Date: 16 May 2019 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for the family tree
Date: 10 Sep 2018 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sigh...I wish it was completed. It's a really wonderful story!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hopefully you will be finishing this sequel to Lonesome Hearts?
I was just getting into the characters.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
An unexpected visit.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is not happy to be spoon Valley.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the first chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
:) Loving this. Hopefully you'll be able to carry this on
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
i love this Bella!yes,she blushes,but she has made Edward blush even more!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
haha,this Bella is not to be courted in the usual manner,it seems.perhaps Edward should take her out cattle-herding or something.:P
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
again,some things don't change!although in this case it was pure misfortune rather than clumsiness.:)
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
aw,poor Bella.she was just helping.but i can see Rose's point of view as well.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
tsk,tsk,Bella,paying Edward?that's not done!:)
good to see some things don't change.;P but at least he wasn't buck-naked.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
right.Bella Swan.has to be Em's daughter,'cause there's no other Swan around.it did occur to me,but i wasn't sure.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
it's an interesting idea.now who could be this Edward's Bella?
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm coming late to this party but I'm glad I'm here.
Date: 29 Apr 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
agreed - this one started off great. hope you'll finish!!!
Date: 15 Dec 2011 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the first one, and this one looks to be good too. Hope there's more to come soon. Cheers!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
You alwaus write great, romantic stories. This one is starting off great! Update often!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
she's so oblivious it makes me feel so bad for edward and what he has gotten himself into update soon
Date: 16 Mar 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Have just finished Lonesome Hearts (at ff.net) and came over here (TWCS) to read Untamed Hearts, love it!
Interesting switch of some of E & B characteristics, looking forward to reading more.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
i love this story! please update soon!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aw, sweet! So happy you posted! I love this continuation of your 1st story!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
good chapter.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
In this case it was Ma's doing though.
Great chapter though
Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice change to story. I couldn't find the family chart... Is it posted somewhere? How old are Edward and Bella?
Date: 03 Mar 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
This new Bella sounds like a handful...can't wait to see what Doc Edward is going to have to deal with in the future.
Date: 02 Mar 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
hes so cute with her cant wait to see what happens next to these 2 and the tour goes
Date: 02 Mar 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well if everyone didnt already have it figured out that Edward was interested in Bella they do for sure now LOL.
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am still thinking, cousins?
I am glad you have started writing this again. I guess you found your muse.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
another great chapter. :-D
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Just found this sequel and I'm definitely hooked! Love that our other E/B are in the story....and can't wait to see this couple, too!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am so glad you are updating this again. I love the period pieces.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
horseback ride sounds great.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
How cute! Loved it.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
She is not the normal girl but then Edward would not be interested in a normal girl. I was thrilled to see another post WOW Thanks
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
So happy you updated this story hope your muse is back to stay. I am loving your other story also so different from this one. Edward has his work cut out for him it is not a secert that he is attracted to her.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Too cute! Glad to see a post for this one. Love the other story too.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
aww they are cute together
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
good to see this story being continued!!!!!! Love the other one as well!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
I LIKE THEM BOTH.. then of course you know that I told you on the review on P & P.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
that was a good chapter! i hope you update sooner rather than later this time!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm sorry you're having a hard time with this story. I do hope you keep it up. I just want to encourage you. Take care.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
That was so damn cute! She takes after her auntie with the clumsiness! Great job! Can't wait for more.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chappie! Love it so far.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
You gotta love a story that comes with visual aids!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
I noticed that you have another story up about DC. I'm looking foward to reading it, but I hope and pray that this one doesn't get lost. I'm looking forward to it.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
It was unexpected, but I'm looking forward to it!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
so far so good. I like the continution of the spoons Valley clan
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is a fun story and I hope you're able to update soon!
Thanks~
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for the chart! It helped immensley(sp).
Date: 11 Jan 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
good chapter......
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella. Women have always gotten stuck with the uncomfortable clothes through the ages.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
So so Sweet! :D
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love the story wish you would give us more each time.
thanks,
Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens between Edward and Bella. You are such a great writer!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
That was to funny poor guy nothing like getting kneed in the nuts that says I love you lol.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
That was fun! I cannot wait more! Thank you!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
well hes just human! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like that its a bit diffrent from Lonesome Hearts. :) that makes it just more intresting. Awesome chapter and i hope you will uppdate soon. and i wish the chapter could be a little longer.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I didn't know this was a sequel. I have to go back and read the first edition.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
So happy to see that you posted! Loved it! I am looking forward to the get together at the ranch!!
Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
still like it....just kinda confusing with two edwards and two bellas lol
Date: 08 Jan 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love generations of Edward and Bella's.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks for the update! I'm enjoying your new story.
Date: 08 Jan 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think I will love the story when you get to updating again and really writing. You used to give us 3,000 words a week. Now it is 1,000 words a month. RL does get in the way I am sure.
Love the story, just need more of it.
Thank you,
Date: 07 Jan 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think the edeard in this chapter is cute! Im kind of confused by all the names being the same and stuff but im figuring it out! Update soon
Date: 07 Jan 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am so happy to hear from you and I am loving this story also. I hope your holidays were wonderful crazy yes but when arent they LOL Cant wait for more
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Liked the chapter. Coming back home, not certain if it what he wants but knowing it's the right thing to do.
For now here he is... about to start a new life in the same place.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it can't wait for more :-)
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
I really like it, and thank you for the update. I am curious what will happen next.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
A great read so far! I hope that you will update soon! Thank you for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Really, really like this Bella! More!
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm guessing twenty years, at least, since LH? Just trying to get things straight in my head.
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, so Em & Rose DID get married?!? Cool! And lol on the chart---I was sketching one out on the back of an envelope to be sure they weren't related too.
I like how fast I'm getting pulled into these characters btw. ; )
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking "unsettled" Edward---and I sympathize on his feelings on Spoons Valley. (Says this small-town OH girl who couldn't leave fast enough.)
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
(Okay, D, I'm blaming the holidays for not getting to this sooner.)
That said, I am LOVING this story!!!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
What no immediate attraction on Bella's part?
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Whole new generation of Edward and Bella. Couldn't get better.