Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Beautiful chapter! I feel for Mr. Newton, how horrible to have a child turn out like that.
Author's Response:
i do too... there were more then one victim in all this... mr. newton was proof
Date: 30 Apr 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Fabulous chapter, looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Wonderful!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
YAY!!! BELLA IS OK AND SHES WITH EDWARD!!!! IM SO HAPPY THAT EDEN IS OK! SO PLS CONTINUE THE STORY AND PLS HURRY I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEND NEXT!!!!!
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY SO PLS CONTINUE SOONER THAN NORMAL I WOULD BE SO HAPPY IF YOU DID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Beautiful chapter!!! I am so glad Eden made into this world okay.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
I am so glad Eden is here!!! Mr. Newton did a good thing for Bella and his grandchild. I worry what will happen to him now. At least he made it safe for his grandchild. Bella is going to be so happy that her Dad is moving to be close to her. I can't wait to see what is next. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
im glad that shes alright and in the end the baby was born with out problems except for her heart! im excited to see what happens next
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Love this story and the name that you picked out is absolutely beautiful.
Author's Response:
thank you so much
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
yea, yea, three cheers hurah. Great things from Mr Newton !!!!! Well done
Author's Response:
thank you so much
Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
awesome update.
Hugs
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Love the name
Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
thankyou
Date: 29 Apr 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Wow Mr. Newton is a good guy may be a murder but his heart is in the right spot. Thank goodness the baby is OK and Bella and Edward are good.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
i was thrilled that she was talking about still being witht he man she loved and that they need to seriously talk. i am pleased mr newton meant her no harm. instead he gave her life. a way to make her life better and his grandbaby. i hope she sends him a picture. he was so upset by what his son did and i am glad he killed him. cause he is right james would have never left her alone. well what a hell of a chapter. i am glad eden was born with out doing harm to her heart. can't wait for the next chapter. love it
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Well, Thank God for small favors. (wink)
Send my Thanks along to Ivtwilight09 for the birth and no cliffie.
Loved it! Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens from here.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
AWWWW!she had the baby and she gets to go to school now to!everything came together update soon
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
woo hoo mr newton did something right. yeah for eden
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
awwwwe a sweet and wonderful chapter
Author's Response: thank you:)
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
ohhh I love it. They are going to make it. Thanks so much.
Author's Response:
thank you so much..
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
lucky they found her! love the name :)
Author's Response: aww thank you:)
Date: 23 Apr 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
:)
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
You can tell how young Bella is by how she reacted to Edward being upset. He must not love me if he thinks I lied. This has to be the stupidest logic. He is so upset because he loves her so much and is so worried about loosing her. Edward should not have gone out drinking, but Bella ignoring him is not going to help them work out this financial aid situation.
Author's Response:
you have it right on the head sonogal, alot of people seem to forget that she is 18 and very inexperinced when it comes to things like this, her logic is that of someone her age, where alot of people can understand edward, despite the fact he knew she was leaving, he let himself hope and he just scared of losing them:), i hope he redeems himself soon:)
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Wow Edward really messed up didn't he! I really hope that nothing happens to Bella while she is out.
Author's Response:
yea he did.... i sure hope he can redeem himself soon:)
Date: 17 Apr 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
These short chaps are killing me. I thought Mr Newton was in jail? And it seemed a little out of character for Edward to blow up at Bella - and what the **** he smelled like another womans perfume!? Please update soon
Author's Response:
in an earlier chapter charlie went to question him and he was gone. he took off. he was never in jail Edwards behavior was bad.. he was acting out cause he is scared. he thought he had more time with her and now he doesnt. i will update very soon, i dont like leaving the cliffs:)
Date: 17 Apr 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
OH CRAP ......He would not hurt her right.......but he did kill his own son though........CRAP DOUBLE CRAP!!!!! HELP!!!!!! Edward needs to get his head out of his ass!! I love the story and cannot wait for more, this one is close to my heart!
Author's Response: thankyou so much for reading and reviewing:) i wont make you wait to long for ch 20..
Date: 17 Apr 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Damn good chapter. Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: thankyou so much:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
I wonder what Mrs Newton is going to do...
Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
really hope charlie yells at him...how could you do that edward update soon
Author's Response: i will, and i hope to have something to the pr by wensday:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Great chapter!! Shorter than usual but great!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
it was suppose to be with 18, i know so so short thankyou for reading and reviewing
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Mr. Newton wouldn't hurt her right? He is hopefully just saying sorry for what his son did.. Hopefully... Edward is a dumb ass... I cannot wait for more! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
If he fucking cheated on Bella then I hope they do bury him!!!
Author's Response:
i dont blame ya... i feel the same
Date: 16 Apr 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
poor Bella. Got to be so confused.
Author's Response:
she just cant get a break, looking for better days for her:) ty for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
omg, they will never find his body if charlie does it. they wont get to kill him twice. and MR newton with Bella in the park holy shit. update soon please !!!! I'll make sure rob stays on the bottom for you (your control issues and all)
Author's Response:
thankyou so much... i will get number 20 out soon promise:) and if u happen to have rope, we can make sure he stays there
Date: 16 Apr 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Loved it, but I hate cliffies so please hurry and write.
Hugs
Author's Response:
i dont like them either... im so so bad:)
Date: 16 Apr 2011 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
good chapter - but what a way to leave us hanging! Mr. Newton - what does he want???
Author's Response:
i promise to not make you wait:)
Date: 16 Apr 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
eek cliffie....great chappy
Date: 16 Apr 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Wow Edward....overreact much??? He really screwed up! Please tell me he didn't do something really stupid like sleep with someone. I hope he was just in a bar. I have a feeling Charlie tracked Mr. Newton to Arizona and that is why he is there. I hope Mr. Newton is not there to hurt Bella or the baby. Edward better start thinking straight or he is going to mess up the best thing that has ever happened to him. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
i agree:) i thnk for the most part he is a good guy
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
PLS CONTINUE SOON!!! WILL BELLA COME BACK? WILL SHE BE OK?? WHAT DOES MR. NEWTON WANT? WILL HE HURT HER?? WILL EDWARD GET BELLA BACK?? PLS HURRY AND CONTINUE SOON PLS!!!!
BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!
Author's Response:
awwww thankyou so much, next chap will be soon:) promise
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
A cheap whore?! Please tell me no!!! And yes he's a dead man when Charlie finds out. Why is Mr Newton looking for Bella.....
Author's Response:
I hate leaving yall with cliffy's. next chapter will be up soon.. thankyou for reviewing
Date: 16 Apr 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
First please tell me Edward wasn't with another woman, let us readers know that answer, and if so, Bella should give him hell! I look forward to next update, lovin it!!!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much for reviewing... i dont want to give it away:/ i will update soon i promise:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
ohh no!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
I want to know why he smelled like some cheap whore as Esme put it???? Holly shit Mr. Newton why did he track her down. I hate to say it but Edward needs his ass kick and now Bella needs hers kick for being by herself but know Edward has to face Charlie this is not going to be good for him.
Author's Response:
i promise next update will clear most of this up... the perfume will be addressed:)
Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Stupid boy... Great name for this update. What the hell does Mr Newton want... He must be stalking her to fine her in a park and with Charlie showing up at the same time does he know something?
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
OMG!!! I hope Bella is ok!!! Even though Edward screwed up-I hope he can mend things-and very quick like!!!!!
Jo
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
wow what a way to leave us hanging. i want more. i am stuck as to what mr. newton wants. will he be there jsut to talk or will he take bella so they will have acces to their grandchild, hmmm. man edward to you screw the pooch on this one big time. i can not believe you where this stupid to go out and get drunk and have some skanks perfume all over you. i hope for your sake you didn't do anything with anyone or else she should have your balls on a plate cause you deserve the beat down all those women int he house are going to do on you. love it
Author's Response:
gosh sassy i love reading your reviews:) i will update soon promise, sorry abt the cliff... really
Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
well i hope that hes not there to cause problems. and in the end i hope that charlie beats him up quick fast ! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
lmao:) thankyou for reviewing
Date: 16 Apr 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
The biggest problem I have with Edward going and getting drunk is Esme's comment about him smelling like woman's perfume when he came home. I hope that is addressed. Cause if he basically cheated on Bella, then that's a problem. Great chapter!
Author's Response: i agree and it will promise:)
Date: 14 Apr 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
There is no way she can leave. Love your story
Date: 13 Apr 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
Bella better let him read it. She also needas to realize that their are other scholarships. She is a smart girl. Can she live all the way across the country from Edward and her baby? For 4 years?
Date: 13 Apr 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
That is terrible that Bella is now going to have to make a decision about weather she is going to leave Arizona or not. I really hope that she decides to stay with Edward and her daughter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
O.M.G.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
hmm guess she cant transfer the scholarship then?
Author's Response:
that wont be known untill later.. Mr.wong at ASU will have to let her know, the letter from dartmouth was a seperate situation, but just in case it cant she has untill march 12, hope i cleared it up thanks for reading:)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
Awwww nooooooooo she has to stay with Edward and baby E (sniff sniff)
Thanks :) now please hurry up & update again I am in suspense here.....LOL
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
I wonder how heart broken Edward would be if she did decided to go to Dartmouth?
I hope Bella follows her dreams, even though they could be in Arizona, so you dont go to an IV league school, an education is and education, the person makes the experience.
Loving the story, thank you for the update.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
great chapter, so they never got busy, poor bella no relief for her.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
Great update.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
I hope the scholarship can be transferred for Bella. I think she would have a very hard time leaving to go to school, but would go since it was already paid for. I love their gifts to each other. Seems like everyone had a nice Christmas and New Years. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
ugh! i would hate to have to make that decision.....
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
She cant leave. What is the name??? He is such a dream guy can I have one like that.????
Date: 12 Apr 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
Good Chapter.....
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
Awesome update.
Hugs
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
Great chapter!
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
im still holding out that shes staying! keep the updates comming
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
Great chapter a good lawyer could of saved them all the hassel and tell them they had no case.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
GOOD CHAPTER 4 EDWARD.... HATE RENE!!!!
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much for your review, chapter 18 is now with pre-reader and in editing
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
Love this story and the absolute strength that so many have when they are fully challenged in life. I truly believe that circumstances do not define us it is our responses to them that do.
Beautiful story!
Author's Response:
one of my best reviews yet:) thankyou so much and i agree with you 100%
Date: 31 Mar 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
I am glad that Michelle didn't cause Bella and Edward any more trouble than them having to go to forks! that shows that she is a better person and is willing to take whatever contact they are willing for her to have with her grandchild.
Author's Response:
i agree, thankyou so much for your review
Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
I am so glad that Edward and Bella got a smart judge. They have nothing holding them back. I am glad that Charlie is moving to Arizona.
Author's Response:
yhankyou so much for your review, certainly nothing keeping Edward from his daughter now:)
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
So glad Renee wasn't able to take the baby away with evil ways. I sure hope Bella stays
Date: 28 Mar 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
I really am wondering where you are going to go with this story. Will Bella stay with Edward and her baby or is she going to go and have we seen the last of the evil bitch known as her mother. Anxoiously awaiting you next update
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
awww. i loved it.... so happy about what the judge choose
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review, they needed a bit of good news lately
Date: 27 Mar 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
so a great chapter - can't wait for the next:)
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
I truly loved the silverware analogy. I loved the Proverb script. I also loved the way E talked to Ms. Newton. Great job!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much, always a faithful reviewer:) hope these two can have some happiness for awhile
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
GREAT chapter!! I'm soo glad Renee and Michelle got their asses handed to them by the judge. WHEW!!!!
Until next time.....
Author's Response:
They needed a period of happiness for a while:) thankyou so much for your review
Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
im glad in the end they didnt give then anything! im glad that charlie is moving down to be with her ! cant wiat to see waht ahppens next
Author's Response:
thankyou so much for your review:)
Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
I am so happy that the judge ruled the right way. I hope Bella got the closer she needed at the cliffs. Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
2nd review to touch on Bella's closure, she will never forget but she cane make the decsion to not let it dictate who she is. thankyou so much for your review:)
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
I am so glad that everything is over in Forks. I think Bella has made peace with that place and will be able to go on now. I am so glad that Charlie will be moving to Phoenix. It will be good for all of them to be together. Great chapter...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
so far this is the first review to touch on Bella's coming to terms with what happened to her and her making the decsion to not let this part of her life dictate who she is as a person, thankyou so much for the review
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
so glad that everything went well at the hearing and that alice had her baby....wonder what is next for them?
Author's Response:
thankyou so much, hope u stick around to see;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
well i am thrilled that the judge could see that bella and edward want what is best for their baby girl. renee deserved no part and i feel sorry for michelle but at least she is getting pictures and will know about her grandaughter. maybe one day if michelle changes and they are able to come to terms she just might get a chance to have some sort of contact. well here is too the future. loving it
Author's Response:
thankyou so much, i agree a small look into that childs life is better then none, who knows what future may hold for further interactions
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
so now Renee is gone for good...right? so glad the judge sided with Edward
Author's Response:
i dont for see any trouble from her anytime soon, thankyou for your review
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
So, just wondering, are you going to put Charlie and Esme together?
Author's Response:
hmmm? intriging idea have to wait, sorry
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
awesome update... keep it coming
Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
Renee still needs to be run over by a bus. At least Ms Newton was being reasonable in the end.
Author's Response:
one bad witch is enough i guess:) renee and buss, sounds awesome:)
Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
Good Chapter....
Author's Response:
thankyou so much
Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
Great chapter
Author's Response:
thankyou so much:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Oh hell... NO....
Author's Response:
aww, sorry. i will update this week so it wont last long:) thankyou for the review
Date: 20 Mar 2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
oh shit eddie and charlie are not gonna like the added stress this will place on bella and the baby.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
another baby! hey she may have slept through her water breaking but i actually had to call the hospital and ask what it felt like for your water to break. funniest part it was with my second! my first was all done for me in the hospital, so with my boy i had no clue and a high break, definately not the gush you see in the movies. man i felt stupid. heehee.
Author's Response:
dont feel stupid with all 3 of mine it had to be broken in hospital:)... i could never go in labor naturally, all were induced but once i was broken it was like the hoover damn was let out me... im convinced 30 pounds was water
Date: 20 Mar 2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
gotta love rose and her protective side. jake and emily are bonding so that should be good and charlie now knows eddie is gonna be bella's baby daddy and that eddie is in love with bella.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
wow eddie is gonna take her and wait for bella to be ready for them.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
adoption is definately a hard choice, for me it never even entered my mind. i knew i was far too selfish to ever be able to hand my baby over to someone else, even if that would have been best. it sounds bad but hey it is true, my tora and jordan are my life have been since day one.
any woman able to follow through with adoption is a hero in my eyes.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 11 Karma's present
well shit! who wonderedd in and snuffed out james?
Date: 20 Mar 2011 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
hey your girl child is about th same age as my girl child! but i was barely 18 when she was born. i agree even with being as young as hubbie and i were and all of the hardships we have gone through i would not trade my babies for the world. some days i could do without the teenaged drama and attitude but hey my kidletts are the light of my world and the reason for eveerything i do. hell i even got an extra kid, and love him just as much.
eddie is gonna make his move and make his intentions known.
Author's Response:
thankyou so much, i think its thiese hardships that we have gone through that makes us stronger women... without struggle there can be no strength:)
Date: 20 Mar 2011 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
poor victoria. and all of the rest of the extended cullenfamily. losinga baby is a horrible thing tohave to go through.
glad to see charlie stood up for bella and what's right.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
wow renee is a bitch! i could never talk to my kids that way.