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Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:42 AM Title: New Chapter up next.

oh please update soon!!  really miss you guys!

Reviewer: Starfish_2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:52 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I just read all chapters including the randomness and fake chapters!!!! urg those made me so mad!!!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter! so many twists and turn :D I i tried to report that plagarist but sadly it had alreay been taken down :(

Don't stop writing! ya'll are amazing at it :)))))

Reviewer: Starfish_2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:53 PM Title: Grand Funk

What the hell was that!?!?!?!? Someone was utterly bored.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:58 AM Title: The Gauntlet Pt 2

I like Tanya. It's refreshing not to see her as a jealous slut who only has eyes for Edward. And I like Jasper too. He's interesting, although I'm nervous as to what he has planned.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 12:04 PM Title: Pull

Whoa, how did she end up there?

And I actually read darkfics for the dark stuff. Weird, right? I like my vampires scary and sexy.

Reviewer: duffey2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:45 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

This is a great story! I really hope you get a chance to finish it. Thank you for writing this. I cant wait to see what happens.Good Job!!

Reviewer: duffey2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:44 PM Title: All ABout Losh!

I like that you have posted something like this. My heart go out for this family. I didint have to close my eyes and imagina that because i have been through that.My situation is very similar i was pregnant with a little girl and i was happy. At 6 months pregnant we found out there was complications, My little girl had water on the brain (hydrocephalus) it was so bad that her brain was not forming right. She needed out and out soon, so i went through steroid shots to try to get her lungs ready. we waited as long as we could but it was getting too bad so at 32 weeks i had a planned c-section. I hadnt had a c-section before but her head was too large to give birth natrally without damaging her brain further.she was born and they immediatly took her away to the childrens hospital and they placed a shunt the very next morning. I didnt get to see or hold her for 3 days.She had gotten an infection in her shunt and had to have a external one placed for 3 weeks. she has had 2 more shunts since then. We found out that because of the hydrocephalus she was missing hte corpuss colossum of her brain and the rest of her brain was pushed up against her skull that they didnt know the damage. She stuggled to learn how to drink from a bottle, she was fed from a tube for 4 months. She has had alot of struggles but she is now 16 months old and just learned how to walk. She has had lots of help with physical and occupational therapy. She is my miracle baby and has come so far. we are left with many hospital bills also. she has done so good but we still dont know how she will do in the future. I havent put my story out there but i wanted to share this. Like i said my heart goes out to losh's family. He is a miracle. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:55 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I love this story

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:16 AM Title: A New Beginning

Whoa, so good. Just...wow.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 6:47 AM Title: Hate

This is crazy but so fucking good. I'm loving it.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:53 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I'm looking forward to your next update, thanks for writing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:36 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

So garlic, yes a weakness! I hope it works on Jasper but not Edward, but that's probably too far fetched.

I wonder who E's a descendant of ? Count Chovukula. You know that sounds a lot like Count Chocula. Is that a throw out for your favorite cereal? Haha JK.  I love the originality you have going in this story;-))

Can I get an L.A.H Guide? Or did you post somewhere?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:50 PM Title: Grand Funk

K

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:37 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

This is getting good. Ok don't get me wrong it's always been good, just keeps getting better.

Is Demetri a creation of vampire & human and is that possible? I thought I remembered there wasn't any inter species creation & Edward couldn't turn her into a vampire.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:03 PM Title: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

;-)

Well if Edward changes like Em, then he should be stronger than him again, I hope.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:52 PM Title: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Damn, Lilki's is hot, I wonder how hawt he looks in gray?

Cant wait to read what's next.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:32 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Yah, a readers guide sounds good;-)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:08 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

;-))

Reviewer: Coolio1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:36 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

This story is absolutely phenomenal :) looking forward to reading more! 

Reviewer: Jazzygre15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2012 10:41 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

I cant wait till the next chapter.  

Reviewer: oopsadaysey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 6:13 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

Ding dong the witch is dead - I think we finally got through

 

excellent story keep it up

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 12:12 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

That chapter was jam packed with lots of fun.

I about lost it when Carlisle and Esme started getting their freak on in front of Jasper. Some things just can't be unseen. Poor Jasper. I loved the whole bit with the garlic. The poor humans need some kind of defense against the vamps.

 



Author's Response:

lmao! Yeah Carlisle and Es are freeakeh! ;) 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 12:02 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

Sorry for this, but I will keep an eye out.  Thx for not taking your stories down.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

Tear us to pieces, couldn't tear us to pieces ;) We are keeping them up =) 

 

Next chapter will be up asap. We're working on it.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:48 PM Title: Grand Funk

LOL. I seriously thought you two had lost your mind.



Author's Response:

lmao! We really couldn't resist the April Fool's prank at the time. ;) Though... I think it may have confused some in the process, too lol 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:38 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

I knew from the start there was something special about Bella and Edward. Something has to be up with Edward Sr and Elizabeth.

Of course with Bella catching the eye and sparking the protective gene of most vamps she comes in contact with I have to wonder if she has vamp in her bloodline somewhere.

That little bit about the prince that shouldn't have been born really has my mind reeling. Is this where Jasper is going to get screwed? Will he be the prince at the palace whent he ancient vamps come calling? Will that be how he meets his demise?

So, it appears that Dimitri is a half-breed. Interesting twist there :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:14 PM Title: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

It's nice to see Edward being civil with Bella.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:07 PM Title: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Yeah, that chapter was a mind-frack. I'm thinking the story would be over if he killed Bella. Of course you didn't say the female was dead. At least I don't have to wait for an update :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:56 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

This little twist could get very interesting.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:50 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Carlisle is deliciously evil. I love it.

Jasper is playing a very dangerous game. He's going to get Emmett killed and then himself in the end if he is not careful. I have a feeling all of the Cullens along with Caius will be dead before this fic is over. I can see Edward cleaning house and making new laws when he decides to quit fighting fate. Speaking of fate, I can totally see a prophecy about the male vamp and female human true mates turning the vamp society upside down.

This next chapter should be very interesting.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:30 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Damn. Just when I was starting to feel a glimmer of hope for Edward you have to pull the rug out from under me. Bella's got a long way to go if she is going to survive this Edward. Of course he just set back the progress he had made with Bella by leaps and bounds. Stupid male. Their pride always gets in the way of practicality.

Poor Tanya. That was a crap thing for Edward to do. I"m just wondering if that is a permanent thing or does it wear off over time.



Author's Response:

When it wears off, Tanya will be so pissed off when she's free from being Edward's submissale. She's a strong female. Edward better watch out lol =D 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:18 PM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

Wow. A furious Tanya is quite a sight to behold. I like how she stood up to Edward for Bella.

I can breathe a sigh of relief. Emmett won't get to play around with Bella when all is said and done.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:07 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I'm so sorry this is happening to you.  I thought I saw the story you are referring to over at ff.  I will go and report it now.



Author's Response:

Hi!

 

Thanks for your support. The story was taken down by the ff.net admins. Thank goodness. Just beware of the plagiarist called : Tear you to pieces  She isn't remorseful. =( 

 

Thanks again, I will have a chapter up asap!

 

Jells

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:02 PM Title: Urge

Holy crap. That was quite an interesting chapter. I like how you switch the roles of the traditional good and bad vamps for Twilight. It's nice to actually like James, Victoria and Tanya for a change :)

I hope I'm right and Tanya will try to help Bella and Edward. Now she won't have to screw him to keep his mouth shut ;)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 6:39 PM Title: The Gauntlet Pt 2

LOL. I died laughing when he pissed on her leg. That is so animalistic and fits perfectly with the behavior you have vamps portray.

I think I might just like your Tanya. I hope she somehow helps Bella and Edward out.

So, Jasper is quite cunning and devious. I just wonder if he will get to know Bella and feel bad about his plan or will he be ruthless and end up getting himself killed. So many options and I can't quite figure it out yet.



Author's Response:

lmao! Yeah, why not piss a little to mark her. *giggles* And Thank you so much for reading! Tyggy and I are happy that you're still enjoying the story. 

 

There's a lot of mindfudgery going on in this story. ;) 

 

Thanks again!!

 

Jells

 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 5:33 PM Title: The Gauntlet part 1

Poor Bella. It's like dealing Jekyl and Hyde. I just wonder who will win out in the end.

Jasper is definitely a sneaky bastard. Edward better not underestimate him. When you are physically weak you have to make up for it in other ways and Jasper obviously has a very keen mind.

I so want Edward to rip Charlotte's head off.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 5:05 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit

It's a nice change to see the Cullens not being all goody-goody vamps.

Wow, what a first meeting for Bella and Edward. I certainly didn't expect that.

I feel bad for Jasper but I can this as a way for him and Edward to bond. Jasper can be the good brother and help Edward deal with Bella or even keep her secret. Of course I doubt that will happen. The vamps in your story seem to be power hungry and poor Jasper has been dissed for so long by Edward the golden boy that I can see him wanting revenge.

Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story. It's so different from any other one I've read.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 3:53 PM Title: Pull

I don't hate you guys or Edward. I totally get what you were saying referencing Jane Eyre. I think Edward needs a good dose of mothering. He was definitely lacking that in his upbringing. I sure hope Esme can help him learn some compassion for his brother and other creatures.

I can't wait to see what's been going on with Bella and how she's handled her abduction.

Reviewer: EdwardCullensMate Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 11:24 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

story no longer there :)

Author's Response:

We are so happy about that! =D 

 

Thanks for your support. I am trying to write a mini chapter before we finish the much longer one are also writing.

 

 

Reviewer: wwench Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 3:01 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

It seems to have been removed from FF now so that's good



Author's Response:

Yes, finally! We are sooo relieved. She was stubborn. 

 

Thanks for your support! =) 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 1:47 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I've really enjoyed reading living amongst vampires.. can't wait for the next chaper!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

 

Chapter is almost finished. 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 1:19 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

Well, I was about to report the story, so I clicked on the link when lo and behold! The link doesn't work! I think this is good news, right? It means it was taken down...? I am sorry that your work was abused in such a manner.



Author's Response:

That is very good news. FF.net took it down. =)

 

Thanks for your support!! We appreciate it! 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 11:34 PM Title: The set-up

Caius is playing a dangerous game. I have a feeling when/if Edward finds out the truth about his parents then Caius will have hell to pay. Nice little surprise there with Jasper.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 11:02 PM Title: A New Beginning

Awe, little alien/vamp Edward even fulls the pull to Bella. I love me a protective Elizabeth. I kept expecting her to tell Edward Sr. to get them a place in the woods so she could raise Bella. I wonder how long Mimi will survive. I can see her being stupid and becoming dinner.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 10:38 PM Title: Hate

When I first started reading this the only thing I could keep thinking was WTF are the vamp/aliens doing. It seemed like they were going to slaughter all the humans and end up starving. Thanks for clearing that up for me. I'm dying to know who saved Bella. I wonder if they will keep track of her.

Reviewer: Molliegoodgolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 10:29 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

dang it...I got all excited :(( Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Hi!

Chapter will be completed soon. =) 

Reviewer: Lud Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 10:24 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I'll be reading, and if it is actually plagiarism, I will withdraw, because I love their crazy stories and dark.

Author's Response:

Her story was taken down by fanfiction.net. I hope she won't plagiarize again. Beware of her. Her penname is:  Tear you to pieces 

 

Thanks for your support. I'm working on the new chapter. =) 

 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 10:07 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

What an interesting twist on where vampires came from. I like it and am excited to see what you have in store for this story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 8:53 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

appears to be taken down already  4/21/12



Author's Response:

Thank goodness! She was soo stubborn. Thank you for your support. The new chapter is almost complete. 

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 6:22 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

you guys rock... LOVED it



Author's Response:

Skimmmmmmmbo!!

 

Hey,bb! *waves and grins*

 

Awww Thanks so much for reading! It's crazy, right? lmao

 

*huggles*

 

Jells N Tyggy

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 6:01 PM Title: Grand Funk

LMAO... awesome shit!

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 5:34 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

what the hell!!!  I reported it. Just So Wrong.  Nobody steals your stories EVER!!!

what an idiot.  *wavesHI*  Lamby does not approve.  love you girls.



Author's Response:

Laaaaambyyyyyy!! *waves*

 

I know right? That bish! I tried to contact her through PM, but she disabled it. Then I even commented on the story thread asking her to reply so we can talk about it like adults. But nope. Just beware of her. She might do it again b/c she isn't remorseful. Her penname is: Tear you to pieces 

 

I just hope she won't do it again to us or someone else. 

 

Thankfully, the story was taken down by ff admins.

 

I'm trying to write a mini chapter so I won't have to post an update on the plagiarist and have just an author's note alone. ;)

 

Aww we love ya too. xox  And thanks for your support!!

 

*hugs

 

Jells

 

 

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 5:28 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Well that was a quick change...

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 5:22 PM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

Awe, Mateyeddie is making nice... but how long will this personalty change last?

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 5:09 PM Title: Urge

I think I might just love this Tanya...

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 4:59 PM Title: The Gauntlet Pt 2

Oh yeah she sure is in for a ride.... *giggle*

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 4:42 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

I love your story. Hopefully you will continue your work. I can't wait to read more. Hopefully the other person will be forced to taken down your story and we the readers can continue to enjoy your creativity. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your support. The story was taken down. Thank goodness =)

 

She tried to break us, but it didn't work. We will continue to post. I'm currently writing another chapter for this story on top of the other we planned out.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells n Tyggy

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:55 PM Title: The set-up

I remember reading this now... The runt! 

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:49 PM Title: A New Beginning

Dun dun dun poor little baby eddie... 

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:38 PM Title: Hate

dawe.... okay I am reading. 

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 1:42 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

am so sorry to see your hard work being abused and passed off as somebody's else's. I did try reporting it but unfortunately the Captiva code thingy wouldnt accept any of my entries :-( so much for technology grrrrr

I hope you manage to get their version of the story taken down. I look forward to hearing an update on progress, as well as to your next chapter of the proper story!

xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hate those Captiva code thingies too! The story was taken down!! Finally! =) 

 I will also do an update on her. I want people to beware but I'll post a chapter with it also. 

 

Thanks again!

 

xx

 

Jells

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 12:36 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

Glad to be of help.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!

 

The story was taken down. =) I will have an update on the plagiarist and a chapter up asap.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 12:11 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?

Wow unbelievable!  I can't believe people do that!  Sorry and I did report it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! The story was taken down by the ff.net admins. Thank goodness!

 

Thanks again for your support. We appreciate it! 

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 11:58 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I reported the theft.  Plagiarism is nothing less than that, but a stealing of ideas and thoughts.  I must say however, that story comes nowhere close in merit to yours.  Yours is in a league of its own.  Good heavens!  You even invented a language!!  Logical,  but a detail a plagiarist would not bother with.  Your work always shows depth, thought, and a supreme amount of detail.  Rock on!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! We appreciate your support. Thankfully the story was removed by the admins. Although she isn't even a bit remorseful and I heard she has done this before. Beware of : Tear you to pieces 

Thanks again! Without you and others, the story still may have been up.

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: Crazy Blue Wild Faerie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 10:26 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I've reported them for you. And also gave them a tongue lashing. 'Cause they deserve it. 

I hope this doesn't happen again to you. I can see how much you work your put into this. The characters are developed and I love the Vampire culture - its so deep and complex that you have such a strong base of context to work from. I think you've taken the rather tired idea of mating and put a fresh spin on it. I also love your descriptions - you don't overdo it but you still manage to get the image across. 

Thank you for putting this up and I hope this plagarism doesn't continue. You two don't deserve it. 

Emily



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words and your support! We appreciate it very much!

 

Thankfully the story was taken down my ff.net admins. Although, the plagiarist isn't remorseful and I fear she may do it again. One of the readers said she had done this before. So I need to say BEWARE of: penname : Tear you to pieces 

 

Thanks again, I will have an update asap.

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 10:02 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Is Edward going though the change because he does have real royal blood in him?  Or do all male vampire go though itt when real blood come to visit.  Poor Dem, his ther was taken then killed but he is a crafty one that is for sure.  Next chapter is going to be a great one.  huggs and kisses to you both.



Author's Response:

You'll find out soon ;)

 

Thank you so much, we read your previous review and your support means a lot to us.

 

Thanks again,

 

*hugs n smooches*

 

Jells

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 9:59 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

You girls are so badass that dumbass people have to copy and take credit for your awesome story.  It pisses me off and I will be teloing them to take it down.  I hate dumbass people.



Author's Response:

Aww thank you. =D

 

Thankfully to you and others, the story was removed by ff.net admins. 

 

Thanks again for your support. We'll have another chapter up asap. 

 

Jells n Tyggy

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 7:44 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?

I'm sorry to hear to that. reported 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your support

Reviewer: eboyd5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:11 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Just FYI, someone named Tear Me To Pieces on Fanfiction.net is posting this story as their own.  They've titled it Brave The Worlds.



Author's Response:

Are you serious dude? Where?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:21 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Ima be honest! Only 1 word describes this chapter... DISTURBING !! Then there was way to many adjectives and not enough content. More action & less describing unimportant things

Author's Response:

Thanks for your opinion! I hope that you'll like the next chapter.

 

~Jells

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2012 5:21 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Can't wait for more please update ASAFP.



Author's Response:

We are working on it! =D

Thank so much for reading!!! We appreciate it!

 

Jells n Tyggy

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 10:07 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Blown away. Fantastically written and beyond engaging to read. Esme/C scare me. Cheered when C got burnt. Score for the human. 



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves*

 

Thank you so much!! C and Es are nuts, aren't they? lol 

 

Thanks again! We are happy that you are  still enjoying the story =) It makes us smile! 

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: swimmer4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 6:11 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

What great imaginations you 2 have.  What great combinations of facts,ie. the garlic.  Even though the story line at present is very violent it fits somehow and is not grossing me out.  I'm glad you are making a dictionary of sorts but I think you should send it to every one who reviews or what the heck just post the damn thing in an additional chapter.  Some of us even though we read don't review ( LIKE MYSELF) simply because we never know exactly what to say without sounding trite - like I really like what you're writing and I do.  I wait sometimes anxiously for the next chapter.  So hurry up and write and then send it and also the "dictionary thingy".   PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!! =D

 

And yes, you'll get a guide! I hope you'll like and we are working on the next chapter.

 

Thanks again!

 

Jells n Tyggy

Reviewer: forbiddenred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 2:29 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Not confused anymore but would love to have that guide.

Thanks for writing

 

Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you, all who reviewed will recieve a guide =D 

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 1:51 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

wow! j'adore! j'ai hâte de lire la suite.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!  =D

 

Reviewer: topazeyes11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 9:37 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

I have to say I was a little iffy at first when I read the summary. But I'm glad that I gave this story a chance. This is my favorite fan fiction ever. Amazing chapter Bravo! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Chelle82 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 8:43 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

WOW



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 6:26 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

Question....did I miss something???? Is it possible for Edward to turn Bella into a vampire so that he can have a "proper mate" or is that against the rules... just curious as to why this hasn't been discussed..or more than likely I have just missed it.  Thanks  Paula



Author's Response:

You know, it's actually mentioned a lot. I think in one of the early chapters Edward even kills a vampire because of it. 

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 5:49 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Great job as always...lots going on but somehow (   shaking my head in wonder) you make this clear??????????  I almost feel sorry for Edward being thrust in so many different directions hee hee...he really does deserve it though.  As always can't wait for more..interesting now that the humans can use garlic to fight off the vampires. REALLY!!!! So funny. almost too traditional ..any rate loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much =) Yeah, we really like the idea of the garlic water, it keeps it a bit traditional.

 

Thanks for reading and commenting,

 

~Jells

Reviewer: LeeLee13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:17 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

loved this chapter



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Thank you!

 

 

Reviewer: Penny Pattinson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:09 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

xD This has to be my favorite chapter of all!



Author's Response:

aww thanks so much!!! =) 

Reviewer: Jennifers CullenCove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:05 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

I have never read anything like this before. I really love this.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! That means a lot to us =) 

Reviewer: AJLee Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 3:18 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

oh my GOD i SAW THE UPDATE AND LITERALLY LANDED ON MY ASS TO READ IT! LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

lmao!!! Thanks so much! =D 

Reviewer: Drew smith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 3:16 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

I WANT!!



Author's Response:

And you shall get! =D lol 

Reviewer: Chester Dagala Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 2:59 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Great job ladies!



Author's Response:

ThaNKS SO MUCH =D

Reviewer: Francis Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 2:54 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you =D 

Reviewer: Bellygirl23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 2:50 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

This is a incredible story. A friend of mine rec'd you guys on Facebook!



Author's Response:

Wow! Tell your friend thank you! =)

 

And thank you so much. We appreciate it =D 

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: Abuela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 2:47 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

Fantastic!



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Thanks so much =D 

Reviewer: Coldplay Lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 2:44 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

I usually don't review. But this story is fantastic and I might just happen to really want that guide.



Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks so much! That means a lot to us =) 

 

We're working on that guide =)

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: Terrific69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:43 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

 love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 

~Jells

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:22 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

I really like this fics.Gostei as it began, Edward too arrogant, mad with the need for a human being. Bella was sweet, naive, but smart inteligente.Jasper, saw that it would fall in love with Bella, who was an object of vengeance.
What in the beginning was enough to move the story and drama.
But at some point you put so many elements, the story lost sentido.Continuo following the central plot, I'll see where dar.Só think the way you began the story was so grande.Essa, which has been crossed aliens, vampires, could be used in other fics, just thinking aloud, the story is yours, but would really like to go back to the beginning.
Ps.A way Edward loves Bella and contempt is very interesting.
Thank you.
I am sorry my english;)

Author's Response:

Well thank you babes! We loved that you honestly gave your opinion and here is mine. 

I think that a lot of people in fandom are use to bland straight forward, (predictable) story telling. I mean think about it, everyone, expected us to follow through with a vengence story when, we said from the begining, this was a sci-fi fic as well.  As an author, we both have spent hours upon hours discussing, planning, and writing something to give our readers that would keep them on there toes. We wrote something that no one could (steal), predict, or mimic without it being linked back to us.We used out imagination to write something so fantastic that we were excited to write it. Contrary to belief, writing isn't easy but reading is. So I think it's really easy to judge a fic, and not like it because there isn't a tumultuous amount of E and B once the central plot starts to roll out.

 

I think this fic is honestly for a free thinker. We both think that this is something that can and will be enjoyed by people who enjoy movies or books that make them think. We're clever individuals and just because you can't see the connection that will lead to one of the climaxes doesn't mean that we can't. Call us... M. Night. Shamabishes *laughs*

Just think about it like this. 

 

We started off with an invasion. 

We introduced E and B. 

 

We introduced Caius and E's parents. 

 

We introduced how strong Edward was in comparison to his twin Jasper. 

 

We cultivated a breed a vampires so vicious and sexual that 3 stories were made on twcs with the same attributes. Some people even changed their stories around to match our type of breed.

We began threading a complicated plot (like most authors do outside of fanfiction)

E and B with their rocky relationship. 

Jasper with his vengeance. 

Carlisle and Esme with their evilness.

Caius with his plans..(wait)

Tanya. 

The story of aro. 

Demetri. 

The red world.

Vampyrcients

The power.

The introduction of the planet they came from. 

And you are and will discover the whys and why they are there, which is essential to Edward and Bella's relationship and Jasper's issues. 

I'm sorry that we're story tellers. I'm very sorry that we can write a story with more substance than Edward up Bella's ass 24/7.

But true to our hearts and as talented as we are, We can't bring ourselves to write what people want us to write. There will be twists and turns and things leading to plots and sub plots. We want people in the future when fandom dies down to be able to come to our story and eat popcorn and get so entralled because what we cultivated is more Unique than some 30,000 stories that happen to be across the web. 

 

P.S. If you think the story lost sentido, then open up a blank document, use your own material (not ours) and come up with your own story, something you'd want to read, (that's how we started) and see just how far you'd stay within your E and B plot. I can tell you now. You won't. The mind is clever little thing and i'm almost positive that once you start writing nothing you can say, or come up with will be the same once it's written out lolol.

 

Thanks for the review dollface. 

 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:19 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

This story is fantastic.  I am trying to keep up, but it's hard>



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I know there's lots happeining =) 

 

We're working on that guide!

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:01 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

You evil evil bitches. I love you... Bad ass... omg IO got to read the next chapter.. Monsters indeed.. 



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!!

 

Love ya too!!!

 

Jells n Tyggy

Reviewer: ToshaLovesTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 2:50 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

More please :)



Author's Response:

Of course, coming up soon =D 

Reviewer: lonely_angie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 1:55 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Loved it!!!! Who would of thought Carlisle and Esme would get done n dirty with them being all high n mighty!!! ;) can't wait for the next chapter poor demetri is getting a beat down!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! 

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 10:58 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

More please!



Author's Response:

Working on it =)

 

Thanks for reading!!! 

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 8:58 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Now I'm not so confused anymore. I really like it that you explain a lot of things in the story. 

I think this is a great chapter and I love the character Demitri.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hiya!!! *waves* 

 

Thanks so much!!! 

Reviewer: TwiAddictcrzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 6:19 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

this story keeps getting better and better I  love it!



Author's Response:

thank you!!! 

Reviewer: melliesweet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 6:17 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

GREAT CHAPTER I WANT THAT GUIDE PLEASE 



Author's Response:

We're working on it and thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: BE1965 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 5:13 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Sooooo looking forward to the next chapter!!! Loved Living Amongst Vampires also!!! Will that one be continued also???? Later sweetness...



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

 

Thanks so much! I'm actually still working on Living Amongst Vampires ch 21. Should have it completed very soon =)

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: Vampchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 4:35 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Loving this. Think the guide is a great idea - I'm starting to get a little confused at how all the species relate to each other. Can't wait to get back to Edward and Bella time.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! We're working on that guide. =)

 

 

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