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Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 4:33 AM Title: Day 30

Loved this story so much.  These two are so cute together.  I'd love a sequel of any kind.  

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 9:42 PM Title: Day 30

i really liked this little story ;) i would read the 30 days of make up sex and the 9 months one aswell ;D

Reviewer: BlackPepper Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:59 AM Title: Day 30

<3 love it!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:07 PM Title: Day 2

I love these two!  Bella and her attitude and Edward trying so hard.  Thanks for making me laugh!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:03 PM Title: Day 1

Too funny.  I love it...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 4:41 PM Title: Prologue

I don't know how I missed this, but I love it and I can't wait to finish it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 2:53 AM Title: Day 30

Great story felt the ending could have been a little more but was definately worth reading and I'd definately read more stories by you.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:05 PM Title: Day 30

i thought the ending was perfect. loved the re-introduction and the thought of bella taking claire to the prom. heehee.

i would definately read 9 months.

thank you for sharing your story.

suzie :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:59 PM Title: Day 29

so many things up in the air right now what will they do?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:55 PM Title: Day 28

well she has forgiven him but how long till they try again? will he talk her into going to prom with him?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:50 PM Title: Day 27

wow bella right into the locker room!?!?!?! holy shit!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:42 PM Title: Day 26

jasper should have hit him at least once. but maybe bella will do it......?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:40 PM Title: Day 25

oh eddie and belly what are we gonna do with the two of you?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:36 PM Title: Day 24

see eddie you dumb fuck! she was bound to find out and this was the worst way possible.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:32 PM Title: Day 23

everything is going so well but it is all going to blow up in his face if he doesn't tell her!!!!

Reviewer: kittylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:52 PM Title: Day 30

Anything you want to do will be great by me.  9 months sounds intriguing.

Reviewer: ctwi21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:00 PM Title: Day 30

great story! :) but i wish there was more it dosent really feel finished loved it though

Reviewer: PrincessCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:02 AM Title: Day 30

Great story, an easy read! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:18 AM Title: Day 30

Brill :-)

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:47 AM Title: Day 30

Ummmm...so did they become Prom Queen and King?  I still think she was being a ridiculous Bitch and shouldn't have broken off with him especially after he confessed his true feelings, that was far more cruel then what he had done, and she already accepted to go to Prom with him, breaking that date so close to the event after saying that she wanted to start all over again was lunacy.  Besides, you can't start over from day one after all the steps they've been through, you're killing the fire that you've already built up and it'll never be as intense.  Edward should have gone running, I mean if she can't stick around to work out their problems and dumps him over such a minor offence she's setting up a pattern where she'll feel in control of the relationship from the start, and any relationship that isn't at least 50-50 is doomed.    Right, keep him scared to really speak his mind, never make a mistake and in fear of her walking over any little thing.  Disasterous. 

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:45 AM Title: Day 30

sorry to see this end...

like the daily posts even if they were short...

not really interested in baby edward/bella

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:20 AM Title: Day 30

awww hell yeah i'd read it but pls answer review with the info for your face book page so i can add you :) loved the story



Author's Response:

Here you go! :)

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Gelix-FanFic/173304282697056

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:29 PM Title: Day 30

I would like to read 9 months just to see how they would handle things. I mean with her trying to be a midwife and him with his music thing. Would they both continue school would his dad come around? So many things you could do with those 9 months, it could be very interesting.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:29 PM Title: Day 30

Gosh!  This is short. :-)  It was nice while it lasted.

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 6:04 PM Title: Day 30

i like the idea of a sequel 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 6:03 PM Title: Day 30

I would love to read anything you write so hell yes.  This was a great short story thanks for writing it and sharing with us.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 6:02 PM Title: Day 30

:) sött saga. Hoppas at du får det bra i din nya skola.

Reviewer: ImYours1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:49 PM Title: Day 30

Truly loved this story :)

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:37 PM Title: Day 30

I wish you would do an epilogue so we can know how was their future!

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 3:27 AM Title: Day 29

Wow, so what happens if she goes and winds up being crowned prom queen? Then will Edward still have won the bet even though he called it off. 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 10:51 PM Title: Day 29

Sorry but it just seems like Bella has shit so backwards and has a lot of growing up to do. In every relationship shit happens, you deal with it. You work it out, you don't just run from it or break up

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 7:11 PM Title: Day 29

Last chapter already?  It's been a good ride.  Why is Bella having a headache?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 7:01 PM Title: Day 29

Are you going to do anykind of epi???  Please tell me they will be together.

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:58 PM Title: Day 29

AWWWE it's sad that it's ending :/ cant wait for it tho!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:22 PM Title: Day 29

Pain in the ass that Bella...I tell ya!! 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:09 PM Title: Day 29

:)

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:00 PM Title: Day 29

I love this story. The combination of semi lighthgeartedness and very true-to-life high school drama is awesome! Almost makes me miss high school-ALMOST:)

Reviewer: ImYours1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 5:52 PM Title: Day 29

Awwrh, I don't want this story to end, i love it too much. Great story I can't wait for the LAST chapter :(

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 4:44 AM Title: Day 28

I can understand where she's coming from but really I think it's stupid to break up. They know each other and have been getting close. They could have worked it out and still been together. I mean all she had to say was lets slow our pace down a little until I'm more comfortable with what happened and the and together we'll move past it. I think Bella's always making shit harder then it has to be.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:58 PM Title: Day 28

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:05 PM Title: Day 28

He better do things right.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:59 PM Title: Day 28

Awww!  Bella forgave him this time.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: Day 27

I know he messed up and all but it's not that serious. I mean he could have tried to lie and deny the shit. He didn't want to lose her and to me that should mean something. That sentence right there should tell her how much he truly cares for her. I hate that she's walking away from one of (The World's Greatest) in R Kelley's words over something so meaningless and stupid.

Reviewer: juandedios Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Day 27

can't wait for the more "mature" talking

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 11:14 PM Title: Day 27

I cant believe only 3 more days I am going to cry.  I look forward to every day.  Good for Jake to put a stick up her ass to get her to move but boy oh boy she has big balls to go into the locker room and confront him.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:27 PM Title: Day 27

:)

Reviewer: Amapola026 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:25 PM Title: Day 27

its really good  but please please make it longer.  

Thanks and God Bless.

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:54 PM Title: Day 26

I wish you story was longer than 30 days. I think Edward needs to stew in misery for a good bit. It would be better if they reconnected in NY away from Forks and distance from the bet. They could meet under new and fresh circumstances and start their relationship off right. 

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:41 PM Title: Day 26

OH Edward, you fucked up...

Reviewer: juandedios Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:10 AM Title: Day 26

Good chapter short but good can't wait for Bella's reaction when they see eachother.

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 10:37 PM Title: Day 26

MORE!!! cant wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Ms JazzyBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 10:15 PM Title: Day 26

I love this story, please update soon!!! :) xox

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 8:17 PM Title: Day 26

It took big balls to talk to Bella's brother and tell him everything got to respect that.  I cant wait till Bella sees him hope she slaps him and then kisses the hell out of him and maybe more;)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 8:14 PM Title: Day 26

:)

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 2:52 AM Title: Day 25

oooooh Eddie-kins! Come on Belly give him another chance!!!!

Reviewer: Cansano2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 8:59 PM Title: Day 25

I know Bella needs time. I just wish she would tell Edward that she needs time. I'm sure Edward is hysterical as he should be. They just need to talk and Edward needs to give her space to sort through his jackass idiocy.

I also hope Bella puts things in perspective - yes, Edward was an idiot. Yes, he hurt her horribly. Yes, he does deserve to be kicked in the balls and left writhing for a while.  Yes, he does deserve a shot at redemption. He fell in love with her. He ended the bet. He was going to tell her (but fear stopped him before she found out). He did the right thing and he was going to continue to do the right thing by telling her.

I hope they focus on the fact that they are much better together than apart.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:34 PM Title: Day 25

Oh gosh!  I wish this section has more angst.  At least Bella isn't as down as I think.

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:26 PM Title: Day 25

Talk to him girlfriend!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:19 PM Title: Day 25

awwwwwww good boy Edward now we just gotta let it all sink in with bella awesome chappy

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:58 PM Title: Day 25

:)

Reviewer: ImYours1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:54 PM Title: Day 25

I love this story, can't wait to see if he does infact take Bella to prom or not. :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:54 PM Title: Day 24

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:50 PM Title: Day 23

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:48 PM Title: Day 25

Wow what is a girl to do other than admit that she loves him to and run to him.  I am glad that Edward grabed his balls and told her the truth and that he loved her good guy.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:45 PM Title: Day 22

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:40 PM Title: Day 21

:)

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:31 PM Title: Day 25

eddie-kins better start groveling...lol

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:25 PM Title: Day 25

:)

bella gets her time and eddie-kins gets a taste of what it feels like to "love"someone

do not miss high school drama .. but even as a "grownup", i get it at work  :(

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:05 PM Title: Day 25

cant wait for more!

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 8:52 AM Title: Day 24

awwww shit!!!! this can't be good.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:05 AM Title: Day 24

Well Damn...I hate Angst...think I'll skip tomorrow..

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 10:56 PM Title: Day 24

Poor Bella.  It seems that all her relationships start out as bets.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:56 PM Title: Day 24

awwww Edward needs to come clean and tell her he told rosalie the bet was off before they started dating and well emett needs a swift kick. sad but good chappy!

Reviewer: juandedios Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:43 PM Title: Day 24

i was just hoping she never found out but i guess it had to happen great story i'll be waiting for the update.

Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:12 PM Title: Day 24

Love the story, I understand Bella being upset, but I was really hoping she wouldnt get all depresed over this I mean did she not here Edward say he couldnt go through with the bet because he was falling for her, She has a backbone use it and get some damn answeres girl, before you go all zombie Bella. Yea Edward should have said something to her about the bet he was being a coward you really couldnt blame him for being scared after finding out about what James did, cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 7:12 PM Title: Day 24

NoOOOOOOOO she didnt lisen to what he said he fell for her but the only thing she heard is what would hurt her the most being a bet poor Bella.

Reviewer: fanpire19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:04 PM Title: Day 23

OMG Im loving the story :D

If I tell her??!! What does that mean? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:10 PM Title: Day 23

Bella is claiming him that is good and now he knows she is going to NY yah

Reviewer: ImYours1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:39 PM Title: Day 23

I LOL'D at this chapter :D

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:18 AM Title: Day 22

well she had better say yes this time! poor boy has definately earned it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:56 AM Title: Day 21

aww she basically called him her boyfried!

Reviewer: juandedios Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:37 AM Title: Day 22

way to go bella standing up to carlise edward is so sweet wanting bella as a girlfriend can't wait for an update hope u are able to post it soon.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:24 AM Title: Day 20

sounds like a perfect date and out of the limelight for bella, so she could relax.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:18 AM Title: Day 19

aw eddie that was so cute and sweet that you are willing to go at her speed. they're goin' on a date!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:14 AM Title: Day 18

oh i love that 'my almost girlfriend' heehee. having an almost girlfriend who's dad owns and carries a gun on a daily basis has got to be fucking scary to a teenaed boy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:09 AM Title: Day 17

aha! so that is the deal with james. sucks to be eddie because right now he looks no better than james even though i do not think this is about the bet anymore.

wait, wait, i think i am getting reception on my crystal ball.....

the bet will come out.... eddie is gonna get punched in the face by jasper and probably alice too.... hmmm a two for one deal on black eyes.....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:02 AM Title: Day 16

ok that was an almost, kinda-sorta, pretty much date. call it what you will but if it quacks like a duck, walks like a duck, and looks like a duck.... chances are pretty good it is a fucking duck!

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:27 PM Title: Day 22

Well shit she might as well seeing as they spend so much time together and she just gave him the cookies. Not to mention that neither one of them are seeing or even trying to see anyone else

Reviewer: ctwi21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:25 PM Title: Day 22

love it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 7:35 PM Title: Day 22

Condom's extra large LOl.  So how is it going with Edward and his dad????

Reviewer: ImYours1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 7:16 PM Title: Day 22

Awwrh, loved this chapter. 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:28 AM Title: Day 21

Hell yeah I'm with Edward, he deserved to get his ass beat

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:48 AM Title: Day 21

awesome story so far :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 9:09 PM Title: Day 21

Good for Edward now who is going to kick Edwards ass when she finds out about the bet he did his was not where what James was so maybe he will live LOl.  Right now Edward is Bellas hero.

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:56 PM Title: Day 20

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:50 PM Title: Day 20

Love that movie.  Great first date I like how she invited him back to her bed.  Has she told him that she is going to NY????

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:47 PM Title: Day 20

:)

Reviewer: ImYours1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:50 PM Title: Day 20

this story is progressing amazingly. :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:22 PM Title: Day 19

:)

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:17 PM Title: Day 18

:)

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