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Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2019 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Well, it's been 9 years since this story completed so I'm not sure you're even around now to read this.  Anyway, I saw from the comments that you really stirred up a hornets next with the rabid E/B fanbase LMAO! Two things for them: 1) this is FICTION, people! 2) stop takin' everything so seriously LOL!  

It was actually quite an excitin' story with lots of unexpected twists and turns. I enjoyed it very much so thanks for writin' it and keepin' it up for us to find!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Yeah. This doesn't feel finished.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward

Umm yeah. I'm not even touching this one.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?

I guess you have to be a vampire to understand their ways.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

I agree he needed a taste of hurt I'm not happy she lowered herself to Edwards level.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi

This is an awesome story!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins

I don't know if they're supposed to end up as couples but if the Cullen's are doing all that breeding, & children, then how will that play into the relationships?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught

Fight it Bella!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

Is Edward & these vampires able to manipulate human minds?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4. The Breeding Meeting

This is really good so far. I like how different it is.

Reviewer: Cher78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 32. Bella's New World

I am super pissed that Bella forgave Edward for being a pig so easily.  She could have given him hell after she woke up.  I hate all the stories where she's a lovesick puppy who gives in easily.  Ugh.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

This story was very well written and I loved it, however, I hate a cheating Edward. So....I guess that's my problem but I can't get myself to like this particular Edward's character. And I am always a big Edward fan but I can't stand the heart fail associated with an asshole cheating Edward. That's just me, though. He's just done too much to break Bella's heart and he's not nearly remorseful enough for me.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?

Um, ok, I love this story and I won't stop reading it because of the huge gigantic jackass that Edward is but could he have gotten her back any worse. I think not and I sooooooooo wanted Bella to put him in p,ace but he one upped her again. I just want to scream, arggggggh!!!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls

I think Edward is overreacting to her betrayal based on his past...blood bond or not. I think she well deserved a get out of jail free card for all the cheating she endured from him in the past. And he couldn't even calm her fears when she questioned him whether he would get rid of the freshies club now that they were mated. Pahhhhlease! Edward, your such a diva!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

Yes! A thousand times, YES! Edward so deserved a dose of his own medicine. He really pisses me off!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture

I'm still angry with Edward for his misguided actions to alienate Bella. So I don't feel too terrible for him. And I'm an Edward fan.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished

I want Demetri to return & start a relationship with Bella. She should rub it in his face in the worst way possible.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt

Can't say that I think Edward has one redeeming trait right now...not one.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision

Can't help but feel bad for Bella? I feel awful for Bella & I HATE Edward right about now.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 22. The Truth Hurts ( Part 1 )

I don't think the truth will make things better. At least for ne it wouldn't. "Sorry baby but I'm really a vampire and we were getting too serious because what I'm really supposed to be doing is picking up as many human 'breeders' as possible to carry my hybrid vampire offspring, for the greater vampire good, so you were getting in the way of my 'mission.'. Yeah, so what you saw was me fufilling that mission with the 3 breeders. You understand why I had to do it, right sweetie?". That would so not make me feel better about the lieing and the cheating.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

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Date: 25 Jun 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Great story are you doing a sequel?



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Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 22. The Truth Hurts ( Part 1 )

I think that the boys should fess up - all 3 of them - and tell the girls everything then get ready to grovel BIG TIME!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

well I hope she doesn't get pregnant by that Vamp!!!!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins

I just hope that the girls are not hurt by those three vamps!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Very good story, very well written.  A little to the left here and there but good none-the-less.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

Actually no I don't agree.  Bella is a bitch, period.  All the haters  feel free to bash me, don't care.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 31. Escape

Wow. serious shit.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt

Holy shit, what a cliffie!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

Damn, didn't he notice she was a virgin.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 13. Feeling The Burn Twice

Well payback is a BITCH

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

Excellent. Nice payback for Tanya.

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls

Tit for Tat dont  make it right

it only leads to more sorry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

OH MY GOSH!!! Loved this story. I loved the whole story. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!! Loved Edward's children.

Reviewer: littlemadangel Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

glad to have read it, was enjoyable at first but you kinda left it at a stalemate.

Reviewer: littlemadangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

i wish i could read it!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

OMG!!!!! Edward has children. I bet they are really really cute. What is going to happen next?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.  I truly appreciate your consideration and comments.  I am so glad that you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

Loved this chapter. So much stuff happened. Great job!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward

Enjoying this story. You are doing a great job writing. Like reading both Bella and Edward's POV.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?

WOW!!!!! Love the powers Bella has. I am glad that she is going to help the Cullens get Edward back.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls

OMG!!!!! Five years, WOW. Can't wait to see what Carlisle wants.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

Edward and Bella are so touchy feely. They both seem to wear their feelings on their sleeves.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 34. What About Alice?

I am so far behind on reviewing the stories that I am reading I am sorry. You have done a great job with this story.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

I'm so sad this story ended, I loved it while it lasted.

Reviewer: sherriola Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision

 

Actually, I don't feel bad for Bella.  Why is it that it's so bad what edward do, but her retaliation sex is ok and justifyable?  Neither of them is acting very nicely in this story and I want to shake them both.  i don't feel sorry for bella at all.  I do feel sorry for rose, and yet, they all three set out to get back at the guys, so they aren't any better in my opinion.  They all deserve each other really.  Also, I know this doesn't matter, I mean, my opinion doesn't matter, because the story is complete.  I'm sorry, I don't mean to offend you about your writing.  It's a fun story.  I'm just not feeling that either side of this thing is blameless, so I don't feel a bit sorry for bella.  She and Edward both deserve what they get. 

Reviewer: crazyj9girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

SOUNDS VERY INTERESTING 

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Great story. Thanks

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Thanks for writing, I enjoyed reading your story. And thanks for the closure, I hate it when people drop stories.

I feel like there's still a bit of angst there like something was still up with Edward & his breeder.

Reviewer: twigirl2031898 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 32. Bella's New World

WHY did you kill Rose?

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Glad to see there is a happy ending after all!

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

I am sad its over, but it was a nice ride. Great job. I am glad they get their HEA.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 41. Epilogue

I'm sad to see it end but I'm glad they ended up getting back together,

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Wow great chapter

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

This has been one of my favorite stories, and I am sad that it's coming to a close.  I don't know how Bella will deal with the fact that Edward has children from other women...I am looking forward to see how the final act pans out!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

No what is it with these stories, they're all ending at the same time, not you too.

Reviewer: jaijaimays Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

OK NOT GONNA LIE, I AM A LIL UPSET BELLA LOST HER VJAY CARD TO DEMETRI

Reviewer: nightmare1991 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

Oh, Edward! Come to the dark side! Oops... Looks like you're already there... ;)

Reviewer: nightmare1991 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 4. The Breeding Meeting

Yay! We meet Bella! :) She sure seems like a bad girl! ;)
The description of the whole breeding thing was pretty cool, I must say! :D

Reviewer: nightmare1991 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 3. Over Indulging

Hmm... Haven't heard of Linda before. Interesting original character. :)
Huh. Carlisle seems oddly out of touch. Maybe it's just the new clinic... I would've thought that he'd have heard them while he was upstairs. Oh, well... Guess he's just not at the top of his game anymore... Old age can do that to guy. ;)

Reviewer: nightmare1991 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated

lol Jessica! She's always been an "eager beaver," that one... ;)
Another great chapter!

Reviewer: nightmare1991 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

Interesting idea. I've never seen anything like it! :) Also, cool title! Origially, I thought they were all freshmen or something like that. Now I get that it has more to do with "fresh meat"/ fresh blood. Pretty cool! :D Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Yes, I really have enjoyed the story & the new chapter was great. Sexy & action packed. I''m wondering just what Edward's experience was that he absorbed from Bella. He's been a dick to her at times with his philandering ways, and somehow she's the trollop?

Can't wait for the epilogue!;)

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 15. Lured In The Trap

If Birth control stops vampire sperm then I would have thought they'd have ghad a lot more negative pregnancies since a lot of girls are on the pill in that age group

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

I may now be team Demetri. LOL

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins

Finally!



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks for all the reponses! Sorry I didn't reply sooner. First just let me say that I read your story Gloaming and I loved it. I am a devoted fan and honored that you are reading mine. Please keep in mind that I do not have a beta so if you catch anything please just let me know. :)

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught

Good, cause I was thinking if those girls don't get pissed at these guys soon, I'm gong to be mad!

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 8. The Breeding Begins

I don't like that he slept with another girl so easily after being with Bella.

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7. The Waterfall

He sexually assaulted her and she was okay with that? That's some powerful venom

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

Seriousluy, don't do that again or I'll fuck you? Not a very good incentive for her to stop is it? LOL

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4. The Breeding Meeting

So that means the fetus don't rip their way out then?

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 3. Over Indulging

Wouldn't Carlisle be able to hear everything they are saying?

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated

So, the club memebers? Are they the ones they want repeats with?

Reviewer: vampiremama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

Weird, but in a good way. I am interested to see where this is headed.

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Oh boy, they have so much to work on. I hope they get it right in the end. OMG, how hard would that be to be reminded of his indiscretions daily. There is no way they could live with the woman who had his child. Oh gosh, who was it again? If it was Jessica, Lauren or Tanya and they still have a thing for him that would not be good. I don't won't this to end yet. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

You are absolutely correct about that I certainly couldn't live with that breeder either. Just to let you know it is definately not Tanya, Jessica or Lauren they were a part of the Freshies Club but were not breeders so you can take a breather there. I haven't decided just how this will play out just yet but maybe there might be a sequel in the future. There are a lot of unanswered questions and I'm not sure if the Epilogue will cover them. But you never know...

Thanks so much for your feedback and support I so appreciate it... :)

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

I get so peeved off with the statement 'but you love each other' 'it's in the past, you ought to forgive him/her'.  Get real, sometimes love just can't cover some indiscretions. This has been a wonderful story and, although coming to this story late,  I've enjoyed reading it.



Author's Response:

Yeah I thought about that after your comment. If I were in Bella's shoes I'm not so sure I could forgive and forget either. But remember that was Rose's answer to everything. I just figured that both Bella and Edward had a turn at indiscretions and it was time to move forward. But the story isn't over yet...

Thank you for your comments and support.  :)

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Great story!  Bella is a strong person, who says love doesn't conquer all?



Author's Response:

Thanks I appreciate it!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

Well, I thought Edward might be her first sex with a vampire, but I got it all wrong!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins

I am so nervous that the girls will be pregnant by the next chapter - yikes!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 11. New Competiton

Competition amongst the vampire sexicles (love that word).  Things should get real fun now!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Aw, I'm sad to see this coming to an end.



Author's Response:

Me too. It's been a long road. I hope you enjoy the epilogue and who knows maybe a sequel down the road. Ya never know!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught

Ut oh ... the girls are onto something! Them boys better look out!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 7. The Waterfall

Edwards a sneaky little thing, isn't he? I don't think poor Bella  knew what hit her!

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

I can't believe we have the epi left and that's it for these two. I'm going to miss them and the craziness.

Author's Response:

Right? I feel like I'm losing a part of my family, geez! Thanks for being apart of it!  :)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

Edward is such a bad boy!!!  Although Tanya usually deserves it; in his defense!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 4. The Breeding Meeting

Darn - I am over the breeding age! I thought maybe I could volunteer with Edward! Still loving the story!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 3. Over Indulging

edward is getting a little bossy with the girls --- good thing carlisle took him down an notch or two!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated

I love this horny 17 yr old edward!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

I think you got a great story forming here! I am anxious for more....

Reviewer: julie70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

Great chapter..i feel sorry for Bella there just seems to be something in the way of her happiness with Edward..now she has to deal with the children he has..i hope they get past all their problems and finally have some time together and be happy... 

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

loved it very much but glad she showed him everything i would have liked to see an EPOV when he got all of those memories update when you can thanks....



Author's Response:

I've been thinking about that. I quite haven't figured everything out yet but there will be EPOV for sure. Thanks for the support kiddo I truly appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

Great chapter. Can't wait for next.  

Yes, I'm kinda hoping for some kinda wicked pleasant punishment met out over several days w/non-stop sexen'.IJS

<3

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

Good chapter.  I am so glad they got back together.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

Wowie.  Can't wait to see what is next.

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

How did Edward know about her ability to materialize? I must have missed him learning of this ability. I so enjoy Bella having so many magical abilities. They are awesome.



Author's Response:

Good call!  My bad!  I didn't catch it until I posted it. Oops. I will definately fix that slip in the next chapter.  I was just so wrapped up in this chapter that I totally forgot to add that little tid bit in.  Thanks for being such a devoted fan, I so appreciate it.

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

Great chapter. Looks like everyone will get whats coming to them.

Are you going to address the Rose and the baby?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for asking! Yes I am definately going to address Rose and the baby and a few of other things as well.  :)

Reviewer: akf2386 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

uh oh...Edward is gonna flip out about Demetri. Bella better watch out.

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

I'm guessing to find out why he did that back at the school with Tanya and the other whore. That fateful day everything was ruined. It saddens me that this story is coming to a close soon. Why must all the good ones end to soon. Thanks for a great chapter.

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

Ohh so he remembered Bella and their bloodbond. Typical Edward to go all caveward on her as soon as demetri name came up. Bella is in for one pissed off Edward as soon as she meets with them. I wonder what info she wanted from Alina or was it to see if she had a bond with Edward. Hmm so many questions hopefully next chapter will answer most of them.

Reviewer: gmteenz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

Wow, another fantastic chapter, so much action, I also appreciate the speed of the chapters coming through. I don't want this story to end.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven

Next chapter please?

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