[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
Kasi-
Ahhhhh! How I´ve missed you! Gah, real life is such a monster! But thankfully, I´m all caught up with this yummie little treat and I must say, that you have really thrown me for a loop! I most certainly did not see that coming! Mike is not only a douchebag, but a psychotic one at that! I was so worried he would have found the playroom and trashed it, but then he took pics of their sexy time in Edward´s kitchen! WTF... that is wrong on so many levels. I can´t wait to see where your going with this. God, I can hardly wait, so get to writing! lol! Excellent work, hon! Update when you can!
Krazi
xoxo
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[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
thanks good chapter
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face. I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side. As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face. The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind. I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing. He is not safe, because of me. I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.
The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin. It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain. I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today. I am so tired of being stressed out. I am not sure I can handle much more of this. I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash. Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world.
“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.
“You look so beautiful, my love.”
“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.
“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen. I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.
As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming.
“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”
“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen. Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
I had a feeling something would happen with the Mike issue soon. He is totally deranged, why they would let him out of jail is a mystery. I hope they catch him quickly. I enjoyed the sexy times....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. There will be more sexy times coming. Unfortunetly all people are considered innocent until proven guilty by a court of law. No worries Mikes job is done, he has helped push B& E together, and I will be ending his time in my story very soon. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face. I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side. As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face. The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind. I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing. He is not safe, because of me. I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.
The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin. It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain. I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today. I am so tired of being stressed out. I am not sure I can handle much more of this. I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash. Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world.
“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.
“You look so beautiful, my love.”
“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.
“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen. I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.
As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming.
“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”
“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen. Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”
Date: 18 Jun 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
OMFG Mike is a fucking freak that has lost his mind. Things where going so good with all the love making and then shit happens. I cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. The next chapter will post soon. I promise not too much more angst. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face. I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side. As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face. The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind. I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing. He is not safe, because of me. I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.
The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin. It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain. I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today. I am so tired of being stressed out. I am not sure I can handle much more of this. I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash. Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world.
“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.
“You look so beautiful, my love.”
“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.
“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen. I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.
As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming.
“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”
“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen. Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”
Date: 18 Jun 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
They have been very good and followed all the rules and it is for the best and now they get each other. Where is Mike hiding out at???
Author's Response:
I am so sorry that I missed this review......I woudl have replied sooner, had I not missed it somehow. Thank you so VERY MUCH for always reviewing my story and reading it everytime I post. Kasi~
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
It totally sucks how a sweet, loving, PRIVATE moment turned to shit in such a short time.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. I know that the moment was ruined, but there will be more moments coming, soon! Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face. I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side. As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face. The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind. I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing. He is not safe, because of me. I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.
The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin. It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain. I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today. I am so tired of being stressed out. I am not sure I can handle much more of this. I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash. Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world.
“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.
“You look so beautiful, my love.”
“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.
“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen. I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.
As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming.
“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”
“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen. Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
I am very pleased to see them developing the strong foundation that a lasting relationship needs. They are growing together and developing a stronger bond than just that of Dom and sub. They are very fortunate to have the guidance of Master Peter. He is very supportive of each of them and wants to see them happy. If that happiness is found in each other, even better. I was happy to see them each choose to set aside their BDSM relationship in order to develop a deeper connection by dating and learning about each other as individuals.
Author's Response:
I am so sorry that I somehow missed this wonderful review that you left for me. There must have been a glitch because I missed more then one review on this same chapter. Master Peter has been wonderful, and you are right his guidance is jsut what they needed.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
That was heavy. Mike has gone off his rocker. I am sure that he will find a way to get to both Bella and Edward alone without any witnesses.
I am so happy that Bella is holding onto Edward and not pushing him away. I was afraid that this whole situation would set Bella back in her progress.
Thank you for the update. I can't wait to see what happens next..
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. Mike is off his rocker! Mike will not be around too much longer, I promise. This story was never supposed to be a drama or really angsty. Mike has done a great job helping to push those two together! Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face. I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side. As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face. The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind. I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing. He is not safe, because of me. I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.
The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin. It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain. I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today. I am so tired of being stressed out. I am not sure I can handle much more of this. I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash. Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world.
“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.
“You look so beautiful, my love.”
“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.
“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen. I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.
As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming.
“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”
“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen. Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”
Date: 17 Jun 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
okay i will jsut review here! love it and this story just keeps getting better and better!
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Thanks Jess~
I love reviews...here...there....hell everywhere! LOL
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
so strange where was this person to get pics in Edwards home and able to vandalize Bellas house which is obviously in a gated community with security?
Author's Response:
Well Bella lives in the gated community, Edward does not. The photos were taken at Edward's. The gate guards saw the remodle papeerwork, it all looked legit, and there fore they let Mike in. Mike is a nut and has his ways, but his crap is almost done.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face. I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side. As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face. The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind. I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing. He is not safe, because of me. I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.
The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin. It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain. I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today. I am so tired of being stressed out. I am not sure I can handle much more of this. I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash. Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world.
“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.
“You look so beautiful, my love.”
“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.
“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen. I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.
As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming.
“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”
“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen. Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Seeker~
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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“Come in, I need to grab a couple of things. Your mom left me a message on the machine reminding me of dinner tomorrow night at your parent’s house. Do you want me to join you?”
“Of course, I want you to be there. I think you should spend the night with me and all day tomorrow and than tomorrow night we will go together to dinner.”
Bella smiled at me, almost shyly. This is a whole new side of her that I have never seen before. Bella is such a beautiful woman; she has the body of a twenty year old. Bella is smart, witty, and completely gorgeous, she is a triple threat. I smile back at her and take her hand I pull her into a hug.
“Bella, I am so glad and honored that you want to spend time with me. Thank you, my love,” I whisper in her ear.
With a sigh into my neck she threads her fingers into my hair and places an open mouthed kiss on my neck below my ear.
“Oh…baby, I cannot wait until you are screaming my name,” I tell her.
Threading my fingers of my right hand into her hair, I move her head so that our mouths connect. After several minutes of kisses so hot, we are close to combustion, we break apart with ragged breath.
Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
I hope they can make it work... but I kept thinking Mike was going to crash the party. I guess he will make another appearance eventually. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I have not decided how much of a part that mike will play in the story, right now I am concerned with workign with Edward and Bella's relationship.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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“Come in, I need to grab a couple of things. Your mom left me a message on the machine reminding me of dinner tomorrow night at your parent’s house. Do you want me to join you?”
“Of course, I want you to be there. I think you should spend the night with me and all day tomorrow and than tomorrow night we will go together to dinner.”
Bella smiled at me, almost shyly. This is a whole new side of her that I have never seen before. Bella is such a beautiful woman; she has the body of a twenty year old. Bella is smart, witty, and completely gorgeous, she is a triple threat. I smile back at her and take her hand I pull her into a hug.
“Bella, I am so glad and honored that you want to spend time with me. Thank you, my love,” I whisper in her ear.
With a sigh into my neck she threads her fingers into my hair and places an open mouthed kiss on my neck below my ear.
“Oh…baby, I cannot wait until you are screaming my name,” I tell her.
Threading my fingers of my right hand into her hair, I move her head so that our mouths connect. After several minutes of kisses so hot, we are close to combustion, we break apart with ragged breath.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
GREAT, however it is Quorum and I know this because it is my favorite scent for my husband to wear.
I suspect it will be difficult for these two to just have vanilla sex
Author's Response:
You are 100% right and it is MY favorite scent......I was havign a duh momnet on the spelling issue.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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“Come in, I need to grab a couple of things. Your mom left me a message on the machine reminding me of dinner tomorrow night at your parent’s house. Do you want me to join you?”
“Of course, I want you to be there. I think you should spend the night with me and all day tomorrow and than tomorrow night we will go together to dinner.”
Bella smiled at me, almost shyly. This is a whole new side of her that I have never seen before. Bella is such a beautiful woman; she has the body of a twenty year old. Bella is smart, witty, and completely gorgeous, she is a triple threat. I smile back at her and take her hand I pull her into a hug.
“Bella, I am so glad and honored that you want to spend time with me. Thank you, my love,” I whisper in her ear.
With a sigh into my neck she threads her fingers into my hair and places an open mouthed kiss on my neck below my ear.
“Oh…baby, I cannot wait until you are screaming my name,” I tell her.
Threading my fingers of my right hand into her hair, I move her head so that our mouths connect. After several minutes of kisses so hot, we are close to combustion, we break apart with ragged breath.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
Oh I think this was my favorite chapter. It was so worth the wait!
Author's Response:
Thanks Canadaci~ I am grateful for the ongoing support from you, I am glad that you like this story so much.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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“Come in, I need to grab a couple of things. Your mom left me a message on the machine reminding me of dinner tomorrow night at your parent’s house. Do you want me to join you?”
“Of course, I want you to be there. I think you should spend the night with me and all day tomorrow and than tomorrow night we will go together to dinner.”
Bella smiled at me, almost shyly. This is a whole new side of her that I have never seen before. Bella is such a beautiful woman; she has the body of a twenty year old. Bella is smart, witty, and completely gorgeous, she is a triple threat. I smile back at her and take her hand I pull her into a hug.
“Bella, I am so glad and honored that you want to spend time with me. Thank you, my love,” I whisper in her ear.
With a sigh into my neck she threads her fingers into my hair and places an open mouthed kiss on my neck below my ear.
“Oh…baby, I cannot wait until you are screaming my name,” I tell her.
Threading my fingers of my right hand into her hair, I move her head so that our mouths connect. After several minutes of kisses so hot, we are close to combustion, we break apart with ragged breath.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
Watching them work things out will be intriguing. Looking forward to more chapters!
Author's Response:
I hope it remains intriguing, thanks for the story love.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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“Come in, I need to grab a couple of things. Your mom left me a message on the machine reminding me of dinner tomorrow night at your parent’s house. Do you want me to join you?”
“Of course, I want you to be there. I think you should spend the night with me and all day tomorrow and than tomorrow night we will go together to dinner.”
Bella smiled at me, almost shyly. This is a whole new side of her that I have never seen before. Bella is such a beautiful woman; she has the body of a twenty year old. Bella is smart, witty, and completely gorgeous, she is a triple threat. I smile back at her and take her hand I pull her into a hug.
“Bella, I am so glad and honored that you want to spend time with me. Thank you, my love,” I whisper in her ear.
With a sigh into my neck she threads her fingers into my hair and places an open mouthed kiss on my neck below my ear.
“Oh…baby, I cannot wait until you are screaming my name,” I tell her.
Threading my fingers of my right hand into her hair, I move her head so that our mouths connect. After several minutes of kisses so hot, we are close to combustion, we break apart with ragged breath.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
Loved it TAT - what a great chapter so much depth and emotion - are you sure you aren't a Domme???
Hugs and Kisses, Kasi,
Michele
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you, the last few chapters have been a huge struggle for me. The next chapter will post sometime early next week, unless all hell breaks loose between now and then. I am absolutely sure that I am not a Domme, however after all the stories I have read, I do know that I could never bottom either. So maybe it is in the thoughts...lol I am not sure I would make a good Domme, I like to laugh too much and I think I would laugh at the worse time. I am rather good at being a bitch, but you know that is a middle aged female thing...LOL My 13 yr old told me the other day that it was wrong for me to think Robert Pattinson was hot, and I informed her that I was not old enough to be his mother so we were good! She informed me that Taylor Lautner was hotter, and I pointed out that she has a sister older than Taylor and that was indeed wrong.....I got the HUGE eye roll. My 13 yr old is trying to get me to select sides, and where I think they are all hot I am stuck on Edward, I think I could spank him...HeeHeeHee. I really love your last update on People Like Us and you never stop amazing me with the LONG ass chapters, filled full of hot, steamy, and yet well thought out and written story line as well. You are one of my author heroes! Thanks for always being here for me and having a kind word to share with me. I heart you big time. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
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I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of, weren’t we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960; because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
Wowsers! I so loved this chapter, but I was not expecting it to go like this. I loved that they spent some Edward and Bella time together, I hope it served to somewhat put Bella at ease with having a different type of relationship. The dream was scary, I almost thought it was real at first, but thankfully it wasn´t. You got me there girlie. Shocker... it was Mike that had the meeting with Edward... okay he´s really a sick SOB! i´m glad they caught that in time. Maybe they´ll set him up somehow to catch him. Loved Master Peter, but was oh so shocked that he put them on a BDSM timeout! Hahaha! Poor E&B, I know they can´t wait until Thursday!!! Lol! Great chapter Hon! Don´t worry about delays and RL... we´ll always be here waiting!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
I wanted to do something different...I hate being a follower...lol. Yeah I knew that most would be shocked by the dream, and to let the cat outta the bag on this, I changed how the ending would be, well parts of it anyway. See I was going to have Edward get fed up with her bitchiness and end word on her, but I changed my mind because I was struggling so hard making Bella be a cold hearted bitch. I know Mike is a wacko, and I love writing wacko's....but sadly his main damage is done and for now there is no immediate plans for him to return...all though, I would still love to have Bella bitch slap Jessica....LOL. I love Master Peter too, and you know I felt so good about doing this and using him the chapter pretty much flew from my fingertips. I pride myself in reviewing to each and every review I get, and I am sorry that this reply is so late in coming. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~xoxoxo
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I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of, weren’t we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Date: 15 May 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
I am glad she got Peter involved and let him take over. It is good that they cant hid behind there lifestyle and have to face love that is more for Bella not Edward because he has embrased the fact that he loves her but is afraid of lossing her because of it. Mike is a sick fuck what else is he going to do???
Author's Response:
Mike is a nutcase, but his story is about over for this anyway. Master Peter rules, completely! Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
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I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
AMAZING chapter!!! I love that she is finally getting her shit together! I adore the way you involved Peter and Char, super great suggestions you came up with!!! Your writing is truly a gift to read, I love that I feel the entire range of emotions right along with the characters! I can't wait until she finally pulls herself together, I am thinking maybe something bad coming out of the Mike situation and with Peter and Char's help she will get there lol. It was an incredible chapter, and I loved that he finally got to hear her admit that she loved him.....take care until next time, can't wait!
Author's Response:
WOW.....this review made me have tears....I LOVE LOVE LOVE that you are enjoying my writing so much....It truely means a lot to me to have someone tell me that they enjoy it. The other book I wrote called My Sisters 3 was a story about a stalker and it is full of cliff hangers....and shockers....If your liking this you might like it too. Check out the warnings. Thanks for reading and reviewing and here is the teaser!
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Thanks Kasi~
Date: 14 May 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
Well hmmmm.....sounds like Bella and Edward have got some details to work out. Master Peter's rules are interesting and IDK if I understand them at all. Seems like they would do better just talking it out. But maybe seperating them is best because it will keep them from doing the nasty and therefore clouding the waters so to speak.
Curious to see what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response: Keye~ The reason I involved Peter was because he was Bella's Mentor and sometimes even the strongest people need a helping hand and in the bdsm lifestyle you have people you can go to and her goign to her mentor woudl be the best choice in her situation. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner. Enjoy….Kasi~ Chapter 13 Preview……………….. I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship. We were kind of weren't we? I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France. I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
good chapter thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Date: 13 May 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
Tough chapter. It is good they have Master Peter to guide them through this difficult time. No sexual contact must be difficult, but not seeing each other for nearly a week must be painful. I see how this should help them to focus though.
Interesting that Mike picked Edward as the architect for his project. Too bad he picked one that could incriminate him further! I do hope that nut job is out of Bella's life for good now.
Author's Response:
I loved writing that...I wondered how many people would guess it and actually no one did....I guess I am just too devious for everyone...LOL Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
I especially loved the last para in this chapter. Awesome story!
Author's Response:
The last paragraph was my Beta's favorite in the story as well.....Thank you! I guess I have something worth being nominated for in the best quote field in an awards thing now huh? LOL ... Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
great
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Date: 13 May 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
Yayy! The love fest is is starting.
E/k
Author's Response:
SOON! Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Date: 13 May 2011 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
A few more tears for me this chapter. I feel so bad for them to want to be together as more than Dom and sub but her not knowing how to do it. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Have faith in Master Peter and Charlotte, they will help them find the way. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Date: 11 May 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
This chapter has me panting! I don't know much about the BDSM lifestyle, only what I have ready in the various stories on this site. I like your Dominant Bella, and the fact they are both a bit older than most of the other stories. I am looking forward to the next update, but in the mean time, I will look at your other story - My sisters 3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading nad reviewing, I love hearing what others think. I do not know much at all about BDSM, however I have been researching it a lot. I will be postign another chapter either later tonight or sometime tomorrow. I am happy to hear that you are going to check out My Sisters 3, I really REALLY love that story and it means a lot to me for a lot of reason...I hope you enjoy reading it.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
wow that was a shock, stopping the scene there :(
good luck with the awards!
Author's Response:
Yes I suppose it was a shocker! I assure you that things will look up.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
Date: 28 Apr 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
Finally the server is up and I can read updates! *doing the happy dance*
So curious as to what is going to be done about Mike harassing Bella. And what Bella is going to do with all this "love stuff" going on with Edward. Clearly it makes her nervous and/or feel out of control.
Enjoyed the chapter. Would say more but in a rush. Sorry!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
The next chapter will tell lots about your questions....I am sending the teaser here because the contact button ws not workign right....Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
Kasi
Wow.... that was uhhh... something! Mike is a stalker freak and poor Edward, I just want to cuddle him. I was quite nervous when she called ´Red´ this cannot end well. Bella is a basket case, she´s being stalked by Mike, loved by Edward, and threatened by Charlotte... Calgon needs to take her stressed a$$ away! Lol! Great chapter hon! I´ll just be over here cringing in the corner until you update! Congrats and good luck with all the nominations!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
You know I love your story so much, and I am waiting on pins and needles for an update over there too! I promise the next chapter is goign to be CHUCK full of a rather over needed conversation. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
They seem to be a good fit so far. She allowed for his fantasy but now it is time to cack the whip! Heehee
Author's Response:
No worries Suzie, Bella is good with the chains and whips! :)
Kasi~
Thanks for being such an awesome reviewer!
Date: 26 Apr 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
Looks like bella has found her sub! And eddie has found hid domme! I wonder how the rest of the weekend will go?
Author's Response:
I am warnign you that the first few chapters of this story are pretty hot or so I have been told.....WOOOO
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
Mike is a creep and he is scary she needs to tell Edward but she needs to talk to Edward. Edward is going to beat the shit out of himself for saying he loved her but it is the truth. She needs to get over herself and just talk to him and tell him her feelings.
Author's Response:
the next chapter is full of talking and lots of things will be settled.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
Author's Response:
I can honestly say this is the first completely blank review I have ever gotten. Thank you for reading and giving my review count a boost. I am sending you the teaser just as I normally do.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
My first review did not take so I am writing another. The first one was very long and passionate.
So here are my views:
1. Edward needs to opt out with Bella. He should not believe that one day Bella will change her mind.
2. Bella needs to cut Edward lose or tell him that she is in love with him too, but she is scared. She admitted that she was in love with him in this chapter. All she is doing is hurting him over and over again. Truth or cut loose.
3. The Bella in this story is the biggest BITCH I have ever read, and I have read hundreds of stories. I actually hate her. I am so waiting to find a redeeming quality in her.
Please take my review as a compliment. If I can get as fired up from one chapter, then y'all are fantastic writers. Thank you for the chapter and waiting until next time.
Author's Response:
I hope that after the next chapters talk that you do find redeeming qualities in Bella, she is acting out of her own fears. Unfortunetly fear is a huge force that can drive you many directions and not always in the one that is best for you.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
thanks awsome chaapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
I'm not sure how I feel about Bella's indecision... she is such a strong person why is this so tough? Have I missed something?
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
She is a strong Domme, but she has a very weak spot when it comes to love. The next chapter tells a lot.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
Aaargh! Being lost in the moment really cost Edward this time. Shit. I do hope Bella decides to open up soon. Given she has the wrath of Charlotte to deal with if she doesn't, it will happen but the when is what is in question.
Author's Response: Yes Peter and Charlotte both will play a part. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Enjoy….Kasi~ Chapter 12 Preview……………….. My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right. Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast. Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
She is losing it!
Author's Response:
Yes I agree that she is loosing it.....It is sad but true....the next chapter will help shed some light into the world of B&E.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
okay, so I have to say that this was a great chapter! Im pissed as hell at Bella right now and I am hurting for Edward, but it was good!
Author's Response:
I am actually getting ready to post the next chapter here in a few minutes, so I am not sending the teaser to you for chapter 11, and as soon as I have the teaser ready for chapter 12 I will send it over.....have faith in the HEA.
Kasi~ xoxo
Date: 19 Apr 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
After such a wonderful weedend together now she is going to freak out I feel bad for Edward. What is Mike thinking is he out of his mind???? I cant wait for more even though I would like to kick Bella's ass at the monent
Author's Response:
Hello my friend~
You are not alone in wanting to kick Bellas ass. Mike is a little unstable isn't he??? The next chapter is due to be posted on the 25th and I will be working on it hard this week. It will post as soon as I have it ready to go to not keep everyone waiting more and more for it. Things are goign to remain a tad angsty between Edward and Isabella for a bit yet, but keep the faith I rpomise it will come together. I have sent the teaser for the next chapter to you via the contact button on your twcs profile, so check your email. Thanks so much for always being such a great reviewer!
Kasi~
Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
I just wanted to let you know that this chapter just broke my heart!!! She needs to wise up, because she just killed him, and herself and doesn't even realize it! I hope to God that Peter and Char can talk some sense into her, and make her realize that she is very much in love with him before its too late!! I adore this story, and I hope they get this back on track soon! Thank you for the honor of reading this amazing story, and can't wait for the next chapter, Take Care!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words and the story love that you gave me. This story has a ton of readers between two sites it is posted on and it honestly gets 1 review for every 15-20 readers, so the reviews mean a LOT to me. Isabella does need to wise up, however that is not something that is going to come easy or fast for her. Peter and Charlotte will play a BIG factor in helping her see her true feelings. There is more angsty stuff to come I am sorry, but have faith in me. I am one of the biggest Happily ever after h00rs there is writing stories.
I sent you a teaser for the next chapter to you via the contact button on your TWCS profile, check your email, that is where it will be. If you do not get it soon, contact me at my screen name teamalltwilight (AT) gmail (dot) com and I will get it right out to you.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
WOW, the plot just thickens!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes it did and it will get more angsty though so be prepared for it. I promise a happy ending though. I sent oyu the teaser the same as I always do. See ya soon with an update.
Kasi~
Date: 13 Apr 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
Well, I'm not sure I understand Bella being so...allof with Edward regardless of her inner conflict. Except for that 1 slip (that she orchestrated to happen), he was a perfect sub for the entire weekend... she punished him... that was just mean. I hope he puts something in the journal abou it.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I had a really tough time making her seem liek a bitch, but it is importaint for the story. I hope that you will remain a loyal reader and have faith in me to make it all good in the end. There will be more angst, but the happiness will come. The journal will help and so will Peter and Charlotte.
I have sent you the teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile, check your email. See ya soon with the next update.
Kasi~
Date: 13 Apr 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
Oh dear. Seems Bella has a delimma. A talk with Peter is definitely a priority. Peter and Charlotte knew that Edward would be a match for Bella, but did they forsee one beyond D/s??
I imagine poor Edward is a total wreck at home, alone with his thoughts and assumptions. He needs is mistress desperately yet she is the root of his current issues. (think he needs a shoulder to cry on - I'll volunteer!)
Author's Response:
Hello~
Thank you so much for your review. Peter and Charlotte will both play a big part in this story yet. Charlotte knew that there woudl be somethign more. If you remember when Bella and Charlotte had tea Charlotte told her. Bella is scared and for good reasons. Things will get more angsty before they get better, but I promise you that all will end well.
I sent you the teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile, it will come to you via email from twcs and me.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
Kasiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!
Okay, sooooo... I really wanna smack Bella right about now, but violence is never the answer! I know she´s got a lot on her mind, so I´m going to give her a reprieve! Lol! So, I will wait patiently and trust that you will straighten this mess out. So, this is me... sitting... waiting.... *taps foot* .... yeah and right about now... you´re straightening... so chop... chop... get to it! Lol! Great chapter bb! Can´t wait for my teaser!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
You are not alone in the wanting to smack Bella. I want you to knwo that I seriously STRUGGLED writing her as a bitch. It was HARD! I literally posted the chapter 2 hours after I got it back from my pre-readers and my Beta had given it back to me just shortly over 24 hours before it got posted. I struggled that much. There will be more angst, but I promise a happy ending. I snet your teaser before I even replied. I am working on the next chapter it will cover a bit of time, and I can only promise that there will be emotions running wild from most of my loyal readers. Yikes....Just keep the faith.....It might have to be my sig line next post.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
I am not sure how patient I can be with Isabella. She was a royal fucking bitch to Edward!! She could have found a better way to treat him while she works her shit out. In fact, she treated him like shit on her shoe. BITCH!!!
I feel so sad for Edward. Every word she spoke cut a little deeper and deeper. If I was Edward, I would have walked away. Honestly, that is what the bitch needs. Then maybe she will admit to herself that she really wants Edward and stop being such a fucking coward.
Yes, I know that the reason she is who she is is because of that sociopath Mike, but this is her chance to be with someone who is a gentleman and a almost perfect submissive.
She really needs to talk to someone. First she needs to get in touch with a therapist and discuss the deplorable Mike and what he did and has done to detach her from true love when it is right in her face... After that I wish that Peter will tell her off about her treatment of Edward on the ride home.
I am pissed right know, but as always that is a great thing because it means that your writting moves me. Thank you for the update.
MIKE IS A CLASSIC SOCIOPATH....
Author's Response:
I know, I am sorry. please have faith it needed to be doen to make the story go the way I want it to go. I want you to know that I really struggled making her be a bitch. It was really hard for me to do. I never even sent my chapter off to be BETA'ed until Saturday. I have a wonderful Beta who had it back to me by Sunday I fixed a few things and then sent it back and she got it back to me right away again. then both my pre-readers who also are busy writing their own stories got back to me right away. I am very lucky to have a wonderful support system. Peter and Charlotte will both play a big part in gettign things straight have faith. Edward knows why she is hurting and scared and he will be strong for her. Remember that a Domme or Dom is only as strong as their submissive allows them to be. I am grateful that you enjoy my writing so much and I LOVE that you give great reviews. I am sending you the teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile. Check your email. Please have faith in me, there will be more angst, but I promise it will all come together in a great way at the end.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, I promise it will get better too! :)
Your teaser is coming to you the normal way, check your mail.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
poor Edward
Author's Response:
I promise it will get better in the end, have faith in me please. I am sending you the teaser via the contact button like always.
Kasi~
Date: 12 Apr 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
Wow.. Bella is completely closed off. Mike is insane and Edward is heartbroken. (shakes head) What a chap.
E/k
Author's Response:
Yeah she is for a good reason though, I think we are all afraid of being hurt and it seems she only knows that side of a normal relationship. She learned early in life that love does not always give happiness. She does not think it is in the cards for her to be happy. I promise it will get better have faith, but there will be more angst first. I am sending you the teaser via the contact button like I always do, check your mail.
Kasi~
Date: 12 Apr 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
I am so disappointed in her and for them both. Poor Edward put it all out there and was rejcted. Ouch.
Mike is insane.
Author's Response:
I had a hard time writing her to be so bitchy, and I am glad I was able to do it. There will be a few more real angsty parts yet, but have faith I will get it all happy at the end. Mike is a fruitloop! LOL I am sending you the teaser the same as I normally do via the contact button on your profile, check your mail. Kasi~
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
Mmhmmmm..........so Edward confessed all to Bella but she is not going to go there with him. Very interesting. I do wonder what Peter will have to say about that?
I cannot wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Yes Peter will play a HUGE part in the ending of this situation. Have faith in me, I promise goodness will come but first more angst! I am sending the wonderful teaser the same way I always do so check your email for it to come soon! :) Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
Hey there Kasi!
Of course this chapter was fucktabulus as always!!! Lol! I almost cried for him, when he got punished and didn´t get to please her, but I understood her motives. I´m just glad when given the choice he made the right one. His journaling was moving as well. I am so looking forward to the next chapter, to see her reaction to the journal entry and how they will go about doing things when they get back to RL!!
Great chapter Babe! I´ll be anxiously awaiting my teaser, so get to writing!
Laterzz!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
This is a HUGE struggle for me and to have the praise I get from readers is wonderful, but to get the kind words I get from other writers of such fantastic stories such as yours, Michele, Lori, Lisa, and several other writers whom I read and adore means the world to me....(I know my lovely run on sentence was showing my wordiness and grammar issues too!) Stories like FTLoD, People Like Us, Be My Master, Headmaster, My Life Now, and so MANY MANY MANY more drive me. I am so amazed by the love I feel from the reveiws I get. I certainally do not get tons, but the ones I get make my struggle worth it. So thank you for reading and reviewing and thank you for the story love you give me.
Kasi~
Date: 28 Mar 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
He has put his heart on the line will this shock Bella???? What a day they had Wow.
Author's Response:
The ride home will be interesting...LOL Thanks for the continued story love...I sent the teaser via the normal way....thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 28 Mar 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
another good chapter. looking forward to what comes next.
Author's Response: the next chapter will be great I promise....Just got to get it finished...struggling a little with writers block but I will have it out soon I am sure. Sent you the teaser like normal and thanks for the story love. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
wow - he loves her ....is that good or bad?
Author's Response:
I know right! LOL HEEHEEHEE. I am loving this so much right now....just wish I could loose the writers block! arghh.... you have mail....thanks for reading and reviewing like always.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
That was a wonderful chapter. Bella was a fantastic Domme to Edward, and I love the fact that she allowed so much time for him to be able to speek freely. I know that she wanted toprove something to herself and to Edward, but that was just a big mean dirty trick ahe palyed wiith him. All in order to punish him to see if she could get him to safeword? I am so confused by her actions.
I am afraid for Edward. I really do not want Bella to break his heart. He loves her, and she says that she can tell. I thought she had feeling for him as well, but know she is talking about it being just lust. Again, I am so confused.
Thank you for the update. The chapter was fantastic, and the story is wonderful.
Author's Response:
Hi~
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I know that right now she is coming off as if she is not nice. She was setting him up to test herself as much as him. She is scared stiff by her feelings and she has a great reason to be that way. I am sending you a teaser of the next chapter. It comes to you via email through the contact button on your twcs profile.
Kasi~
Date: 28 Mar 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
I understand her need to have him fail to make sure she was willing and able to punish him. I hope his revelation goes well.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing you are so sweet to review. Thanks...Kasi
PS sent you the preview through email like I always do.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
thanks awsome chapter as always
Author's Response:
Thank you for the wonderful review and for always reading and reviewing right away. I sent you the preview like normal...Kasi~
Date: 28 Mar 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
I love this story. The absolute best subward!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
ahhh thanks I am so proud to have anyone say or think that about my story and my subward. I sent you the teaser via email on your profiles contact button.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
An Amazing chapter to continue your amazing story
Author's Response:
You are amazing for sticking with me and continuing the story love you give.
Kasi
ps teaser is sent to you via email as always.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
This fic is so intense and hot that I wait with anticipation for the next chap. Here's to hoping for a quick update. Thanks for allowing Bella to feel and understand her for feeling for Edwards, Now just don't allow her to run away from them.
E/k
Author's Response:
Thanks for the story love. thanks for reading and reviewing. I am sending you the teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile, check your junk mail just in case. thanks again for the story love.
Kasi~
Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
It shall be interesting to see how Isabella chooses to react to Edward's journal entry. I imangine it to be a touchy thing, merging the personal emotions with the D/s. However, as the saying goes: nothing ventured, nothing gained. I do hope they both gain from this admition. These two are well matched and have the potential to find great joy together that reaches far beyond the playroom.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story. I have sent you the teaser to your email via the contact button on your twcs profile. enjoy! Thanks again for the story love!
Kasi~
Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
Nice cliffie! I cannot wait to see what Bella thinks of Edward's journal entry!
Keye
Author's Response:
Hey thank you for the fast read and review of my story! I have sent the teaser for the next chapter to you via the contact button on your profile here at twcs. I hope that you continue to like this story it means a lot to me that you read it and review it.
Kasi~
Date: 26 Mar 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
They have showed each other how much they are in love now maybe they can say it. I cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story it means so much to me. You have no idea how much to be honest! Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Chapter nine will post either later tonight or tomorrow morning sometime. I normally email the teaser but since it posts tomorrow I will send it here.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 9 Preview………………..
With our workouts over and both freshly showered, breakfast is here. Once the table has been set, I send off the wait staff and tell them I will ring them when I want them to clean up. Edward is naked and crawling at my orders. He sits off to my left side, and I fed him bites of his food. I have not spoken to him at all today except to tell him to crawl. We finished with our breakfast and I made sure he had plenty; he would need his strength today.
“Playroom now,” I ordered.
He crawled away quickly, and I smiled yet again. I went to the phone called them to come get the dishes and went to the dressing room to strip down and put on my silk robe. When I came back through I noticed the dishes were taken care of and I glanced at the clock and noticed I had three hours before they would be bringing lunch service. I moved to the door of the playroom and peeked inside, he had his back to me and I could tell he felt my presence. I am glad that he could feel me close; I was going to use that to my advantage. I backed away from the door, but stayed where I could see him. Knowing he could not see me and the carpet gave off no sounds to my bare feet. There was nothing set out yet so he had no idea what I would be using or what I was planning. Sometimes you can look at a variety of toys and have an idea of what is to come. I liked that I had not set anything out yet. I waited for almost twenty minutes before I saw what I was watching for.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
That was well worth the wait. I really felt sorry for Edward when he thought that he´d over-stepped his bounds. I´m glad that Bella was patient with him and let him make love to her.
I love the way they are slowly developing an outside relationship. Can´t wait for more! Great chapter Kasi!
Luv ya hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
Thanks so much for the wonderful (as always) and kind words you have for me and my story. It is reviews from people like you, butterflybetty, people like us, and a few other wonderful authors that really amaze me. Thank you for continuing to support me and my story by reading and reviewing. I am really happy that you are enjoying it. The next chapter will post soon. I sent you the preview like I normally do. Congrats BTW for the Dommella's Dungeon First place win! AWESOME!
Hugs!
Kasi~
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
wow - sorry that it's taken me so long to read, but I'm really busy with writing, but I loved this chapter Kas. You are so good at this, I need some lessons!!!
Author's Response:
Michele~
I coudl take lessons from you and from several others. I am struggling with this much more then I struggled with My Sisters 3. I think I am workign it out, but I tend to worry the next chapter will post soon and I will send you the preview the way I always do via the contact button on here. Thank you for your support, as always it means everything to me to have it.
XOXOXO
Kasi~
Date: 16 Mar 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
I just found and read your story in a couple of days. I love seeing a dominat Bella. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Hello Bownbey~
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story. I am glad that you are enjoying it. I send out teasers for the next chapter when you review. On TWCS profile you have a contact me button. I send your teasers to you via that contact button it will send them straight to your email account. Check your junk mail. If you do nto get a chapter teaser for the next chapter please contact me at teamalltwilight at gmail dot com and I will get you the teaser right away. Thanks again and I hope you continue to enjoy reading A Sub Search.
Kasi~
Date: 16 Mar 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
This story keeps getting better and better. I feel the love. Thank you so much for this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the wonderful review. You have email comign to you via the contact button on your TWCS profile. It is your teaser and if you do nto get it conact me at teamalltwilight at gmail dot com
Kasi~
Date: 15 Mar 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
Can't wait to see how their weekend goes!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Keye~
I hope that you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I do recommend a cool shower on standby.....LOL or so I have been told. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
I loved this chapter... them getting to know each other. Still mostly as D/s on the outside, but still lovely. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Just like last chapter you have mail, the same way as last time. Let me know if I have to resend...Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
Just keeps gettin' better and better
Author's Response:
Thank you Shewolf. You have mail sent to you via the contact me button on your TWCS profile. If you do not have an email from me by now please message me back here or simply email me at my user name (teamalltwilight) at gmail dot com and I will get you the teaser right away.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
GREAT CHAPTER AND YOU HAVE MY VOTES!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much Canadaci~
You have mail via the contact button. Let me knwo if you do not get it.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
good chapter thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you Seeker~ You have mail I sent it via contact button! enjoy, Kasi~
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
Tthe dressing her thing was sexier than the undressing! I hope one of them is brave enough to take a leap and declare their feelings.
Author's Response:
I agree totally sexy....You have mail, via contact button on your profile. Enjoy~Kasi
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
another great chapter
Author's Response:
As always thanks for reading and reviewing. You should have mail. I sent you the reveiw reply and teaser to you via the contact button as always.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
They are each terribly enthralled with the other. I can see that it will be quite some time before either would dare to confess the depth of their feelings to the other. Must say I am looking forward to naked Edward day! (*sigh* if only...)
Author's Response:
I have sent you a email with your review reply in it. The email will come to you via the contact button on your profile. Check your junk mail just in case. If you do not have the reveiw reply by this time tomorrow message me at same screen name at gmail and I will get it to you ASAP.
Thanks Kasi~
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
I love this pair as you're writing them. Thank you for sharing this story with us...
Author's Response:
I have sent you a email with your review reply in it. The email will come to you via the contact button on your profile. Check your junk mail just in case. If you do not have the reveiw reply by this time tomorrow message me at same screen name at gmail and I will get it to you ASAP.
Thanks Kasi~
Date: 08 Mar 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
Wow, what a chapter! I don't think I have ever read a story with a male sub that went into to sub space. Of course this is all new to me!!! Anyway, sounds like they both had fun. *sigh*
Can't wait to read what happens next!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
I had to be different...Thank you so much for reading and reviewing you have no idea how much reviews mean to me. This story is up for some really great awards at the inspireawards blogspot there is a link on my profile please check them out! The next chapter will be postign soon it is all done and ready to go, and as soon as I get the majority of the chapter after that finished then I will post it. I am sending the teaser to you via the contact button on your twcs profile, so check your junk mail. Thank you again.
Kasi~
Date: 08 Mar 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
Wow what a hot chapter. She took all of his energy and it was fuck hot. She takes very good care of him and he trust her with his life.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the kind words for my story. I am struggling a little yet with this story adn it makes my day to see that people are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and reviewing and I will send you the teaser to your email via the contact button on your twcs profile, so check your junk mail. Again thanks so much!
Kasi~
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
That scene was awsome. Your Bella and Edward rock, Bella's strong and assertive and Edward is sweet and beautiful.Thankyou for writing such a good story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliments. I love the way that I have written both Edward and Bella. He is her submissive but he still has that paower to protect her, as showni nt he last chapter. I am glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I have sent you your teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile. If you do not receive the teaser let me know and I will get it to you right away.
Kasi~
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
That was a Hott ass scene.
E/k
Author's Response:
I am so glad that you are enjoying this. The scene was jsut as hot to write as it was to read. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I have sent you your teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile. If you do not receive the teaser let me know and I will get it to you right away.
Kasi~
Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
Oooh good chapter, what do the endearments that Bella use mean?
Author's Response:
Mo Milis is Irsih for my sweet..........Mo Daor is Irish for my slave. I am glad that you are enjoying this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I have sent you your teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile. If you do not receive the teaser let me know and I will get it to you right away.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
That was freaking fantastic! I just love this E&B! You have made this story so OOC but in such a classy way. Truly amazing!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for such kind words abotu the way I am writign these characters. This story is a struggle for me because I do not know the first thign about BDSM. So thank you so much for all the kind words. They do mean EVERYTHING TO ME. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I have sent you your teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile. If you do not receive the teaser let me know and I will get it to you right away.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
Hey Kasi!
Another hot chapter! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! And that scene has me heading to the shower! Lol! I can't wait to hear what he has to say about the scene and how they spend their down time in Chicago. I have a good feeling that things will be different between these two... guess I'll just have to wait and see! Lol! Great chapter Hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
Thank you so very much and I am really glad that your liking it. I hope that you know how much I think of your story too, it rocks my socks! The talk they have about the scene will come out but not until the trip back home. This weekend opens eyes, but not sure it can break down walls. We will have to see. I am sending the teaser the same as I always do if you do not have the teaser by tomorrow this time let me know check your junk mail just in case. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
That is some intensity, no wonder he is dazed and confused!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing and yes I agree it dazed or dazzled me writing it! :) I am sending your teaser to you via the contact me button on your twcs profile check your junk mail and if you do not have it by tomorrow contact me and I will get it to you!
Kasi~
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
That seemed really intense! Edward was really out of it... I wonder how the conversation will go? Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
The conversations and main discussions will take palce on the trip home. Thank you for reading and reviewing. the teaser is being sent to you via email on the contact me button on your twcs profile if you do not have it by tomorrow please contact me I will get it to you.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
great
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! thanks for reading and reviewing and the teaser will be sent like normal.
Kasi~
Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
Oh my. Wow. That was an INCREDIBLE scene!! Beyond intense. Beautifully done.
Author's Response:
Thank you finding new ways to top my own mind is not easy let me tell you! Thank you for reading and reviewing and the teaser is sent to you via the contact button on your twcs profile so check your junk mail if you do not have it by tomorrow then let me know and I will mail it to you again.
Kasi~
Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
great chapter. I love how Bella took care of Edward after the scene.
Author's Response:
Thank you she takes her role very seriously so she has to take care of him, but there was feelings there that went above the D/s relationship. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
ps yout teaser is sent to you via the contact button on your twcs profile I will send that now check your junk mail in case if you do not see it let me know!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much and thanks for reading and reviewing! the teaser is sent to you via email if you do not get it let me know.
Kasi~
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
What happened to Edward is awful. I would think that should be considered rape but given the circumstances it would be hard to prove. At the very least he was abused and it is amzing he could trust anyone at all after his past experiences. I almost wish Bella could get hold of Carmen and beat the cr*p out of her.
Author's Response:
I agree, I wanted his story to go deep and I think I have finally achieved that. Isabella's entire story will come to light as well. Some interesting things will come out. We will see where it all goes. Since I will be posting the next chapter very soon like later tonight or sometime tomorrow I will give you the teaser here instead of emailing it to you liek I normally do. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am sure that you will enjoy Bella's strength in coming chapters.....keep in mind sometimes to be strong you have to show a weakness as well....lets hope Bella can remember that.
Kasi~
Chapter 7 preview……
As soon as my body is against the bench, Edward’s hands are stroking my nipples, and he is kissing my neck in the spot he has found I love to be kissed. As he hungrily trails his mouth down my neck, across my collar bones to my nipples, his right hand is sliding fingers up and down my slit. He spreads my juices all over and quickly plunges two of his fingers deep into my pussy. I scream out in pleasure as the feel of him thrusting his fingers is taking over my body. He is kissing down my body and when he reaches my lower lips he flattens out his tongue and licks down the top, to where his fingers are still thrusting in and out of me. Then he sucks my clit and bar into his mouth, and as he sucks on the skin, his tongue is busy flicking the bar back and forth inside his mouth. The thrusting fingers turns to three and curling up, he is slamming the tips into my sweet spot. It is relentless, and he quickly drives me over the edge. As I scream out his name, he pulls his fingers out, and lowers his mouth to suck up as much of my nectar as he can.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
I am really looking forward to seeing how they interact in public. I applaude Bella in the Mike situation. I can't even think about what's going thru his mind right now. So the whole family is moving on to Iowa in the near future - I hope the family is ready for Edward being in a relationship! I like this story - there hasn't been the intense angst some stories have - they just seem to fit. I reallly hope either one realizes they are for each other and doesn't fight it in typical Twilight style!
Thanks for this story - wait for an update.
Author's Response:
Hello~ Thank you for your wonderful review, and thanks for reading my story. I am so happy that you are enjoying the story this much. I am really grateful that you are. Much like Twilight there was that instant thing between Edward and Bella and that is the way I like to write them. That is the way I wrote them in my last story too. I am a HEA h00r so I am not into much heartache. Does that mean that the bridges they have to cross will be pre built....most likely those bridges are going to be in need of some major repairs. We will see how times makes things vary. I know how I want the story to end and I know what it will take to get there, I am working on the middle. Family will become more deeply involved soon, its almost the holidays.....and Isabella has no family...how well do you think that will sit with Momma Esme??? Ohhh you know her loving way of sticking her nose in it. LOL It will be fun. Chicago will be a real eye opener for both of them, and the teaser you get is a glimpse into that. I am sending it to you via the contact me button on your twcs profile, you will get it via email if you do not get it today contact me at my same screen name at gmail and I will get you the teaser there. ENJOY!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
Awesome chapter. I love the chemistry!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chpater. I am enjoying yet struggling writing this story so your kind words come at a great tiem when I needed the encouragement to continue. Thank you so much. The promised teaser for chapter 7 (even though it will post as chapter 8 according to twcs anyway) is being sent to you via the contact button on your twcs profile. If you do not get it by later today contact me at gmail using my screen name, teamalltwilight and I will get it to you then, but check your junk mail sometimes it goes there.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
I loved this chapter - you are so good at being a Domme :)
Author's Response:
LOL Michele you crack me up...I would suck so badly in this lifestyle....I would be laughing to hard to beat anyones behind! AND I would sucker punch the first butthead that hit me...LOL I love your reviews you always make me smile. I will email you the teaser via the contact button the next chapter is so lemon filled the teaser is a partial lemon. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
xoxo
Date: 23 Feb 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
And you call me a tease! You so own me with this story! I was so not expecting Mike to be Jess' new to the area cousin. I hope there are more run-ins with him. I´m glad that Esme and Carlisle got to meet Bella. For some reason I think that this trip will be a turning point in their relationship. I can´t wait to read the next chapter! Great chapter, hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Yes Krazi~
I call you a tease, FOR GOOD REASON!!! You own me with for the love of domination and you know it. I am so on the edge of my seat waiting for them to like be together for real I can just taste it! ARGHHHH! I know I loved the mike card and what better way to bring him in then Jess....Thinking of more wicked and wild things for them to do on this weekend the next chapter is pretty freaking hot....or so I have been told from the pre-readers that have checked it out thus far.....It is so filled with lemons that the teaser is a mini lemon....I am sending that to you via the contact me button on your profile. I will one of these days get my act together and get my blogspot all nice and awesome...LOL right!
Thank you so much for reading nad reviewing and I am truely grateful for your story love it means EVERYTHING to me!
Seriously YOU ROCK!
Kasi~ xoxoxoxo
PS CHECK YOUR EMAIL!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
Mmmm a long weekend with Edward in a hotel with toys? Oh yeah! And especially a cast of his gigantorward :) (is that a word??) Delicious chapter sweetie - thank you!!!!
Author's Response:
Tamara~
I love your reviews they make me smile! I sent you the preview of the next chapter to you via the contact button on your twcs porfile. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad that you are liking it. The next chapter is plum full of lemony goodness!
Kasi~
PS...your nick name for the mold is pretty funny!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
Ummm yeah - so I want a cast of Edwards "Eddie"..... :)
Thank you for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah me too...I would love to have a mold of his cock. I have not came up with a name for it but it is goign to be in play soon as it is....read on and see!
Thank you again for the support. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
Glad that Isabella is going to be Isabella for the night, and get to know Edward. :D
Thanks so much!
Author's Response:
I loved writing that, I needed to show that unsure/but strong side of her. I hope I did well with it, because her strength is SUPER importaint in the up coming chapters.
Thank you for continuing to read and review.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Oh holy hell!!! Can you just imagine spending a weekend like that with Edward?! Makes my mouth water......and another Panty change!!!!!
Thank you so much!
Author's Response:
I know right? YUMMOLICIOUS! I am here to tell you that I rewrote each lemon in the first three chapters until I knew they would be worth reading. I did nto wan tto give off some weak lemons. I really hope that you continue to like this story!
thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~