[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
you are officially on my favorite authors list where do you get these amazing ideas from... keep up the amazing work
xoxox
evcullengirl
Date: 24 Jan 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was intense. Very interesting.
Date: 19 Jan 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sister Wives meets A Handmaid's Tale. Interesting.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
I miss this story ever so much, are you going to write more???
Date: 01 Jun 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Are you gonna finish this story? I love this story so far, I wouldreally like to see how this one ends. Please....
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
J aimerais bien lire la suite de vos histoires... peut-etre un jour....
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow! c'est aussi bon de relire!
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
Very unorthodox story but yet intriguing.
Date: 09 Oct 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well I'm am glad that Tayna is dead and James will be well on his way after their reign of terror on the town. What the hell has Carlise been dosing the women in town with and what was James doing to counter act it, and why was Bella not affected? I can't wait to see what's coming next!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
great job. Skankya got off easy. Hope James pays for both of them.
Guess Bella forgives him some?
Date: 08 Oct 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for updating I have been missing you. Congraualtions on your books. I am so thankful that Tanya is dead I wish James would of died to but cant have everything lol. I love that they are reconecting and showing each other that they love each other.
Date: 08 Oct 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
glad that everyone is alright
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was intense. I wonder what Jacob and Quil did to James?
Date: 08 Oct 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
I thought you would never post again. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Of course we want you to continue, I love your stories! You are one of the few authors that I drop everything for when I see an update. Everything your write is an instant favorite of mine. Mwuaaaaaaah - Fangs :)
Date: 07 Oct 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
I have missed this story. Keep up the awesome work. Congrats on getting ur original stories out there.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ahhh, when is the next chapter coming???
Date: 12 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just discovered this fic and I was immediatly hooked! Looking forward to future updates. Keep it going! :)
Date: 16 May 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, James is a crazy man. Is Maxine dead? Where is James' other wife?
Date: 16 May 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Kinky. That's what I'm thinking. Ha!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
this story is amazing.. I 've no words.. We all no preg can screww with women heads. The most loving person can be a bitch. the sad thing is sometimes they don't come out of it. Now for Carlisle if he dies it would be sad.. but he caused most of the agust. and what he did to Bella was unforgivable. I can't wait to see what happens.. :)Leona
Date: 02 May 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great plot- thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it very much and I am so excited to see what will happen next thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can....
Date: 01 May 2011 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
good story, can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 01 May 2011 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
nice cliffie...lol....dont keep us waiting too long ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
James and Tanya, what a waste of air. I hate them both, I hope that shoot their eyes out.
Date: 01 May 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
omg i hope that they all make it out and then they both die for their actions! keep the updates comming
Date: 01 May 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
okay carlisle is an ass!! so everyone is dead?
Date: 01 May 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
This all is a very big and twisted mess. A mess Carlisle is partly responsible for. Jasper and Edward pose a very important question, why do they need fertility drugs? What's going on there?
Bella and Edward left everyone behind, including Maxine. Bella isn't too happy about it, but understands it's for the baby and it's what Maxine asked of them. With luck, all will be settled.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
*Pouts* You know, when I update my stories, I post them at BOTH sites within hours of each other... *Smiles Sweetly*
Date: 30 Apr 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
You are definitely keeping it suspenseful!!! LOL!!
Keye
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my gosh! How exciting. I hope it all ends well. I won't be able to function if anything happens to Edward. He's finally got a chance at happiness and I also hope Maxine is ok. To hell with James and Tanya and I'm even a little pissed at big Daddy C but I still don't want anything to happen to him...
I am so addicted to your stories... I'm in the middle of "Be My Sub" too and can't wait for that next update!
Muah ~ Tracy (or Fangs... LOL... I switch idenities often, mwuahahaha)
Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
great update !!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Showdown at the OK Corral. Hopefully they get the two scum balls. I almost want them to live to get worse punishments at the hands of the community.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
OMG James and Tanya better die and no one else gets hurt. what are they doing messing with the baby making?????
Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ok I think it's time to kill off the 1st & 2nd wives.....LOL
Thanks :)
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bring on the next chapter soon please. great story
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
*mutters something like, "damn evil cliffie"*
Well now I am super curious as to how James counteracted Carlisle's fertility drugs. Very interesting. And wouldn't heating the drugs do harm to them? IDK
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Date: 29 Apr 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope nothing happens to Maxine.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
YOU CANT DO THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
What a cliff hanger!!! What happened? can't wait to read the enxt chapter.
Date: 21 Apr 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
To say things are crazy at the moment, would be an understatement. Every plan any one had is going out the window. Carlisle's attempts to control everything, Edward's looking for Bella's forgiveness, James and Tanya's preventing pregnancies. It's all a big mess. Bella's condition is now known by everyone in the house, not that it can help of much at the moment.
Where are Bella and Edward? Hiding, running, or looking for a way to help the family?
Date: 21 Apr 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for the chapter! Even though J & T are clearly deranged and deserve the most anger, I am equally mad at Carlisle. He's an ass! And I'm glad Bella is giving Edward the cold shoulder after the way he treated her!!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
where is Edward and why does not help....such a cliffy...update soon
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Carlsisle has a lot to make up for.
Hope james dies soon
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Too late. I do hate you.. lol. I hate cliffeys. On the egde of my seat waiting for a update. Great chap!
E/k
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
its a nice chapter but please do right soon u know u wrote this chapter after A LONG TIME
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
LOL... You are sooO mean! Hehehe... GREAT chapter hopefully the next update will come quickly so you can put us out of our misery!
Muah ~ Tracy
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
well i kinda hope that edward turned around and is able to shoot the both of them! im excited to see waht ahppens next chapter and i hope will all this stress from everything bella dosent loose the baby!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Carlise deserves to be shot in back of the head, everyone else should be let go thou. Thanks for the update !!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Holy Shit!!! I hope that Edward sneaks up and shoots Tanya and James. Carlisle seems to have a lot of secrets from his family.
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
write more and fast!:)
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm sorry but I feel like I've read this before...did you re-write it?
Author's Response:
no but if you read on FFN its one ahead, i discovered i missed updating this last time. so i have another chapter to up load this week. So sorry! i dont know how i missed putting it up here too
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMFG James and Tanya are out of there minds they cant kill them. Bella gona have a baby no wonder she has been the why she has been. I cant wait to find out what happens next
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
B could be pregnant with 3 or 4 kids if she was taking the fertility treapment and not eating the meat that the counter drug It could be very harmful she might not be able to carry so many and the more kids the better chance they have of one or more have some sort of disability Thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can see you next time....
Date: 12 Apr 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Amazing lemons, original plot, excellent character give a better story ! You sure know how to write a good story ! Please let me know soon if Bella is pregnant and why there is this sterility problem !!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! next chapter is in the works. i will try to get it done very soon!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
i think i would have to leave Edward one more time... just to see how good that punishment was.
Date: 08 Mar 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
So Carlisle did not do that on purpose? Make Bella feel unwanted? Because, if he truly didn't, then way did Edward have to punish Bella not once but twice??
Keye
Date: 08 Mar 2011 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
ok can i just say that carlisle is a complete ass. Did he not tell Bella about being the 3rd wife on purpose to start shit?
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
REALLY INTERESTING
I ADORED THE CHAPTER
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
:( carlise is a class a asshole, he should be whipped,
Date: 07 Mar 2011 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
So, is there a line to stand in to beat the shit out of Daddy C? What an ass! As a mature mother of 42 (who is addicted to Twilight *snorts*) I hate when my parents or in-laws get in my business b/c they KNOW better than I do about my husband or my children! Again, he is such an ass – hopefully E righted things!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow she is so young what was she to think poor girl but I would be willing to bet she never leaves again but she may ask him to do her in the butt again I think she liked it LOL
Date: 07 Mar 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
He needs to go deck carlisle again for not talking to her again when he said he would. Carlisle's causing an awful lot of trouble for Bella.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
How is it fair that Bella was punished because of Carlisle's lies and lack of compassion? And the punishment? Sodomy...WTF? That is just cruel and unusual punishment. Edward did not have to do it!!!!!! He could have faked it. Their was noone else in the room. He is just as bad as Carlisle.
SHE DID NOT DESERVE TO BE PUNISHED THAT WAY!!!! I HAVE HAD THAT HAPPEN TO ME WITHOUT MY PERMISSION, AND I WOULD NOT EVEN WISH THAT ON MY WORST ENEMY!!!!!
I am so pissed at Edward and the entire Cullen clan except Maxine. She did nothing wrong. Everyone else in the family deserve to be punished for their lack of concern for Bella. An apology after being SODOMIZED is NOT good enough!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
hmmm...the vomitting....is this foreshadowing? is someone pregnant? guess i will have to read to find out
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
well i hope that they realize that the did kind of push her away since it affected her too! i cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
The more I get to know Carlisle the more I think he was the one who should have been shot. He was the one who picked Tanya for Edward in the first place and is so fricken controling. Anyhow..the story is interesting, but I really dislike the whole lifestyle and can't really see any merit in it. It no wonder they end up with James' and Tanyas'...
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awww... poor Bella. And what the HELL is up with Carlisle. He was a total DICK in this chapter. I'm bummed man. LOL. I loved that Edward and Bella were able to 'come' together in understanding (ha! pun totally intended). hehehe. Just between us girls... I'm a thinking Bells is preggo and now just upset over feeling unwanted... u think??? LOL
XoxoxoxoX ~ Fangs
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
A lack of explanation can cause so much trouble. Carlisle is worried with his work true and he is the head of the family, but he isn't part of Edward's life so he should have listened to him. Bella felt so much rejection, it had to hurt and she went to the only available bed in the house she could think that would go with her mood. It's amazing no one thought about her going in there and that no one checked, I would think they weren't so thorough with their search.
Even if it wasn't all of Bella's fault she had to be punished for her actions, if she had been told a bit more, she would have understood things better. Then the reclamation of a wife... that is I guess meant to make her feel less? Edward wasn't too keen on having to do it though.
Why is Bella so sick? Her feelings or is there something more?
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Not my favorite chapter but I liked it thanks for sharing this with us.....
Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
I will admit Bella having to share Edward with anyone thru me off at first, but i have grown attached to your story. Wondering where it will lead. It woudl be great if Edward and Bella conceived !!!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hope that they catch James and Tanya soon. Their killing spree is devastating to say the least. Can't wait for the next update.
Keye
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
So very happy that Maxine didn't die. Kinda curious about the no babies being born.
I'm looking forward to next update :)
Date: 27 Feb 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
James and Tanya lost their minds. Their actions can't be explained any other way.
Edward and Bella are deeply worried wbout Maxine. It's taking her a lot of effort and time, to get better. If Bella would gwt pregnant, that might hel her.
Their community needs to move on. Not an easy yask but Jaob and Quill taking Victoria and Mary is a great step.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
wow i didn't think the james and tanya shootings could get any worse.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
well cant wait to see waht happens next and cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
i love this story so far and as far as no one being able to get pregnant is that just carlisles family or is that all of communtity that havent been able to get pregnant im just a little confused so please let me know i cant wait to see what else you have in store for this story please tell me that james and tanya are not going to get there hands on bella so please update soon
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm enjoying this story - thanks. K
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
yeah....stone the bitch....lol
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
awww.....a snuggler :)
Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
yeah for jake and qjil. poor max. glad she is alive though
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
OH! I'm so glad Maxine survived but poor girl, what a thing to have to deal with.
Really...???? No new children born in 4 years? With all the sexin' going on in that town... Interesting... I can't wait to see what's up with that.
I am so excited for the next chapter! Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!
xoxoxoxo