Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
wow the baby making machine! im glad they got their happy ending!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awww that was seriously lovely and I have enjoyed your story so much.
A happy New Years to you and yours.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
awww everything worked out in the end and their getting married now! in the epi will you have millie living with edward?will edward and bella have any kids togther??please yes to both of these :) update soon
Date: 31 Dec 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Beautifully done... lovely.
I can't wait to see how the HEA works out.
Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
This is just so incredibly sweeeeeeetttt! Perfect fic for the holidays!
Thank you!
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
:D Happy, Happy, HAPPY!!!! I wish Edward would have gotten custody of Millie...maybe later....
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awww... that was just so sweet This story was super short, but I loved the heck out of it! Looking forward to your future work! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
They are where they are to be all but Millie. Leah is a bitch she doesnt want Millie but she doesnt want Edward to have her either Please let them get custody. I am sad that there is only one more chapter I have enjoyed this story very much thank you.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awesome, plain awesome!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
It was an incredible year, which started with a crash in a snowstorm. I think they are grateful for the storm ;)
Things are looking really great for both of them. They have been able to settle into a nice routine and life. Bella's career is rocketing, and as she said, her kids future are secure, and that's amazing. There's only one thing missing, Millie's constant presence. Hopefully there will be something that can be done...
It has been an amazing Christmas story, thanks for sharing it with us!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
This is a wonderful Christmas Fic:) I am sad to see it end...
Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Happy ending. :-)
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Beautiful! I'm just so glad that you are an HEA author! Can't wait for the Epi !!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awwwwwww........the restorative nature of the holiday season! That's why it's fiction....let's our hearts dream & hope that maybe one day fiction could become reality!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great job. Mr Jenks needs to do some detective work and get Millie with them full time.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
well im happy they are getting their happy ending ! but it would be better if he got millie out of it too!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
So sad to see this end
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awww... that was so sweet! I´m gonna be sad to let them go! Great chapter and I´ve really enjoyed the story!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 30 Dec 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was nice that Jake finely pulled his head out of his ass for his kids. Bella and Edward brought the new year in the right way Lemony goodness lol.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was beautiful in every aspect. School is important so for Bella to allow Braxton to finish school first is so motherly; thinking of your kids first!
I'm sure you've got lots of goodies for us in the chapters to come! Cannot wait!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
yummy chapter....and sad too.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
Can she really stick it out till the end of the school year? I think not.
Will Edward be out househunting sooner rather than later? Hmmmmmmm
Date: 30 Dec 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
So much emotion in this. I love how he "appreciated" her motherhood scars as "sacrafices". A friend of mine says they are kind of like "war wounds". Espcially for those who almost lost their lives in labor or carrying their kids. (Please not to offend any veterans or people in miliarty..totally metaphorical for mothers). Anyway awesome as usual. * And I love the part about cleaning your house when u just found out about a party...totally relate!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
BEAUTIFUL!! It was about time they had some alone lemon time. And about time Bella realized her home had moved on her due to love. Really enjoy reading this story with every update.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh damn, where are my tissues! *sniff* that was beautiful and so emotional.....I hope you have a wonderful New Year!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! I know there are only a couple of chapters left, but I am going to really miss these guys when you are done.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loving the story. Can't wait until the next chapter is up!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work:)
Date: 30 Dec 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
well i have a feeling that shell be back sooner than later
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awe so sweet. I am sad its coming to an end.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
AAgggg you made me cry!!!!! thank you so much for it, really :). It was such an emotional good-bye. All of them are feeling so sad at the moment, but also filled with hope.
As romantic and amazing as Bella moving right back sounds, she is realistic and sees things as they have to be, even if they aren't what she would like. They need this time apart as much as they need time together. Moving is a huge step, for all of them, something they need to prepare for. Also, we can't forget Millie, she has to go back to her mother. I do hope there's a way for her to be closer to them too. Jacob redeemed himself, can Leah do the same?
The tickets were an amazing gesture, and a sure way for Edward to make sure they will come and visit a lot.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm Getting Leah to give up Millie will be a problem though.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is one of the best stories that I've read. Nice and homsome.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Jake actually thought he could get her back....what an arsehole
Glad Eddie is ok
Date: 29 Dec 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
ugh. She should have covertly taken pictures of the disaster area of His house. they are such immature people who should nOT have had any other kids.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm yeah the Mom is not always what's best.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting spelling of Amileah
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
LIked her checklist ramble. Story looks to be interesting.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Even with the minimal misstakes, it was BEAUTIFUL!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
:D it's gonna be a lot of work, but since everyone seems to be on board and postive about it, it should go smoothly
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Greatr chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
i am glad that jake a realized what he gave up when he left bella and the kids. i am really glad how this story is turning out - will wait for next update :)
Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good to see Jake relize that he screwed up the best thing he ever had. Love Esme getting in on it. The kids are ready for a wedding now LOL.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!! Cannot wait for more!! So yummy!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was so sweet. Its about time Jake stopped acting like a jerk. I am really routing for Bella and Edward's relationship. I cannot wait for the day that they are all together. :-)
Date: 29 Dec 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
the kids are so insonent with this whole thing! keep the chapters comming
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Happy that Jake finally woke up and realized what a jerk he was being. Even happier when she said she would never go back to him. How long before he leaves Nessie and the baby?
The writing drought is over for Bella now that she has found love and happiness again. She does realize that she can write anywhere.....right? I feel a move coming!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
It was so sweet to see both Bella and Edward worry and feel disappointed neither one was "ready". I have to agree, as wonderful as things are looking, it wouldn't be right if someone else was to come into the picture just right now, even after Bella's dream. Thankfully Edward took matters into his own hands and got what is needed, just in case.
Jake is doing better, it was nice for Bella to see that guy show up for the kids. They deserve him, and shouldn't miss on that. Sadly he isn't around much, the other part of his life, seems to make this guy hide. Bella loved him, she cares for him and likes the idea of him being there for the kids, just that; who would have guessed she would need to reassure Edward just now. Although, it's better if it is out right from the start, so there won't be confusion later on, especially with the situation they will find themselves in.
Esme's move was... something I didn't expect from her, but have to be glad she did. If Bella and Edward are going to give this a try, it has to be clear for everyone, Jake and Leah included. The children took it much better than anticipated I guess and that was great.
It won't be easy, but the will find a way to make it work. Bella's work can move, especially if she has to follow inspiration. ;)
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
AWWW! I loved how Jacob got what was coming to him by catching them. I am loving your holiday story. So excited to see their HEA. I am hoping the wedding ring and "baby bump" from the end of the last chapter make it to the HEA! Amazing job and I am impressed you wrote over the holiday...as a mom I know how exhausting it is! KUDOS!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ah the kids give me heartfail. So sweet!
Date: 28 Dec 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
i am really enjoying your story can't wait until the next update. i hope it does go longer then your 10 chapters - love your characters. hope you had a merry christmas :)
Date: 28 Dec 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor millie - no wonder she is so mature for her age - she has to be......sad
Date: 28 Dec 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
poor bella - jake is such a dick.........enjoying your story - onto the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Very emotional, but a great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
This was a bit of an angsty chapter. All and all it ended on a wonderful note. I´m loving the dream Bella had at the end. I´ll be on pins and needles waiting for the next update! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yippie! Perfect dates, first kisses, and promises to give it a try; could this chapter get more perfect? I hope they´re able to be together and get rid of all the deadbeat Exes and have real families for their children! Keeping my fingers crossed! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Dec 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I fall in love with this story everytime I get an update. This is a beautiful story. Thank you for so many updates before Christmas and I look forward to reading the rest after the holidays. Enjoy your time with family and friends.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
omg! YAY! it takes a crisis for her and him to admit that they love one another :) so sweet and then you have jake man up an admit that he's been a tool so great update soon
Date: 24 Dec 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
You gotta love them. I know I do!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
GREATNESS!!
This sucks b/c I leave on Sunday to go out of town for 4 days and sometimes I get service on my phone and sometimes I don't so who knows if I'll get to read while I'm gone. UGH!!
If I do get to read, I can't review. I don't have an IPhone, yet. So, I'll review when I get back on Thursday or Friday.
Have a very Merry Christmas!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
That is what love a t first sight is. Jake what a peice of work he is a selfish prick. I am so happy Edward made it back ok and that they are together. Have a wonderful Christmas and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Sometimes we need something huge and scary to realize we are doing something wrong. Edward having to go on that search party made Bella realize that if something was to happen to him, she would feel terrible. She wasn't brave enough before, to say what she wanted to deny, she has strong feelings for Edward. Who would have imagined it would be his mother and her ex-husband the ones to help her see.
It was a tense day, so many things going around her head and life. Thankfully everything is turning out fine, better than fine. Lets hope it remains the same way.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Whoa... I really hate Jake and Nessie! I had a step-mom just like her, she didn´t try to hide the fact that she didn´t want me around. Why did they invite them over or why did he seek visitation if the kids were only going to suffer? I´m so glad that they´re with the Cullen´s now, they can experience what it´s like to have a real family Christmas. Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is really a great story. I´m really enjoying this Edward and Bella. I hope their kids get to meet. Jacob and Leah are real douche bags! I´m so loving Little Ms. Millie, she´s going to get E&B together, I just know it! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awwwwwww.......so sweet!! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Aww so sweet, loved it!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's official ... I love this story. I look forward to more.
Merry Christmas!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Really nice chapter. Am really enjoying this story! Loved how Bella put Jake in his place and to see him come crawling/groveling back----PRICELESS.
Have a Merry Christmas, and happy New Year. Stay safe.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
i'm glad she went off on jake
Date: 24 Dec 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
im glad shes giving it a try!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
When she dreams she dreams big!!!!!
Thanks again for such a beautiful holiday story of love and kindness.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
i sure hope that's a premonition...:) yay! they're gonna give it a try! Happy holidays!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
I loved this chapter. I loved the fact that Bella yelled at Jacob. That Jacob finally realized what he lost when he left Bella. That Bella finally admitted to herself that she was in love with Edward and that he got home safe. Oh, and that doesn't even begin to describe the happy feelings I got when she described her dreams that night. Love it!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oooh...love Rangerward! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 23 Dec 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really hope they can work everything out so that their can continue to have a relationship.
I loved the chapter and I'm really enjoying your story.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ooooo... a little more hidden drama! Can´t wait to find out what´s the deal with Edward and Leah. I´m loving little Miss Millie already! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it so far, can´t wait to see what lies ahead for these two! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 23 Dec 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow swoon AAAHHHHH that was sweet.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love this so much!! I know Bella is scared but I also love how Edward reassures her & isn't afraid to divulge his fears & feelings. Bella's honesty is also fresh!
Great, great chapter! Lots of sweet & sexy!!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh good for them that edward spoke his mind! looking 4ward to more! =)
Date: 23 Dec 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward has fallen hard for Bella. So much he is willing to convince her to try and give them a chance. He is aware of what that would require. He is also aware of what She is being going through. As hesitant as Bella might be, she wants this. She feels something for Edward and is willing to give it a try, enough to change her plans.
They have a bit more time... I hope they get the best out of it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
aawesome chapter
Why doesn't Bella and the kids move to Everwood
love it
Date: 23 Dec 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sad. Bella has to go soon. :(
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
AWESOME! hope the happiness surrounding them continues but i know there will be Jacob visiting the kids & i'm anxious to know what will happen when he comes around.
Date: 23 Dec 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am so glad she unknowingly admitted her "already falling for him" moment. THis will definately be a beautiful relationship once they find their stride.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Excellent, I hope it all goes well with them. They truly deserve it.
Date: 23 Dec 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter again! I am loving this Christmas story!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
So sweet, loved it!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
well i hope for her sake jake dosent make an effort to see the kids! keep th echapters comming
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
aw great chapter, i really hope they talk to the courts and stuff with all that's happened this holiday so bella can get away with not dealing with jake anymore - it seems almost cruel leaving the kids with a dad who really seems like he could care less. great chapter though :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome chapter
more more more
Date: 21 Dec 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
That was a wonderful chapter.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad Edward and Bella were able to share their stories w/ each other. Both of their exes are absolutely awful.
I loved the chapter and look forward to more.