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Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2013 6:12 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

I'm really liking this story! When might you continue it? Dana

Reviewer: Tach88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:40 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Are you finishing this?

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 2:42 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

I miss Edward DX 

Xoxox

Great chapter

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 12:46 PM Title: Take my life and Fuck it Up/Birthday Blues

Yay Jazz is on the team :D

Xoxox

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:32 AM Title: Retrieve

I totally and thoroughly enjoyed this chapter bravo!

Xoxox

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 12:11 PM Title: Throne

That chapter was so damn awesome!!! His daughters names rule!!!

Cant wait for bella!!! Or his need to reproduce more ;)

Coxox

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 5:56 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

Wow do much pizzaz lol I've never read a story this bold before in the for aspect and I live it :D

Xoxox

Reviewer: Sin-sarah-ty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 11:49 PM Title: Of Blood And Ice

Omg this is awesome!!!

xoxox

Reviewer: nerddy1012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:45 AM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Why haven't you updated in a long time? This is a really interesting story and I would love it if you continued it. I'm going to read some of your other stories too. :)

Reviewer: topazeyes11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 9:41 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

I just finished the Living amongst Hell update and i'm hoping that you will update this story to. Please? 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2012 5:33 AM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Please update.



Author's Response:

Wow... Hey darling. I'm going to try. I have a 10k update of living amongst hell comming up we're trying to get that one out first. then i'll update this one. 

Reviewer: maxennce Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 7:17 AM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Christmas was four months ago..... what happened to the inspiration???? Its looking somewhat morbid but I like it... keep it up chickie

Cheers

max



Author's Response:

I'm comming. My story living amongst hell has a big update once i'm donw with that them I'll be able to update this one. 

Reviewer: eidabella Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2012 12:03 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

MY god I've been reading this fic and I absolutely love the plot PLeease! PLEASE! update this. I even added to my fav list. :)

Reviewer: TwiAddictcrzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 12:25 AM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

please post more soon I love this story 

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2011 2:38 AM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

SQEEEEEE!!! Honey!!!!!!!! Your BACK!!!!!!!!!!! I miss you bb, so much. and your killing me Tygs, where are my chapters and how come your not txting me to pre read for you. You know for you I would do it. I want more, the hairs went up on my arms and I wnat more, purdy purdy please. Reading Gris Gris next. You know where I'm at, let me help while you have the time to make your readers delireous!! So happy love, I have taken a leave myself but if your back, I'm back. 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 11:00 AM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Not to have a beta you are rocking with this story!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 7:25 AM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 11:38 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Whew!  I'm so glad you are back!  I feel like I've been holding my breath a little. I've missed reading updates. I love all your stories!

Reviewer: rtpobsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 9:19 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Nice comeback!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 7:51 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Oh sweet you posted here too. Fuckawesome chappy, but you already know that!! I can't wait 4 more!!!

PS. This beggining scene for LAH is gonna make me cry lmao  

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 1:12 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

glad you are back



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 12:57 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

looking forward to the next chatper 



Author's Response:

you should be recieving it today.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 12:52 PM Title: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Welcome back. It's good to be able to enjoy your talented mind once again. The only obstacle I encountered with this update was that I find myself having to be a willing participant to start with the 1st chapter to make sure I have all the facts correct.

Merry Christmas. I hope I didn't offend by saying that as it seems some are trying to force a PC term of Happy Holidays.



Author's Response:

No not at all babes! I'm just so sorry I waited so long I truly regret it! I'm glad you enjyed it!

Reviewer: JLCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 10:44 PM Title: Retrieve

While I love this story, I am getting a little irritated by the lack of translation from other languages to english.  If I wanted to be confused about what was said I would read it in a diffferent language altogether.  Is there a reason why you leave us wondering what was said? 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 8:25 PM Title: Throne

egotistical maniacal monster

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 8:06 PM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

how many daughters does he have so far?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 5:36 PM Title: Of Blood And Ice

scary Edward

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 9:08 AM Title: All ABout Losh!

i hope u post the cambion futuretake

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 6:29 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

Where IS the clerk anyway?  I love your stories.

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 1:36 AM Title: All ABout Losh!

My beautiful, brave Tygs, you never fail to astound and impress with your beautiful heart. As a mother my heart breaks for Losh and his family. I will visit and pass this link for all to look and support. Strength in numbers my friend.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 4:05 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

very interesting story

edward is a totally different edward. very controlling and demanding. no compassion

looking forward to where you go with the story

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:50 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

I am hoping these guys are wolves and stand some chance against these beasts?!

Reviewer: nananaiis Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 1:33 PM Title: Of Blood And Ice

love it!  just like all of your stories

 

Reviewer: GuilChris Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:31 PM Title: Birthday Chapter

Hey,

I'm a Louisiana girl!!!  A little futher south than Shreveport though.

 

I'm from Cajun country...Know where that is?  He he he

Reviewer: AnthousaVamplover9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:44 PM Title: Birthday Chapter

Please.write.soon..PLEASE..
Anthousa,
xo xo

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:45 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

What the hell lol. I'm totally confused. Can't wait for the next chapter, though.

Author's Response:

lol kk doll

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:17 AM Title: Throne

Lol it is kinda weird that Edward always goes for the guys, but he did have a reason this time.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 12:44 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

:)

Reviewer: GigiB Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 3:01 PM Title: Birthday Chapter

I can't wait for the next update! The suspense...

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 1:41 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

Alice has come to play and ohhhh I cannot wait to see the pixie in action!!!!! She knows that edward is on his way with her Jasper and that Bella is the key and even more so does Charlie. There is a link somehow with Charlie staying away to protect her. I believe it he loves her so much and a father knows sacrifce for his child. Some how Charlie has his demons that are bigger than Bella understands and watching that come to light just excites me. I am curious how the Quilettes tie in with Charlie and that there is a secret that ties all of them and that Bella is about to find out. Hurry love finish your birthday cake and call me... Happy Birthday to you, happy birthday to you, Happy birthday to Tygsssss, Happy Birthday to you...Your lucky you cant hear me sing...;) Love you to pieces babydoll, you are the BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 1:34 AM Title: Take my life and Fuck it Up/Birthday Blues

Happy Birthday BB!!! I love you so much there are not even enough words to say how much. As always you blow my mind and make me want to pick daisys with the devil and oh does that not sound scary. Jasper is smart and calculating and I cannot wait to see how he outsmarts Edward. Cannot wait to see you on the flip side. Eat cake love!!!

Reviewer: rtpobsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:04 PM Title: Birthday Chapter

Oh HELL, this is getting GOOD!! Gotta love some Bella torture, what's Edward gonna do?? I can't wait, update soon!

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 11:28 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

Glad all this is back and better

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 11:18 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

Tyggy- you Mistrss of Madness!!!!!! Lol

What the hell was this?! OMG! Sooo good!Fucking intense and dark- but sooo effing good! Wow...You know, I'm all for B&E forever and fluff galore...yada,yada....but I really can't wait to see this story unfold more- even if there is no fluff whatsoever!!! Hell, any kind of fluff would totally ruin the whole story (from what I can tell/what happened so far/what I think is going to happen/from the vibes the story's giving off)! Damn you! Edward is so damn intense...and his kids are so damn freaky!

And the whole gas station scene...oh boy! WTF happened there?! It was like a scene out of Texas Chainsaw Masacre or Wrong Turn or whatever the fuck the name of the movie was your scene reminded me off- what I'm trying to say is: I could totally picture that one!!! Ungh- at first, due to the spikey hair and the golden eyes I thought the little thing was good old Alice....but I don't really think so anymore! (Do Edward's creepy kids have golden eyes in your story- I kinda forgot...^^) Anyway, I think it's safe to say that Bella and Edward will meet soon-ish!? CAN'T. WAIT. TO. SEE. THAT!!!!!

I loved every bit of this madness! Looking forward to read more!!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, TYGGY!!! You're fucking awesome! Keep on rockin',bb! Mwah!

-Sue

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 11:09 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

WOW, this is truly different.  Love it and cant' wait for the update!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 7:22 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

Questions! You bet. I just don't know where to begin. WTF was that?

I love this so far.

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 6:54 AM Title: Birthday Chapter

Another awesome chapter. I enjoyed this one as well. Love all the details you put into this. It makes it feel like I'm watching a movie in my mind. I can picture everything. And the Alice scene was fantastically creepy!! I had questions but you answered them already so thank you.

I can't wait for more! PLzzzzzz post asap

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 6:51 AM Title: Take my life and Fuck it Up/Birthday Blues

Tyggy!!!! Loved this chapter! I don't care what anyone says or thinks, I LOVE your darkward!!! he's one HAWT mean mofo. lmao

Anyways, Happy Birthdayyyyyyyyyyyy. So you're 51 now? *gasp* Check for wrinkles. lmao

Keep rockin!

Jells 

Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 5:39 AM Title: Take my life and Fuck it Up/Birthday Blues

u made my day great chapter

Reviewer: minabella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 10:48 PM Title: Retrieve

I loved this chapter, which isn't really too shocking.  I think Mania really deserved her punishment *shrugs* she disobeyed on purpose and Edward said they'll be punished for it so that is that.  Thanks iBelongtoavampire *hugs* for pushing Thaigher's ass into gear lol. ;)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:33 PM Title: Retrieve

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 10:05 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

Ok, this is what the third time you've put this story up??

I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens with it, but if you could find it in your heart to repost the story where Bella falls for her music director who also happens to be Rosalie's father (and Edward) that would be much appreciated.  I really liked where that one was going.  Plus the Banner was awesome.

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 4:39 PM Title: Retrieve

You know that rawked my world. Way to Go Ladies!!!!. So beautiful in his own brand of honour. The punishment of Mania was jaw dropping, Maria getting her azz handed back to her was amazing. Hurry bb with the next one I have to know what happen, Tygs please you know I will beg, text, email, tweet, fb if there is an outlet to plead i'm using it. Text me loe I'll help and I have no plans, use me and I dont say that lightly......OH God let Jaspet get away...

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:26 PM Title: Retrieve

OHOHOH!  No you di'int!  You gonna mess with MY MAN!  Oh you just got me all Mania'd and Keres'd UP!!  DON'THURTMYJASPER!  I swear I am gonna come unglued!

*sobs* 

I always do this..You guys suck me in and then mess with mai MAJOR!

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:21 PM Title: Throne

Oh my well Mania kinda lived her name and it's meaning.  Byebye Mania...lol

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:18 PM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

Okiedoockie...daddy is plumass looney toons.  So are his precious lil freaks of nature err sorry I mean his "angels".  Freakin gonna barf my breakfast here in the next few...so yays to me!  Oneward to more sick shit. 

*Shakes head* I wonder what you guys dream about? lol

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:14 PM Title: Of Blood And Ice

This is so muther effing jacked up!!!!!!!!!! IFREAKINLOVE IT!

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:47 AM Title: Retrieve

Looking forward to the next chapter and some action with Jasper

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:26 AM Title: Throne

After I Googled them, i wondered, Did he name his daughters after he knew of their personality traits/ gifts?

Author's Response:

Yep! you're the first person that asked that very good bb!! it's actually going to be an issue in the near future *waggles eyebrows thanks for the review

Reviewer: Robshandmonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:17 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

OH MY GOD YOU ARE WRITING ANOTHER ONE!!

I CAN'T FIND THE TIME TO SQUEEZE BABY DOLL IN AND NOW YOU PUT OUT ONE LIKE THIS....ARE YOU TRYING TO TAKE AWAY MY LIFE COMPLETELY....

I JUST FINISHED RE READING LAV AND LAH AND STARTED TO READ THAT OTHER ONE WHICH I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT I AM STRUGGLING TO GET INTO....

I SEE YOUR POINT ABOUT SOME OF IT BUT BABY IT DOESN'T COMPARE TO ANYTHING YOU GUYS DO....YOU GUYS ARE FUCKAWESOME AND NOW THERE IS NO WAY I AM GOING TO GO ON READING THAT WHEN YOU DELIVER THIS!

SERIOUSLY?

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THIS!

MY FIRST REVIEW FOR IT WILL BE CHAPTER TWO THOUGH...SINCE IT WON'T LET ME REVIEW TWICE....I KNOW ITS TEN CUPS ALREADY....

I MEAN MY GOD YOU GOT ME READING A STORY ABOUT A FREAK A LEAK NAMED CALEB AND I HAVEN'T READ ANYTHING OTHER THAN EDWARD IN OVER A DAMN YEAR SO THAT SAYS SOMETHING BABYCAKES!!

OFF TO READ!



Author's Response:

Actually. This story has 16 previous chapters i started writing awhile ago, and took it down for mass adjustment. So i'm reposting it as i go. This Edward is a bit on the ...uncaring side. The LAH Edward and this Edward have NOTHING in common, However, LAH Edward is pretty much the older version of a character I'll have in this story.

I hope you like this. It's so fuckign dark though, i asked Jells about this, because i asked myself...how the fuck did i not get reported for some of this shit. lmao.

 

lmao I hope you like it babes! Caleb is a character, but he's so easy to write about. Especially when they have people who are in movies just like him. The human centipede's Scientist/Surgeon is a wonderful visual for how our caleb is. Truly disurbed lmao.!

This Edward just needs some TLC lmao! he is such a sour puss.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:04 AM Title: Retrieve

I fucking love this!



Author's Response:

LMFAO! well i fucking love that you fucking love it!!! thanks for the review bb!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 6:07 AM Title: Retrieve

Cover your ears bitch, cuz ima squee! *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lmao I'm sooooo effin happy that you updated. How long has it been? lmao You know that this is my favorite story. It's the most darkest I've ever had the pleasure of reading. And some of the stuff you've told me is going to make this story unforgettable. I couldn't wait til you posted more. I'm never gonna stop bothering you to post asap.lol

Tyggy, seriously. This story rocks. It only keeps on getting better and better. You're an awesome authour-no-fuckawesome and I'm so glad we can collab together. You taught me so much shit, and I'm thankful for that.

Keep rockin', bb!

Xxoo

Jells 

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:31 PM Title: Throne

délicieusement tordue!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 5:50 PM Title: Throne

I'm caught up, looking forward to a new update and more of this gruesome tale;D

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 3:56 PM Title: Throne

5/13/11 (3)

Hey, just like E feels that human's serve a purpose I suppose E is also serving a purpose: "HIS OWN"! He is one crafty, evil motherfucker. I love to get into the mind of this kind of E.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2011 11:48 PM Title: Throne

He is a MANIC.. hehehe.. This is so good.. so dark, twisted, and sick... but so freaking good. 

Love it



Author's Response:

yeah, doucheward is a bit on the wacko side. wait till next chapter lmao

Reviewer: Twihardgirl246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2011 2:03 AM Title: Throne

Thank you for updating! Wow, I love this Edward! I've read so many stories where Edward is so sweet and can do no wrong but this Edward is just evil! I love this different side :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 8:16 PM Title: Throne

very interesting mindset of this Edward. I was glad to see he had the children put into safety.  Wonder what will happen to Mania that she disobeyed

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 7:52 PM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

So how many daughters/soliders does he have now?  And is he still looking for someone to carry a son, and is that where Bella comes in???

Reviewer: hayleyhoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:55 PM Title: Throne

Loved this :D such a good story so dark and glorious hehe :D can't wait to read the rest ^_^ x

Reviewer: tigga14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 2:31 PM Title: Throne

loved it!!! aw he cared about thew children even if just a little bit :) poor kid!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!! XD

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 1:14 PM Title: Throne

Fuckawesome chapter Tyggy!!! I can't wait to read what Edward will do to Mania. She's effin screwed. Mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzz

Reviewer: Aisling-91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 7:18 AM Title: Throne

Another great chapter. The banner for this fic is the best i've seen! Kudos to who did it :)

~Ash



Author's Response:

ww thanks babes! for both compliments i'm also the banner maker lol

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 6:33 AM Title: Throne

Great story glad to see it back thanks :)

Reviewer: minabella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 1:33 AM Title: Throne

Lmao I may be completely insane but that's okay because this is my favorite story on TWCS.  The visuals are astounding and extremely graphic (but being a horror junkie I love that), Edward isn't as evil as he thinks he is but still a crazy bastard, and his daughters are scary as fuck! lol. Keep up the good work babes, I LOVE it!

Btw whomever made the new banner deserves a hug because I love it..it's fucking amazing!

♥ Mina

 



Author's Response:

You are absolutely right! the girls only get worse as the story goes forth. they're a little too out of control. i'm happy you like it!! The banner was made by me, i did it for a banner challenge and didn't know what to do with it so i used it for this story it kinda fits lmao. I'm glad you like it as well !!

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 1:00 AM Title: Throne

OH WOW... The visual you built here though very dark was really kinda of fluid like the water he found himself encased in at first. So many centuries of seeng the darkest of dark  and discarding it as unusable is really kinda sad and dark angel like. a dead heart can only have so much mercy in him but I found it interesting that though he really is heartless that their is a bit of "parental instinct" in him. Though he is built for death that he is protective of the children says alot of his character. I can hate him and still admire he makes a great dad. CAll me crazy but I loved it. I'm sorry Tygs- this week is handing my ass to me, pls let me make it up to you. Hearts ya babyz. Ya rocked that boat..

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 11:52 PM Title: Throne

write more!!

 



Author's Response:

how could i refuse that? I'm getting on it now!

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 12:57 PM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

REALLY NICE

A BIT DEVIOUS BUT REFRESHING AS WELL

UPDATE SOON PLZ

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 8:37 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

Wow Mania is scary as fuck!  And  Edward is cold...breaking his daughters arm to each a lesson?  Damn. I understand those girls probably need a really heavy hand to teach them given their strength and lack of morals but that seems pretty severe.  What's the healing rate on hybrids?  How many girls does he have?  Ten?  Do we get to know their names?  Edward made a comment about being more protective of them than his own life as well as this, "Her quick thinking only made my love for her soar".  Does he say/do this out of a paternal feeling? Does he really love Mania is it all driven by his purpose to kill the Volturi and turn humans into domesticated cattle?  Just wondering if he's actually feeling this and is capable of these emotions or if it's all about accomplishing his goal.

I forget how evil you are with the slow burn! You did the same thing in LAH with it taking forever for him to get to Bella. Not that it matters, you always seem to get me addicted to your story before the end of the first paragraph anyway. =P



Author's Response:

Yeah she is. I did a bit of foreshadowing about her though. She would be the most powerful, but because her power is so strong she really can't seem to control the effect it has on her. So keres is technically the strongest.

Keres is the rebel of the group. she knows she strong, Had Edward hust spoke words it would've happened again. Plus his daughters are technically strong that him gift wise, so he can't be seen as weak, or they'd run all over him.

Naw look at it from a view point of Edward. He scratched her heart in the first chapter I think for licking blood off the floor if i'm correct. She disobeyed him once more. Desperate times lmao. he had a point to prove.

The healing rate...you'll see lol

Yeah all together. but you'll only meant about 7 to be honest.

I always post names in either the authors note at the beggining or end.

Yes. He is a father. They are his flesh and blood, so he does love them in his own way. But he was mainly refering to the Mania's growth and devotion to him in her first battle. she didn't hesitate to protect her father. Not only was she strong, but she followed his training to the T. That's like if a parent is a musician and the child enters a contest and walks out on stage and kicks ass. "Proud parent moment" the kid followed instructions and training. No it's not driving by his drive to fuck up the volturi. Their main purpose of being concieved was to fuck up the volturi but he does have paternal love for them. he's capable of love but it's in his own way.

 

Oh yeah. it's going to be a minute befor eyou hear from bella lmao! abotu two more chapters. awww how sweet thanks for reviewing babes. by the way what is ur twitter name? do owe talk? lmao 

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 7:31 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

LOVING IT!!! I love how you are always unafraid to go to the darker places and don't hold back.  I can't believed I missed this story. I found it when I was looking for your profile so I could contact you about that rec earlier tonight and I'm sooo fucking glad I did.  Edward sounds like an evil bastard. Will we be seeing any of the other Cullens? Can't wait until he meets up with Bella.



Author's Response:

lmao, yeah i just have this thing abotu fandom being realy pansied sometimes when it comes to darker fics. We call em darkfics for those who enjoy horror so why not go the distance and make a true horror graphic? Yes you will see the cullens. but.. it won't really be how you think  it will. thanks for reviewing babes

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

well i am glad he loves his daughters that is his only redeaming quality.....waiting for next update :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:02 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

your weren't wrong about it being full on but i am still here and onto the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Katherine_19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:08 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

omg i love it you have to update soon!!
cant wait

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 10:53 PM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

I love me some dark edward!!! I am so sick of the gentlemanly, prude, victorian edward ....i love yours better! Looking forward to more destruction & evilness!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 10:44 PM Title: Of Blood And Ice

I snickered at your authors note of people wondering about a HEA ending .....um, edward calls his baby mama's "Vessels" - that doesn't sound like a warm & fuzzy guy to me!  I remember reading this story a while back - loved it & looking forward to it again!

Reviewer: hayleyhoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 8:15 PM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

LOVED it :D such a good chapter :D can't wait to read more x

Reviewer: cateyes38372 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:03 PM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

more please

Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:32 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

come on it update faster the last story u were on like chapter 6.

lol please update soon luv this story so much.



Author's Response:

i'm working on  chapter 3 now! where are you with my two favorite stories that haven't been update in like forever!!! The RUins! and forever helpless! i wanna see some chapters too lmao!!!

Reviewer: snarkymuch Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:20 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

Oh I do love your bad Edward! His daughters are so freakin' vicious! Very very good, but  I think you knew that! :)



Author's Response:

Things are going to get alot worse as the chapter go along. i have all 16 chapters actually posted up on a site. but. since i'm rewriting the story  i won't let you see it

Reviewer: snarkymuch Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:17 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

As fucked up as it sounds, I am practically skipping around with glee that I got to read something so fuckawesome!

You have awesome detail in your writing which brings forth the gore and violence in awesome realistic detail!

 



Author's Response:

lmao!! thank you i'm glad you like it babes

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:37 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

Looooved it!!! Your Edward is the meanest mofo I've EVER read!! I love it! hehe And the daugthers are effin vicious!!! LOL, yeah I know, Edward isn't gay. He's psychotic =D lol I can't wait for more! Looking forward to the next chapter.

~Jells



Author's Response:

{Insert Tyggy like insult here}  lmao. why thank you bitch. chapter 3 is next then it's living amongst hell. Then it's Not so average

Reviewer: Killersupergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:31 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

Wow, he is a sick bastard:) Nice chapter!



Author's Response:

thanks babes

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:07 AM Title: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

This is just awesome!!! The darkness and the brutality he exudes is just mind blowing. This is a Edward that brooks no nonsense, There is so no compassion in this Edward. His daughters are horrifying to read. I have to say that I like Keres cuz you know what your gonna get with her, she is gonna burn your ass. With Mania she scares me more, for all of her beauty she has the most to take away, to drive her victims insane. with her though is she will be doommed with her inability to control her power. Evil ass bitches though. There is no bringing home a stepmom to visit unless they dont mind being on the menu. Can't wait to see where their travels take them and where the chaos ensues. Go on baby girl with your bad self and dont worry I wore my big girl panties for this so we're good. Chapter 3, come out to playyyyyyyy

Reviewer: tracylk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:38 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

Wow... eerie... mwauahahahaha... I know one of your beta's and she's the bomb. I am not used to such a dark Edward but you're definitely got me hooked with the 1st chapter!

I can't wait to see more.  I'm definitely adding this to my favorites.

Muah!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2011 3:04 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

wow

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 3:31 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

interesting!

Reviewer: tigga14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:45 PM Title: Of Blood And Ice

have yopu taken some chaps down i cud swear i have read more than this ??? :)



Author's Response:

yeah babes. I'm redoing the whole shabang! chapter 2 is comming in a hour or so

Reviewer: minabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 12:45 AM Title: Of Blood And Ice

It seems really interesting so far, I kinda love it.<3 It's something besides all this fluff lmao. Oh and I think I have the correct translation for Edward's siren song...

 

English translation-

When you sleep, I would have you wound in a net. I would have you in the torment of your mind. I hear the sound of me that I should, I is, I am afraid Your are below my wings. The meantime, in your mind. In the mean time on your spiritual and worldly, Your a vessel for me. My one. What do you do I fear? What do you do I fear? Show to me. Show to me. Open up your mind is like a punishment, 'as I was brought up upon your mind. I feel it for it will be your last with a panting, to me you below the ford of the die
In the mean time a little one of the mean time. You are also wound in a net, but you I do I fear will kill you. I will kill you. I will kill you

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 8:13 PM Title: Of Blood And Ice

You had me going crazy trying to find this story in my alerts lol. I didn't even know you had pulled it, I'm glad I found it again through your other story (living in hell). This first chapter was different from what I remember the other one to be but I like this one more. I can't wait to see what other changes you bring in. Oh and I'll love you forever of you don't pull it again I really really loved where the umm I guess we can call it first version was going and I would hate to see such a interesting story not get finished.

Author's Response:

I'll finish this babes don't worry. edward is a huge douche he wouldnt let me if i tried lmao

Reviewer: lizzie2325 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:42 PM Title: Of Blood And Ice

I can't believe that this story was a dream of yours. This was totally fanstastic!! I can't wait to read your other stories as well as your partner in crime too. Thank you for this chapter can't wait for the next one!!

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