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Date: 19 Nov 2022 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 63

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Date: 19 Nov 2022 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 62

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Date: 19 Nov 2022 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 61

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Date: 19 Nov 2022 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 60

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Date: 19 Nov 2022 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 59

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Date: 19 Nov 2022 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 58

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 57

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 56

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 55

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 54

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 53

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 52

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 51

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 50

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 49

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 48

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 47

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Date: 18 Nov 2022 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 46

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Date: 17 Nov 2022 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 45

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Date: 17 Nov 2022 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 44

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Date: 17 Nov 2022 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 17 Nov 2022 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 03 Nov 2022 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 03 Nov 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 03 Nov 2022 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 41

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Date: 03 Nov 2022 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 31 Oct 2022 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 31 Oct 2022 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 38

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Date: 31 Oct 2022 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 37

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Date: 31 Oct 2022 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 36

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Date: 31 Oct 2022 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 35

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Date: 31 Oct 2022 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 30 Oct 2022 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 30 Oct 2022 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 32

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Date: 30 Oct 2022 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Date: 30 Oct 2022 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Date: 30 Oct 2022 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 27 Oct 2022 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 27 Oct 2022 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 27 Oct 2022 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 27 Oct 2022 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 27 Oct 2022 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 27 Oct 2022 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 24

I love vampire Amanda!

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 15

I really don't like Amanda! Poor Bella!

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it! I don't like Alice or Amanda!

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 25 Oct 2022 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

I don't like Alice, Amanda and Edward 

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 56

Just wondering,  isnt Major the God of War, the most feared vampire?

W/his gift, he could flood a large area w/fear or whatever emotion...isnt that how he 

dealt w/so many newborns/vamps during his time w/maria....and, his powers have expanded.

So besides other gifts they have...have bella shield everyone in marias army and have 

the major flood inside that shield w/an emotion...besides the physical shield bella can use...

Ofc, they need to kill the one who can negatee their gifts...

I've been reading this story for 3 days...cant seem to stop 😊

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 54

Another thing... i thought w/bellas mental AND physical shield, she could practice to

just decapitate all of the newborn heads herself w/ her power...she can practice to do that...

Chelsea can break all of bonds to maria and bond them to them to fight against maria...

Instead of actual physical contact w/marias army, they can do a lot of their work w/all of

the gifts they have, they can kill most of them before needing to physically fight whoevers left...

just thinking out loud 😊

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 54

I agree w/your comment regarding peter, alice and jasper...

They are being total douches...but i hate that bella constantly leaves...

Yes, she's stressed but so is everyone else...yes, she feels pressure bc she's the 

one who's to save everyone....but...there has to be a better way than to just leave...

Plus, it feels like her "love" or connections seem conditional... makes her appear fickle 

when it comes to her feelings which should be unconditional love for family and mate...

Afterall, just bc you dont like the behaviors of the people you care about, does it mean you care 

for that person any less? ie.. for family, friends, mate as a vampire, not necessarily as

human feelings in this case...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2020 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 34

This has to be one of the craziest, most entertaining,  awesome twilight fic I've ever read 

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I cant stop reading it...and im only halfway thru...

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Reviewer: wizardsrealm Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2019 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG I was LMAO with the way you ended this chapter!!! 

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Date: 31 May 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 31 May 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: ForOneMoreNight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2019 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 63

This is by far one of the best stories I have read! I read on every break and lunch at work and when I could at home when real life and motherhood weren’t calling me. Thank you for taking the time out of your busy life to write this amazing story. 

Truly,

ForOneMoreNight

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2018 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 19 Aug 2018 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 19 Aug 2018 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 19 Aug 2018 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

Uh-oh Jasper is in big trouble!

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Date: 19 Aug 2018 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 19 Aug 2018 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! I really hate Alice!

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it! Poor Bella! I hate Amanda!

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

I hate Edward and Alice!

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome chapter!

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 01 Jul 2018 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 25 May 2017 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 63

I Have re-read this story multiple times and love it more every time.  

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Date: 08 May 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Bella! 

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