Because ppl were complaining about spelling errors and shit like that, when it was one or words. I don't understand why ppl chose my story to complain about the simplest mistakes, but they do and it got annoying , so i pulled this bitch down and went through it. "ask me if i found a spelling error." only one in this chapter, and people were flaming me hard " can you believe it?" So when i took it down, i realized that nobody complaining, said anything about the plot holes that i had. bellas age, the were wolve situation. The charlie situation. so this time i'm changing the ages, and more. But every chapter may or may not have something different in them though. Bella's story will be different, she'll be a sophmore in college. that way, i won't have to find a way to deal with charlie, when or if rene comes up missing "winks" i won't take it down again. I'm so happy you like my story, but I LOVE yours! update the ruins soon two chapters PWEASSSSSSSSEEE oh and another chapter of forever helpless lmao i know i'm asking too much but i'm spoiled lmao

lol no it's ok you TRIED to give me advice, but this is the reason i tell ppl to trust me lol. I did my research lol trust me, when i picked out each name, I was looking for either goddesses, Uni-sex names, or powers that i could more or less "Fuck around" with. You're suggestions is another reason why i didn't ask for them for the girls lmao. I know every power, tick, trick, and reason behind the names that were picked,so you the reader don't, which is why "corny or obvious names usually make a reader's suggestion cut." The names I've chosen are for a reason and it's so obvious. what is the one thing edward wants again? is it a boy? So maybe he "UNI" named  two or three of them, for a reason.<----  lol i'll let you sit on that lmao.

Another thing, I never wrote Edward's origin. I just mentioned the volturi. Italian Mythology was never a factor. Once again another "misread suggestion" I said the volturi attacked his coven, I didn't say where lol, which is going to come up in future chapters. As for a greek lesson, i really hate doing this shit here, and i'm not one for school lessons, but it irritates me when someone assumes what i do or don't know  about my own story without asking first lmao. You immediately went to wiki links ( try a book next time sweets), so i'll guess i'll enlighten you "greekfan"

the names chosen were Personified concepts, <==look that up, usually a uni-sex spirit or creature or (gods) in the greeks case, used to explain various reasons of life or human health, or personal mythology, weather, witch craft and so forth. such as

Mania-,lymos, and lyssa (which i don't need to elaborate on because i'm sure a greek fan as your self know that). These deities if you want to get technical didn't have a sex, it was usually up to whom ever told the tale, to add a sex to it, basically "old wives tales". In one of the books i used to pick the girl's nameExample: The question of if the christian God Is Man or Woman.  I can rec you the book if you want! Most of the names chosen, are chosen for a reason, When i started my reasearch I wanted personifications by power, not the most obvious names i could find. I picked the best, researched the Gods and Goddesses and spirits and was happy with what i chose. Every choice has it's individual reason, which you'll find out later if you keep reading *winks* Hopefully other people will read this and abide by it

Just let a author do their thing, "They Know What They Are Doing, even if you don't" If you feel there's a mistake, ASK first. <-that's a smarter thing to do.

Did you really think so little of me? I bet you had a big smile while you wrote this, not knowing you ended up wasting your time because i ALREADY KNEW WHAT I WAS DOING lmao! Sometimes I don't understand why ppl assume instead of just asking. It would've save you quite a bit of time from make OBVIOUS suggestions. ( not trying to offend you, but it's just really unoriginal. sorry) ..... 

I know, don't shoot the med student <-----

That doesn't mean I don't like your suggestions, it just means i won't use it lmao! That's for reviewing, I appreciated it!

yeah i'm redoing you know. grew as a writing and all that good shit lmao. every chapter will be different

I know right, edward is such a douche, but he's dead serious. He means business when it comes to what he wants. thank you for reading sweets

um something like that,  a couple of things have changed,  bella's age, how edward seduces the women, he has fangs now, um vamps turn the good old fashion way, lots of tidbits, so every chapter will have something new. i'll try to have the next chapter up by ugh, tommorow night.