that was one hell of a ride.

holy shit.

AMAZING!!!

KNEW HE WAS ALIVE

I would say "finally" but I suspect it is just the beginning

Goodness reread this again and its still just as excellent as the first time I read it. I still absolutely love this story, so great and heartbreaking at times but also uplifting at others and the love they have for each other is so bright and awe inspiring the way you wrote it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful awesome story with all of us!!

Melissa

Oh my goodness that was one of the absolute best stories I've read in a very long time, it had everything, it pulled you in and the good ones always do that. It made me cry, it made me happy, it made me sad and at certain times it made me angry at the characters but that's the tell of a good author and an awesome story when it sucks you in and u can't stop reading. Thank you so much for putting this story out there I loved EPOV and I wished there were more of them, telling his side from the beginning through the end. I would have loved both POV through the story but even if there's never out takes of EPOV from certain parts of the story like the beginning and when he thought bella was dead and found out she wasn't, it's still a great story without the extra EPOV I guess it's just me wanting to see exactly how he was felling during those times especially when he said he loved her ever since the first time he killed for her. Anyway I'm babbling I just wanted to let you know what a wonderful story u wrote and I know I will read it again some day. Only the exceptional awesome stories are the ones I reread and yours is definetly one of them. Thanks!!

melissa

Thank you sooo very much for reading and taking the time to review! Love you girls! I've read each and every one of these and cherish it forever! 

I think ink I will write an Epi. But not sure if if add it to the published. We'll see. ;-)

love you!

 Yes, you should definitely publish this book. Though when I think of this I start imagining a movie. =)

years an all I freakin love it! it always kept me at the edge of my seat guessing, sometimes even crying. you had me on such a roller-coaster of emotions that most of the time I had to stop and get my feelings under control so i could keep reading. even in the last couple of sentences you still had me wondering whether he was going to really be an asshole and run off without her but I'm glad he got his head out of his ass and turned around.

Thank you for this world wind adventure you took me on with this story. I don't do P2P but this is one story I would definitely buy if you ever publish it. wish you best of luck with whatever you decide to do with it.

P.S. I think this story works without a Epi. I feel like this is where it was meant to end for them all along just driving off into the sunset and leaving their past all behind and to our own imagination on how they got to their HEA.

OH WOW THIS CHAPTER IS SO GOOD BUT I AM SCARD BELLA'S THINKING THE END IS HERE WHAT DOES THAT MEAN THERE ALL GOING TO DIE OR THEY ARE GOING TO WIN THIS WAR OR THERE GOING TO LOSE THE WAR? EDWARD AND BELLA LOVE EACH OTHER I HOPE THEY DON'T DIE EATHER ONE OF THEM IS EDWARD THE KEY TO SAVING THE WORLD AND HEE DOESN'T KNOW IT ISN'T THAT WHAT BELLA WAS THINKING IN HER HEAD? SHIT SHE SHOULD HAVE TOLD HIM IF HE IS HE HAS A RIGHT TO KNOW.

Outstanding chapter as always!! But your story needs a BANNER...So here it is...

Great Chapter!!! Can't wait for more!!

It's been 2 months since last update could u please update this truely amzingly &  beautifully well written story!! U truely a talented writer. I have truely been captivated & intriguied in reading this amazingly story!! I most defintaly give this a 10 star rating!!

Now that was a chapter worth the wait. I think my heart stopped three times. And damn I'm excited.

I knew you wouldn't do this to us HE IS BACK and how have missed him. I must admit I have cried a lot reading this so please continue. Don't leave us hanging ;)

HE'S BACK! LORD ALL MIGHTY!

If you don't continue this story... I'll, I'll.... Ok I will just cry.. I love this fic. It is the most interesting fic I've come across ever. It is so exciting and heart pounding. Please continue. PLEASE!!!

E/k

I was so happy to see this update today! Despite the fact that Bella let Ero fuck her. That was almost painful to read by the way! But, like a car accident I couldn't look away... GOD I HATE THAT CREEPY FUCKER! As usual, it was still a great chapter. After that fuckery I think our girl deserves a HEA...and probably extensive therapy.

Finally some kinda hope. I was about as stringed out as I was gonna take anyway.  

I am shocked Bella went there with him. I never expected her to give in to him, but I guess she thought that was her last chance at freedom. He's alive!!!! I hope he shows up soon.

This story rocks I can't get enough of it!!!!!!

I'M SO GLAD BELLA SHOT CHARLIE. TO BAD SHE DIDN'T KILL HIM.

OMG BELLA WAS HIT WITHA BULLET SHE'S NOT GOING TO DIE RIGHT SO CHARLIE IS GOING TO GET THEM WILL HE HURT EDWARD AND BELLA WILL THEY GET AWAY? HELL I NEED TO GO TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

BUT DIDN'T HE KILL ALL THE PEOPLE HE KILLED TO SAVE BELLA? OR WAS HE KILLING PEOPLE JUST BECAUSE HE LIKED TO KILL?

OK SO THEY ARE KICKING BELLA OUT BECAUSE SHE PISSED CARLISLE OFF SO NOW EVERY ONE IS GOING TO TRY TO KILL BELLA WILL EDWARD SAVE HER AGAIN? GOD I LOVE THIS STORY.

I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE DOESN'T HATE CHARLIE AFTER WHAT HE HAS DONE TO HER.

I DON'T LIKE YOUR CARLISLE IN THIS STORY HE'S A REAL BASTARD ISN'T HE.

DOES EDWARD REALLY WANT TO HURT BELLA OR DOES HE WANT HER AND DOESN'T WANT HER TO KNOW HOW HE FEELS ABOUT HER?

IT'S EDWARD THAT SAVED HER ISN'T IT? I HOPE HE CAN KEEP HER SAFE.

IS IT JAKE THAT HAS FOUND HER OR IS IT SOMEONE ELSE THAT IS AFTER HER?

WOW EDWARD IS COLD BLOODED ISN'T HE

The prologue didn't capture me, but I'm going to read the next chapter before I leave this story. I like the premise, I think it could be interesting, but the prologue could've been written better. It felt like this information was just being thrown at me, getting it out of the way. I can't really explain it properly, but I found myself skipping a lot of it.

Yes!!! Your back... Hands down...best action and plot...GD...I love this fic... Thanks for posting...can't wait for the next update....

so Bella really did see a red ribbon by the body. I'm starting to think Paul was right and B is losing her mind. I hope Azar finds Carlisle and they rescue Bella. And of course I'm still hoping Edward is alive.

Still one of the most exciting reads...just wishing as always for more frequent updates.

Oh  my goodness, what a wonderful chapter! Adventure, helicopters, beautiful gowns (yes, I admit I AM one of those girls), and hope for the future? It's like a two-hour action hit packed into several pages! I desperately hope that Sue is right, otherwise I will hate her too for giving hope... Thanks for sharing!

She was sooo  close to getting away!  Wonder if jasper will report back to Edward, hmmm?  Thanks for update!  Love this story.

another great chapter, i really cant wait to read more.

Give 'em hell, Bella!  I absolutely cannot put this story down. 

another grest chapter, cant wait to read more.

Oh boy!

No can't be!

Wow!

Okay I knew that but now what?

Again more story but no solid info...I don't understand

Still no info...this is getting old.

Please I need more what is with them and why do they want to kill her and why is Ed so hostile?

Again what the heck s going on?

well she is not crazy we know that.  what is going on?  does she know too much?  hummmm????