Date: 20 Aug 2018 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. Please, please update it. I know that the story is further along on other sites so can you please update it here.
Date: 11 Dec 2016 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 38
Will you be updating anytime soon? thanks! :)
Date: 26 Oct 2016 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 38
Please, please update this story. It is an execellent tale and it deserves to be finished.
Date: 11 Aug 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 38
I just reread this whole story, forgetting it's not complete and when I got to the end I was sad all over again. Please don't give up on this story! Update soon...!
Date: 27 Apr 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 38
Hey! Just found this and read up to here. PLEASE tell me you're going to finish. It's a great fic and it deserves completion. I hope to see an update soon. I know they have more story to tell. At least 5 more chapters according to one of your last author's notes. ;)
Date: 16 Feb 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 38
If Renee is honest the answer to that question will be James flew me in the paparazzi can see how my daughter behaves with me
Date: 11 Feb 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 38
I love this story! I love where it's been, where its at and where it's going!!! Thanks for the long meaty chapter! Sooooo good. Thank you
Date: 11 Feb 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh crap. When it rains it pours. Bella does not need to deal with her too.
Date: 11 Feb 2016 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 38
James called her. So can't wait to see how this ends foe him
Date: 15 Jan 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 37
Something isn't right. Bella would not do drugs.
Date: 14 Jan 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
How did James manage to switch Bella's & Tanya's samples?
Date: 14 Jan 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 36
I can't even put into words how good this story is. I think about it for days after your updates! I want to see "the movie"!! So so so so so so damn good! Thank you! Keep writing! d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: 04 Jan 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 36
It's a small glimmer of hope for better times.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 36
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Dec 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 36
Another great chapter! I can't wait for more :)
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 35
This is such an excellent story. I just LOVE it. I hope you update again soon.
Date: 14 Sep 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 35
Bella is killing herself trying to run from her true feelings.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
She should have never thrown that picture in the trash.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
It is easy to say you love someone when it is all good. True love is when you stick by someone when everything it tough.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is making it worse than Edward ever did, but she won't admit it. She won't admit she caused the crash. She will blame Edward. He is an easy target.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward needs help. He can't handle being alone. He is good when Bella is with him. He was so strong at the beginning of the tour, but now he is drowning.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward should have told the whole story or what he remembers.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett caused part of the problem by handing him more and more alcohol. Edward messed up but Emmett isn't innocent.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am so mad at Bella for ignoring Edward while he has been on tour. She knows his past and she keeps hurting him. Rosalie should have been watching Edward knowing he is upset and his demons. They call him family and friends, but do they really care about him or the paycheck he provides.
Date: 06 Sep 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wow I loved this chapter so much can't wait for the next one
Date: 05 Sep 2015 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter, glad to see Edeard to the rescue at the end. When will James be taken care of? The man is evil and needs to go.
Date: 05 Sep 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 35
Everybody hurts sometimes. . . poor Bella -- hunky Edward. . .lousy, slimeball James. . .pathetic Tanya.
Date: 15 Aug 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
This story is killing me!!! Lying straight to her face is the clincher. I wonder if Tanya had a FlipCam too??? Can Garrett be trusted to keep the secret?? House of cards == coming down.
Date: 29 Jul 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 33
Love this chapter and the whole story can not wait for more.
Date: 24 Jul 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 32
I've spent the past 2 days reading this story. I love it. Bella and Edward are wonderfully flawed and I'm rooting for them!
Date: 23 Jul 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 32
Fabulous, Fabulous story! I've done nothing today but read this....
Date: 22 Jul 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 32
I am so glad you're back!! Love, love this story!!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2015 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love it can not wait for more.your story is wonderful .
Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
Love your story can not wait more.
Date: 08 Jul 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love love love this story can't wait for the next chapter please don't make it months !
Date: 08 Jul 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 31
New to this story. Lovin it. So glad I just found it. Would have driven me crazy the amount if time inbetween chapters. I was finally glad to see Esme & Carlisle brought onto the story. The complexity and depth of the story is phenomenal. The characters are well developed and each have their own story beautifully wound in. Just love it!!!
Only pet peeve is anyone but Jacob or Charlie calling Bella, Bells. It never sounds right for Edward to do it. Am I the only be who has ever expressed this?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I'm not sure I understand what you were referring to with Jacob and Charlie calling her Bells. I tried to make it so that only Edward calls her by the nickname Bella/Bells - as that's his little loving name for her (it stuck with him after the guy called her Bella in Italy on their first date). Everyone else should only be referring to her as Isabella. Did I mess up somewhere and have someone else call her Bella? Sometimes I've caught myself doing that midway through writing. Or are you saying you don't like that it's only Edward that calls her Bella?
Date: 08 Jul 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 31
I love that this story is back!
Date: 07 Jul 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
This is old I thought it was a new chapter it's been a while now we r waiting of the next now and getting restless
Author's Response:
I put in the authors note that I'm just getting everything synced back up to all the updates I made on FanFiction. New chapter will be out today.
Date: 06 Jul 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Gottta love a guy who can decide he wants her after seeing throwup all over the place... So they are together but she wants to make it on her own merit... gotta give her kudos for that~! And I don't blame her at all...
And oh my goodness, he flew all the way to her just to be with her cuz he missed her so much, for 18 hours... sooo so sweet~~! And he wants everyone to know she's his. Wonder what Rose's problem is... Bella is not trying to ride the guys' fame, she should give the girl a break~!
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great to see you back!
Date: 10 Jul 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 27
looking forward to more
Date: 09 Jul 2013 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you so much for the update! This is one of my favs, and I was just thinking about this fic last week! I for one know how busy RL can be, seeing I have 3 kiddies, two of them teenagers yet to boot! And me time? What's that? HaHa! By the way, congrats on the additions to your family!
So onto RD,FS. So Aro isn't as stupid as James thinks, as I feel he is on to him and one Mr. Denali. And can I just say that I am so glad that Bella is going on tour with The Volturi. I really feel that this is the best thing to happen for Edward and Bella. Help them close the past chapters of their lives, and help them write a new one, hopefully together!
Thanks again for this update! Really hope to see another one soon!
peach
Date: 09 Jul 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
Yay! This is one of my favorite stories ever and I'm so glad you are updating again! thank you! I really hope that James gets his .
Date: 08 Jul 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad to see an update on this story and congratulations on Baby #1 and 2. I can't wait to see what the next chapters entail. If I can be of any help, let me know. Welcome back to the fandom.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
I loved your idea of having Edward introduce her and publically make a statement. This was a great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
Date: 29 Oct 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
I hope the lid is blown open on James' duplicity.
Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love the story, nervous about how Edward is going to fall, but I hope that you will let them come out stronger in the end. Good story, sorry I haven't reviewed before now.
Date: 27 Oct 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yay!! Another update!! And a great one at that!! The meeting of Bella and Edward after so long was perfect. And Bella singing her song after Edward announcing her, genius! Though I am so ready for James to get his!! Grrrr!!
So glad that Bella is following her own advice for Jake! Can't wait to see the next E&B meet! Hopefully soon!! ~hint-hint~
peach
Date: 27 Oct 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
PERFECT!! (wipes eyes) that had me crying really and truly. from Edward's apology & public speech (which I could actually see being played out, the whole thing even her singing) to Bella singing Skyscraper which always makes me cry. I LOVED this chapter. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
Date: 27 Oct 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yeah she's going to talk to him!
Date: 27 Oct 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
Aro and his plotting are making me sick. All he cares about is Edward's band. Bella is just a tool for him to use to help get Edward good PR now that he is out of rehab.
Don't let me get started on James. He is such an asshole. I really hate that my nickname is James. It has been for many years even though I am a female. I wonder what his next plot is going to be to sabotage Bella's career?He is jus pure slime. I really wish that Bella would have told Edward that James has not been around to help lately. I really hope his plans blow up in his face.
Edward. What can I say? I am glad that he apologized to Bella before the show. I understand why he said what he did when he was introducing Bella. He never received the chance to really tell the truth because of the gag order. If this was the real world, I would have not thought that his words were sincere, but this is fiction so it was sincere.
I love how Bella took Jacob's phone away so that he would not drunk dial Vannessa, and she turned around and drunk dialed Edward. I can't wait to see what happens when they come together for a talk.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
thanks for getting back into this. Drugs destroy relationships, homes, etc. I really am glad he did that in front of everyone.
Bella needs to come clean with Aro about James. Tell Aro the truth.
I think she also needs to start slow with Edward. Accept that appology and then have a cup of coffee, talk on the phone. He together. NO BARS!
Tanya the whore is still out there and Daddy Denali is still after Bella.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 23 Oct 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved the way this chapter took us through the thirty days in a way that really communicated so much about what was going on with the characters.
Edward's transformation from "I'm not sharing a room" to realizing so much about himself (Volturi Edward vs. Edward Cullen) was just wonderfully done.
Bella is also growing, but she doesn't have as far to go as Edward.
I'm so glad the story is moving forward!
Date: 23 Oct 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome, awesome awesome chapter! can't wait fort he next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 20 Oct 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hello, and welcome back. There was a lot covered in this chapter. I actually had to go back and re-read the last chapter to remember all that happened so I could relate to this chapter better. I am glad that Edward is seeking help, but he is on a slippery slope. He may want to be better, but he is not 100% doing therapy for him so I hope Bella reacts well now that they are face to face.
Going back on tour this soon after rehab sounds like a terrible idea, but I understanding having to honor a contract. If he can surround himself with the correct support team, he may have a chance, but it will be hard.
I am so happy Bella has a friend in Jake to clue her in on James' intentions. It is a shame the disservice he is doing to her to appease his own agenda. I can't wait for her to go out at the VMAs and surprise everyone with the replacement song. Hopefully she won't be too nervous performing knowing that Edward is there watching her. I have hope for these two if they can work together. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
You're right - going back on tour is not the best idea at all. And while I promise I won't let Edward fall off the deep end anymore, it's definitely going to cause some emotional conflict and doubt as he continues to struggle with his recovery/addiction.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
Even though I didn't wait for your return as long as some, I'm so happy your back. Can't wait to see her & Edward's reunion. And find out what song she'll be performing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) You won't have to wait long - Chapter 26 is already complete!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for the update, and glad to hear about all the exciting things going on in your life! This is one of my favorite stories and I am so glad to hear that your are going to finish it. If the rest of the story is half as good and interesting as this chapter was it will definitely be worth the wait. Can't wait for this cliffy to be resolved! Good job and keep those updates coming......
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 18 Oct 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Fantastic writing.
Glad to see you are back.
Are E & B going to sing and impromtu duet???
I cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! As for what E & B will do at the VMA's you'll just have to wait and see ;) I promise I won't make you wait another 6 months haha
Date: 18 Oct 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
WELCOME BACK!!!!!!! I am so glad to see that you have not given up on this story...it is one of my most favorites!!!!!! I loved how you carried the characters through the 30-day period and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Please don't disappear again!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) No plans to disappear ;)
Date: 18 Oct 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Just wanted to say really pleased you've Posted another chapter - love this story. All the best with the new bub as well. Teens x
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 18 Oct 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well, THAT was a heavy chapter. They needed this. Edward needs to hit bottom so he can get off the drugs and take a good look at himself. Bella needs to become independent and run her life on her own.......that'll be hard with James running the show. I love this story and it's flawed characters. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bad move Edward! He should've manned up and confessed. When she does find out, it will be doubly worse. I'm bracing myself for the shit to hit the fan. Great story so far!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great update! I was just thinking about this fic and am just excited to see an update!
Love that Edward knows that he has a problem, that it's his fault, and went to rehab. I really hope that he stays the course, which I am sure he will, not just for himself, but to be the man Bella deserves.
So glad that Bella and Alice are "back together" and that Em and Bella talked. Happy that Em told Edward about Bella and the hospital. And Jake is truly a friend to Bella telling her she has to just be "Her" at the VMAs.
And of course you left us with one doozy of a cliffhanger! Bella and Edward face to face. I really hope that they both get through this meeting and realize that they both really need to talk to one another.
Can't wait to see what happens next!! Hopefully soon!! ;)
Congrats to you and your hubby! Hope all is well! Hope to here from you soon! ~coughs~update~coughs~ no pressure or anything!! LOL
Thanks again for the update!
peach
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Yes, this chapter was definitely the turning point for both of them. They're still going to have their own struggles individually (and of course trying to come back together), but at least they're both starting to take back control of their lives.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
Congratualtions on the baby!
I have waited a year for a story to update. I always keep the faith. This was an amazing chapter. It was so full of information. I am so glad that Jacob was able to open Bella's eyes about James.
I am pissed that Aro threatened to sue the band if Edward was not out of rehab in 30 days. All he cares about is money. I do hope that Edward can keep it together. I hope he has a great support system around him on the road, but Edward will relapse. It might only be one time, but 9 out of 10 people will breakdown and use once they leave rehab. It is only the strong ones that realize what they have done and work even harder to stay clean.
I am proud that both Bella and Edward have started to turn into different people. They both have a long way to go, but at least they have opened the metaphorical door.
Thank you for the update. If the next one comes the day before you deliver, I will not care at all. ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward having to rush back on tour is definitely going to put an extreme amount of pressure on him. All those issues of possible relapse will show up in later chapters :)
Date: 18 Oct 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad to have you back!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
With a cliffie, you must post the nxt chpt soon and please don't let James win! Can't wait... and welcome back!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I will try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible
Date: 18 Oct 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
loved it im looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! I promise it won't take as long ;)
Date: 18 Oct 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
Yay!! I'm happy that ur back! And congrats on the baby!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 18 Oct 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
Let me start saying I am glad you finally decided to write again. This is a good story, shame to just drop it. I am getting to the point I wont read if something is not complete. IT is madening to invest my time in a story and then its is flounced. Real life gets to us all. Especially when you are young and busy.
Edward still had this, "I AM A STAR" problem when he checks into the center. He wants everything his way. That is what got him in this mess.
That last paragraph gives me hope for Edward. Bella will need him and Jacob after James screws her over. Denali yuk.
Author's Response:
Thanks. It honestly didn't feel like I had been gone for 6 months since I kept working on the chapter piece-by-piece. But I promise the next chapter will be update much more quickly :)
Date: 26 Apr 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
I loved reading James' pov. He's not just an ass, he's a weasely, slimeball prick. He already has Bella's career in the toilet with the changes he's made so I don't imagine it will take much to finish her.
Don't you just hate parents who see their kids with rose colored glasses? I'm sorry, but if kid is wrong, they're wrong.
Author's Response:
I loved Coleen561's James' POV! :) She made him so much more disgusting than I think my mind would have been able to take him lol
Date: 24 Apr 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm getting nervous. This chapter was a lot more angsty than I was inticipating. Poor Bella, she doesn't even know what is in store for her from James. I can't wait to read more (and I would love to read an out take from the slimball's POV).
Author's Response:
Don't worry, while there may be more obstacles, things are definitely progressing for E&B :)