[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
I guess Bella will face another sleepless night with those questions running in her head. It's a lot to think about, and not something she can simply ignore. She has been hurt and today she heard and saw her kids unhappy, that has to pile up to the idea she has about men and letting someone in to her heart again. But Edward has been amazing, on Christmas day, he dropped everything to take her, to accompany and assist her in any way he could. His daughter has been wonderful and has attached to her, just as his parents. How could she turn away from that? How can she let herself go if it's going to be just for a few days? And the kids? There are three little people who can't be left out. They have been by others before.
What will happen???? This is getting more interesting each chapter. :)
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
i hope conflict happen with nessie and jake soon and that jake doesnt get to see his kids any more and bella calls her a hoe
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Millie seems absolutely wonderful and it's so nice to see that Edward seems to be such a loving, attentive father.
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yes, yes, yes! Worth the risk!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Most defenetly worth the risk just go with it Bella. lol Jake is a dick and he is getting what he deserves. Are we going to hear any of Edward POV???
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really loving this and your writing is particularly beautiful here - what a lovely Christmas gem! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
i'm so glad she got those kids outta there. she's gonna push him away tomorrow, isn't she....:(
Date: 21 Dec 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bella has really been put through the ringer this past year. I'm glad her year seems to be picking up a bit with the kindness of a stranger. I think this will be very interesting.
Great Chapter
Date: 21 Dec 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
they finally kissed and her kids are back with her now yay update soon
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loving this story and the progression is wonderful. Keep up the great writing.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
well i hope she takes a chance!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all!
Yes, worth the risk!
Loved it! Jake gets what he deserves & I always believe that things happen for a reason & will work out if its meant to be.
I think Jake does love his kids but is overwhelmed & Nessie is just spoiled!
Good one...looking forward to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
This stories potential is amazing. I am looking forward to see how you merge these two lives together.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
omg! I can only say awww (heart melting..I tell you) update soon
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Everwood sounds so beautiful....(i wanna go there ;) i can't believe Jacob treats his kids like that, why bother taking them if you're gonna ignore them???
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my, love is in the air even if they don't realize it yet! I am so loving this story. They have each suffered so much in their first marriages that they deserve a loving and kind relationship now. Can't wait for the kids to meet each other!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
what a bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she devil! i hope she gets hers! and bella gets edward
Date: 20 Dec 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, I do love Sweetward! He such a...sweety!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope that b and E getting together isn't going to be some long, drawn-out process. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
More, more, more!!!!! Please.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm LOVING this!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Both of them have sad stories and broken hearts. Now both face life way differently than they ever imagined. What would seem to be a sad lonely Christmas is turning out to be better than either hoped or expected. Yes, Bella is missing her kids a lot, and sadly knows they aren't having a good time, but there's nothing she can do about it.
Lets hope Christmas day goes fine for everyone, in the b&b and other places.
I am liking this story a lot.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Millie is amazing!!! such a sweet girl, who loves her father and seems to be very smart. So smart she sees things a girl her age usually doesn't. Her time with her mother seems to be spent with other people and not her, while with her dad, it seems to be a different story. Bella's kids have a similar situation, Bella being the attentive one.
Bella won't be spending Christmas alone, Millie is making sure of that. I have to agree with her and her grandmother. We'll see how things go at the festival later.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like a wonderful town one right out of its a wonderful life one of my fav christmas movies. Leah and Jake are like to peas in a pod. Edward is into Bella. I love that he is a fan of her work. I cant wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent story!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
hope somehow edward can get more custody and time with millie, really sucks that he can't just take all that to a judge and show he'd be the more loving parent for her and she should stay with him. and hope nessie leaves jake, he'd totally deserve it haha =P or maybe they should stay together and be miserable can't decide which would be better
Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not the best time of the year for Bella, a crapy ending to a crapy year. She was alone trying to figure how to put her life back in order, when a deer and snow made things look even worse than they had before. But there was hope, she just hadn't seen his jeep come by and rescue her. Not only is the guy hot, he offered amazing cinnamon rolls!!!! that's heaven for Bella and for me!!!!!
The week seemed to be awful, but this morning it's looking much, much better.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
i really do and am enjoying this story, looking forward to tomorrows update
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
What a fuckin nightmare for Edward! And Jake is an even gianter douchebag! I think you may have taken some of my personal life and put into your story...because hearing my munchkins when they are talking about their daddy and his scuzzbucket Jizzdumpster it makes me a lil tense....Merry freakin Christmas! :)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, I am officially adopting Millie! Gotta go get the paperwork! My kids won't mind.....I'll just spring it on em.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
well i hope that she kicks jake in the nuts! keeep the chapters comming
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh Im in love with Rangerward already!
IHATEJAKE! GOD men are cocksucking dickheads....oh wait this isn't about my ex....sorry. *blushes*
Author's Response:
ROFL!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
A wwwwwwww.......again, Edward doesn't disappoint!
Great chapter & I loved the way they told their story!
Thank you oodles for the daily updates! This story is heartwarming!
Some itty bitty errors like Bella enjoying lunch & then in the next sentence, after she finished breakfast she took a nap & then a couple mix ups on him & hers. No worries, I figured it out. Didnt realize Bailey was a girl; thought you said her boys in the beginning but again, doesn't matter; love the story!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
awesome chapter
more more more
Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I love this story already! I love doting dad Edward. Definitely need a man like that for my kids :)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story so far! I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Snif...good chapter
Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward and Millie are so cute.....
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
The little girl is already feeling Bella I bet Edward is to. Cant wait for more
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Please please tell me that we have ahead us a week of smut and that jerk Jake getting castrated??? Please????
I loved it!!
xoxo
Marianne
PS: Bloody Hell Millie is the epitome of irresistable... I am not even sure anyone can actually deny her something!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Really cute so far! : )
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Figured Millie's mom was either Angela or a Quilleute. Great non canon! Gale it wasn't Tanya, Kate, Jessica or Lauren.
I loved Millie's full name.
Great chapter.....thank you for the Christmas cheer!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Little Millie may be the perfect matchmaker for E & B! Love the story!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella - her life really sucked until Edward entered it! :)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
What beautiful introduction to the Cullen family... I can't wait for the back story on Millie.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
i already like edward and his daughter! keep the chapters comming
Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm I'd like to go to a candlelight service with Rangerward!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Millie is too sweet, i was tearing up from her words.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds awesome from the beggining I love it !!! Can't wait for next chap.. Good job
Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! This is just the type of Christmas story I was looking for, and I'm excited to read the rest. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome chapter I'm totally hooked already and am sooo looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait to see how Office McHotstuff changes her life!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the beginning and you now have my attention wondering how everything else will fall into place. Keep up the great writing and enjoy the holidays.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
OK... I'm hooked. I hope to see more soon!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
This looks like a really good story! Am looking forward to the updates. Hope once you finish this, you will be able to continue MOB...I was/am hooked on that story!
Keep these chapters coming---can't wait to find out how it all works out!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely story. Looking forward to the next update. Thank you for the christmas treat :)
Date: 18 Dec 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good so far! I think that Esmme should be a huge fan of Bella and her books. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another winner I cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow that checklist sucked majorly, poor bella. but hey getting away from jake and meeting edward? psh so great :) really like the story so far, excited to see where you go with it. any idea's on how you plan to update it or anything like that?
Author's Response:
I have six chapters ready to go that will update daily till Christmas. If all goes according ot plan the rest will post between Chrsitmas and New Year's
Date: 18 Dec 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a fun story! Can't wait to read more about Bella and Rangerward!
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good! Those cineEsme's sound heavenly and we all know how sweet Edward is!
Great start and I can't wait to read more! It's so nice that you'll be posting so quickly....a nice little sweet during the holiday mayhem!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aw, poor Bella! Jake is such a douche - I don't understand how any father could treat his kids like that, let alone his wife!
ParkRangerWard seems to be such a gentleman...Bella totally deserves sometime to take care of her for once in her life!
I love reading Christmas stories this time of year - thanks for writing one! It's off to a great start!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait to read more. Bella's thoughts on Jacob & Nessie are hilarious.