[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
It's fascinating to read of Edward in the submissive role...he could be "my slut" anytime :D
Thanks so much!!!!
Author's Response:
I know right that was some hot fun stuff to write! :) I enjoyed writing it a lot.....I hope that you like the rest of the story! The up coming chapter is seriously I think one of the hottest I have ever wrote! I had to take breaks between parts. Let me know what oyu think of the other chapters when you get to them if you have the time. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
thanks another good chapter
Author's Response:
Seeker~
Thank you for your continued support. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I love the reviews and I am in awe of the amount of followers this story has gotten.
I sent your teaser for the next chapter to your email via the contact button on your twcs profile.
Kasi~
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
The rather unplesant surprise of Mike is erased by another, very pleasant surprise in Edward! Aaaand Bella gets to meet the parents! (would be rather interested in an outtake of THAT lunch).
Author's Response:
I agree totally about the out-take idea and I was thinking about that down the road. I am so happy to see that you are enjoying the story. I love it that this story is getting some attention, and I am proud of the work I have put into it.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am sending you the teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile, so check your email.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
Wow she was being set up with Mike to bad she didnt slap him in the face after the water. That is one way to get Edward mother off his back about the girl friend to have her jump in his arms LOL. Nice car ride.
Author's Response:
Heck I would have loved to been on that car ride if only as a voyer! LOL
Thank you for reading and reviewing....the teaser for chapter 7 is goign to come to you via your email inbox using the contact me link on your twcs profile, if you do not have it by tomorrow contact me through mine and I will get it to you right away.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
God, I am so into this story
Author's Response:
I am really glad to hear that you are enjoying the story....I will send you the teaser for the next chapter to your email via the contact me button on your twcs profile...Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
There weekend should be very interesting! There unexpected meeting was very interesting. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story...I love reviews they make me smile. I am emailing you the teaser for the next chapter via the contact button on your twcs profile.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Feb 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
I'm loving this story.
Author's Response:
Your preview of the next chapter is sent to you via the contact button on your pporfile here at twcs....check your mail and junk folder for the preview. If you do nto have it today message me through my profile and I will get you the preview right away.
Thank you so much for your support.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
One question.....WHERE can I find one like him??? Love your story, I drop everything to read each chapter as soon as the notification arrives.
Author's Response:
I know right??? SIGN me up for sure! I love that I have such wonderful support from you. PLease tell me that you will go check out the INSPIRE AWARDS I am proud that A Sub Search is nominated for best lemon under 1000 reviews as well as the story in porcess that leaves you watchig for the next update....From your review sounds liek I stand a chance at having your vote ont hat one. :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
I am sending your chapter 7 preview to you via the contact buytton on your profile. Check your junk mail, and if you do not have it today message me and I will get it to you right away.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
Great chapter! I loved how Bella put in Jessica in her place.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing I love it Thank you so much your preview is being sent to you via the contact me button on your twcs profile...so check your junk mail folder, just in case and you can contact me via my profile if you do not get your preview today.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
Well it is obvious that they care for one another and that can't help but make their entire relationship stronger, right? Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Keye~
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. I am glad that you are enjoying it. I am sending you the preview of the next chapter via the contact button on your TWCS profile. Please check your junk mail, if for some reason you do not get your preview contact me via teamalltwilight (at) gmail (dot) com
Kasi~
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
I am glad to see them share their secrets and help them grow closer and trust each other as they build their relationship. Nice Lemon as well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
More Sharing of things coming soon! :) I promise there are some really smoking hot Lemony goodness coming soon too! Up next is the start of their Chicago trip.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 12:20 PM Title: A/N
You have my votes!
Author's Response:
aww thank you that means a lot to me! there are some other really great stories nominated out there too. Lots of good stuff to choose from.
Date: 10 Feb 2011 1:33 PM Title: A/N
I've voted. Good luck!
Author's Response:
I am glad to hear that you voted! There are a bunch of REALLY great stories out there nominated that deserve notice. Thank you.
Kasi~
Date: 10 Feb 2011 6:19 AM Title: A/N
You have every right to be proud you are amazing so just to let you know I am proud of you to. :) :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! there are other stories besides mine out there that are jsut as great if not 100% better and I hope that oyu will take the tiem to vote because these are all nominations for stories that deserve attention and seem to not get the attention they deserve. :)
THANK YOU! you are so kind to me!
Kasi~
Date: 09 Feb 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
love it!!!!!
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are loving it! Thank you for reading and reveiwing.
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are loving it! Thank you for reading and reveiwing.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
Kasi
Wooo Hoooo! That was freaking awesome! I'm so glad they got to spend some E&B time, it was so sweet that the took time to get to know each other a little bit better. I definitely enjoyed the time they spent in the playroom as well! Can´t wait for their trip and see how that goes. Great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
OMG Krazi~
Thanks for the awesome review......I have to tell you though I just read your update and OH MY SWEET JESUS.....HOT! wowsa!
Thank you for reading and reviewing and for the fantastic reply too! I love your story and I am so excited that you like mine too! Thank you so much sweetie....Hurry and post your next chapter and I will be right on it for the next one here too! (mine is off to beta NOW!) HeeHeeHee! Hugs!
XOXOXOXO....Kasi~
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
She is opening up but it seems to hard for her to trust. What did Mike do to her???
Author's Response:
Well the majority of what Mike did to her is in Chapter 4....with that being said more will come out and we will learn just how damaged she was by him cheatign on her. She felt he was all she had left in this world. Her last tie to how life was when her dad was alive. I promise more soon! Wow you just got a teaser that I did not plan....typed now you can have it....Shhh don't tell everyone! LOL
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
welcome back
Author's Response:
Thank you.....thanks for reading and reviewing....next chapter should post sooner then 2 weeks because it is done and going to beta via email train in about 10 minutes! woot woot!
Kasi~
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
Making a mold of Edwards lovestick is a genius idea! I want one too! Loving the story!
Author's Response:
LAUGHING HARD!!!
I am the first to have signed that list....count me in!!! ohhh yeah!
*giggle*
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
I love that Bella has feelings for edward! Awesome story!
Author's Response:
Kitkatr~
The one thing I always like to try to stay true to is that deep need that both Bella and Edward feel for the other. Like drawn in, by their very own being. Two halfs to one whole. I love that click, the way that they seem to fit. I do not like to tamper with that. I do always try to keep something the way that it should be. I already change them enough to fit my story line and to fit the fact that I write all human stories. Just like my other story 'My Sisters 3' I like that fast connection. Staying true to that and still trying to stay true or as true as I can with no personal experiance in the bdsm field. Anyway I am glad that you are reading my story and I hope that you do enjoy it. Thank you for the reviews, next chapter is the start of the Chicago trip....very hot!
Kasi~
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
They had a great weekend, and I really hope that there is nothing in the contract that will cause Edward not to want to be her weekend sub....
Author's Response:
awww you will like it I assure you...I am not going to deal them bad shit...yet anyway... :)
I am excited to hear your thoughts on the contract chapter it is pretty intense info and contract wise. The info is DEEP. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
While they have lept into this relationship with emotions high, they are such a good match. I am eager to see their trip to Chigago. VERY much anticipating Bella's use of her new toy. Will be curious to see what Edward thinks of having his cock casted. Was this something they discussed over the contract?
Author's Response:
Nope totally not discussed at all! The good stuff from it will come soon I promise! the trip to Chicago or rather the start of it is up next...the use of the cast will come into play in more then one way soon as well....LOL...sorry could not help the double meaning...LOL
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I look forward to your reaction to the trip to Chicago.
Kasi~
Date: 06 Feb 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
I was really glad that Bella granted his request. It was sweet and I can see that they are going to be great together.
Author's Response:
Things will unfold for you and you will learn a lot at once then more over time at why they are both the way they are.....I love the slow burn they always seem to have going. I look forward to hearing more from you, thank you so much for the reviewing and reading. :)
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
Great story. I can't wait until the next update. I have a question. What does mo daor and mo milis mean? I try to search for the meaning but I couldn't understand the context you are using it in.
Author's Response:
Teaire~
Here is the sentences from chapter 5 that explain the names..."We discuss what I will call him. I am okay calling him my slut on occasion, however I prefer to call him something I have never called any other submissive. I settle for my slave in Irish, mo daor, or my sweet in Irish, mo milis." I did major brainstorming one night with a group of friends on facebook and we chose those names. So they are Irish aka Galiek for my slave (mo daor) or my sweet (mo millis). If you use google translator you can translate anything to or from english.
So the context I am using it in is a name for her to call him...if you notice it is all lower case that is because he is her submissive.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story, I look forward to hearign your thoughts after the next chapter posts.
Kasi~
Date: 06 Feb 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
This was my favorite and I was really glad that you won. (Even if you did beat me.... lol)
I didn't realize that you had started to continue it, but I'm really glad to see you have. So it looks like I have a little catching up to do.
Great Story.
Denise
Author's Response:
Denise~
Thank you so very much for the kind words and I am glad to know that I am not the only author who took the tiem to read the other entries. I enjoyed all of them, and I am really hoping that a few of them continue on like I did.
I am grateful for your review and the fact that you are reading my story. Thank you so much!
Kasi~
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
That was fun... I was happy that they had a conversation, trying to get to know each other. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.....Belive me when I say there are some mean things that Isabella will be doing in the future with that cast she made...LOL...poor little subward will be tourtured quite sweetly
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
This story is wonderful as always. Sorry to see Aunt Bell leave and welcome EMENSLY.
Author's Response:
the new BETA is Cullen Confection.....Aunt Bell and Cullen Confection both helped with chapter 5....thank you for reading adn reviewing.....Aunt Bell is not going far.....She is taking my other story My Sisters 3 and she is totally re-vamping it from the orignail version un-beta'd and we are hoping to get it posted on sites like twilighted where it is hard to get a fiction posted. Also I am goign to be posting all my stories on the new site fan fiction addiction as well. So Aunt Bell is not goign far...and I love her work. She is wonderful and great, as I said in the post of this chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
Looking forward to the next post!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and for reading my story. next chapter will post either right on time or ealier....chapter 6 is over half written now.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
thaniks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
Oh know it was getting soooo, soooo good. Cliffee ickee.
Author's Response: the next chapter I promise you will like....Thank you so much for reading and reviewing....reviews mean A LOT to me! thanks! Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Great chapter and I love this story.
Author's Response:
I am really excited to see that you like this so much.......Thank you for reading and reviewing....
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
I love this Edward in a weird sort of way. He seems to be so sincere in all that he does with her.
Author's Response:
That is exactly how I see him too.....Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 23 Jan 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
I am so glad that you continued this story. From here on I will review every chapter. I got so caught up I didn't want to stop. I am also not in this lifestyle but going by other things I have read it seems like you are doing a good job. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for not only reading but also reviewing. Reviews mean EVERYTHING.... :)
I hope that you continue to enjoy the story.....Let me know!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
I loved this chapter kasi, I really enjoyed reading their back stories. Am excited to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much...the background coming out really needed to be done.....Thanks so very much for always reviewing and for reading my story! I am grateful for friends like you in the fan fic life!
Kasi~ xoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks Seeker~ I know it was not hot and intense liek the previous chapters but it was much needed background for the next chapter or two or more...LOL Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
That was some good back story. I enjoyed learning more about Edward and Bella's past. I can't wait to see where this goes, especially the Chicago trip! Great chapter hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
Thanks so much for the kind review and for reading my story. The Chicago trip will not be for a couple of chapters but it will be interesting. the next chapter ends on a much less boring place then this one, that is a promise.
Kasi~
xoxo
Date: 21 Jan 2011 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
Both of them truly had there hearts broken by other people. I am glad Bella has great friends that are telling her to go with her heart with him. I cant wait for your next post looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
troberts~
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story and I seriously look forward to hearing your comments after next chapter things will heat up and there will be some interesting things take place as well.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Jan 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
Well, as usual, you did NOT disappoint! Loved the chapter. I am so curious to see how this dinner is going to turn out. As well as Bella accompaning Edward on his business trip. So, needless to say, I cannot wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Ahhh thank you so much...the trip will be a few chapters out for sure....the next chapter will be the rest of their night and a little extra.....the next chapter is bigger then this one.....I am having a hard time breaking away and seem to keep writing. thank you for your wonderful comments and for reading and takign the tiem to review...IT means EVERYTHING to me! :)
Kasi~
Date: 12 Jan 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Yea, sounds like he passed the test weekend with flying colors...I can't wait to see what happens from here and I look forward to it.
PS - good job with the lemons in this chapter, they were pretty hot!
Author's Response:
ohhh thank you so much for the story love and reading nad reivewing my story.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Sheesh... loved it! Even though you called me a cockblocker for my teaser! Lol! I can´t wait to hear Bella´s thoughts on the test weekend. We all know that subward is putty in her hands, already dreaming of forever. Great chapter hon!
~Krazi~
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~~~
I am so glad that you loved it! I did call you a cock blocker but lets face it it was true!!! LOL But I still love your fucking story it rocks totally!!! SOOO MUCH!!!
Thank you for reading my story and for reviewing, next chapter will have some insight to their past's for us all to grip our minds around...they are so yummy together!
:)
Kasi~
XOXOXOXO
Date: 08 Jan 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
I am really enjoying your story, it is really well written and the characters have depth to them. The plot will thicken I am sure as we go along, and I am really looking forward to the chapters to come (no pun intended lol)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the wonderful review. I am grateful for your kind words!
Thanks for reading and reviewing nad the next chapter will be the background info we all have been waiting for.
Kasi~
Date: 08 Jan 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Thanks for writing this story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it and reviewing it....
:)
Kasi~
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
excellent!
Author's Response:
Thank you !
Thanks for reading and reviewing
Kasi~
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Well, I have no experience with all of this either but I have to say, that I am enjoying your writing. Everything is clear, concise.........I like the way that you write the characters and I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
Keye~ thank you for reading and reviewing and thank you for liking my story enough to be looking forward to the next chapter.
Kasi~
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Well... that was HOT! I realize that it was a "test" weekend but would really like to see more dialogue between the two. I hope that as time goes on they get to know each other personally as well as sexually. Otherwise your story is wonderful and well written and interesting. Thanks for the posting schedule... it really is helpful. Thanks.
Author's Response:
As of right now the next chapter for sure is all gettig to knwo the real Edward and the real Bella and waht things traspired in their lives to make them who they are today. Ther eis a lot on info comein in the next 1 to 2 chapters but no worries my friends the hot smoking lemons will be right here ready to play.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
How do relationships between Doms and subs evolve into more? Is it always Dom initiated? Hmmm. I get all of the submission in the playroom or bedroom but the crawling seems to go for humiliation insome way, what is that purpose? Honest curiosity!
Author's Response:
I am not in the lifestyle at all....any way shape or form......However in doing the research it is the sub that gives the dom their strength and the crawling thing is showing the complete submission, jsut as the kissing of feet and the kneeling. The talign of ones self as if you are owned....that is why you will see thigns liek "Mistress may your sub be excused to use the bathroom" Because essentially everything is the masters/mistresses you are willingly giving them your entire being served up with a HUGE platter of trust. I admire the bdsm lifestyle in that it is very revolving around the ultimate trust in another person. As a submissive you woudl put your health, and safety in someone elses hands 100%. As for relationships...from what I have been told most d/s couples are play couples only not romantic......but i believe that there is someone for everyone. For this story edward loves being called a slut loves the crawling serving side of it all he is a natural giver. I hope all this helped if not I am sorry...I learned most of the stuff I spouted off by reading on wiki and google and different sites focused on the bdsm lifestyle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing..
Kasi~
Date: 07 Jan 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
*sigh* So glad she has asked him to be her weekend sub! That man's gonna need Mondays off to recoup from weekends like that. yum.
Author's Response:
I know right??? I personally think I would keep him FULLTIME!!! yeppers!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Wow that was hot I cant see him not signing the contract cant wait for more
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
great scene and I don't usually like Edward as a sub
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Hey Kasi girl - you did great sweetheart. This was an incredible chapter. You have got a great story here and I look forward to the next chapter xoxo
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you sweetie I am grateful for hearing good things from you. Your writing on this subject makes me feel more confident and I just hope to continue to keep the strong Bella I am going for. The next couple of chapters are going to show her in a softer side a little, but I want her to be questioning herslef a bit and we are going to get some history on both her and Edward and why they both are 40 or older and still single. by the way you will have mail from me in a few because I have a question for you.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 06 Jan 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
They work perfectly together! Loving the story!
Author's Response:
ohhh thank you so much! really....I am loving the reviews this story is getting...I hope to see more!
Thank you for reading and reviewing see you soon with chapter 4.
Kasi~
Date: 25 Dec 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
That seems to be a good sign that she wants to keep him by acting out his fantasy. I like Edward's point of view better here he is easier toconnect with.
Author's Response:
Edwards POV is easier for me to write as well.....and I am a girlei girl so figure that one out....huh? who would have 'thunk' it??...LOL
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Happy holidays (if you celebrate).
Kasi~
Date: 23 Dec 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
was very good. I enjoyed it. nice measured pace and not rushed.
Merry Xmas to you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much for the reading and reviewing of my story. I am excited to hear what you think of the next chapter too.
Happy holidays to you and yours.
Kasi~
Date: 22 Dec 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
Well I have no experience with all of this so I cannot tell you if you were correct or not but I can tell that I enjoyed what you wrote. I loved that Bella gave him his fantasy and and I curious about what scene he wrote out for them to play.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Merry Christmas (or whatever you celebrate) to you and yours !
Keye
Author's Response:
Merry Christmas to you too (if that is what you celebrate). Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it means a ton to me and as for the scene it will be in the next chapter and it is HOT! I can not wait to hear what you think of it!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
wow, I want Edward as my submissive or maybe my Dom or maybe it really doesn;t matter which
Author's Response:
I know right??? I just hmm, want him some kind of fiercely! YUMMOLICIOUS! (according to my almost 13 yr old that is a word!) LOL
Thank you so much for reading adn reviewing I think you are becoming one of my favorite readers all the reviews I have read from you today!
Kasi~
Date: 21 Dec 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
I really loved this chapter. This is turning out to be a very good fic so far. I like that what happens between them physically is not so much the obvious. I mean, even within such a structured relationship there must be give and take, and I was worried that Bella would turn him out of the house after giving him his fastasy. I am glad she didn't, there is always different tones within every relationship. I am hoping that love develops between these two, maybe a baby or two and lots of sexy lemons. I think that this is acheivable between two people in this situation. In fact I think more so because the roles of each are so well defined and out of necessity the lines of communication are wide open. Anyway enough of the longest review evah! Look forward to next chapter. Thanks guys.
Author's Response:
I am very happy to hear from you on your feelings of this fan fic. I have worked very hard on it, and if not for the great support system of my beta and my pre-readers I am not sure I woudl have enough confidence to put this out here. I really have been doing a lot of research because the last thing I want is to put out a story that paints the bdsm lifestyle in a bad light.
My goal for them is to have them in a relationship, it is an edward and bella story....with that said there will be factors they have to over come and yet I will not let Bella be a soft submissive in any way shape or form. She will remain the domme that is one thing I am dead set on. I really want that to be the one certain in the book over all. I do nto have the ending in my head yet, nor do I have the middle for that part. Right now I have a general Idea of what I woudl liek to do and I am shooting straight from the hip other then that.
Thank you for the story love and reading and reviewing it too. Reviews mean the world to me and I hope to hear from you again after the next chapter has posted.
Thanks,
Kasi~
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
Edward is afraid he messed up he is silly. Bella has to be blown away and wondering when shit is going to go bad he is to good to be true. I love that she gave him his fantacy. I cant wait for more. Have a wonderful holiday.
Author's Response:
He will make mistakes that is normal, no one is perfect....even when they appear that way. Everyone (around 40-ish edward being 40 and bella being 41) single has a past and past's are what shape us. Even if it is not a relationship there is a past that prevented us from having that relationship. So I am using that and going from there. I will not give away too much.
Thank you for reading and reviewing and I hoep that you enjoy the next chapter too!
:)
Kasi~
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
Good chapter, but I would like to see more verbal interaction. Perhaps that will come with them getting to know each other more.
I'm sure both there backgrounds will be reveiled eventually.
Thanks for the update and happy holidays.
Author's Response:
I agree with you on the verbal things I want to utilize the verbal too, and I have to find a way to get there and keep what I have in mind going as well. Thank you so much for your honest input I greatly appreciate it all. Thank you for reading and reviewing and I hope to see your review after the next chapter is posted.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
Very nice! These two seem to be such a great fit (evn if Edward was naughty)! Loving the story!
Author's Response:
I am so glad that you are really liking this story it is very hard to write because I lack the know how of all the ins and outs of the lifestyle. I love it though and it is so interesting and I hope that I do well portraying it all.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
beautiful story! very hot; looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Kitkatr~
Thank you so very much!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and thank you for the story love!
Hope to hear from you again after the next chapter is posted.
Kasi~
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
You are doing a great job with this story.
You would'nt think you have limited knowledge at all considering how you have Edward addressing his Mistress, for example, referring to himself as "Your submissive" instead of in the first person. Well done
Looking forward to reading more
Author's Response:
Wow Thank you Randomly~
thank you so much! really I am so grateful for all the reviews I can get, they are very importiant to me, they make me feel as if the story I am writing is worthy of someone to take their time to say something about it. I honestly owe my knowledge to other great writers and that was gained from reading their fan fics and then I have read so much stuff on line as well. Once you get past all the grossly discusting porn images that pop up when you google something liek bdsm you can seriously find some informitive stuff out there. Thank you so much again for the story appreciation and for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
Whoa... that was so hot! I love it! Okay Edward is 40, but how old is Bella? I love these two. This is a really good story so far! Can´t wait for more, patiently of course! Lol! Great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
Bella is 41 I gave her age in chapter 1...but heck chapter 2 was pretty hot and easy to forget all about the first chapter. LOL
Thank you so much for the story love! IT is much needed, and makes me feel better. I have been stressing and worrying so much over this chapter. I jsut do not want to let my readers down and I do nto want to write crap and toss it out there.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
I so love where this is going. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
How long is it going to take Bella and Edward to realize that they have chemistry outside of the playroom as well as in the playroom?
Author's Response: James~ Thanks for reading and reviewing it means a whole lot to me!!! I am not sure how long it will take them to figure it out, but neither of them are what you would call dumb. We will see.....I am sure getting there will be, interesting?!?!?!? lol Hope to hear from you more after next chapter! Kasi~
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
Awesome story and awesome chapter. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response:
teaire~
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and I am so happy to see that you are loving my lemony goodness, I am sure it will be filled with a bunch more lemons, but there will be a story line here.
Hope to hear from you again after next chapter!
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
oh my goodness, TAT, you. are. awesome.
xoxo (two thumbs up)
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you...I am like giddy at the response so far!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
sigh!!! best christmas present ever to get great reviews!
Kasi~
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
I really enjoyed your story, I've read where Edward is the domme, but it's nice
that he is the sub.,can't wait for the next chapter...
thanks
Pat
Author's Response:
Pat~
thankyou for the story love! I love a strong bella yet emotional and loving but also beign a full fledged Domme and having edward be a strong role, yet the submissive is not easy to write, but I am going to give it the good old girl scout try...LOL
Thank you for reading and reviewing I sure hope to hear from you again after the next chapter is posted.
Kasi~
Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
fab more please!
Author's Response:
next chapter will post very soon...thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
Ready to read more!
Keye
Author's Response:
Keye~
Thank you for reading and reviewing! The next chapter is at the BETA's being worked over so I PROMISE to post very soon!
Thank you!
Kasi~
Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
This is a great story, can't wait for it to become more than one chapter. Thankyou.
Author's Response:
I am almost done writign chapter 2 and I will send it off to my Beta right away. So maybe another week at the most but I am hoping sooner.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
I thought this was great!
Author's Response:
I am glad that you liked it and it will be a FULL story when it is all said and done. The next chapter will not post for a couple of weeks yet, as I am wrapping up the story "My Sisters 3".
Look forward to hearing your thoughts.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
This was so hot. I actually love you <3 Its hard to find good subward fics. :D Love it :D
Author's Response:
Wow Thank you so much, this was a pretty awesome review!
I am excited to see what it is going to be like.
I have a plan, but sometime those plans change in the middle.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
you are a mistress in waiting! this is a brilliant first chapter and I wish you every success with the story. I will be excited to read it. I don't normally read DOMELLA stories, mainly because I just can't get my head around it but this will be my exception to the rule.
Great job honey!
Love, Michele (plu)
Author's Response:
Gasp! Teary eyed...big smile.
wow. What an awesome review. Thank you so much Michele.
Thank you so much!
Kasi~ xoxoxo
Date: 03 Dec 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
intriguing first chapter. would be interested to know how old this Edward is and whether roughly the same age as Bella. I rather like the idea of a mature Edward for a change, so am hoping!
Author's Response:
I am very greatful for your input on his age, I was leaning toward him being the same age or jsut a year or two older or younger. To me this story is much to mature of nature for me being a 41 year old woman to write using a 19 or 20 something kid. I am very attracted to the mature, dominating Edward, so this will be a flip for me to write anyway. I will post more soon but I have to finish "My Sisters 3" first.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
I really enjoyed the first chapter, and will patiently wait for the updates. Great start! I know how old Bella it, but how old is Edward and where do they both work?
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Dear Krazi~
I will have the answers to your questions in the next chapter. I have jsut about wrapped up the main part of writing for "My Sisters 3" and as soon as it is done and over with then this story will take over my full attention! I am just so proud of how well it did in the vote that I had to share it with everyone now! I am super excited to get it out there so you shouldn't have to wait to long to get an update. Once I get going chapters will fly out if it is anything like MS3. Thank you so much for the story love, reading and reviewing!
XOXOXO
Kasi~
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
I am going to love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review on this. I know that this was a pretty big chapter and I am not certain they will all be this long but it will be worth reading. I have jsut ripped out another chapter of my other story, and that leaves me 3 or 4 more before I start really laying this story out. So it may be a couple of weeks to get another chapter out but I assure you that it will be worth the wait.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!