Date: 29 Dec 2015 4:33 AM Title: Day 30
Loved this story so much. These two are so cute together. I'd love a sequel of any kind.
Date: 01 Feb 2015 9:42 PM Title: Day 30
i really liked this little story ;) i would read the 30 days of make up sex and the 9 months one aswell ;D
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:07 PM Title: Day 2
I love these two! Bella and her attitude and Edward trying so hard. Thanks for making me laugh!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:03 PM Title: Day 1
Too funny. I love it...thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 4:41 PM Title: Prologue
I don't know how I missed this, but I love it and I can't wait to finish it. Thanks!
Date: 16 Mar 2011 2:53 AM Title: Day 30
Great story felt the ending could have been a little more but was definately worth reading and I'd definately read more stories by you.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:05 PM Title: Day 30
i thought the ending was perfect. loved the re-introduction and the thought of bella taking claire to the prom. heehee.
i would definately read 9 months.
thank you for sharing your story.
suzie :)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:59 PM Title: Day 29
so many things up in the air right now what will they do?
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:55 PM Title: Day 28
well she has forgiven him but how long till they try again? will he talk her into going to prom with him?
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:50 PM Title: Day 27
wow bella right into the locker room!?!?!?! holy shit!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:42 PM Title: Day 26
jasper should have hit him at least once. but maybe bella will do it......?
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:40 PM Title: Day 25
oh eddie and belly what are we gonna do with the two of you?
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:36 PM Title: Day 24
see eddie you dumb fuck! she was bound to find out and this was the worst way possible.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:32 PM Title: Day 23
everything is going so well but it is all going to blow up in his face if he doesn't tell her!!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:52 PM Title: Day 30
Anything you want to do will be great by me. 9 months sounds intriguing.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:00 PM Title: Day 30
great story! :) but i wish there was more it dosent really feel finished loved it though
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:02 AM Title: Day 30
Great story, an easy read! Keep up the good work!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:47 AM Title: Day 30
Ummmm...so did they become Prom Queen and King? I still think she was being a ridiculous Bitch and shouldn't have broken off with him especially after he confessed his true feelings, that was far more cruel then what he had done, and she already accepted to go to Prom with him, breaking that date so close to the event after saying that she wanted to start all over again was lunacy. Besides, you can't start over from day one after all the steps they've been through, you're killing the fire that you've already built up and it'll never be as intense. Edward should have gone running, I mean if she can't stick around to work out their problems and dumps him over such a minor offence she's setting up a pattern where she'll feel in control of the relationship from the start, and any relationship that isn't at least 50-50 is doomed. Right, keep him scared to really speak his mind, never make a mistake and in fear of her walking over any little thing. Disasterous.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:45 AM Title: Day 30
sorry to see this end...
like the daily posts even if they were short...
not really interested in baby edward/bella
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:20 AM Title: Day 30
awww hell yeah i'd read it but pls answer review with the info for your face book page so i can add you :) loved the story
Author's Response:
Here you go! :)
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Gelix-FanFic/173304282697056
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Gelix
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:29 PM Title: Day 30
I would like to read 9 months just to see how they would handle things. I mean with her trying to be a midwife and him with his music thing. Would they both continue school would his dad come around? So many things you could do with those 9 months, it could be very interesting.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:29 PM Title: Day 30
Gosh! This is short. :-) It was nice while it lasted.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 6:04 PM Title: Day 30
i like the idea of a sequel
Date: 03 Mar 2011 6:03 PM Title: Day 30
I would love to read anything you write so hell yes. This was a great short story thanks for writing it and sharing with us.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 6:02 PM Title: Day 30
:) sött saga. Hoppas at du får det bra i din nya skola.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:49 PM Title: Day 30
Truly loved this story :)
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:37 PM Title: Day 30
I wish you would do an epilogue so we can know how was their future!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 3:27 AM Title: Day 29
Wow, so what happens if she goes and winds up being crowned prom queen? Then will Edward still have won the bet even though he called it off.
Date: 02 Mar 2011 10:51 PM Title: Day 29
Sorry but it just seems like Bella has shit so backwards and has a lot of growing up to do. In every relationship shit happens, you deal with it. You work it out, you don't just run from it or break up
Date: 02 Mar 2011 7:11 PM Title: Day 29
Last chapter already? It's been a good ride. Why is Bella having a headache?
Date: 02 Mar 2011 7:01 PM Title: Day 29
Are you going to do anykind of epi??? Please tell me they will be together.
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:58 PM Title: Day 29
AWWWE it's sad that it's ending :/ cant wait for it tho!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:22 PM Title: Day 29
Pain in the ass that Bella...I tell ya!!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:00 PM Title: Day 29
I love this story. The combination of semi lighthgeartedness and very true-to-life high school drama is awesome! Almost makes me miss high school-ALMOST:)
Date: 02 Mar 2011 5:52 PM Title: Day 29
Awwrh, I don't want this story to end, i love it too much. Great story I can't wait for the LAST chapter :(
Date: 02 Mar 2011 4:44 AM Title: Day 28
I can understand where she's coming from but really I think it's stupid to break up. They know each other and have been getting close. They could have worked it out and still been together. I mean all she had to say was lets slow our pace down a little until I'm more comfortable with what happened and the and together we'll move past it. I think Bella's always making shit harder then it has to be.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:05 PM Title: Day 28
He better do things right.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:59 PM Title: Day 28
Awww! Bella forgave him this time.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: Day 27
I know he messed up and all but it's not that serious. I mean he could have tried to lie and deny the shit. He didn't want to lose her and to me that should mean something. That sentence right there should tell her how much he truly cares for her. I hate that she's walking away from one of (The World's Greatest) in R Kelley's words over something so meaningless and stupid.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Day 27
can't wait for the more "mature" talking
Date: 28 Feb 2011 11:14 PM Title: Day 27
I cant believe only 3 more days I am going to cry. I look forward to every day. Good for Jake to put a stick up her ass to get her to move but boy oh boy she has big balls to go into the locker room and confront him.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:25 PM Title: Day 27
its really good but please please make it longer.
Thanks and God Bless.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:54 PM Title: Day 26
I wish you story was longer than 30 days. I think Edward needs to stew in misery for a good bit. It would be better if they reconnected in NY away from Forks and distance from the bet. They could meet under new and fresh circumstances and start their relationship off right.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:41 PM Title: Day 26
OH Edward, you fucked up...
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:10 AM Title: Day 26
Good chapter short but good can't wait for Bella's reaction when they see eachother.
Date: 27 Feb 2011 10:37 PM Title: Day 26
MORE!!! cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 27 Feb 2011 10:15 PM Title: Day 26
I love this story, please update soon!!! :) xox
Date: 27 Feb 2011 8:17 PM Title: Day 26
It took big balls to talk to Bella's brother and tell him everything got to respect that. I cant wait till Bella sees him hope she slaps him and then kisses the hell out of him and maybe more;)
Date: 27 Feb 2011 2:52 AM Title: Day 25
oooooh Eddie-kins! Come on Belly give him another chance!!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 8:59 PM Title: Day 25
I know Bella needs time. I just wish she would tell Edward that she needs time. I'm sure Edward is hysterical as he should be. They just need to talk and Edward needs to give her space to sort through his jackass idiocy.
I also hope Bella puts things in perspective - yes, Edward was an idiot. Yes, he hurt her horribly. Yes, he does deserve to be kicked in the balls and left writhing for a while. Yes, he does deserve a shot at redemption. He fell in love with her. He ended the bet. He was going to tell her (but fear stopped him before she found out). He did the right thing and he was going to continue to do the right thing by telling her.
I hope they focus on the fact that they are much better together than apart.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:34 PM Title: Day 25
Oh gosh! I wish this section has more angst. At least Bella isn't as down as I think.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:19 PM Title: Day 25
awwwwwww good boy Edward now we just gotta let it all sink in with bella awesome chappy
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:54 PM Title: Day 25
I love this story, can't wait to see if he does infact take Bella to prom or not. :)
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:48 PM Title: Day 25
Wow what is a girl to do other than admit that she loves him to and run to him. I am glad that Edward grabed his balls and told her the truth and that he loved her good guy.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:31 PM Title: Day 25
eddie-kins better start groveling...lol
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:25 PM Title: Day 25
:)
bella gets her time and eddie-kins gets a taste of what it feels like to "love"someone
do not miss high school drama .. but even as a "grownup", i get it at work :(
Date: 26 Feb 2011 8:52 AM Title: Day 24
awwww shit!!!! this can't be good.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:05 AM Title: Day 24
Well Damn...I hate Angst...think I'll skip tomorrow..
Date: 25 Feb 2011 10:56 PM Title: Day 24
Poor Bella. It seems that all her relationships start out as bets.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:56 PM Title: Day 24
awwww Edward needs to come clean and tell her he told rosalie the bet was off before they started dating and well emett needs a swift kick. sad but good chappy!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:43 PM Title: Day 24
i was just hoping she never found out but i guess it had to happen great story i'll be waiting for the update.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:12 PM Title: Day 24
Love the story, I understand Bella being upset, but I was really hoping she wouldnt get all depresed over this I mean did she not here Edward say he couldnt go through with the bet because he was falling for her, She has a backbone use it and get some damn answeres girl, before you go all zombie Bella. Yea Edward should have said something to her about the bet he was being a coward you really couldnt blame him for being scared after finding out about what James did, cant wait for next chapter
Date: 25 Feb 2011 7:12 PM Title: Day 24
NoOOOOOOOO she didnt lisen to what he said he fell for her but the only thing she heard is what would hurt her the most being a bet poor Bella.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:04 PM Title: Day 23
OMG Im loving the story :D
If I tell her??!! What does that mean?
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:10 PM Title: Day 23
Bella is claiming him that is good and now he knows she is going to NY yah
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:39 PM Title: Day 23
I LOL'D at this chapter :D
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:18 AM Title: Day 22
well she had better say yes this time! poor boy has definately earned it.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:56 AM Title: Day 21
aww she basically called him her boyfried!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:37 AM Title: Day 22
way to go bella standing up to carlise edward is so sweet wanting bella as a girlfriend can't wait for an update hope u are able to post it soon.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:24 AM Title: Day 20
sounds like a perfect date and out of the limelight for bella, so she could relax.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:18 AM Title: Day 19
aw eddie that was so cute and sweet that you are willing to go at her speed. they're goin' on a date!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:14 AM Title: Day 18
oh i love that 'my almost girlfriend' heehee. having an almost girlfriend who's dad owns and carries a gun on a daily basis has got to be fucking scary to a teenaed boy.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:09 AM Title: Day 17
aha! so that is the deal with james. sucks to be eddie because right now he looks no better than james even though i do not think this is about the bet anymore.
wait, wait, i think i am getting reception on my crystal ball.....
the bet will come out.... eddie is gonna get punched in the face by jasper and probably alice too.... hmmm a two for one deal on black eyes.....
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:02 AM Title: Day 16
ok that was an almost, kinda-sorta, pretty much date. call it what you will but if it quacks like a duck, walks like a duck, and looks like a duck.... chances are pretty good it is a fucking duck!
Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:27 PM Title: Day 22
Well shit she might as well seeing as they spend so much time together and she just gave him the cookies. Not to mention that neither one of them are seeing or even trying to see anyone else
Date: 23 Feb 2011 7:35 PM Title: Day 22
Condom's extra large LOl. So how is it going with Edward and his dad????
Date: 23 Feb 2011 7:16 PM Title: Day 22
Awwrh, loved this chapter.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:28 AM Title: Day 21
Hell yeah I'm with Edward, he deserved to get his ass beat
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:48 AM Title: Day 21
awesome story so far :)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 9:09 PM Title: Day 21
Good for Edward now who is going to kick Edwards ass when she finds out about the bet he did his was not where what James was so maybe he will live LOl. Right now Edward is Bellas hero.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:50 PM Title: Day 20
Love that movie. Great first date I like how she invited him back to her bed. Has she told him that she is going to NY????
Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:50 PM Title: Day 20
this story is progressing amazingly. :)