Date: 25 Jul 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 38 Graduation Jitters
Kudos to Edward and Jacob for totally surprising their girls! I absolutely agree with the timing of their marriages. It's definitely a case of carpe diem. The graduation party seems to have been a rousing success also!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 36 Coups and Monsters
Talk about a baptism by fire, I think Raine has just had one! At least there are no illusions of trying diplomacy with the Volturi. This way, they train to win a life or death battle, because it's all or nothing with this one!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 32 Half-Life
That's pretty sad that Carlie seeks a way to tell Bella Charlie is dead, and Bella is searching for the same thing! I'm so glad there are more good things than bad now. Life is never going to be perfect, but they will keep working on it because they have hope!
Date: 24 Jul 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 27 Burning
This chapter was tough to read because Carlie is descending into Hell and can't ask for help. The cutting is scary for me, I think I died that way in another life, I hate sharp things so bad! I hope to God she gets some help before it's too late!
Date: 24 Jul 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Effing Hurts
Bella hasn't told Carlie about the vision she had of Charlie bringing Carlie to town and leaving her to be found. I guess he's that shell thing they were talking about, since Carlie brought him back after he died and it's all that is left of Charlie Swan. It may not be perfect, but at least they are all still together.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 22 Good Intentions usually blow up in your face.
I would lay odds that Bella and Carlie are Charlie's daughters. I hope it's better all around, now that Charlie knows about everyone. I really hope they can destroy Victoria and breathe freely for a while. I also want Edward and Bella to be married!
Date: 24 Jul 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 20 Taken
She may not be a monster, but I certainly won't think less of Bella, or Carlie, for taking revenge on that hideous bastard, James! It was horrifying to read what he did to them, and thank you for not being anymore explicit than you were, by the way! Mostly thank God the guys found them when they did!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 Let the Chaos Commence
I was so hoping that Carlie was getting bvetter in her mind, shedding some of the guilt. The merry band of vampires, werewolves and witches was having a pretty good time before this meltdown. I'm still worried about the psycho vampire stalking the twins. It gives me the creeps when you write his thoughts, yuck!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 16 The Duel
Crap! I guess it really was too good to stay calm and happy in Forks. Now that Bella and Carlie are happy with their loves, and everyone is getting along pretty well, crazy James shows up with evil intentions on his mind! Boy, I hate him!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 15 Furploded?
Now that they have mated, there will be no parting Carlie and Jacob! I suppose it's inevitable that their lives will always be divergent to some extent, since their loves are mortal enemies! I hope Bella and Carlie get to Jake soon and find out what's wrong!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 14 Date Night
I was pretty sure the girls could defend themselves, but that display was spectacular! Then Jacob phases and scares Edward and Carlie faints! Quite the first date, I must say! Loved the description of Edward's room. Nothing is ever dull or boring around these two girls!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 It's Complicated
Bella better tell Carlie about Edward pretty soon, before her twin thinks of any more mischief to visit on him! I really like your Edward, he's so different from the original version! I also like that Carlie has Jacob and now Bella has her vampire! Good thing she wasn't hurt too much in that parking lot!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 7 HIM
I can see why Carlie is drawn to Jacob in the normal course of things, since they both lost their mothers. What I don't think either of them yet understands is the supernatural bond they share, he is, or will be a shape-shifter and she's a witch! Now, all that's left id Bella and Edward to get together!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 High School. Oh, Joy
Bella is just incredibly clumsy, and it even spills over onto Carlie at times! I feel sorry for Bella since she feels as if she is somehow at fault for Edward's apparent dislike of her! Carlie has immediately fallen for Jacob, it seems, and Bella sure has some kind of feelings for Edward Cullen. I can't wait for them to share there "otherness" with each other! Speaking of which, it's amazing the difference between the twins!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 Not so starcrossed after all?
Wow! So the girls have some powers besides the mindreading! Sounds like it came in handy after dinner, for doing the dishes and claening the house! Carlie is quite taken with Jacob Black and Bella loves the truck he worked on, so at least there are a couple things about Forks that they don't hate!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 Two Teenage Girls, one bathroom? Grab the Camcorder, I'm putting this on YouTube!
I will put money on Bella finding out what Carlie is trying to hide from her. That mindreading twin thing will be her downfall. Got to go, I think Bella is about to see her old red pickup, just as soon as Billy and Jacob quit laughing at the girl's clumsiness!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 3 No, You Did Not Just Do That
I see, Carlie thinks because she was lying to her mom about being injured and in the hospital, she somehow caused the accident that killed Phil and Renee! I guess logical thinking is not this girl's strong suit.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 Forks aka 7th Level of Hell
Typical girls, embarassed by Uncle Charlie's squad car! It's going to be a big adjustment for them, living with him and missing their parents. What in the world makes Carlie think she caused her parent's deaths?
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 42 The Fork in the Road
well it was sad that they had losses in the ranks but it was expected. so happy it wasn't more. so now we are headed off to uni! oh the trouble this group is gonna get into....! frat parties, drinking, coeds, the list goes on and on....!
thank you for writing! loved the story and how you brought these 4 different groups together and let them find love, understanding and family!
*4 groups being - wolf, vamp, witch, and human*
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 41 War Games
holy shit you did not just leave it like that!!!!!
well work is done so i can finally read for a while before the home life starts bitching. can't wait to see what you do for the grand finale. off to chapter 42 to see how our little band of misfits makes out. i hope the loses are not too bad....
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 40 What Things May Come
Holy fuck! And on with the show! This so sucks ass shut down season is kicking my ass and seriously fucking with my reading time! :( I am pissed it is taking me so long to read this and it is at the good opart*stomps foot* but at least it's friday
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 38 Graduation Jitters
Well it is almost time for the show down. I am glad to see the group is having one last horah! So cute that the boys planned the eloping. Still confudled as to jake getting away with being 18, it is hard to think of him as only 15, that's my kidlet's age! And she sure as fuck better not be doing this kinda shit! (Leave me be in my dillousions!)
Author's Response: I kind of ran with SM's description that the wolves looked to be between 18 and 20 something after their change hun...sorry if that was confusing
Date: 20 Jun 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 37 Progress Through Epic Failure
Wow seriously messed up story of how mish and allan came to be. But hey it fits with the fuckery that is this family. Love em's responce to allan being bi!
Author's Response: lol yeah, leave it to Emmett to say something utterly ridiculous
Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 36 Coups and Monsters
Wow I feel sorry for the new girl! Having carlie get all up in your shit has gotta be scary as hell. God I love carlie she is so much like me! Well except I don't cut and I haven't been kidnapped and raped, and I'm not a witch or a twin...guess I'm just an uber bitch with no real excuse for it! Heehee
Author's Response: Who needs to have an excuse to be a bitch? I sure as hell don't lmao
Date: 20 Jun 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 35 Something Wicked This Way Comes
So loved the last line it is just so true and definately speeks to the coming batle.
Author's Response: It might sound cocky to some, but to this dysfunctional family, it's just a testament to how far they will go for each other
Date: 20 Jun 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 34 Small Victories
All of that and all carlie wanted to do was tell her story, and be shown a little respect. Tanya is an idiot! And she damned well deserved what she got and should be greatfull she was allowed to leave alive! Family protects family!
Author's Response: yep :-)
Date: 20 Jun 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 33 WTF?!
Well that was a lot more tame than I thought it would be with having everyone drinking! I wonder. If the vamps will want more liquer on other special occasions? And as for the purposal well that was just too sweet!
Author's Response: lol I agree that it will only be used on special occasions
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 31 Moving Forward...Maybe
so what is charlie? i thought she healed him in time for the change to happen, so he really isn't a zombie vamp is he?
Author's Response: no, he completely healed, but his mind is overwhelmed and he is more than a little confused
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 30 Fighting Again?
so happy to see that carlie is almost back. getting her will back seems to have been the key. and getting seriously pissed seems to be the key to that.
the dildos on the car was just to funny!
Author's Response: lol I know!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 26 Carpediemquam minimum credulapostero or Seize the day and place no trust in tomorrow
well it sucks that carlie feels she needs to be separated from the family but she has to deal with all of the changes that have taken place. and i knew seth would imprint on micsha! look back in my reviews and you will see i called it!
Author's Response: you did call it! not many people believed I would put Seth with and "older" woman lol
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 25 More Changes
jake was very astute(?) in his explaination of what has happened to the twin bond, makes perfect snce.
wonder how long till we hear wedding bells?
and who is the strange man from the cemetary?
Author's Response: Jake was always smarter than I thought people gave him credit for
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Effing Hurts
but charlie isn't dead, you made it sound like he was changed. looks like the family dynamic has changed yet again and they all need to learn and adjust.
Author's Response: he was changed, but he's not happy about it
Date: 16 Jun 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 23 Vegas or Dust
well you certainly took us on an emotional rollercoaster with this one! we weent from hot and steamy in the shower, to laughing at em-on-a-stick (heehee), to sexy on the dance floor, to love and sweetness of the proposal to the excitement of the chase, to fear in the fight, to sadness at charlie's memories and death, to disbelief at carlie's fading out, and you left us floored by bella's change.
how long was carlie out for?
Author's Response: If I remember correctly, she was out a few days
Date: 15 Jun 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 21 Fallout
has carlisle diagnosed carlie or bella with anything yet? i mean in terms of mental issues? they should all be seeing someone to talk to about all that has happened, like a shrink. i know it would be hard to find the right one as the story of what happened would sound loony enough to send them all to the nuthouse. but there has to be someone they can talk to so they can all move past this.
Author's Response: eventually you find out that Carlie is bipolar, which is the source of her wild mood swings
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 19 Effing with Siege Engines
oh snap! you leave the humans alone for 10 minutes....
so cute that leah and allan imprinted but now misha is left out :( unless maybe seth will be her one? or maybe a new vamp or wolf? you can't leave her out of the love'n
Author's Response: yeah, humans always finding trouble lol and Mischa won't be left out for long
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 18 Let the Chaos Commence
wow that was some pretty heavy shit! you had me kinda lulled into a false sence of security with this little family and thoughts of mortal enemies and warring between wolves and vamps were kinda pushed to the side. of course carlie has it in the forefront, she is the emotional one.
but hey did you not have a chapter a few back where carlie and jake had spooning sex first thing in the morning? i am not sure, i'm at work reading offline so i can't check. but i am pretty sure it was jake's first day of school at forks high. in this chapter you say they have not had sex again since the first time when jake was rough and the spooning sex was not rough it was 'slow and sweet'
Author's Response: It's possible that I messed up the continuity somewhere, when I get a chance, I'll go back and read to make sure
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17 Playing House
yay bella and eddie have done the nasty! and boy it was an entire family affair! and not in the orgy kind of way, heehee. also very happy to see that the whole group seems to be meshing together so well. this is giant leaps in the right direction for vamp - wolf relations. lol! and b&e have decided to come out to the school and everyone else.
Author's Response: yeah, I wasn't into the whole prude thing in the original series, so I just took it and ran lol
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 15 Furploded?
well now they have fully bonded! *sigh* so sweet in a wild kinda way but would expect no less from these two.
and what kind of trouble has jake gotten into already?!?!?!?
Author's Response: Jake in trouble? surely you jest lol
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 14 Date Night
well we have a wolf! it was nice to see that eddie and jake made it through their first encounter with eachother without getting into a fight.
Author's Response: all for the sake of the girls, at first
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 16 The Duel
well aren't they all just a cute little mixed spieces family!
i gotta say i LOVED carlie when she was threatening sam! that shit was too funny, and i could totally see myself doing that!
now i wonder what james is up to..............
Author's Response: If Bella has no sense of self preservation, I wonder what one would say about Carlie lol
Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 It's Complicated
well like i said this is gonna make for some interesting nights, when they have a wolf in one room and a vamp in the other. the boys are gonna have to get their shit under control. no mortal enemies crap!
i like that eddie is a badass, smoking, swearing, etc.
Author's Response: the girls won't tolerate the whole mortal enemies crap...and I love this Edward too