Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:47 PM Title: I know you guys won't be pissed at me lmao
Love this story, what's Bella going to go on Jenny Craig, start Pilates, steal Edward and kick Rosalie's ass???? LOL Anyway my husband is currently in school for Medicine as well, so I know what you guys are going through. It takes special people to get into that field so thank you for the sacrifices you are making and I wish you the best of luck! I will be anxiously awaiting your updates! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:04 PM Title: I know you guys won't be pissed at me lmao
I'm curious? How close to the truth, of the hazings, is this?
Will you disclose Bella's weight or size at all?
I'm looking forward to your next update. Good luck with your classes.
Author's Response:
depends on which act of hazing i wrote about that you're asking me about. *smirks* yes it'll come up in future chapters alot. aww thank you so much. i'm trying to have this chapter out by maybe saturday or sunday. so you're wait won't be long. Thank you for your review sweers
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:40 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Quick review cause I want to get on to next chapter, does that say I like it and cant wait to read more? lol Awesome
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:53 AM Title: I know you guys won't be pissed at me lmao
Thanks for the update and putting my mind at ease I was worrying
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:50 AM Title: I know you guys won't be pissed at me lmao
Thanks, I'll wait patiently for the next post...
Author's Response:
aww thanks babes
Date: 04 Feb 2011 10:59 PM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
I like this chapter, makes me want to stick around and see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 10:18 AM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
I'm really not liking this chapter, you probably won't either <--- Damn Tygs! You're a little harsh there on yourself. I liked it!!! You can't write a bad chapter if you tried, you nut! Anyways, feels like I haven't talked to you in yrs. RL is keeping me busy!
Laters Tygs!
~Jells
Date: 31 Jan 2011 12:10 AM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
she seems pretty bad to me. Well Jazz, you've already fucked up your chance with B.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 11:30 AM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
I thought this was an eventful chapter. I'm up on this type of thing, but it was good to me.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 7:59 AM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
It was a good background chapter. I always hate it when Edward is with Rose that is just wrong LOL
Date: 30 Jan 2011 6:28 AM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
thats terrible people are so rude...so glad that greek isn't apart of my campus such a disgrace update soon
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 3:22 AM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
Rosalie is a bitch and I would like to yank her hair but I must admist this Bella I like, I'm glad that here she is a bit stronger and more resilient, I want her to see bigger than her and that she stood up for JAke says alot. I can see her going head to head against Rosalie and her minions and winning despite her insecurities. Jake sounds yummy and Jasper is a good guy that wants to do right. lol poor Jake didnt know to laugh or wince at his predicament. This makes me feel like my kids are going to community college. I may be biased but I love, I'm invested into this Bella and Im one of her homegirls fighting for her behind the scenes.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:48 AM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
oh gosh.. YES it was good.. as aways.. you are too hard on yourself. AND EDWARD!!!!! I am appauled at him.. for shame for shame. But Bella has some balls.
I just don't see how she is going to go from here to the prolog. What would make her want to belong to these people. I feel like going all Cambion on them.
BTW... do you know what the first dirty thing said on T.V was....
"Ward, weren't you a bit hard on the beaver last night?" hahahahahahaha..
I couldn't help it....
Thanks so much for the update. LOVE IT
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:30 AM Title: Somewhere I'm Placed
I have to admit I didn't really care for it either. Hope the wait isn't as long next time!
Author's Response:
I told my beta it felt like i was writing in a journal. i was passive the whole time lmao. I have no idea when i'm going to update, seeing as i have a neuro-science test week after next. gotta keep my head in the books. i'll see what i can do with next chapter
Date: 10 Jan 2011 7:03 PM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Bella's homelife totally sucks. She needs to get away from that crazy shit. Too bad she's being thrown into the cruel world of College and Sororities and Frats.
It sounds like Charlie and Renee both need some serious help.
Yay, we've met Jasper. I sure hope he turns out to be as good as he seems to be now. I loved how sweet he was in NSA so I've got my fingers crossed that he's just as good :)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 2:54 PM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Thats sucky. Every girl needs their own Jasper, Emmett, and/or Edward!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:44 PM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
I think I like Jasper and am glad that Bella is finally away from her parents.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 8:35 PM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Good to see Jasper on the scene... thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:19 PM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Great update! As much as what Renee did to her sucks, I'm glad she's free of her. And yea for Jasper being there! Glad to see she's already making friends.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:15 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
nice to see jaspers still a sweatheart :) is he still in the frat?wow what a bitch really glad my mom didn't do that to me....but its has happen to others and sometimes parents don't even show up update soon
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:06 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Loved the chapter! Gaaaahhhh@ Renee and Charlie! Poor Bella! I'm looking forward to more. Thanks for the update!
Keep rockin'!
~Jells
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:29 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
ok Who wants Renee to have a car accident and die on the way home <raises hand>
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:23 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
No wonder Bella has a weight problem her parents are a mess
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:14 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Renee is a real nut job - did Bella at least put the money away in savings account now that she is going away? Dorms are havens for theft and 36,000 is a chunk of change.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:40 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Massive love forthis so far. I thought the old one was good bu this is awesome:) and wait to see how this develops.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:25 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
wow her mom is a piece of work. good riddence to her
Author's Response:
she'll be in a out lol
Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:30 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
great chapter, reading about her dad unfortunately brings me back to my own wonderful childhood- my father proudly walking in with an electric hotplate so my mother could still cook because our gas was shut off- WTF?? Yes, I too can feel Bella's pain!
Author's Response:
i think we all may have went through that once or twice
Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:21 AM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
I like the way that you had her meet Jasper. I also think that this time around your story has a lot more to it. I enjoyed it the first time and now I am absolutely loving it so I hope you update again soon.
Author's Response:
i thought the same thing. Usually my chapter was no more that 1000 words, but i find myself writing more and more each chapter, 2000+ is something different for me i'm not use to writing so much, but i hope it came off really smooth to read
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:06 PM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Oh I love you.. this is so great...Hopefully, he will be a good friend to her...Seriously, this is going to be a HUGE story.. I love it already.
Thanks for the update...and Happy New Year's to you..
Author's Response:
I hope so, jasper will be a doll, but he won't be perfect *winks*
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:40 PM Title: Somewhere I rather be…
Well looks to me that Rene missed the maternal line for the bitch line. How horrid for Bella> No wonder the issues she has with herself. What an utter waste of parents though, she has had to have her own back from the get go because her parents are too wrapped in their own demons to be of any use to her. So cant wait to see where she evolves and I have to say sigh to Jasper. dreamy and a good friend.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:32 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
wow renee is quite the bitch ha? Like bella said, one more week.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:18 PM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
It amazes me how stupid people are about weight loss. Starving someone and making their stress level off the chart will not help them lose weight. Of course it seems like Renee could care less what keeps Bella from losing weight. To her it's all Bella's fault and she's nothing but an embarassment to this perfect family Renee is trying to portray. Bella and her situation breaks my heart.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:09 PM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
Such a sad home life. Poor Bella thinks things would be better if she wasn't heavy, but people like Renee will always find something to criticize.
Can't wait to see where your new direction will take this story. Looking forward to it.
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:33 PM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
My heart hurts for her. Your home should be you oe safety net against the cruety of the world. You right I want to slap the shit out of Rene. I have an anut just like and she is horrid to my cousin who has some of the same issues. Last Thanksgiving was a nightmare cuz my sister and I finally had enough and had our words with our aunt. Not to say we wont be back next Thanksgiving. well written and real. I could still feel that lump in my throut over how uncomfortable it is see someone being picked on.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:11 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
poor baby girl. i hate it when parents are so sick and just plain out mean. no wonder she wanted to join that sorority, she just wanted to fit somewhere and now she gets hazed and beaten up inside and out all over again.
great story, keep it up and please update soon. love it.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:51 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
wow this is very diff from the other story! I can't wait to see where this leds Bella! Both of these Chaps have made me cry! Poor Bella :( I hope when she meets Edward he is an amazing man in her life not a asshole!
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:31 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
This chapter was amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!! Damn Renee is an effin bitch! I feel for Bella! I loved it! This new version kicks ass.
I can't wait for more! F**kawesome job!
~Jells
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:17 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
Although my mother was not nearly as....uh....let's say "joan crawford" like, I was constantly reminded that no matter what I accomplished in life, my weight would hold me back from finding true happiness. So the comments about the grades and then right back to the weight really hit home for me. Hell even my "besties" say things like..."that fat bitch.....no offense!" But I am definitely liking the fact that your chapters are still full of drama. Im looking forward to Bella's "smartass mouth" coming back. That shit cracks me up! Looking forward to more!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:06 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
poor bella. Guess charlie has no balls.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:02 AM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Welcome Back!....um wow! So Im guessing that it is the same characters but with different experiences. Mainly where Bella is rushing, right? Looking forward to reading more! Great Job.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:51 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
I like it!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:47 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
Once again you've giving me shivers! This fix is sooooo good! Really emotional and twisted with the evilness that is bells bitch of a mom.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:04 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
Renee is a cunt yah you heard me cunt I hate her. I cant wait for more
Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:46 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
you first chapter sontinues to confuse me
Author's Response:
ok lets see if i can make some sense for you. last chapter was a prologue- a taste or teas of events that will occur in the future settings of a book or short story.
this chapter is the first. Nothing to be confused about. It's high-light Bella's home life before she heads to college. if you've read the las version of NSA, then wipe it from your memory. This is a whole new plot. If there are things you are still conFUSED abotu just message me on facebook thaigher lillie or @ me on twitter @ karebear8706. *smiles
Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:12 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
boy is she fucked up or what? renee not bella...poor bella. at least my mom never did any of that. she'd just tell me to workout. fuck.....great stuff bb!!!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:10 AM Title: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
Oh this is so great. It hurt so bad when I think about what is...maybe... going to happen to her anyway when she gets to college. I think it even makes me more emotional. This is wonderful... and I am so freaking glad you are doing this.
Great Job
Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:50 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
I'm not upset that you are starting over. I loved Not So Average so I'm excited to see how this is different from that one.
That was a shocking prologue. I'm anxious to see what leads Bella to rushing and putting up with that shit.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 3:42 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Really wondering what brought them all to this point, and just how badly Bella was injured even before that final blow. I hope you update soon. I really want to know how this rewrite goes.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 3:20 AM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
I am so proud of you.. this was wonderful..(Scary as shit) but wonderful non the less. I am going to love this story just as much as the first...I can already tell. It already gives more insight into their characters.
I got your back.. and if you are reading this review.. you need to go read her other stories... they are freaking awesome. *** CAMBION ***...
Great job, and I will fan girl you any time.
Love ya.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 3:12 AM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Interesting switch...Really sad you ended the other story though...I didn't think it was a mess at all
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:54 AM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Oh snap! I HATE Rosalie. Okay, so I figured out what you are doing now because I am a complete spaz. So, looking forward to updates on your new and improved story :) Which, by the way...I did not find any problems with the first. I thought it was gritty and one hell of an emotional rollercoaster ride :)
PS I thought chapters 1-15 were already re-written. See? I'm freaking slow as hell. That's what you get when you talk with a souther girl. LOL
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:01 AM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
This was so goood! I love the new start! And ugh! Rose is a royal bitch with a capital B! I'm looking forward to more so write, write, effin WRITE! like NOW! lmao
~Jells
Date: 14 Dec 2010 11:41 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
okay so this was a good start and yes i like it a lot more than the first. update soon please.
I am hating on Rose right now and want to know more what is happening to Bella and where are the others...Alice, Jasper, Emmett and of course Edward?
Date: 14 Dec 2010 11:33 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
I don't like this chapter!!!! Nah, not really I just don't like that it was short and ended there!!! Update quickly please? I really liked the other version, but I can understand changing things up if you were having trouble with the plot line. Although I am still sadden by it :( So do you have the other chapters already written and holding them hostage for reviews? lol Ok, seriously this chapter was a little angsty but this does explain a little of the relationship with Bella & Rosalie.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 10:56 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
the new story is awesome, but the old one was awesome too =)
please hurry :D
xoxo Alica
Date: 14 Dec 2010 10:55 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
I loved NSA and I'm kind of sad it's going, but I have complete faith in what you are choosing to put out. I have put NSA on my Twitter's Fic Pimp List and I have included a link to the re-write on FF.N. Hopefully you will gain a bigger fan base from that because this really is a great story.
~Ash
Date: 14 Dec 2010 10:48 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Interesting draw. Can't wait to see how its changed.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2010 9:21 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
oh god Bella, poor girl. Girl like Rosaliea are a dime a dozen. What a bitch. Oh yeah you made Lauren good this time. Lauren always plays the mean girl, she needs a a bit of slack this go. Love so far. going to switch to the original works and than I can have a better referenece to go by. Did I tell you that I am impressed with your works of art. really call me Dory. cuz your hooks always catch me. lmao,
Author's Response:
I'm really happy you like it. I got tired of Lauren always being the bitch. It's not old, but i like a little OOC in a fic. To be honest, it's not alot of fics out there with Rosalie being a bitch ot her full potential. I had the hazing in NSA, but this time it'll be more connected towards bells in a manner of speaking. I hope you like the next chapter.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 8:56 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Shivers, you gave me shivers. Really hard hitting stuff no pun intended lol I can't wait for the chapters. If this is just a piece I can't wait for what's to come.
Author's Response:
lmao PUN was intended lmao! i'll post again. i have the second chapter ready i just want at least 13 reviews this chapter before i post
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:51 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
I'm curious where will you go with this. Can't waiit for the next update.
Author's Response:
The next update you shall get!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:26 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Wow this sounds desterbing I cant wait for more to find out what happens
Author's Response:
i can't wait to write it! thank you for reviewing
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:25 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Willing to try it out.
Author's Response:
thank u! i'll post soon second chapter is a little heavy
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:19 PM Title: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
Interesting
Author's Response:
thank youse! hope it keeps you intrested.