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Reviewer: DeeFC Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what an amazing story. As a NYer who can never forget that day, you handled the material with wonderful sensitivity. Of course the ending hurt so much, knowing that Edward will never be with his Bella, but he ultimately did what was best for his family. Thank you for sharing this story with us.

Reviewer: heimk Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad I was crying but very good story well done 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really hope no one was offended by your story, because, as awful as 9/11 was, as terribly as the families suffered, I know you meant no disrespect. This was, in essence, a beautiful love story. To love his  wife and son enough to leave them to live their lives, that's as big a love as I've ever read about. Still makes me tear up, but in a good way! Thank you so much for this, after all, we all can use a good cry , once in a while!

Reviewer: kikiharuka13666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow. wow. thats so sad. You should write another 9/11 story with a happy ending.

Reviewer: ellarose85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow........I;m still crying! 

But I still love it!

Great, great story even without a HEA :)

XOXO

eLLA

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good story, yes I cried hard.

 

I can't imagine what that day felt like for any and/or all of those that lost the people they loved on that day and the days since.

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy shit! How could you let him walk away like that? I would've changed Bella on the spot and kidnapped the kid and ran off happily ever after! But damn. Almost cried! I'm suprised I didn't because I did watching Remeber Me!

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved your story and I'm off to write a review on it.

Thank you for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy shit, that was incredibly sad.  9/11 was one of the most heinous acts ever committed.

And, now finally Bin Laden is dead.

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

just wow!  I know you said that this story would not be continued, but I wish you would reconsider.  if not, i just want you to know this story was a beautiful bittersweet love story.  thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) i hate crying

Reviewer: mimigrace Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

so sad and beautiful.

Although a tiny part of me thinks that maybe edward would have been better off dead? :-( after all, what's eternity without the one you love.

but i do love the idea of moving edwards death scene into a more modern era.



RIP for the people who died in day, and peace be with those who lost loved ones!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

:-(  So, So sad, but nice story!

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Some stories have to be sad. But, the only thing that does not work is Carlisle working with an insurance company. What would be the point? He works to help humanity as a doctor. He could do other things, but not that. Why don't you change something, like he was there visiting as a consultant or something?



Author's Response:

I didn't want Carlisle being a doctor. I wanted him working for the same company as Edward, being his boss, so that Edward could form a bond with him and trust him before the attacks. It wouldn't have been so good, in my opinion, for him to have been a total stranger. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow very sad!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was so sad but very well writen and even though they will never be together again it was very good.Congrats on winning 3rd place it's a very hard subject to write about I had a friend in tower two she made it out thank God .

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

great job, very sad, congrats on 3rd place. I didn't think i'd be able to read it but i wanted to try. ( i knew 2 people who died in the towers that day)

Author's Response:

I am very sorry for your loss. My beta also sends her condolences. I am honored that you tried to read the story, knowing that it could bring back the painful memories. *Virtual Hugs* Thank you for your time and your review. You are amazing.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow what an amazing one-shot...

well done :)

Reviewer: preciousfairymom80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have been waiting patiently for you to post this just so I can do this one review. Of all the stories we have worked on together, this one I am most proud of. I'm so glad to see that this story got the recognition it deserved.
Yes, I cried when I read it; cried when you won. This story was one of your most brilliant ideas yet, and I feel honored that you allowed me to beta it. I thought you were extremely sensitive to the history. Well done, Shannon. This is the most beautifully written story I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
Way to go my Sista! I'm so f**king proud of you!!!! Lots of hugs for your win!!

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