

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 4:20 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2016 3:40 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Cruel and sadistic..edward...hate him..or not?

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2016 3:29 PM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

Poor Bella being hopeless little human..i love Tanya..and James  because this time theirs character as good vampires. 

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2016 1:03 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit

God!!..i almost vomits when reading this chapters..edward with the blood whore..i really hate that part..damn it!!

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2016 12:28 PM Title: Pull

Love the intensity..awesomely written every words..but one thing..non virgin Edward? Kind of disappointed ..it would be so memorable feelings for mated couple to feel the first time making love/ mating/ fucking...almost make me stop reading because of non virgin Edward.. ( sigh....)

Reviewer: Nikaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 3:20 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

Please update this story... I mean you are updating living amongst vampires! I like this story just as much and love to see whats going to happen next!

Reviewer: Nikaka Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 3:17 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Really you made their weakness garlic??? Is it the same for Living aongst vampires too?

 

Reviewer: roswellgurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2015 10:28 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

please please please finish this story!

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 9:40 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

Will you be updating this story? 

Reviewer: verlema Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:15 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Carlisle is a sadistic bastard

Reviewer: verlema Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 12:50 AM Title: Urge

whoa what is going on here tanya is being NICE and james and victoria are ANIMAL-DRINKERS Edward's an asshole and Emmett the cuddly teddy bear is a jerk not to mention Esme and Carlisle hate humans has the world gone topsy turvy nice story please continue

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:53 AM Title: Grand Funk

Pmsl!!! Whaaa? Looool!

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 4:36 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

No time to eat, Tyggy! This is too good!! Oh but no!! Is this Edward doing the new moon of his own? Gahhh gotta read...

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 4:12 AM Title: Urge

Wooooo yeah! 

Reviewer: elenalena Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 1:15 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit

Wow... can't stop reading this

Reviewer: elenalena Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 12:15 AM Title: Taken

Love it!

Reviewer: elenalena Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:16 PM Title: The set-up

Wow, very, very interesting!!!

Reviewer: juleskris2013 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 6:52 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

hope all  is  well loving this story would love to kill charlise

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 7:07 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

will this be updated soon?

Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 11:01 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

I absolutely love this story! This story is defiantly a 10 in my book! But one question, when might you ladies continue the story? Until then! Dana

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =)  I'll try to update asap. I need to get together with Tyggy and talk it over with her. 

 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 3:36 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

Are you still giving out the guide?  I hope so; please!!



Author's Response:

Yes =)

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 3:34 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

I am really enjoying this story!!!!  Please please please update!!!! The suspense is so awesome

Reviewer: LSAB Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 2:12 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

WHEN WILL THIS STORY BE UPDATED AND LIVING AMONGST VAMPIRES TOO? I NEED MY FIX

Reviewer: bluegirl27262 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 10:37 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

this is a great story... I hope to read more in the future and im sorry about the hard patch in ur life... 

Reviewer: DeeZ750 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2013 6:39 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

Love the story! Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:22 AM Title: Urge

Sooooo good!

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 5:46 AM Title: The Gauntlet Pt 2

I thought the pee part was brilliant and totally was in character!

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 1:11 AM Title: The Gauntlet part 1

Im afraid to read more. You have me so hooked and I just want to read to the end, but i know it's incomplete! Ug, what to do?

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:44 PM Title: Pull

I trust u. And i love it!

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 5:53 AM Title: Taken

I am sooo hooked on this story!

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 5:28 AM Title: The set-up

That was brutal and fun :)

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 5:11 AM Title: A New Beginning

I just wanna saw awwwwww 

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:58 AM Title: Hate

I like how they are vicious and compassionate at the same time, like humans.

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:40 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

I did enjoy it! Thank you

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:22 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

hope rl is better for you.

looking forward to an update

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:20 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

sorry to hear

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:19 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

can't wait to see what happens. hopin yo might give the guide out still :)

Reviewer: rain611 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:09 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

I am really new to this site and i read your story.I really lie it. My english is not very good but you wrote an awesome story so I thought I shoud at least appreciate it. Iam sorry for not putting a reveiw for other chapters but I hpoe you can forgive me.You are a good writer hpoe you will continue with this story.Also your other story CAMBION is really amazing.I request you to continue it too.

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:57 AM Title: Grand Funk

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:48 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

good

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:47 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Very funny ladies...you had me going there the last chapter...This one was fucking awesome!!!  You nailed it!!  You two certainly have a vivid imagination!!Can't wait for the next chapter!  I do hope that there is a HEA & that they both survive it!!

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:45 AM Title: A bit of a tease

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:45 AM Title: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

wondering if b's reaction is a bit heightened as it seems she picked up on it before e

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:36 AM Title: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:26 AM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

keep wondering if there is something special with b as she seems to have strong reactions from vampires. wondering if the vampyrcients will have a strong reaction as well or discover it somehow

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:23 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:22 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:22 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:22 AM Title: All ABout Losh!

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:21 AM Title: Urge

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:21 AM Title: The Gauntlet Pt 2

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:21 AM Title: We Usually Don't Do This On Here

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:20 AM Title: The Gauntlet part 1

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:20 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:20 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:19 AM Title: Pull

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:19 AM Title: Taken

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:19 AM Title: The set-up

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:18 AM Title: A New Beginning

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:18 AM Title: Hate

:)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:18 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

hi - started reading this and got caught up without reviewing. enjoying this twist to what we normally see for these characters as well as the vampire story line. can't wait to see where you go with this

Reviewer: rgh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:10 AM Title: Grand Funk

WTF???  LOL!!  I am totally lost now...

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:12 PM Title: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

Amazing story...was not too sure about reading a dark fan fic...it has certainly pulled me over to the dark side!!  Thank you ladies!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:59 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

Prayers to you two too. Thanks for staying with the story. Am looking forward to the next chapter & congrats on your successes.

Reviewer: toxicterrier Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:38 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

More please

Reviewer: maella2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:24 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

Hi,

 

Um.. How do I subscribe to this story? I normally use fanfiction and there is a 'follow' box to click in. I don't see one with twcs.

 

thanks

Bec

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 9:28 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Oh yeah, dominant Edward has woken up. I hope they take head of her warning and get the fuck out. I'll stay and keep the fit one (cant remember his name) company lol.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:15 PM Title: Grand Funk

?? I take it someone was dreaming a really weird dream lol

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:31 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

Dimitri is a good guard to Edward, I hope that Bella treats him better than she has so far. After all he is helping them

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:07 PM Title: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

Oh Edward is changing too, this should be a good fight between emmett and him, if they catch up to each other. I hope he has managed to get Bella away to safety.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:57 PM Title: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Wow can I have Lulkis..pretty please, I am not above begging. He could definitely go Dom on me, I wouldn't have a problem submitting to him lol.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:47 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Oh sounds like the fun is starting..not that it hasn't already but I think the camps are going to get a rude awakening

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:52 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Jasper is a sneaky SOB, and poor Bella is caught up in the middle of all the drama and family hatred.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:30 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Poor Bella witnessing Edward in his true asshole form must not have been pleasant for her at all. I hope he gets a better attitude as time wears on otherwise Bella will truly despise him despite them being mates

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:57 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

Wow.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 1:07 AM Title: Urge

Not sure that Tanya knowing will be a problem, after all sex is allowed. Maybe Bella and Tanya will become good friends.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 12:09 AM Title: The Gauntlet part 1

Oh jasper is playing with fire. Lol. Edward serves this kick up his ass.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:44 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit

Oh dear will jasper try and buy her and use her as a personal slave. He is bound to try and do something to tease and taunt Edward.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:01 PM Title: Pull

Oh yay they met again. Only who is gonna stop Edward from taking what is his.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:32 PM Title: Taken

Oh so close yet so far away. They still have that amazing bond, but will Edward be able to find her again.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:09 PM Title: The set-up

Edward will surly kill Caius when he gets older for the killing of his parents

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:48 PM Title: A New Beginning

Great story so far, really looking forward to these two meeting up and read about this bond they had

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:36 PM Title: Hate

Aww well at least Bella was safe..for now anyway

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:26 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

This sounds sooo good

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:47 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

sorry to hear about the troubles, but good luck with your new challenges in publishing. well done on your positive attitude too! I look forward to the next chapters.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 7:25 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

ty so much

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:57 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

yay for more! sorry about the cancer 

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 12:50 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

au plaisir de vous revoir...

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 12:48 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

ok

Reviewer: Starfish_2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:23 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

Eeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! I can't wait!!!!!!! I'm sorry about jellybeans grandma :/ mine means the world to me :/ I'm happy to know this story wasn't abandoned ^_^

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:06 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

Flouncing! So annoying when you get an alert thinking that a story you were really enjoying that hasn't updated in forever has finally updated, only to find that it's another typical pity party excuse for why there is no update!



Author's Response:

*yawns* Sorry for having a life. Those do seem to get in the way of fanfic doesn't it? Oh..sorry. My bad. You must not know. lolol Bye kidd! *waves*

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:35 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

So glad to hear from you!  Our prayers will be with your Grandma...we've lost several family members to cancer.  Think good thoughts and try to stay positive.  Your new mantra?  One day at a time, some days will be easier than others.   Keep repeating that.  Take care.

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:27 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

Bella is so stupid sometimes. Her pitiful bravery can get her kill. She comes off annoying in certain situation. 

Reviewer: BE1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:44 PM Title: New Chapter up next.

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:54 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

So good to hear from you.  I am sorry to hear about Jells grandmother I have her in my prayers.   Congragulations on school keep it up.

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